I loved this book. I felt like the writing style is transportive and made me feel like I was in the dry desert along with the characters. It works beautifully as a stand-alone novel, but I also want more!!!!!

Thank you to the publishers, author, and NetGalley for this ARC!

3.5
Me gusto todo lo relacionado a la ciudad de las mentiras. El plot twist no lo habia esperado, eso me gusto bastante.
No logre encariñarme con las 3 primas pero fuera de eso es una linda historia.
Probablemente cuando lea el segundo libro lo lea tambien y ahi creo q voy a tener una opinión más armada porque no se q más decir porque lo lei muy rapido al ser corto

The Lies of the Ajungo is a short but devastating story about a boy and his quest for water. I was originally drawn to it by the cover (which is gorgeous wow) but it was the synopsis that fully ensnared me. I saw the author said he pitched his story to someone by saying it’s “Attack on Titan in North Africa vibez” and I can’t believe I didn’t see it! But as someone who has read Attack on Titan, despite the inspiration being clear (in hindsight) this story sits apart. The theme’s are similar but this story goes another way, and dare I say it, I loved this more than AoT.

The story is short. Less than 100 pages. The time in the story lasts half a year but it doesn’t feel like it to the reader of course but it never becomes an issue. The pacing never fails. There’s action, there’s character building and connection, there’s a mystery, and there’s poetry. Not actual poetry but the story’s themes felt like poetry to me; gutting, satisfying, and bittersweet.

It’s a big challenge to set up an entire world in less than 100 pages and still have space for plot and character but Moses Ose Utomi juggles it all expertly. I never felt lost, never felt like I didn’t feel or connect with the characters, and it never felt bogged down. When you don’t have enough space, it might feel tempting to infodump but the way the exposition was handled in this story seamlessly fit into the tone and style of the writing. Utomi mentions that his story sits at an “intersection between fable and fantasy” and yes it does and it’s why his exposition works so well. It reads like a fable and so when you are getting information about the world, it works itself into the style of the story.

The pov character, Tutu (who I loved) comes from a small and distant part of a city and is a child. He is yet ignorant of the world and so is the perfect character to have things be explained to (and by extension, us). Because he’s a child with a limited understanding and view, it makes sense that the world most of the time feels limited. We only truly see 3 places: his home, the palace, and the desert. So it does feel like the world is small but it makes sense? One place in a desert is not so different from another place in a desert. I could say that as a child, the world beyond his home should feel vast and scary but that feels nitpicky because it’s not really that important.

What’s important is the characters themselves. I felt for Tutu. I cried when he cried. I felt his fear and hopelessness. It’s a testament of skill that Utomi was able to connect us to the characters in such a short amount of time. I cried like twice while reading this book! The atmosphere and tone were so engrossing, I was absolutely absorbed into the story.

Speaking of atmosphere, the antagonists of the story were amazing (I’m running out of synonyms for amazing and incredible but if you can think of anymore just know that it would apply to this book). We are given just enough information (little, as little as Tutu and basically everyone else knows) to let our imaginations fill in the rest, and the little we are given is that the Ajungo are cruel, ruthless, powerful, and greedy. Our imaginations will always fill in with morbid ideas of why and what and how. It made it so that every time we came across someone there’s the immense feeling of fear and dread that it’s the Ajungo.

There’s an entire world carefully laid out in less than 100 pages and I will not go into detail about any of it other than the praises for the incredible job Moses Ose Utomi has done and thank him for sharing his story with the world. I think everyone should go into it blind, don’t do anything but go straight into reading. You will be transported into a new world for a few hours and you will come back changed. Some of us will see the themes of the story and the answers coming and it’s a bitter feeling being proven right. But it’s an important story because of what it stands for and what it is saying. I wish I could say more but it would spoil everything and everyone needs to experience it fresh like I did.

thank you netgalley and tor for the arc.

From the perspective of a third culture kid, this story is one that feels personal and relatable. All children of immigrants from formerly colonized lands will tell you stories of displacement and deception. So this story and other like it are small triumphs.
Overall, though, I feel the story could’ve been told better. There is a lot of exposition which isn’t really my taste. 3-stars for me - because I loved the overall concept of the story and the originality.

