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The Beginning of Everything

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Sweet but slow paced, with low stakes and gradual character development. I enjoyed seeing how all of the characters opened up to each other. It was like watching a flower unfurl. Not terribly gripping; I stopped and started again several times.

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It's difficult to articulate why but the point of view and writing style of this book made it nearly unreadable. The first person narration did not work and the book is almost written in a steam of conscious style that doesn't translate for a romance.

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Two people escaping heartbreak and find solace in a fixer upper with each other. Jess ran with only her knapsack and had nowhere to go. She found an empty house and decides to stay there for a bit.
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Gethin is ready to move on and knows the fixer upper he bought will keep his mind busy. He never expected to find Jess staying there. He decides to let her stay and she only agrees if he lets her earn her keep. Together they put this house back little by little as they also put together themselves.
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Huge thank you #randomhouse and #NetGalley for an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review

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When main character Jess finds herself homeless upon leaving an abusive relationship, she decides to start over in Wales.. At first she lives in a tent after finding work as a dishwasher, but as the night grow cold, she looks to find better housing, preferably with a solid roof and even heat or electricity. Two of three present themselves in a house that has been sold but not yet occupied. Her utopia is cut short when Gethin, the new owner, starts to do work on the house before he moves in.

In most situations, the homeowner would call the police and the squatter would be arrested. However, Gethin is not like most guys; he sees that Jess has taken good care of the house, and he suspects, accurately, she really needs a place to stay that is safe and warm. Thus, an unusual relationship begins, where Jess becomes a tenant and helps Gethin get his house move in ready. (This part of the story, Gethin just letting Jess live in the house, felt too unrealistic for me, but Frasier addresses it toward the end of the book.

Overall, I liked the friendship Jess and Gethin form, as well as how each slowly trusts the other with personal tidbits that explain their personality and actions. Towards the end, there is the traditional misunderstanding between the two main characters, as a romance develops. Like all good romantic fiction books though, there is a satisfying ending.

(I received a copy of this book through NetGalley and have written an objective review.)

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the premise is a little far fetched because why would someone let a random stranger stay at their property for no reason and why would a woman agree to stay at a male stranger's property? especially after she's been abused? was hard to suspend my beliefs to read on this. the cheating bit also didn't work for me.

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This was almost 5 stars for me, but wondering just felt missing throughout the book. I can't quite put my finger on it- maybe it was how open Gethin was to helping Jess right away? Maybe it was how predictable everything was? It was a good read, overall, but just missed that last star from me. Thanks to the publisher and NetGalley for the ARC.

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New to me author! I was super interested in this book. I love a book that is more women's fiction and about finding herself. Full review to come.

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Wowww I loved this take on a friends to lovers storyline between middle aged characters! This book was full of hope and resilience, it kept me engaged throughout and I felt attached to these characters

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This is a starting over, finding yourself story between strangers who turn into friends who eventually realize their feelings are heavily invested in each other. The Beginning of Everything follows Jess as she finds herself squatting in a fixer upper after she runs away from a terrible situation only for her to unexpectedly meet the new owner and he invites her to stay. Over time as they renovate the house and become roommates, they find themselves becoming friends and an easy comfort between them emerges and while Jess finds herself relaxing she still has her guard up hoping to avoid being hurt or causing any hurt.

I liked it but I just wanted a little more from it but I don’t know what. I did like that both the MCs were older (mid to late 40s) but at times they behaved as though they were younger and it made you scratch your head but we all have those moments. Gethin was an excellent gift giver and was really attentive to Jess and gave her the space she needed to heal even if it required him to ignore his feelings. Jess really blossomed and rediscovered things she enjoyed and discovered new things while gaining an important friendship along the way. This is definitely a women’s fiction read with a hint of romance so if that’s your preferred genre, add this to your tbr.


Thank you publishers and netgalley for this eARC in exchange for my honest feedback.

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I was not sure about this book in the beginning. Jess is living rough and just scraping by. The mood was quite dismal until she met Gethin. Gethin seems too good to be true and based on Jess's past she is reluctant to trust him. However, this ended up being such a sweet story. I spent much of a Sunday reading the second half of the book, eager to see how it would end. Jackie Fraser is a wonderful author and really builds the tension between the primary characters. The conflict that is instrumental in all romances is not forced or manufactured. The audience can see what is happening and understands the struggle. The characters are well developed and I found myself rooting for them throughout the book. Get this one!

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Emotionally and heavy at times, but a good read. There are people who will connect strongly with this story. I liked her writing style and I'm going to look for more books by this author.

