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The Treasured One

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Thank you NetGalley for the ARC.
This book had potential. The author has potential. However, I truly feel like there is room for improvement.

I’ll start with the things I liked:
- the plot was nice. Not utterly original, but it had a few elements that helped it stand out
- the MMC wasn’t a traitorous bastard, which is always a plus given the latest trend in romantasy books
- the interaction between the two main characters was mostly cute. Riel is suuuper respectful, considerate, a true gentleman and I actually found that refreshing even though I’m admittedly a huge fan of the enemies to lovers trope
- the modern touch was something I found disconcerting at first but it did grow on me. It’s not something I’m used to read, but it wasn’t bad at all

Where I think this book could be improved:
- I understand slow starts, but having to wait until we get to 50% for something to start happening seems a bit extreme and it might discourage some readers.
- I don’t mind the change in narrating style (1st and 3rd person) but I would prefere if it were consistent (meaning always 1st or always 3rd for Riel)
- I feel like skipping over the months were Riel and Avery’s relationship developed didn’t do many favors to the way the reader perceives the romance. I kept feeling like they lacked chemistry because i didn’t witness the reasons why they fell in love with each other.
- I would have appreciated some consequences. I mean, Riel in particular had to make some awful choices and we never get to see the aftermath of that before we jump to the end of the story
- speaking of the end of the story, I also feel like it was a bit rushed. I was hoping to finally connect with some of the characters but I didn’t.
- in fact, I feel like what I struggled most in this book was exactly that: finding a way to connect to the characters. There were moments where I could almost feel what they were feeling, but they were over too quick. I think the justification for this was that the writing relied a lot on telling instead of showing. I wish I had gotten to experience more of the characters emotions, maybe even get to know other characters aside from the FMC and MMC. Luenki, for example. Even Solois. Or the seer. By the end of the book I still don’t understand any of their motivations. Honestly I feel like character development might be the weakest point of this book.

Either way, I didn’t hate it, not in the slightest, I just wish it had made me feel more. Still I’m giving it 3⭐️ (a 2.5 rounded up).

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"Hannah Levin's debut novel, 'The Treasured One' weaves a captivating tale of loyalty, love, and the clash of two worlds. Avery, a Golden Child with the gift of healing, faces a choice between her duty to her government caretakers and her growing feelings for Riel, the prince of the fae. As Avery's powers falter, she embarks on a journey through The Rift to the realm of the mysterious and powerful fae, seeking answers and training to control her magic.

The dynamics between Avery and Riel unfold beautifully as they navigate the complexities of their relationship amidst political tensions and betrayals. The world-building is rich, immersing readers in a realm where humans and fae coexist uneasily. Levin's storytelling skill shines through in the vivid descriptions of the fae realm and the magic that binds it.

Fans of Romantasy will delight in the adventurous spirit of this book, reminiscent of 'A Deal with the Elf King' and 'The Cruel Prince.' The sweet, slow-burn romance between Avery and Riel adds a tender touch to the thrilling plot. Levin delivers a compelling debut that will leave readers eagerly awaiting the next installment in this enchanting series."

I like the intricate world-building of the fae realm and the tension-filled dynamics between Avery and Riel. The blend of romance, adventure, and political intrigue creates a compelling narrative that keeps readers hooked until the final page.

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The Treasured Ones had a very intriguing plot line as a Human x Fae Romantasy set in modern America & a distant Fae land. Hannah Levin did an incredible job with this world cross-over, and it definitely had be hooked!

The romance between the FMC and MMC was delightful to read and was well-developed. However,
Riel as a main character was lacking and a little bland.. Solois as a main love interest would've added so much more angst to the plot line!

I believe the idea of the Golden Children and the "Goddess" could've been further explored as it was one of the highlights for me in this book! The ending seemed a little rushed and predictable..

Overall, it was a great 3-star read, and definitely has promise to be an incredible series, as well as an awesome standalone.

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Overall I enjoyed the plot and thought the world building was well done. The characters were interesting and well thought out. The pacing did feel a little off while reading which made it difficult to stay invested in the story at times.

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— thank you to netgalley for the arc!

first off id like to start off by saying that this wasn’t a bad book per say, I just didn’t enjoy it and think it wasn’t for me.

what I did like about this book was the fae world, I think the author did a great job in terms of description and imagery! it was a lot a very quick and fast read which I’m happy about.

this book is said to be NA but it honestly felt and read as a young adult book with added spice to make it NA and I think this would’ve been so much better had it been written as a young adult book from the beginning.

my main problem with this book was the main character. she was 21? 22? I don’t even remember but this girl acted like a 12 year old throughout the whole book. she was so immature and the things she said and did just gave me the ick. the whole chapter of her fantasizing about the mmc at the VERY beginning of the book where they barely knew each other and the mature things that were written during it made me extremely uncomfortable as this girl acted like a child the whole time and I felt it was very unnecessary.

the mmc wasn’t bad I guess… nothing stood out to me.

their relationship also felt like instalove; they met and there was a few months time skip and by that time it was said they were closer and spent a lot of time together. as the reader it was as fast as quite literally turning the page which is what felt like instalove, I would’ve loved to see more of those in between moments and I think it would’ve added a lot more to their relationship. the spice between them made me uncomfortable, there’s an age gap, both of them are on different maturity levels and I have no idea how I read through this.

the ending was rushed big time, there was so much left unanswered and things that were just swept under the rug, had the conflict at the end been more of the main focus of the book I think it would’ve been more engaging.

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*Thank you Netgalley for the ARC, all thoughts are my own*

DNF @ 35%

I think this has a lot of potential but I was pretty bored the entire time I was reading this. We follow Avery, a gifted child that was a result of a rift opening between earth and the Fae realm.

She uses her powers incorrectly for some many years and gets sick so she travels to the Fae world to heal. But in the Fae world, there are waring kingdoms and the magic is unstable. This could have made the book interesting but for the first part we really only focus on Avery healing and learning about the her magic. My issue is that it’s more telling vs showing even as we learn about the Fae characters. “He told me he likes to read” vs we find his characters always reading when Avery stumbles upon him in the castle.

My other biggest issue is that this book is partially set on Earth but the Author is constantly making cultural references that have actually happened on earth which is my biggest instant turn off for books. I just think it instantly dates the book because whatever is referenced won’t be relevant anymore by the time the readers actually read the book.

“I might have made some crass comment about that being prime daddy age”

“Put a few drops of red food coloring in it and sell it as a health potion to the same people who bought gamer girl bath water”

“Like the Avatar”

“She acted like she’d found one of Willy Wonkas golden tickets”

If these references don’t both you, you could enjoy this book. There just wasn’t enough for me to care about the characters or the world to want to read more.

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"The Treasured One" presents readers with a unique juxtaposition of modern-day settings and a fantastical "fairy tale" world, which initially intrigued me. I also liked that it did not 'bait' a sequel, it is a finished story in its own right but still leaves opportunity for future installments. However, I found myself grappling with shifting thoughts throughout the book, primarily due to comparisons drawn to Holly Black's "The Cruel Prince" trilogy.

While some may draw parallels between the two, particularly in their portrayal of fae stories, I personally struggled to reconcile these comparisons. Unlike "The Cruel Prince," which delves deeply into themes of familial relationships, political power dynamics, and only hints at romance, "The Treasured One" seemed to place a heavier emphasis on romantic entanglements.

Unfortunately, this shift in focus left other aspects of the plot feeling underdeveloped and lacking in depth. As a result, the non-romantic elements failed to capture my interest in the same way as they did in "The Cruel Prince."

Furthermore, the use of contemporary slang and references dated the book and somewhat juvenile, detracting from the overall immersion in the story. It gave the impression of pandering to a specific audience, rather than offering a timeless narrative that could resonate with readers beyond current trends.

Overall, while "The Treasured One" may appeal to fans of YA fantasy and romance, particularly those drawn to enemies-to-lovers tropes, it fell short of my expectations, especially when compared to similar works in the genre. Perhaps with a clearer distinction in its marketing and a more balanced approach to its narrative elements, future installments could offer a more satisfying reading experience.

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Thank you NetGalley for this ARC.

This book was an easy read. Very different from the ones i’ve read, which is refreshing. I did find it too fast-paced at some points. If you like something along the lines of the cruel prince I think you would really enjoy this book!

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Three and a half
I thoroughly enjoyed the ideas here with a rift appearing that let humans know that the Fae are very much real . Having just a very few humans receive magic from the Goddess served quite well to offer a unique storyline. Avery our main character is one of those rare individuals and she can actually heal but it's debilitating and it would appear as time goes on she could be in severe danger of killing herself ! Luckily she lives in the Whitehouse so officials seek help from the secretive Fae who agree to meet Avery but she is met by two Princes when she crosses over and both have very different opinions on what to do !
As I've said this has really good possibilities but was sadly let down by the main character. Avery is in her early twenties and yet act's and sounds much younger. I understand that she's been sheltered from much in order to both protect her and also I have to say use her to the government's advantage so some of that is excusable. However she's well I'm struggling to express myself here as Avery is oh so keen to sample passion shall we say and her first time just felt a bit well ick I guess. The story wrapped up awfully quick with a battle and something a little bit closer to home which made me feel the author had left things out. No spoilers but there's a huge betrayal that wasn't explained so felt unsatisfying to me. I hope things get explained more in the next book and that the world building continues because as I've stated this really does have huge potential.
This voluntary take is of a copy I requested from Netgalley and my thoughts and comments are honest and I believe fair

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This was a really cute fantasy read, very different to the other fantasy books that I've read loved that the story was completed, but if Hannah wanted to make another one she still could. I really loved the story line, little bit of smut but I always prefer the plot over smut. It was a mixture of modern day and past days. It was defo what I needed ❤️

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I was excited for this fae/human romance! But this one missed the mark for me. Although it seemed more fast-paced and the writing was easy to understand which are both advantages for me. But with that being said, it missed the mark because as it continued it kind of felt like nothing was truly happening. Because of that I rated it 2.5 stars rounded up!

I would definitely recommend if your looking for a straight-forward fae and Human Romantasy.

Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for an E-ARC in exchange for an honest review.
All opinions are my own.

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A fantasy romance that everyone in this reality could relate to!
Riel has absolutely stolen my heart!

You have Avery from modern day America, blessed with powers due to The Rift which was formed between her world and the Fae.
She gets sick and travels to the Fae world, through the rift to heal and learn how to actually use/ control her powers.

This is definitely a beautiful romance story, full of detail and world building.
Hannah paints a beautiful picture of the Fae world, you can't help but just feel like you've falling into it yourself.

Avery is this awkward, innocent and adorable FMC, while Riel is your typical cinnamon roll male. Both produce the perfect banter and cute romance between themselves.

I love that this is a standalone read, which means no cliffhanger and a wonderful romance from start to finish!

Lastly, there is definitely spice in this book and it is absolutely perfect! It fits the story without being too overwhelming or scarce!

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2.75/5⭐
1.5/5🌶️

Years ago, an irreparable tear called 'the rift' appeared in the sky dividing the humans and the fae. There were the 'golden children' in the humans who had magical abilities, one of them being Avery Nelson, who could heal ill people. When suddenly one day, she faints while healing a person and is not able to call her magic for a long period after.

She is sent to the other side of the rift where the fae live in the hopes that she will be able to call her magic again. Astonriel 'Riel' is the second prince to the fae kingdom, who takes it upon himself to help Avery. All that time spent together leads to the blooming of a romance.

The world building could have been better. The writing was fairly simple so that made it easy to understand but perhaps a map could've better explained about the rift.
My favourite part of the book was probably Riel as he was charming and caring, though I liked Avery for the most part.

The book switches between first person and third person pov. I thought book was quite uneventful. It was waiting and waiting for something interesting to happen but there was nothing. No mystery, no fighting. Finally, things got a bit interesting at around 70%.
Overall, I believe the story had the potential to be more intriguing.

Thank you netgalley for the eARC in exchange for an honest review.

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Read this so quickly, really enjoyed the world building and plot.

I don’t think it was my favourite fae romance but definitely for those who enjoyed cruel prince. it’s not high fantasy so romance lovers can enjoy without too much heavy text.


ARC copy from the publisher.

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A little bit young for me I think, but not bad overall. An interesting mix of fairytale and modern day that isn’t seen that often. I feel this is one of those ‘try it and see how you go’ books.

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I was a little bit confused with the first pages but then everything came to light. So so good!!! I rate it 5 stars. One of my favorites so far

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This is a pretty decent debut. I think the general concept of the book, golden-child human female being sent to a dark fae prince, was fine if not kind of over done. I’m not sure how I felt about Avery, she tended to get on my nerves with her immaturity and brattiness. I definitely enjoyed Riel more as a character, but I wasn’t totally sold on their romance. It felt forced and he almost seemed too old for her…? I don’t know, but it was weird for me. I think once the author works some first book kinks out her next releases will be good ones.

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Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC.

Avery is a gifted young woman whose magical ability to heal has made her an important figure to the United States, and she is kept under careful supervision between healing visits where people come from far and wide to be cured. When her powers appear to fail her and her body begins to weaken, she crosses the Rift, a rip in space and time that leads to the land of the fae who may understand what's happening to her. There, she meets a handsome young prince who guides her in learning to replenish her powers, but this mystical land full of secretive people comes with more questions than answers.

This book was not for me, and I very nearly DNF-ed several times throughout. There was potential for this story - it had a lot of hallmarks that other books I love certainly share, particularly fantasy - but ultimately, I found the premise difficult to connect with and the characters somewhat flat. Avery herself was hard for me to sympathize with and many of her interactions with her love interest were very awkward, which made their relationship tough to believe.

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I enjoyed this story of different worlds coming together in the end. It encompasses romance, fantasy, conflict, and a happy ending mired in tragedy.

The lead female character, Avery, has lead a very sheltered life since she was a child and had no childhood or guidance in growing into a young woman. She is forced to find her independence and grow up all at once.

The book flows well and is easy to read.

Thank you to NetGallery for providing me with an advance copy.

I give it 3.75 stars.

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I really enjoyed this one. The story was great, the spice was great, and I loved the characters too. Was it far fetched? Yes! But it made me feel good nonetheless. The MMC was a cinnamon roll which was amazing for a change. I would totally recommend checking it out!

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