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Bitter Medicine

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This is how you do fantasy romance! This is an excellent debut by Mia Tsai that I still keep thinking about months later. It is a perfect mix of world building, magic, mystery and romance. I was sad to see there is no news on the next book by this author and I can only hope she adds to this universe. Can't wait to follow this author over the coming years!

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This was fun and atmospheric, but moved too slow. In novel format, this kind of serialized story feels bogged down. However, the tension between the two main characters was wonderful.

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A perfect blend of fantasy and romance. Elle is a magical calligrapher working in a faery temp agency, where she's been hiding out from her murderous younger brother and never using her abilities to their full potential to avoid attracting attention. Luc is her client and a half-elf security expert who works for a domineering boss that leaves him little time or freedom to make connections with others. They grow closer after he asks for a personalized commission for a job, but Elle's loyalty to her family and Luc's obligation to his boss are at odds when he is assigned to track down her brother.

The world-building in this book is truly exceptional. Tremendously detailed but never clunky or distracting. There could easily be a whole series about the faery temp agency and the supporting cast of characters, but the focus of the story is on the relationship between Elle and Luc. This is a book that lets its characters be strong and vulnerable at the same time. We see them deal with loss, regret, sacrifice, and loneliness. They struggle with the duty they owe to others and how it keeps them from pursuing their own happiness. Their connection is built up believably over the course of the book, and I love how soft Luc is with Elle even when his job is to be terrifying with everyone else. I always love it when a woman who is doing so much for others gets to be taken care of by someone else for a change. Without any spoilers, this book is very emotional, especially at the end. You may cry. An amazingly well written and compelling story.

I only hope that one day readers will get the book two we deserve. For Tony. 🕯️

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I need to come back and express my thoughts better but this book is almost like a book and a sequel mashed together

We have a huge conflict and resolution at the 50% mark and then another one at the actual end of the story - not sure how I feel about the pacing

I also felt like I was dropped in to the middle of the world and expected to know things about the world already? A bit more world building would have been good

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**TL;DR**: Lacking a real grip on my attention and much more focused on the romance than the central plot. But I did like it!

I may have gone into this with the wrong expectations but this was far more Romance, and Open Door Romance at that, than I thought it was going to be! The focus of Bitter Medicine is around Luc and Elle, who meet at work. Elle is an incredibly talented magic user making low level glyphs and potions for agents while Luc is the right hand of the leader of their company. He uses her glyphs and goods, and she works a shop front. They've developed a friendship that gradually turns into more while the world catches up to them.

From the start the story is intriguing, though I wouldn't label it as gripping. I loved the setting (think a Men in Black style world and organization except it's more Fae creatures and the like than aliens) and I liked Elle and Luc. Elle is burdened with guilt trying to make up for something in her past and hiding in plain sight to do so. Luc is very sweet, and very kind but very much at the mercy of a real piece of work boss.

The struggles they faced never felt too insurmountable and the two always communicated fairly well, especially when I gauge this more on a Romance scale than a Fantasy one (which is where this should lay in my opinion). Unfortunately because of this the story didn't have the staying power or the unputdownable aspect I'd look for. I was 90% into this and almost forgot I was reading it, though I was interested in what happened, I just... forgot?

Overall I did enjoy this! It was just a quiet and unassuming type of story. The use of languages does stand out as something I loved, and the multicultural aspect. I just wish it had gone full cozy or more intense to keep your interest.

3 Flying Glyphs out of 5

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Such a gorgeous book!
This an urban fantasy romance with ancient magic and modern technologies and the swooniest romance.

The book started rather slow and a bit confusing for me. We are thrown right in the middle of the story and there is so much talking and nothing much happening and I was impatient for some action and then boom, a whirlwind of events and emotions. I was completely on board both with the suspense plot (he is a deadly fixer for a shadowy agency; she has ancient healing magic she is trying to hide) and the romance (so much pining, so much "our love is doomed and impossible").

