Member Reviews
Joyce M, Educator
This book was so nice! it reminded me of me when I was dorming in college. This is a book I would totally recommend. |
2.5/5 stars. Again, But Better follows Shane Primavera, who has had her life completely figured out since she was a kid. She's premed to please her parents, but all she wants to do is read and write. She applies to study abroad for a semester in the UK where she journals and blogs about her adventures abroad. She manages to escape her parents' expectations and solidifies her love for writing as she becomes an intern for a travel magazine. The book is split into two parts: It's first set in 2011 where Shane is 20, and the next part is set in 2017 when Shane is 26. The book is a mix between Fangirl and About Time. That sounds like an interesting combination, right? The thing is the writing was really clunky. The majority of the book was telling and not showing. What's insane to me is that Shane was studying abroad in the UK, she was travelling to a new country and city each weekend, and yet we didn't really get to see any of that. Instead, we got a quick recap of it from Shane's diary entries or her blog post. A lot of the writing was awkward and cringy as well. The majority of this book is set in 2011, which is fun, but Riccio really tried to sell it. There's some kind of pop culture reference to that time in almost every paragraph. Unfortunately, I couldn't read this without thinking Shane was Christine the whole time. They have the same personality, they talk the same, and they have the exact same interests. It strikes me as odd that Riccio didn't take this time to craft a character that's completely unique. It's kind of lazy that she self-inserted herself into the story. One thing I did enjoy about this book was the plot twist. It was fun and a little hokey. And I gave this book an extra half bubble tea because I didn't call that ending. I was so sure I knew where it was going as all time travel stories end the same. I also think Riccio did a great job writing about anxiety. The scene where she loses her purse in Rome was spot on to what I know myself and others have experienced. You could see Shane's thought process and her anxiety escalating, which was extremely accurate for someone who experiences anxiety. In the end, this book was a miss. The pacing and the writing didn't work for me. It struggled with trying to be too quirky and that overshadowed the story, which could have been great. The romance is also based on emotional cheating, which I found to be unnecessary. Pilot and Shane could have pursued their relationship in a healthier way. And the drama didn't have to be so manufactured. Books by YouTubers often receive a lot of backlash and I can understand where it comes from. But you can tell Riccio loves to write and put effort into her debut novel. I think with more practice, she could become better at it. She's clearly got great ideas. It's just the execution that needs a little more work. |
Actual rating 4.5 Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for providing me with an e-arc of this book! Again, but Better was one of those books that I read with a smile on my face for probably 90% of the book. It just made me so happy. The book is about a girl named Shane who ends up studying abroad in England during college. Despite doing well academically she feels like she's done college all wrong. No friends, no plans besides going home for the weekend, and no chance of romance. Girl I feel you. England is her second chance at doing things right and making a real effort to turn things around. I saw a lot of myself in Shane so I was really rooting for her the whole book and when things don't go according to plan it was equally heartbreaking. Her journey of self acceptance and doing what makes her happy was an important part of this book and an important message for people in general. At the end of the day you have to live with yourself so why not do the things you enjoy and make yourself happy. One of Shane's new friendships she makes that I really loved was with one of her flatmates Babe. I was glad that Shane was able to find someone to connect with and that they were supportive of each other. I liked all the flatmates actually but I think we got to know Babe and Pilot the best. Speaking of Pilot...okay, I really liked the connection Shane and Pilot develop right from the get go. Their friendship just seemed so easy and natural despite Shane thinking she was probably making a fool out of herself 24/7, he enjoyed your awkwardness trust me. I liked all their little jokes and their adventures. Pilot was very sweet, although I did have a few moments where I wanted to give him a good slap. He did go through a moment where he tried to distance himself from Shane because he knew he had feelings for her and it was very annoying because she's still your friend and you're just shutting her out! She also had one of those moment albeit a little different later on in the book. Communication is key. There were a couple things that kept this from being a 5 star read for me. Overall I really enjoyed this book and am super proud of Christine! I can't wait to get my exclusive Barnes & Noble copy to read the delete parts because I want more. Side Note: I loved that the chapters had titles, they were fun! [Full review with spoilers under cuts on my goodreads review] |
