OBlake is hit or miss with me. While I find that I can be emersed in her prose and become neck-deep listening to paragraph after paragraph of detailed backstory or side story or background, I will come up only to realize that I have no earthly clue if what I listened to is truly pertinent to the story. It can be maddening to feel like you are circling a drain, desperately trying to grab onto any flotsam that may come by in the hopes that it is important only to find you can't remember why you thought it was important in the first place.

I think I spent the first 50% of this book only having a vague feeling that it was a Romeo and Juliet retelling(?!?) so you know, there was that. I must have put it down over a dozen times with the intention of filing it under DNF, but the persistent itch 'TO KNOW' just wouldn't stop so I kept picking it up only to groan again.

I really did feel like I was trying to solve a thousand piece puzzle that someone put in the wrong box, showing the wrong quantity, and picture. I can tell you that I finished it, but was the effort worth it . . .

** Thank you to NetGalley and the publishers for the opportunity to review this advanced copy in exchange for my honest opinion **

Thank you to the publishers, author and NetGalley for the free copy of this audio book.

I really wanted to like this more than I did... I think this was one of those where I would have it enjoyed it a lot more reading a physical copy as opposed to an audio book- not that the narrator wasn't good, the story just wasn't pulling me in enough to pay attention to all the little details so I felt like I was missing something often. Maybe I'll try again some other time with a physical copy and see how I like it.

complicated and beautiful.

“Hate and love were so very similar. Both were intestinal, visceral. Both left scars, vestiges of pain. Hate could not be born from a place of indifference. Hate was only born from opposite sides of the same coin.”

"One for My Enemy" by Olivie Blake is an enthralling novel that blends the world of magic with crime empires in modern-day Manhattan. The story follows two rival witch families, the Antonova sisters, and the Fedorov brothers, as they battle to maintain control of their respective criminal enterprises. The Antonova sisters are cunning and ruthless, while the Fedorov brothers serve their father, the crime boss known as Koschei the Deathless. The Antonova family's elusive supplier of premium intoxicants, known as Baba Yaga, is the only connection they have to the shadowy world of the crime empire.

The book is a well-crafted and intricate web of love, magic, and rivalry, as the families struggle to maintain their control and keep their secrets hidden from each other. After a tenuous co-existence for numerous years, a change in one family's interests causes a rift that brings both families to the brink of disaster. Fate intervenes with a chance encounter, and in the aftershocks of a resurrected conflict, everyone must choose a side.

“you don’t become a smaller version of yourself simply because what you once had is gone.”

At the heart of the story, it is a "Romeo & Juliet" retelling, but Blake doesn't make it as simple as it seems. "One for My Enemy" is layered and complex with depth beyond measure. It makes you think and feel deeply. Blake's writing is absolutely breath-taking, romantic and magical. All of the characters are complicated, beautiful and as bright as stars. It won't be for everyone, it is a little muddled around the middle and has a couple twists and turns that are not necessary. Overall, One for My Enemy is an entertaining and thrilling read. The book offers a fresh take on the world of magic, with well-developed characters and a suspenseful plot. It is a must-read for anyone looking for a page-turner.

“Sometimes my eyes open and I know, somewhere in my bones, that I have formed myself to the shape of waking up beside you.”

Thank you to the publishers for the gifted copt
Pub Date: 04 Apr 2023 | Macmillan Audio | Tor Books

I like Olivie Blake's writing, maybe I would have enjoyed the story more in its written format instead of as an audio. The names and nicknames alone were tough to keep up with! But I enjoyed the premise and the magic system she's created and would definitely attempt this again in paper format!

Audiobook/unabridged/fantasy: I loved the first two books of Atlas Six because it was original. This book has its roots in Romeo & Juliet and Hamlet.
Without giving the plot or end away, this book could get confusing. The book has a setting of a play with Acts & Scenes. The beginning has a list of characters that overwhelmed me because the characters had names and nicknames. The first half of the book was really good and the extensive characters were not a problem.
Then one character gets murdered and everything gets thrown out the window. Characters are getting killed, characters are coming back to life, characters are pretending to be dead, characters are ghosts (I think), and my favorite, a character pretends to be a ghost.
I got this book from Netgalley in lieu of a honest opinion.

A very enticing concept, but executed in a way that dragged on & on. In total, this book weighs in at nearly 500 pages, when the story could have been told concisely and satisfyingly in 250-300. I think that I would have enjoyed this book much more if the repetitive prose had been reigned in a bit, and the plot accelerated at a faster pace.

I didn’t get to finish this one because it archived before I could. From what I read, I enjoyed it. So I bought it to finish.

Thank you for the advanced copy!