I don't want to reveal much about the plot so I will focus more on the rest - gorgeous writing, fabulous main and supporting characters. They are all so well drawn, standing strong on their own. Elle is a descendant of the Chinese god of healing and her past and her culture is so, so strongly present in the story. Luc is a French half-elf and his European and magical heritage is also very much in the story as well. There are talking sphinxes, and fae-touched being and ordinary humans and it all so seamlessly blended. I loved it!

Their coming together is not easy and it comes at a great personal cost. Slightly spoilerish comments ahead. Something I loved a lot in their relationship is the way he reacted to her being injured and recovering from it. The way he took care but also gave her space when she needed it. Something too much attention and care can be suffocating, can put pressure on the person to pretend to better than they actually are. Here is where Luc completely won me over. He listened to her, he was there for her even when she lashed out at him (for which she apologized later on). And then it was her turn to be there for him and support him in the life-changing, life-threatening decision he made for his future. It was scary but also magical.

The supporting cast was great as well. No relationship was bland or stereotypical, they all felt real - complex and changing. We see family members being absolutely toxic and others being full of love and support. Queer characters (both MCs are bi actually), found families - all effortlessly fitting in this world of magic and mayhem.

This is a debut by Mia Tsai and it's a perfect blend of SFF and romance. It makes me excited to read more by this author in the future.

CW: dark magic, violence, life-threatening injuries, abusive families

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Elle is an immortal with powerful magical abilities that she is hiding in order to protect her brother. Luc is a half elven secret agent who is bound by his boss to continue working for him. Luc and Elle meet when Luc hires Elle to create protective glyphs for him to use in the field, and their friendship and attraction to each other grows.

I wish this book had been billed as a fantasy romance rather than just a contemporary fantasy. My expectations of a fantasy include more world building and plot. In this book, the main plot point - Elle's secret past and her villainous older brother - comes to a head about halfway through and is underutilized as plot. The author could have done so much more with that thread. Instead, it is completely dropped, and we spend the rest of the book with Luc's main plot point - getting out of his curse. This is also a good plot thread that is underdeveloped and comes to completion fairly easily. I wish the author had spent more time to develop these plots and characters - make it a duology, perhaps. The romance was wonderful, though, and I loved seeing Elle and Luc help each other grow.

Overall, I would recommend this book to people who like fantasy romance, but warn them that the action is minimal.

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Elle is descended from a god of medicine, granting her the power to treat fellow fae and create runes to enhance abilities better than most. Due to family drama(to the extreme) she has taken a position of a lower caliber helping agents of a fae-type FBI. This is where Luc comes in, a handsome half elf with clearance up the wazoo with enough baggage to full an airplane and the eyes only for Elle. When professional lives begin to affect personal lives what are Luc and Elle willing to give up to get together?

This was a fun break from the super serious books I have on my TBR as of late, with lots of fluffy romance and "aww" moments. The world building fell a bit flat for me and I wish there had been more elaboration when it came to certain terms and the weight they carried for the world. At times the romance seemed to take front and center allowing pieces of the plot to not pack the punch intended at the time of their reveals. But plenty of playful banter was fun to read, not just between Elle and Luc but with the supporting cast as well.

Overall 3.75 rounded to a well deserved 4. Recommended for lovers of the Bargainer series, or those who like a fun take on Fae. Age recommended for 16+ for graphic sexual content. Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.

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This book sounded so good, but when trying to read it I found it lacking what I had hoped for. I dnf this book. Others seem to like it so it may be that it just wasn’t a good fit for me

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I received a free copy of Bitter Medicine from Netgalley and Tachyon Publications in exchange for an honest review.

Holy moly, this book is so much more than I expected. The worldbuilding is wonderful and the characters are compelling. I was not prepared for the exceptionally detailed magic system and how much I would crave more stories from this world.

My biggest criticism is with the climax and resolution. It felt over and done with far too quickly and didn’t make me feel like I’d read a finished novel. I struggled at times to get a handle on the pacing of the novel and found myself checking the percentage to see what part of the part I was on (to know how soon the middle/climax/ending would occur).

Overall, it was a good read and I can’t wait to see was Mia Tsai writes next.

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Bitter Medicine was such a fun fantasy romance adventure with so much heart. The entire concept was interesting that I almost wanted MORE of the world building elements and specifically Elle's work. I love all the culture, the languages, characters... just the whole thing. I wanted to give this book a hug.