Honestly, I was pretty excited for Again, but Better—the main character, Shane, is the same age as I am (a junior in college) and is studying abroad in London (I love London!). Overall, though, the book had me cringing. Shane is a bit...too relatable. Her actions and hobbies were overwhelmingly basic, which is fine, but the story was told so plainly that the plot became increasingly obvious after every chapter. I liked the characters, but there needed to be more interactions that were meaningful. Some information was ~revealed~ about characters, but it wasn't really followed up with and just kind of seemed to be unnecessarily there. SPOILERS------------------------------------------------------------------------ In my opinion, Shane didn't really do it better the second time. Sure, she got what she wanted: she's a successful author and ends up married to Penn, but she didn't really learn from her mistakes. I think that there needed to be more...meat? action? something? the first time Shane did her semester abroad. It was short and pitiful, which I understand, of course; the whole point is that she's not having a good time. BUT. It went by too quickly for us to truly feel sorry for her. From our point of view, she instantly made a close-knit group of friends, has a killer internship, and is in London. During her lonely spring break week, her experiences are summed up in a single sentence. We needed to feel how lonely Shane actually was for us to feel for her. Anyway, the magic? Huh? That part was never fully explained and just felt super random. Also, I feel like things could go so awry if two people time-travelled and restarted the last 6 years of their lives... |
Jenny T, Reviewer
I was given an ARC in exchange for an honest review. This read is a story about second chances and discovering who you are. Shane is for sure going to be a relatable character for a lot of people. I think that this read will inspire a lot of people to go out and live their best lives. I love how hopeful this book is. It shows how hopeless Shane feels but it also shows how she overcomes those feelings and I think that is a very good message for readers. Shane finds that courage and determination can conquer anything and the book shows that in a nostalgic bittersweet way in a story about new beginnings. Thank you to NetGalley, the author, and the publisher for an ARC in exchange for an honest review. |
Nicole Q, Educator
More like 3.5 stars but I erred on the higher end. I’m a bit conflicted with this book because it was an easy, light read. Definitely felt like a Y a novel so if that is the genre then perfect, but if it is not, it misses the mark. The first half was fun as the reader explores Europe as a self professed college hermit. The second half, though, felt a little far-fetched and unnecessary. I don’t think this novel lived up to its hype but if you’re looking for light and fluffy then by all means read this book. |
Forced Quirkiness – One of the very first things I made a note of was how this book tried too hard to be quirky. How the character Shane is clumsy and it’s all part of her quirky character (only second to her love of pop culture references!) and it just kept making me more and more angry as the book went on. Honestly, I don’t think I’ve read a book that tried this hard to be quirky ever. Pilot Penn – Speaking of quirkiness… Was this name supposed to be that too? Because to me, it was just straight up stupid. Who even names their character that? And then apparently no one, not even once brings up the pen brand to him until almost all the way through the book when it suddenly becomes a thing Shane comments on. Shane Felt Too Much Like Christine – The main reason why I wanted to pick up this book was that it’s written by Christine. I’ve been following her YouTube channels for years now and really like her as a person. What I got really close to hating though was the fact that Shane was pretty much a fictionalized version of Christine. She loved all of the things Christine loves (Lost, Cassie Clare books and pop culture references), she’s a writer (we shall not talk about her blog name…) and basically had the exact same college experience as Christine. You’re basically reading a novel all about Christine’s life and it gets increasingly more awkward and weird because you feel like you’re reading about Christine. Not a fictional character. The Writing Just Didn’t Click/Work For Me – I feel like you can definitely tell that it’s Christine wrote this book and while her way of talking and telling stories works for her YouTube channel it just didn’t work for me here. I kept being pulled out of the story by dialogue that felt completely unnatural or just the way she phrased certain things (at times, it felt like she was trying really hard not talk about breathing in a normal way? Shane ‘vacuums up oxygen’ for example…) were like cold water to the phase and a sure way to pull you out of the story itself. The Magical Element Felt So Forced/Wasn’t Explained Enough – Again, But Better is a contemporary with a magical element (that I didn’t even expect. I hadn’t read the synopsis in a while) but it just didn’t work for me and wasn’t explained enough? Plus, part of the magical element was so annoying and whenever it showed up, I was just sitting here like ‘NO.’