I feel bad for DNFing this but I couldn't really take it any more.
The writing is oddly stilted, with some grammatical mistakes - notably, the omission of the pluperfect tense, which is sadly common with indie authors and sometimes even traditionally published ones. 3rd person really didn't help the writing flow at all.
Faith was sometimes funny but mostly annoying, and there was no sexual tension to speak of. I've given it 2 stars because probably other people will be able to focus on the humour and get past the writing style, but this one wasn't for me.
Namera T, Media