The pacing was interesting at times, it felt like it was building to one point (which really felt like the climax) but then there was more. But really, I was so charmed at that point it didn't matter.

I also loved the authors note at the end about why she chose to approach language as she did. It is a point of view that many of us, myself included, take for granted. It also made me reminisce of my time living abroad.

Definitely will read more from Mia!

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A charming fantasy romance that had an incredible world building. I really enjoyed this read, especially the magic and the fantasy characters. It's always exciting jumping into an entire new world like Bitter Medicine, The romance was phenomenal in my opinion, a great buildup and development between them both together and separately.

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Unfortunately found this one a little disappointing and hard to finish.. the premise seemed interesting but a lot of aspects didn't seem well thought out.

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There were many points where I wanted to DNF this novel; instead, I buckled down in the hopes that it would improve and meet the expectations I had going into it. Unfortunately, I did not improve.

This novel falls into a familiar ARC category for me: gorgeous cover, intriguing synopsis, and poor story execution. For what I saw on that cover and in that synopsis wasn’t necessarily reflected in the pages of this novel. Rather, this novel wasn’t certain of what it wanted to be. At times, it felt like a fantastical thriller (despite its unexplained world-building); other times, it felt like a romantasy novel. The two main plots did not know who was in charge, which led to odd pacing and disconnect chapters. Was the A-plot supposed to be Luc and Elle’s tackling of the same issue: Elle’s younger brother hunting her down? (Why he wanted to hunt her down is something I still have questions about. That was not made clear in the novel. Never mind the fact that the younger brother plot was resolved between the 20-65% marks.) Or, was the A-plot supposed to be the romance between Luc and Elle? My instincts want to claim the latter as the A-plot, considering the story was bookended with romantic moments. However,, I wouldn’t fully claim this as a romance novel. The relationship between Luc and Elle unfolded with minimal conflict and a lot of attraction; but, without that conflict to test them, it made everything feel too easy and low stakes. Which would be fine if this novel was a cozy-fantasy, but it’s simply not in that genre.

When I reflect back on the world-building, I’m met with one feeling: utter confusion. There were many questions that were simply unanswered as the story went on. What was the Bureau? How was that different from Oberon and Luc’s job? What was a “Fixer,” and why were they needed in this fantasy society? Why is there a ranking system and how does that work? How was Elle an agent—and who was she an agent for?—when she was trying to remain hidden from her family and the world? Why did Tony never change his name from Tony, considering he was “supposed to be dead”? The only element of world-building that made sense was the concept of the laes and how an object could be the source of magical energy. Without that object, a magic-wielded will die; those are the only story stakes that kept me interested in the novel.

In addition to the questions about the world-building, I had numerous questions about the characters as well. I found myself longing for more in-depth backstory for both Elle and Luc. While we received equal amounts of backstory for both characters, I found Luc’s was explained better and with more clarity. Whenever Elle explained hers, I found myself utterly confused. She was the one who almost killed Tony—not her younger brother, as the world believes—but her motivations were never explained. With that being a key subplot to this novel, it was a weakness that the reader didn’t experience clear details about important character information.

Between the two, I found Luc’s point-of-view chapters to be more solidly written. With that being said, both perspective characters lacked internal conflict. I think back to the moment of Luc’s betrayal—how easily he gives up the truth about Tony and Elle’s true identities to Oberon—and how emotionally unaffected he was by needing to make that decision. There was a lack of tension, a lack of cognitive dissonance to make Luc pause and question literally betraying Elle’s trust for the sake of “this is my job and I can’t quit due to an unbreakable vow.” I wanted to see that hesitation, I wanted to see that emotional strain making such a call would make. Even the fallout of that choice was lackluster. Within a page and a half, Elle completely accepted Luc’s decision and they moved on from the situation. Despite the fact that Luc revealing her true identity would put a target on her back and literally put her life in danger. And this was something the novel consistently struggled with: presenting life-and-death situations but brushing them off as no big deal in order to move onto the next plot moment.