. Too Many God Damn Pop Culture References – Shane’s a HUGE fan of the series Lost and she’ll bring it up whenever possible. Her laptop is named after Sawyer from the show. But not only that. What would a contemporary be without at least once dropping a Harry Potter reference… And there’s so much more where those came from. It also made the story quite dated by including all of these things into the story as a whole. Shane Basically Doesn’t Mature At All – Not only does Shane barely mature, oh no. She starts out acting really immature (she’s supposed to be 20 at the beginning) from the beginning and by the end nothing much has changed. In fact, she pretty much deals with things the exact same way no matter how old she is. And she just straight up doesn’t learn anything from her mistakes? I don’t know why this particular book was titled Again, But Better because it ends up being the exact same mess in the end. Parents Who Belong In The Trash Can – We’ve already covered how immature Shane is, but don’t you worry! She isn’t the only immature character. Oh no. Her parents are immature AF too and her dad especially deserves to be thrown in a trash can. He yells at Shane and belittles her in front of her friends all while basically throwing a temper tantrum (think a toddler who’s super tired but refuses to go to bed not getting something they want) and then calling his own daughter a ‘little shit’. And Shane just takes it. Her mother isn’t really much help either. This book pissed me off in general but my god, these parents and especially the father took the fucking cake. And then instead of, you know, learning from her mistakes and doing things – dare I say – better the second time around Shane just does the exact same again and we’re treated to a second round of her father being an asshole – minus Shane breaking down because she knew what was coming this time around. I just, this pissed me off so much. Convenient Way Of Dealing With Cheating – If you were to ask me what’s something I do not want to read about in books, it’s cheating. And because Again, But Better apparently hadn’t annoyed me enough just yet there was also cheating in the book. Shane and Pilot basically get a chance to do their London study abroad thing all over again – you know, do it again, but better. They’re both in relationships when they go back in time (with their memories still very much intact) and Shane insists on not doing anything until Pilot breaks up with his girlfriend (she’s the same girl he’s dating while they’re in London – though I don’t know why they’re even dating. Pilot doesn’t seem all that in love with her to begin with). What does Pilot do? He ends up leaving her a voicemail because he can’t get a hold on her and tells Shane that he’s single now. Yeah, he’s the guy to break up over voicemail. But it gets worse, don’t you worry. Shane and Pilot go on their adventures that they did the first time around, they grow closer, they kiss and I’m 80% certain they have sex too. BUT GUESS WHAT. Pilot’s girlfriend never actually got the voicemail so she shows up in London just like she did the first time around. Fun times. So there’s cheating going on here, Pilot might think he’s single (which… no.) but Shane is very much still dating someone back in New York? But that’s apparently not something she worries about? Not once. And here’s the ‘best thing’. The way it’s dealt with (or, you know, not dealt with) is by having Shane and Pilot stay in the timeline where they’re redoing London instead of going back (and losing their memories of their do-over) and Shane facing what she did. Guess that was easier to do. Final Thoughts Here’s something I realized as I was writing this review: the book title is misleading and mostly wrong for how the story goes. I know it refers to Shane wanting a do-over on her college experience when we first start out but that’s just not what happens, especially later on. God, I would’ve loved this so, so much if things would’ve actually been done Again, But Better in the end. There are so many opportunities to right some of the wrongs that happened and give the characters a much more satisfying arc, but instead, it’s the same mess all over again. I was honestly so, so excited to go into this book and to see what kind of story Christine had written but I ended up being super disappointed by it. I kept getting close to just DNFing this book and I would’ve done it if it weren’t for Caro who I was buddy reading this book with. This gave me the chance to let off some steam and see if it was just me who didn’t feel this book. Lastly, I feel like maybe if you aren’t as familiar with Christine as a person you might end up enjoying the book a little bit more? And I really do hope you have a better reading experience with this book than I did. |
I requested this out of curiosity more than anything. I know Christine by name only. I’ve never watched her videos and I don’t follow her on social media. I have seen her as a moderator before, but that’s about the extent of my contact. I liked Shane and Pilot well enough. The first half of the book was a bit of a struggle. Shane’s POV was really rough and definitely didn’t sound like a 20 year old. I never quite settled into caring about these characters, but I was intrigued. Plot wise, it wasn’t what I expected and I sort of liked that. The second half of the book felt stronger. The writing wasn’t as disjointed, the inner monologue wasn’t as young sounding. There is a lot of push and pull, a lot of repetitive word choices and phrases, and a good portion of clichés. Overall, I liked the idea, but was also sort of bored. There seem to be loads of nods to Christine herself in this story and I wonder if I would have liked it more if I were a fan. **Huge thanks to Wednesday Books for providing the arc free of charge** |