Far more a fable than a fantasy epic, and a pretty bleak and brutal one at that. The concept is intriguing and the language captivating, but the character development was thin and the magical solution felt too easy.

The Ajungo Empire forces the residents of a parched, waterless city, called The City of Lies, to cut off their tongues in exchange for water. But it's not enough, and as Tutu watches his mother wasting away from thirst, he decides to undertake the quest to go outside the city into the Forever Desert and find water. Many have gone out before, and no one has ever succeeded or even come back alive.

Utomi packs a lot into this novella, and immediately the reader is curious to how Tutu can overcome these insurmountable odds, The relationship he forms with three women he meets in the desert, his journey to manhood, and the surprising truth about the Ajungo Empire make this a memorable and rewarding read.

I think this was a pretty strong debut from this author. I liked the writing style which flowed nicely throughout the novella, though it lacked a bit of lyricism that I prefer in fable or folktale type of novellas. But that's more of a personal preference than an actual issue with the writing. It's a fast-paced story which is expected for a novella of this length. I was engaged with the plot for the most part but towards 60% of the book the plot kind of lost me but it wrapped up pretty nicely towards the end. I also appreciated the themes around totalitarian regimes trying to limit people's access to knowledge and resources and the accumulation of wealth by the upper classes which were incorporated into the story and the reveals in an interesting way. In addition, this book tonally is quite sad while at the same time doesn't fail to give the reader a hopeful ending. I will definitely check out other novellas or long-form works from this author.

"There is no water in the City of Lies.
There are no heroes in the City of Lies.
There are no friends beyond the city of lies."

That's just so damn good for an introduction. I saw the blurb for "The Lies of the Ajungo" and had to read it. Looking forward to more stories by Moses Ose Utomi.

In the City of Lies there is no water, except what they are given by the Ajungo Empire. But in exchange they cut the tongues from everyone at the age of 13. Tutu is nearly 13, but his mother is dying of thirst, so he makes a deal with the Oba to go find water. Many have tried, none have returned.

Reasons to read:
-THAT moment
-The pacing of the story and when we get context for some of the concepts or backgrounds is spot on
-Seeing, it just makes sense
-People met along the way
-Leaving home gives you clarity about where you were
-Justified actions

Cons:
-Wouldn't have minded more pages, but I'm greedy, and I understand that would have messed with the flow.

March cannot simply come fast enough!! wow wow wow - what a spectacular story.

my review must be the shortest one I've written as I'm at a loss for words.

I read this in one sitting, it's 91 pages of excellence. No notes.

The Lies of the Ajungo
By Moses Ose Utomi
A Review by Jamilla (@LandsAwayBooks)

There’s no water in the City of Lies.
There are no heroes in the City of Lies.
There are no friends beyond the City of Lies.

But who would believe in anything they say in a city named such?

Tutu, our protagonist believes.

These are things he can see with his own two eyes.

In the City of Lies, where it never rains, and nothing, not even cacti grow. Of course, there’s no water, bodies collapse in the streets as people die of blood drought.

What leader could watch on as this horror unfolds and do nothing?

In the City of Lies, children who reach the age of thirteen have their tongues “cut away by hot blades”. But before that age, a few brave and hopeless or hopeful children can take up the noble quest put forth by their leader, centuries past: enter the forever forest, search for allies or water— which ever you find first.

None of these children have returned.

As desperate circumstances forces Tutu to seek death or glory in the search for water, he finds so much more in the stark expanse of the forever desert.

Friends. Foes. And the truth behind the lies of the Ajungo.

This is a stunningly written story set in an intriguing world I’m eager to see explored in the other books in this series!

Utomi crafts a compelling protagonist, you’re rooting for him to succeed, and praying that he can save his mother, all the whole captivated by his growth and strength !

There’s also kick ass fight scenes, gore and strange creatures in the sand.

Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for an opportunity to read this eARC in exchange for a fair review.