This is a smaller note, but I wish this novel had more translations for the Mandarin and French phrases used within it. I am all for using multiple languages in a story, but it felt like I was missing details and conversation pieces because translations were not provided for the other languages.
Overall, this novel was a case of mistaken genre identity. It didn’t feel concrete or clearly set in a given genre, and it struggled to explain important details that make a fantasy novel shine.

Thank you to Tachyon Publications and NetGalley for providing me with an ARC of this book.

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Thank you to Netgalley and Tachyon Publications for the eARC. Actual rating: 3.5 to 3.75 stars.

I really enjoyed Bitter Medicine, and the languages and cultures that were infused into the text are a large reason why. I loved seeing how the magic varied from culture to culture, especially with Luc and Elle and the importance of names. I also REALLY loved both Luc and Elle as characters. Their love story was fairly believable, although I wish there had been more buildup, and I was rooting for them the whole time.

That said, I wanted more exploration of the magic system as a whole and more context for character choices that were made, especially in regard to the betrayal/climax of the story. Even after finishing the book, I still don't feel like I have a solid grip on the magic system or an understanding of the company everyone works for, both of which are integral to the plot. The climax also feels out of character and resolved too easily for both Luc and Elle -- and while I'm okay with that, because otherwise it would be the miscommunication trope, and that trope personally grinds my gears -- I wish the reader got to explore more of the WHYs for things rather than just being taken through the plot and expected to figure it out (with no information or context) as you go.

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There is a variety of culture and many different languages. There are characters that are not typical heroes that we can like, as well as characters that we can dislike. The story has funny and touching moments. I really liked how they created a new world and showed the complex relationships between different magical groups. There's also a strong focus on romantic relationships, and there are some very attractive and exciting scenes. This book amazed me in many more ways than I expected. When we are born, we have to learn about how the world works by ourselves. This is the kind of worldbuilding I really like - instead of giving out a lot of information all at once, there are cleverly placed clues about how things work. The author did a great job of blending different parts of the story together. They focused on the love story between Elle and Luc, but still made sure the other parts, like the setting, were well-developed and interesting. I really enjoyed the slow progress of everything.

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This was a cute story, but I didn’t enjoy it as much as I thought it would. The writing and characters seemed a little juvenile. I liked the concepts of the book, but the execution was lacking and I didn’t feel immersed in the story like I wanted to. The romance disappointed me as well; the emotional connection between the leads was weak.

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This book was absolutely fantastic. I've already added it to our list for order next year and will recommend it to students.

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Absolutely adored the angst in this book -- it was truly such a good time. I recommend to anyone looking for a fun and intense romp!

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Bitter Medicine is a fantasy/paranormal romance novel written by debut author Mia Tsai. The novel features a world where paranormal beings exist alongside humanity without their knowledge, all coming from myths and creations of different cultures - so our protagonists are a Chinese Immortal and a Half-Elf Fae - many of whom work together for a Fae Company under its boss Oberon. The story doesn't focus too much on how this setting should or could work, and instead deals largely with the romance between its main duo: Elle, the aforementioned immortal - who conceals her magical/medical skills to hide herself and her older brother from her dangerous but still loved older brother - and Luc, a half-elf who serves as Oberon's best fixer, meaning he kills or gets rid of whatever stands in Oberon's way, despite his dislike of what that entails and what that means about him. The story follows the duo as they finally admit their feelings for one another, come into conflict due to their secrets, and have to figure out what to do about it.

And Bitter Medicine tells this story really really well, and drew me in quite strongly. The story's approach to the romance begins kind of slow burn as both characters are afraid to spit it out, but once they do it gets incredibly steamy in the best way possible. And when their secrets do come out, Tsai takes the story in directions that really aren't the usual way - for example, not to spoil too much, this book avoids the usual romance plot arc where the characters get together, break apart due to a conflict, and then get back together again and reconcile....events and difficulties do occur, but our characters approach and deal with them in different and understandable ways, and this diversion from the usual plot arc really works. Tsai's refusal to go with normal pathways for this romance, and the development of her characters, their plot arcs, and the setting around them, wind up really working and being highly enjoyable, such that I could barely put this book down. If you're looking for a fantasy romance, this is definitely something you should be into.