Utterly sweet, cute, and funny. I loved Shane's character, she one of the top three main characters who I relate to the most and I wish I could just hug her. I loved the story but the little magic element was a surprise to me, I was not expecting that. Overall, I really enjoyed the story and the personalities of the characters. I'm sure a lot of readers who are "lost" will be able to relate to Shane. |
I really could not even finish this book. I was just annoyed with the bad writing style. I’ve been a fan of Christine for ages but I can’t bother with this book. |
Disclaimer: I received an eARC through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review. Shane is unhappy with her college experience. She’s pretty much friendless, and she hates her major. However, her parents won’t support her if she changes her major so she concocts a plan to start over by studying abroad in London with a creative program track and internship at a travel magazine. On the first day there, she meets Pilot, and she’s immediately smitten with him. There’s a problem though; he has a girlfriend. However, he may be interested in her too. However, trying to start over is hard when the past cannot be changed. Or can it? I struggled with this book. First, I question why it’s classified as YA when the main character is 20 from the beginning. However, because that has no merit on the overall writing quality, I gave that a pass. The writing quality, however, was rough. Throughout the first half of the book, set in 2011, I questioned what the point was. Shane writes, goes off to other countries seemingly every weekend, and pines after a guy who doesn’t want to break up with his girlfriend. The writing drags, and some of the descriptions just feel forced and get in the way of the story itself. It almost reads like it’s someone’s first draft, and it was painful to read at times. The second half of the story provides a unique twist, but at that point, the writing had already lost me. It felt like the first half dragged on too long, and most readers will give up there before the story actually becomes interesting. |
Jessica C, Reviewer
This book is separated into two very distinct parts. I enjoyed the first part fine and when it transitioned to the second part I was caught off guard and annoyed. However, I quickly grew to love the second part of this book. Pilot and Shane are amazing characters and I loved everything about them, There was so much depth added to their characters in the second part of the book. I was all in for them and loved how everything came together in the end. Such by a unique spin on a classic fiction romance. |
I absolutely loved Again, but Better. This debut novel is full of laughter, heart and enough quirkiness to wonder if it was written about young me. The story follows foreign exchange student Shane and her semester abroad in Europe. Her parents thought she was on her way to being premed, but Shane has other ideas with what she wants to do with her life. After having to go into a field she never wanted to be in, losing a crush that could have been more and having a hard time adjusting to the life she lives now years later. Shane gets a do over and charts a path for the life she's always wanted. |
Thanks to NetGalley for this ARC! DNF at 23% None of this is meant to bash this book or Christine. In fact, I think if you mesh really well with her personality, you’ll LOVE this story. But, to me it all felt a bit too wattpad-esque with its quirky main character with a terribly mean family, an obsession with the Beatles, a two dimensional love story, and an over-usage of exclamation points. I found the narration to really grate on me, and I do not intend on finishing this story. |
If I am being honest, I really struggled with this review-- more than I thought I would considering I am not an avid or regular polandbananasbooks watcher! Even so, how do you evaluate the writing of someone whose videos you've watched on and off throughout the years? I do not think it possible to write this review without acknowledging that her years on booktube have basically made it impossible for me to do as Barthes would urge me to and completely separate the work from its author. So, in addition to my usual discussion about what I loved, what can be improved and why or why not I think this might be a book for you (the people reading this), I'll also be including a short discussion on Death of the Author and the Self-Insert character. I think both of these are worth talking about in relation to this book, my review and how I believe other people will review it. Best Parts of the Book Again but Better is a fast read. I read it in roughly two days and flew through the pages. I started the book expecting a fast, light-read contemporary and it delivered for the most part. Shane's struggles will also resonate with a lot of readers, I think. Shane sets off to London for a better college experience, yes, but also to do the things she's been afraid to do. I remember the experience of my first study abroad-- the thrill of being able to start fresh with new people, and to reshape the bad habits I had developed or do away with my insecurities. It's more challenging than writing out a list and seeing her stumble through on her way to being better, to having the courage to face her choices and re-direct her life from doing what she should to what she wants is something I think a lot of folks in their late teens early 20s will relate to. A lot of people talk about the mistakes the characters made-- but I honestly could see a twenty year old doing those