One for My Enemy is a modern fantasy romance that utilizes a lot of story elements from Romeo and Juliet and applies them to witch families of the New York underground. This story really drew me in from the start, and the writing kept me hooked throughout the story. One of my favorite parts was imagining the ways in which this story could be taught in tandem or immediately after Romeo and Juliet in a high school classroom. Olivia Blake presents a really clever example of retelling by utilizing similar characterizations and a broad plot structure while forging a new narrative and refreshing story. I truly fell in love with her characters and the world she created. I would highly recommend this story! The audiobook specifically is very enthralling as well.

I read the original version of One for my Enemy in 2021, and fell deeply in love with the characters Blake had created. I loved the dynamics between them, and I loved her signature lush, flowery style of writing. Now, though, I found myself so deeply bored I'm wondering if it's a result of time or if I was brainwashed back then. I don't doubt Blake's ability to captive an audience, in fact, it's one of the traits of her body of work that I like the most. However, in this case I was floored by how insignificant I found this story. While I did really enjoy it the first time around, I was never blind to its faults---I just liked it enough that I could look past them. This time I couldn't. The dynamics that had captivated me the first time I found insanely boring and self redudant. The plot is all over the place and the side characters are unberable caricatures of what characters are actually supposed to be. I was also not the biggest fan of the narrator.

Dark, twisty, rival families, romance, drama and magic. Part Romeo & Juliet retelling, part Russian/Slavic folklore. Set in NYC. This book has a lot to unpack, but it is also a lot to love. I devoured this book on audio in 2 days. Seriously this book was all I could think about for days. Somehow Olivie was able to paint a magical complex story that captured me. Sometimes I have a hard time fully investing in a work of fantasy, with One For My Enemy was not the case.

I am very glad that I had had this book in audiobook format. Hearing the pronunciation of names was helpful. Plus ,the narrator was amazing, her voice was able to convey emotion and depth.

Overall, loved this book, even though I am slightly emotionally damaged from it.


Thank you to Tor and NetGalley for my gifted ALC.

Thank you to Olivie Blake (author), Ferdelle Capistrano (narrator), Macmillan Audio, and Netgalley for this free advanced reader copy of "One for My Enemy: A Novel" for an honest review.

I have to admit while this book was set up as warring witchy families, dark fantasy romance, and a Shakespearean retelling of "Romeo & Juliet," it didn't even up hitting the right notes for me this time. I didn't find any offensive—the writing was good, the narrator was clear spoken & good at the differing voices—but this one just didn't end up striking a cord for me deeply interest-wise.

Alas, maybe the next Blake book will be more for me, again!

This book was everything I wanted in a dark, fantastical romance and more. I love Olivie Blake's range, depth of writing, and emotionality. I will forever and always be a fan. This is a short review because there is nothing more for me to say than - WOW.

3.5 stars** Thank you NetGalley and Macmillan Audio for the ARC audiobook of this book. This review is my honest and truthful feedback of this book!

This book started so good and I really enjoyed the magic, world building, and character development at the beginning. However, with that I felt lost at some points in this book and I wasn’t sure what was actually happening. There were a few times I thought the book was about to wrap up and I would see I still have 30% left in the book. I enjoyed some of the characters at the beginning but I found to become more unlikeable as the story went on. I didn’t really have anyone in particular I was rooting for in this book.

I normally am not big on fantasy or sci-fi books but normally I like magic books and a little bit of dystopian style but this one I think just wasn’t exactly for me. At some points I wondered if I missed a first book because I didn’t know what was happening or why something was important and it wouldn’t be told until later in the book why the events 100 pages ago was important.

Don’t get me wrong this wasn’t a bad book by any means I just don’t think Olivie Blake’s writing style is for me and I really enjoyed some parts of this book. I enjoyed the secret love between some of the characters. I also enjoyed the world building but I just didn’t see enough of what I thought I would in this book.

Overall it wasn’t a horrible book and if you like Olivie Blake’s other books I would definitely check this one out for sure. I just think this book didn’t suit me and what I like to read and that’s totally okay!

One for My Enemy is a Romeo and Juliet retelling, enhanced with witchy magic and a dash of Slavic folklore, all wrapped in the words of a gifted storyteller.

I listened to this on audio, and Ferdelle Capistrano, the narrator, did a brilliant job. She altered her voice just enough to distinguish characters, while still sounding natural. I loved the way she embodied the characters, the mood, and the overall tone of the story. I was hooked throughout.

We start out with a list of characters and their relationships, and it’s LONG. I thought, Uh-oh. I expected a disastrous ordeal trying to keep them all straight. But it wasn’t an issue at all. The way the story unfolds gives us time to get to know everyone. Their relationships are clear, their personalities are unique, and I easily followed every step.

The story is an intense adventure, with unexpected twists and moments of levity to lighten the mood. I love Olivie Blake’s creativity and writing style!