I'm really grateful to Netgalley, the author of the story - Moses Ose Utomi, and the publisher for providing me with this free advanced reading copy in exchange for the honest review.

It was an unusual and interesting experience for me. The Lies of Ajungo by Moses Ose Utomi is more a fable than a fantasy adventure. It follows our main character Tutu on his quest of finding water for his city and saving his mother.
But it's not a fun adventurous story though we had some adventures and a lot of action in it. But it has more symbolism and metaphoric moments than anything else. Nothing as it seems. This novella has an interesting contrast between its rather naive tone(because of a young and inexperienced main character) and a rather brutal story. I was really surprised by it, by for me it works great.
This is a story about growing up and understanding the world as it is without childish delusions and belief in right and good, and ultimate justice and truthfulness of the world. It's interesting that the writing felt for me both fresh and traditional. Fresh because I haven't read such stories for ages and traditional because it reminded me about the times I read fables and legends. The character work was appropriate for the genre. Nothing too deep, but with the right depth to play the role and to show the meanings of the story - it reminded me of old myths as well.

I'm a little bit afraid for the marketing of this novella - it's really important to show what it is to readers before they start this book. The ones who expect an epic and light adventure could be left disappointed even though it isn't the book's fault.

I hope it will work out well because I'm always here for something new and unusual in the genre, the mix of genres, and using absolutely different settings and storytelling techniques. It really helps to develop the fantasy genre and make it bigger and more apealing to more and more readers every year.

The Lies of the Ajungo is a heart-wrenching tale of survival, truth, and politics. While short, it packs a punch with its vivid imagery, tight plot, and intriguing character arcs.

If you enjoy stories set in the African desert, magical realism, or survival plot lines, I recommend giving this a read.

This story was just okay for me. It was a fast paced novella, but it read more like a children's fable than an adult fantasy, graphic fight scenes aside. I loved the world and the concept, but I wanted more complexity from the characters; they were a bit two-dimensional and the dialogue was wanting. Overall, it was good but not great. I'll definitely be reading more from this author -- I hope there's a full length novel on the horizon!

This was such a great novella which did a fantastic job of setting up a world for a future full length novel. The world building was impeccable and definitely filled me with intrigue for what is to come. I thought the characters were fascinating and the interactions between them were poignant and heartfelt. I loved the prose throughout - it had a lyrical quality without ever becoming too flowery, which I really appreciated. Overall, I adored this book and will be anticipating a full length story set in this world eagerly.
I received a free copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for a fair and honest review.

The Lies of the Ajungo had such an amazing premise and it was really well written.
I liked the main character Tutu but I feel like I would have loved them if they were a little more fleshed out.
I find this is a common issue with novellas but I did still love this story!
I highly recommend this novella!
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review.

The Lies of Ayungo opens with an excellent, memorable line: "There is no water in the City of Lies". I expect most reviews of the novella will start with it, and that’s ok. It’s that good :) I devoured the story in one sitting, and I’m impressed. Before I go into detail, a warning: not everyone will like it. It’s a bleak, disturbing story that comes with multiple content warnings. Even though most violence appears off-screen, the mentions of child mutilation might make readers uncomfortable.

The City of Lies has no water, so it’s made a deal with the Ayungo Empire, which sends water in exchange for the tongues of boys. The protagonist of the story, Tutu, will soon have his tongue cut off. Sadly, his parched mother may not live long enough. Tutu makes a deal with his Oba: the city saves his mother, and he will go to the desert and bring back water for the city.

The desert challenges Tutu’s ingrained beliefs and worldview. It teaches him that life is full of lies, both superficial and profound. Along the way, he encounters other characters destroyed by Ayungo, who took advantage of people’s desperation, offered them a broken deal, and then called them liars. Each encounter reveals a different facet of the cruel world and its atrocities. I won’t go into details because I don’t want to spoil everything for you.

The story's pacing is excellent, almost feverish, which leads to my only criticism. Tutu’s mental and physical development feels rushed (to say the least), especially considering how young he actually is. Some readers may find this problematic, but hey, it’s a fantasy world. The tone is bleak and gutting - the more we learn about the various lies, the more horrific the reality seems.