things. In fact, some of the people I knew at that age did those things, made those mistakes (including me). Beyond that, I think Christine added a pretty nifty element I don't see often in these types of contemporaries. I picked it up expecting a standard contemporary with some relationship angst, unusual names and family or friend drama. I was pleasantly surprised when one specific part of the plot was introduced and I appreciated that Christine didn't do what so many contemporaries do and equate finding oneself with finding someone to love you. Where it could improve I think Christine Riccio has started with a great base here and I'm excited to see how she'll build upon it. One area I'd love to see her grow in is her dialogue and descriptions. The arc I received had some of the better known mistakes of new writers: too large a variety of dialogue tags (splurted, I think I was used at one point), overly repetitive mannerisms (what the fudge is used frequently) and a tendency to group descriptions together (especially clothes) where they could be threaded in. I also think there were a few opportunities to weave in hints and show what the secondary characters are struggling with (that maybe Shane missed until later) rather than tell us-- though I acknowledge that's more tricky through a first person narrative. Still, there were a couple I'd marked off when reading, so I'd love to see her take better advantage of those opportunities in future books! Generally, I understood character motivations and relationships, though there was one important moment, in the latter half of the book, that I questioned. I think either the connection between Shane and another character needed to be made stronger in the first half or the mechanism Riccio used to get them together should have been different. I will acknowledge the second half of the book must have been tricky to write. Some of the hints were maybe a little too blatant (though some said they missed them so maybe that's a me thing). Moreover, when she finally executed I had moments where I wished to see other parts of the world to which she only dedicated a few sentences [spoiler- which will be hidden on good reads] A teeny tiny thing but-- I was surprised that the array of objects Pilot gave Shane at the end didn't include a lamppost. I thought for sure it would! You'll like it if… 1. You want a lighter read/contemporary 2. Silly and fun humor. There were a few lines with some puns or kind of absurd humor that made me crack a smile. There's a bit of dry humor as well, in smaller doses. 3. Imperfect characters who still get a happy ending. There are definitely moments where the characters stumble, they're selfish, they're manipulative, they're dishonest. Their realization of these flaws are scattered throughout but not all of them are a major focus. 4. You're cool with characters who feel younger and might sometimes be a little 'immature' You won't like it if… 1. You love polished or lyrical prose and are bothered by more 'realistic' dialogue with ticks like 'um' or 'uh' or phrases like "what the fudge" (that one personally really got me) 2. You'll be distracted by some of the similarities between the main character and the author (see my discussion below) 3. You need to stick it out for a while to see the character begin to really grow and have realizations. Shane has a few smack you in your face epiphanies and works to change her behavior afterward, but she needs to stumble around for a while first. 4. You're not a fan of heavy pop-culture references. I'll be honest, I didn't get some of them. 5. A snarky love interest who does some questionable things in his relationship. That is to say, you don't have to approve of both the love interests or their choices to like the story. 6. I think it will rub a lot of people the wrong way that she's also exceptionally good at the things she doesn't love Death of the author and the self-insert: Here's the part I struggled most with. A lot of reviews have pointed out that Shane is a self-insert. I don't think they're necessarily wrong-- there are a lot of similarities between Shane and Christine. They enjoy similar things, the look similar, and have similar mannerisms. I'd also say her in real life booktube best friend is inserted into the story, too. Can I be completely honest? A lot of folks have been saying they don't like it because it shows a lack of creativity, but a part of me wants to defend her a little b it. I suspect that authors insert more of themselves in different ways into characters and their stories than we expect. They just have the advantage of not being a fairly well known public figure beforehand. Death of the author isn't super achievable for her. It is impossible for large swathes of readers to separate the text from the author's intentions because she has such a huge online presence! We can't evaluate it without comparing it to her in someway and that kind of sucks a little bit for her, but I think it's also an opportunity for her in her next book to try writing someone much different. I will concede that I wish she hadn't made Shane quite so similar to herself in superficialities at the very least since I spent parts of the book wondering if she wanted us to see her in a certain way or if I was reading about her, not about this character she'd created. It pulled me out of the story more than once or twice-- at one point Shane gives a speech about the power of YouTube that felt like an especially egregious moment Christine inserted her thoughts or