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Absolutely loved this book about a woman starting over after leaving an abusive relationship. Jess has nothing but the clothes on her back and a bookbag and finds herself sleeping in an unoccupied house because she has nowhere else to go that feels safe. The new owner, Gethin, finds her one day and instead of asking her to leave, her asks her to help with renovations in exchange for lodging. A beautiful story about finding ourselves again after trauma.

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This book started off with an interesting premise (un-homed squater meets homeowner/love interest), and sub plot (I love a good house fixer-upper), but progressed as slow as watching paint dry.

The writing was fine. The dialogue was fine. The story, the drive, and the attraction was lacking for me.

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This was an intriguing story that doesn’t fit easily into any of the accepted tropes, it’s far from a standard friends-to-lovers romance. Jess has escaped a bad relationship and difficult early life with little more than the clothes on her back, but in one way she carries a lot of heavy baggage. She’s reduced to sleeping rough until she spots an unoccupied house and decides to squat there temporarily. The new owner, Gethin turns up to work on renovating the property and is himself bruised from the break up of his recent long-term relationship. The only reason I’m giving this book four stars instead of the five it in many ways deserves is because I found the idea that Gethin would welcome this stranger to stay in his house in return for her help with the renovations stretched the reader’s credulity. I wasn’t convinced that Jess, who has good reasons to be pathologically terrified of men, would be willing to stay under the same roof as a man she knows nothing about. But setting that aside it was a wonderfully told story and seeing the slow blossoming of Jess and Gethin’s relationship held my attention to the last page.

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The Beginning of Everything by Jackie Fraser is a sweet story about starting over, friendship, and romance. Set in Wales, it features two unlikely main characters, Jess Cavendish and Gethin Thomas. This is a friends-to-lovers read with a second chance at love. Overall, I did enjoy reading this book about two individuals starting over with their lives, first time reading from this Author and I enjoyed it.

Thanks to NetGalley for the Advanced Readers Copy.

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A forced proximity romance with each of the characters dealing with difficult issues from their past. Insecurities and FMC dealing with fleeing from an abusive relationship.

This one was ultimately not for me, but I hope others looking for a sweet romance will enjoy it.

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Thanks to NetGalley and Random House Publishing Group - Ballantine, Dell for this ARC. I love The Beginning of Everything! I truly appreciated that the main characters were in their 40s and hadn't ever gotten married- while it may not be the norm, it's not unheard of! While it was a story that lead to love, it felt believable. The main character had issues and a messy path and it had truly affected her. Keeping that in the story and discussing the implications of it made it feel so much more real than many other "romance" books. I'd give this a 4.5 stars, only docking some because I wish that the author would have had the main character seek therapy and make that more acceptable as opposed to dealing with it on her own. She needed help and it should have been from a professional. Otherwise, this was a great book!

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DNF @ 33%. "The Beginning of Everything" has not captured my attention in the slightest. I just don't believe there is any chemistry between the characters, budding or not. The story feels very familiar, and simultaneously unbelievable and unrealistic. just don't buy that Gethin would allow Jess to stay with him after discovering her there without permission. It was difficult to suspend my disbelief on this front. I found the writing style hard to get into, so I will not be finishing this book. Sorry!

Thank you to NetGalley, Jackie Fraser, Random House Publishing Group - Ballantine, and Dell for the complimentary ARC of this book. All opinions are my own. I was not compensated for my review.

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The Beginning of Everything by Jackie Fraser is an interesting and unique novel of a romance that develops when two people are thrown together. I love this trope and was intrigued by this novel. However, the characters were not my favorite and the story seemed unnecessarily prolonged at times. So many secrets were kept until the very end of this book and that did not make for the best reading experience. I received a digital copy of this book from the publisher with no obligations. These opinions are entirely my own.

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/5

Jess is on the run after leaving an abusive boyfriend. She finds a recently sold but vacant home and decides to crash there. Gethin just purchased a home to renovate and is shocked to walk in and see Jess living there. They strike a deal that she will help renovate in exchange for a place to stay. Jess has a hard time trusting people, but they start a friendship that slowly turns into more.

This was such a heartwarming love story! These two characters were so well written and I didn’t want this book to end! It was a slow burn and worth it! I cannot wait to read what’s next fri Jackie Fraser! This one deserves all the stars!

📘: The Beginning of Everything by Jackie Fraser
🗓️: September26, 2023

Thank you to NetGalley, Jacki Fraser, and Random House Publishing Group - Ballantinefor this ARC!

I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

*Reviewed on NetGalley and Goodreads.

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