The Lies of Ayungo reads like a mix of gritty fable and dark fantasy, interested in power struggles and the way powerful people deceive the unprivileged and keep them obedient.

I loved the story and the world. Brutally destructive magic thrilled me. The Lies of Ayungo is an excellent novella that packs a lot in just 96 pages. Highly recommended.

I love it when my NetGalley reads work out!

I’ve been making an excel sheet, trying to plan my reads for the month. The lies of Ajungo were initially not on my list. I got approved for some books on NetGalley and ended up with 13 books to download. A fun fact about me is that I don’t like the number 13. I’m superstitious about it, even though I know that’s ridiculous. I do my best not to let it impact things, but I figured this was a small thing, and I could give into it this one time. Given that NetGalley has now added page numbers to the information section, I could download a small book and add it to my excel sheet.

And that’s how I started The Lies of the Ajungo by Moses Ose Utomi, and I’m so happy I did!

Your girl isn’t a sci-fi fan. For instance, I’ve been trying to get through Dune, but honestly, I just can’t focus on it (I loved the movie, though). I also don’t like high fantasy (so yes, not that into the lord of the rings), steampunk, spies/assassins, or even urban fantasy. But I’ll try something every so often and hope for a different outcome. This is why I haven’t given up on Dune, and I loved Book of Night by Holly Black. This is also why I tried The Lies of the Ajungo, and as stated above, I’m so glad I did!

In Tutu’s city, they cut out your tongue when you turn 13 to appease the Ajungo empire. In exchange, the empire sends their drought-ridden city some water; not enough to thrive, just enough to survive. Tutu has only 14 days to go before his tongue is cut out. Still, as his mother collapses from dehydration, he volunteers to search for water if they keep her alive for a year.

While the story has some really interesting themes, such as collaboration with those in power and what people are willing to do to maintain control, anyone can do those themes. Many writers focus so heavily on those themes that they sacrifice the story. Moses Ose Utomi does none of that. He writes in a way that makes you want to slow down and savor each word. It’s not slow at all, but I don’t want for anything in terms of the world Utomi builds up here. I can recognise this as a prequel; it goes by like one. But it also makes me want to read the series when they come out, so it clearly does its job.

But I am leaving the book with 4 out of 5 stars. And it’s only fair to talk about what I didn’t like. My primary concern when reading this book is that Tutu comes into his powers faster than I think can be reasonably expected. It was also tougher to become emotionally invested in the characters, which is the trade-off when the author has less space to write about them. That’s important to me which is why it’s more 4 stars than 5.

This book is carried by its premise. It’s such a simple premise, yet surprisingly original! I loved that the world felt so expansive. The book is brought down by its length though, as i was not able to connect to any of the characters very well

This books was AMAZING!! It is a very well written story. I loved the character growth in Tutu. I love the repetition line such as “there is no water in the city of lies”. It added so much more depth to the story. I did not expect the Ajungo to be not real and it was all the obas’ doing. Five out of five! Amazing work with this I love it so much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

This one is an easy five stars. An engaging, perfectly paced novella that's part dystopia, part legend in the making, this book was on I couldn't put down and find myself still thinking about, long after I finished it. Tutu lives in the City of Lies, a town that has no water. They have a deal with the shadowy Ajungo Empire, who provides a meager amount of water as long as all people living in the city agree to cutting out their tongues when they turn thirteen. Tutu is days from turning 13 when he realizes his mother won't last long, and decides to go on a dangerous quest outside the city to find water. Out in the world, Tutu learns that things are not as they seem as he finds allies from other cities that have similar stories. The reveal is heartbreakingly simple in its revelation, and the characters' fight for change to save their cities is a struggle that at times seems impossible. I wouldn't say there was a happy ending, but it is one with a spark of hope. The final scenes are strong and impactful, and how things end for the characters is surprising, but also not something that comes out of nowhere. I sincerely hope we get more of this series, i'll read anything the author is willing to share about this world they have created.