self. Still, people have said the only reason it's getting published is because she's a well-known booktuber; that the quality of the writing doesn't merit the publishing. First, let's not knock the effort it takes to build an audience. Second, regardless of the merit of the writing it's hard to say this is the only reason it got published. I have read books of lesser or equal quality written by little known debut authors. Now, do I think there was an expectation around the book due to her being involved so publicly as a reader over the years? Yes. I don't think there's anyway around it completely, but I hope that making people aware of how their expectations and knowledge of Christine might affect them going in might help. *This arc was given to me in exchange for an honest review* I will be posting a short video discussion on this in the next few weeks, and will be including it in my wrap up video as well. |
4.5 ⭐ omg this book was ADORABLE!!! I've been reading a lot of psychological thrillers lately, so it was nice to read a book that I didn't have to think about too much. I loved all of the characters! I was not expecting the middle twist, but now the title makes sense. I think we can all think of a time in our lives we'd love the chance to go back to for a do-over. |
So firstly, let me start off by saying that I got this from NetGalley in exhange for an honest review. I do not know this author personally, nor do I watch her YouTube channel anymore or follow her social media. I was excited to read this as it just sounded good. This main character, Shane, is not really Shane. It's Christine. She wrote herself as this character, 100%. The same personality, the same jokes, and chaoticness that turned me away from her channel in the first place. I'm all for adding in your personality to the characters you create, but this just didn't work here for this book. Shane just ended up annoying me on many occasions. Her humor was odd. It felt fitting at times, but others it just felt forced and was put in at the wrong times. It just didn't work well with the scene it was in. The writing style was iffy at times as well. I can tell she went for poetry prose but ended up sounding like she tried too hard to come across a certain way. Immediatly in the beginning she calls the plane a hollowed out tube. Why? That just felt forced and not poetic at all and felt out of place. The romance between Shane and Pilot felt very flat. They characters felt under-developed in general so the romance was hard to get behind to begin with. I felt no connection with the romance, no swooning was involved, I wasn't excited for them to get together. It just wasn't there like it should have been and since it was set up like it was a huge deal, I expected much more. The side characters were irrelevant. They were kind of around but fizzled out around half way through. I felt nothing for them, either. This book just centered around Shane and her weird inner musings and notebook filled worries. And her parents? What the heck is that all about? Nothing seemed to get fixed there at all. Everything seemed like it was all opened ended. I would have liked that it ended with everything feeling like it was more "closed." For all the hype that this got, I was expecting a lot more. This got 2 stars because there was a few good lines and moments that stuck with me. |
Like every other person on this planet, I was interested in reading this book because the author is one of the biggest booktubers out there & as a fellow booktuber I had to check this out. I was pleasantly suprise. This book follows the story of Shane, an American student who does exchange program to London. She meets a boy, of course, and along with her article writing for a magazine, she travels a lot around Europe and that was my favorite aspect of the book. A certain part of the relationship that she developed with the boy turned me completely off but the rest of the book was extremely engaging and it will be a sweet summer contemporary for teens to read soon. I recommend this if you are looking for a book that deals with academia, your parents pressure to be perfect and follow THEIR dreams & a travel YA full of twists and turns. |
I'll just say it up front: I LOVED THIS BOOK! The first half of the book was so much fun to read! I loved how relatable Shane was as a character. Pilot will also go down as one of my favorite characters to date. I mean SWOON! The travel element of the book also added so much to it! The second half of the book had me a little skeptical at first, to be honest. I was nervous it would turn into one of those "and then I woke up" stories, but it didn't! Yay! One thing I also want to point out is how much I admire the author. You can tell inside the novel how much excitement and love was put into it! Overall, I would totally recommend this book to anyone and everyone! Enjoy! |
I think this is more like a 2.5 star for me. I’m honestly so sad because I was hoping to really love this book but it just wasn’t for me unfortunately. There were parts I thought were really cute and sweet and fun but overall there was something that just didn’t click with me. I really loved the development of the connection between Shane and her cousin Leo as well as the general friendships and travel adventures throughout Europe with Shane, Babe, and Sahra. BUT the cheating elements of the main romantic relationship and the horrible dynamics between Shane and her parents made me so uncomfortable and it was hard to move past that. |








