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Our Stop

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A sweet romance, bit predictable and not the most original idea in the world but well executed and an easy read.

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I love this type of romace- the maybe, maybe not with a happy ending. This was exactly what I needed in my life right now. It felt like it was written for me, down to the Romeo + Juliet (my face movie ever) cinema. Both main characters were lovely, though their friends kind of sucked. It was an awesome read that I will definitely be recommending.

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I liked the story outline, but at times I didn't feel that some of the more crude language and descriptions added anything, and would make me wary of buying this as a present

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Thank you for the early copy!

I’m a super picky romance reader and sadly I did not connect with this one.

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Loved the premise of this book and knew it would be one I’d really enjoy reading. I also listened to the audiobook at the same time (switching formats, depending on what I was doing) and it didn’t disappoint. A fun, quirky read and I’ll be looking out for more books by Laura Jane Williams.

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I liked the sound of this book, cute, modern romance but it was too sweet and shallow for me and I could not get beyond a few chapters before giving up.

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Cute romance, believable main and secondary characters. Rooted for the two MCs from the first moment.

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Couldn’t finish this. I liked the sound of it from the description but this was very cheesy and formulaic, and not engagingly written enough for me to get past that

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The concept of this book was really cute. Two daily commuters. One newspaper column called ‘Missed connections’. A post directed to ‘the cute girl with the coffee stains on her dress’ and what ensued was a whole lot of cuteness.

Truly a cute concept (how many times can I say cute… it was cute). That’s simply the best description.

I enjoyed the alternating viewpoint of Nadia and Daniel. And I enjoyed the sub plots with Nadia’s best friends.

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Thank you NetGalley & Avon Books for allowing me to read this in exchange for my honest review.

I had extremely high hopes for Our Stop; but unfortunately if fell a little flat for me. I felt that it was extremely long and drawn out with a lot of unnecessary verbiage. I think I would have enjoyed this book more if it was 100 pages shorter. The overall story is cute, but just extremely too long. The whole time I'm reading, I planned to rate it 2 stars, but it finally picked up pace for me at around the 70%-75% mark so I added an extra star.

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Great romance! At first the story did come off a little stalker-ish but once I was able to overlook that it wasn't too bad. Towards the middle of the novel, however, it did feel that the story did drag on more than I thought necessary. I could have done without the second lead male character and that story arc. It did seem credible but at the same time, I could do without it. Not the best romance novel I have read this year but definitely not the worst.

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I started reading this book, but did not finish it. I read a few chapters but was not interested in continuing with the story.

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Although One Stop takes a while to get going, in my opinion, it’s a cute story and you can’t help but get invested in the characters and frustrated as life throws endless obstacles in their way. If you’re a fan of easy to read, entertaining chicklit, you’ll definitely like this book.

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A lost connections love story in a modern day setting. Some of the pop culture references will date it to a very specific period in time, but this isn't a bad thing.

It's a lovely story, with lovely characters, who do lovely things. There's almost no drama, making it a nice easy read. Sometimes romance can to too cringe, too painful to read, making it a chore. Our Stop is pleasant and funny, and you wish you had friends like the characters in this book.

If you follow LJW on social, or have read any of her other books, you know she can tell a story - nothing to worry about there. You also will know how hard she worked to write this, right up to the wire. She has produced a charming love story, which I very much hope there is a sequel to.

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So I have been on a contemporary binge lately and this did not disappoint. I really like the story and the main characters. I do think some things were a little rushed and others not enough. My only real problem with the book was the pacing and some of the situations and how they were handled.

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Wonderfully written and a real joy to read. A thoroughly modern romance perfect for the 21st century.

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This was a fun read for a holiday and I enjoyed the premise, however I felt like it could have had a stronger edit, as it seemed to go on longer than needed. I also struggled a bit with the characters, it just all felt a little to unrealistic for what I was hoping for but fun none the less.

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People were absolutely raving about this book all over social media, and since I’m a sucker for a good romcom naturally I needed to read and review it for all of you. Sadly, I didn’t love the book as most people seem to.

My issue with this book really boils down to one simple thing: it’s too long. Every time they came close to meeting in person, but didn’t for the smallest reason, my frustration grew. In my opinion, it takes too long for them to meet. There are too many close calls, when it would’ve been far more rewarding if they met after a few missed connections and then began to build their relationship on the page. My interest in them meeting was the only thing that kept me reading, because I felt that once they met the story would be worth it.

But every time they began to doubt whether they would meet, and every time they JUST missed each other, a little bit of my soul shriveled up. There’s a certain point where tension turns to frustration because the story’s main premise is carried on too long.

Don’t get me wrong, the story has its cute moments. I wanted Nadia and Daniel to meet. Their conversations through the newspaper were sweet. My issue is that there just wasn’t enough in the story to really grip me.

Our Stop was raved about, so my opinion of the book is probably an unpopular one. I love romcoms, but this one had a flimsy plot with very little pay off. If you’re looking for a cute romance to read on a cold fall day, this probably isn’t the best choice.

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A cute read which was amusing and fairly enjoyable overall. It took me a little while to really get into it and felt the pace was really slow, I like to hit the ground running a little bit I guess.
Very modern and I could see why it may appeal to a younger audience.

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Absolutely loved this! The story was so engaging and the female characters were relatable and funny and well rounded. Daniel was kind, considerate and intelligent - surely no such man exists lol. Loved the concept and the way the pair kept missing one another. Will definitely read more from this author. Thank you to Netgalley, