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Callum's Fate

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Good ideas, but poorly developed. It was hard to understand Callum's motivations and complete lack of will. If the book is to be sold as pure smut, then fine, but otherwise the book needs much more character development. For example, the original motivation of finding resources for his family is completely forgotten as soon as Callum encounters faerie magic. He makes no attempt to resist it and whines constantly about his lot in life. The reader has no idea where all this loneliness is coming from, he's from a large tight-knit family for crying out loud! Made no sense to me.

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Steamy paranormal read. Callum is looking for work when he is lured away by the will-o-the-wisp when his adventure begins will Callum be able to escape the evil that wants to claim him? This is a fast-paced steamy read the story is entertaining with lots of magical creatures and interesting characters. A good read.

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After reading Callum’s Fate by Dianne Hartsock I find myself still wondering what really happened to put poor Callum in the position he landed in.
The summary led me to believe there will be a more in depth story line when it comes to the fae, the folklore and Callum’s journey, but that’s not quite what I got. It was definitely an easy plot to follow with sex from page one until the end.
It did throw me when Callum and the Wight ended up together but I found myself fascinated and kept reading. I couldn’t help but want to know what else Callum was going to encounter. I wanted to read more about the secondary characters’ story line, Donal, Sean and their wife (Just saying I’d totally buy that book).
I did expected more of a story line than the sex scnese. That being said, I liked what I read. It was inventive and at times it felt like this could have actually been a series of dreams Callum experienced.
If you’re looking for a hot, not exactly human, sex scenes then this is for you. If you’re looking for a hearty plot, this isn’t for you.

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