I was really enjoying this one... until it became unbearable. I don't know if maybe it was the audiobook narration and the speed I chose to listen to it in that made this even longer than it already is but I have this feeling that maybe Olivie's writing style is not for me as much as I want it to be. Every character that I could have loved became so annoying and unbearable just for the sake of being complex and dark and nitty gritty. Like even the characters I enjoyed reading about I just hated by the end it was so frustrating.

I thought the book was going to wrap up BUT IT JUST KEPT GOING??? AND FOR WHAT??? It felt like there was no payoff by the end which is just so frustrating to me.

I really liked the world building and the magic incorporated with the real world and everything, but I just felt like half of the book was this pretentious mess that didn't need to be there. And while I definitely vibe with purple prose pretentiousness, this was just overdone to the point where there was too much filler gap in my opinion.

I'm sure this hits for some people because 50% of the book hit for me... but otherwise this just dragged on too much. Also, if I hear this narrator rasp the names of Dima, Sasha, Masha, or Roma ever again I'll scream. Like ho many times do you need to repeat the names for the drama?????

Overall, it was just okay but I think I just grew too frustrated by the lack of payoff and the overall length.

I received this as an audio galley to listen to for free in exchange for my honest review. Thank you to NetGalley and Macmillan Audio for giving me access.

I.
LOVED.
THIS.

I am a sucker for retellings, especially ones that have a s Shakespearean vibe to it...and this one did -- plus some Russian folklore! It was even played out into Acts and Scenes. Blake did a wonderful job of creating this story and world. I wish it was longer even though the story has reached its curtain call and was wrapped up beautifully.

Move over Romeo, Dimitri has stole your thunder.

To be honest, I wasn't sure what to expect from One for My Enemy. With our recent resurgence of Olivie Blake love, all I knew about this was "Romeo and Juliet" vibes with witches. But Blake delivers a story that transforms whatever you might be expecting. It's a story that deeply explores family, love and feuds. I adored the way Blake gives this family a sense of scope, difficult dynamics, and bad blood that felt utterly relatable. At the same time, the characters are entrancing.

Each of them never ceases to be fascinating. How the world can portray us, and especially women, as 'monstrous'. Or the ways in which women's refusal can turn us into enemies. There's nothing more dangerous than a man scorned. On one level, One for My Enemy is founded on what we become to fight for ownership of our own decisions, consequences, and power. All the things we have to give up - our name, our family, our love - to be seen.

I devoured the audiobook and Ferdelle Capistrano did an amazing job at elevating the story. Of bringing the character's raw grief, bitter betrayals, and flailing hope to life.

A magical Romeo & Juliet retelling which kept me guessing until the very end. Given that the Romeo & Juliet story is one of the most well-known, it is a true testament to Blake’s impeccable interweaving of various stories and character journeys that I was still shocked when the ultimate scene of the final act occurred. The voice acting immerses you in the story, and each character felt like they had blood and guts in the game. I couldn’t guess where the story would go next, and no character was predictable nor completely moral (always a gripping combination!)

I want to like Olivie Blake's books, but I just don't (it's definitely an "it's me, not you" situation). Blake's writing is lyrical and definitely fits within the world of playwrights. There are pretty moving quotes that move the reader to a swooning motion; however, I didn't feel connected to this book beyond, "ooo, pretty writing."

Blake sets the stage, so to speak, with two families of witches that are vying for wealth and dominion in the backdrop of NY. They obtain and sell creatures and magical drugs, and fight blood with blood (they clearly haven't heard of the concept that an "eye for an eye makes the world blind"). Amidst all of this fighting is the fight for and loss of love - the typical star-crossed lovers.

The first issue I had with this book is a personal preference and one I should have done more research on - I rarely like Romeo and Juliet retellings. Although I feel that Blake's story does deviate from a strict retelling, I couldn't get behind the characters. Imagine this: a tale as old as time with two warring families (all kind of unlikeable and very much morally gre), multiple plays for power, and The Bridge, who just happens to be THE central part of the story since he has dealings with Every. Single. Character. Ever. I also didn't really like the concept of having Romeo and Juliet times two - literally two sets of star-crossed lovers, what are the odds? I was more invested in the description of past loves than the current story, which made this book not my cup of tea.

The main issue I had with the audiobook in particular was the narrator. I think this book, with as many characters as it tried to support, could have benefitted from a male narrator AND a female narrator for more diversity in voices. Most of the characters were made to sound breathy, sick, or trying too hard to be sultry, and it distracted me from Blake's prose.

I know a lot of readers love the niche that Blake inhabits - this was just my experience trying to force my way through this book.

I do sincerely appreciate Olivie Blake, MacMillan Audio, and NetGalley for giving me the opportunity to listen to this book and provide my honest feedback.

I really enjoyed the warring families approach, in modern day NYC. I loved the narrator who made the story come alive.