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Elle works as a middling-rank shopkeeper for Roland & Riddle, the faerie temp agency, drawing magical glyphs for B and lower level agents. It's a waste of her magical talents as a descendent of the Chinese god of medicine, but Elle is determined not to let on that she can do more, for fear it'll attract attention to her real identity..and to the thought-dead older brother Tony who she once saved from her murderous younger brother Yìwú. Only by staying hidden can Elle ensure her safety...and that of Tony.

There's just one problem: Agent Luc Villois, the half-elf agent who has been patronizing Elle's shop for the last few months, and who Elle has a serious crush on. For Luc, Elle can't help but customize her work without him knowing to give him better results, and to hope that one day he might want more from her than merely glyphs.

And unknown to Elle, Luc is just as infatuated with Elle as she is with him, and keeps coming back to her not just because her magic seems to have saved his life, but also because well...he wishes he had the courage to ask her for more. But Luc is not just the ordinary agent he pretends to be, but the top "fixer" - assassin, spy, thief, cleanup man - for Roland & Riddle's top man: Oberon. And Luc's latest mission is, unknown to him, to track down Elle's brother Yìwú....who has seemingly tracked down Tony and Luc and aims to finish the job he once started years ago.....
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Readers who are familiar with romance will start Bitter Medicine and think they can see what's coming here, because the book is structured in a really familiar way. You have a story whose perspective shifts between each of the two main characters, each of whom is falling for/has a crush on the other. Both characters have secrets that if discovered threaten to put the two in opposition to the other, especially when Luc's secret job puts him on the hunt for Elle's younger brother. So what you expect to happen is something like: the two characters fall in love, have a romantic moment, discover the truth about each other and break up, only for Luc to decide that Elle is more important and switch sides/not quite fulfill his orders in order to help Elle and to be with her, after which they reconcile. This is how most books of this type work, but Bitter Medicine doesn't take that tack at all.

And it's able to avoid that tack by making each of its main characters have depth and background that makes them something more than either just a romantic partner for the other or the person their secret suggests they should be. In Elle for example, you have a person used to struggling with being torn all over the place by her emotions. On one hand, her magic (and her) wants to be free and used, but on the other she has to keep it hidden to protect Tony; similarly, she is on the run from her other brother Yìwú for fear of him killing her and Tony, but at the same time she loves Yìwú as a sibling and as she remembers him, so she doesn't actually want to ever take a stand and confront him. And of course she longs for the family she left behind and let them think she and Tony were dead, but at the same time wants to get free of that family who only thought of her and Tony as tools to do their duties (especially Tony). So it's probably less of a surprise that when Luc's secret is revealed, her reaction is not to reject him, but something different.

Meanwhile Luc is a man who is torn apart by his job as a Fixer and what it leads him to do...and what his boss Oberon makes him do, under threat of using Luc's true name (given when Luc didn't realize what that meant) to compel him if he doesn't comply. Luc has a softer side he only previously shares with his aunt, a Sphinx, and it's that side that colors his greatest failure, a failure (which I won't reveal here) that he is desperate to try to correct. Luc is thought of as a monster by those who work around him and don't know the truth, but Elle - who has a brother she still loves despite her believing him to be a monster - is able to see those other sides or give him a chance to show them, which prevents the pain of a rejection coming from her.

Of course all of the above only comes after a ton of pining and "cannot spit it out" moments, as you would expect from a romance like this, and god are those moments painful (in a good way). But when the two characters do finally get together romantically and share a good kiss and hot sex (we do get one very nice sex scene), it pays off in spades. And then the book takes its last act and all the character development to change things up dramatically by drastically altering the status quo, forcing a difficulty onto Elle and Luc's relationship that isn't caused by one of them betraying the other, and the way they adapt to that new status quo is extremely well done, as they deal with depression, loss of power, and more.

The result is really great, and I really don't want to go into too much more depth without spoiling, but let's just say this is a really great urban fantasy romance/paranormal romance/whatever you want to call it, with great characters, romance, and plotting all the way through the end. I highly recommend this if romance is what you're looking for.

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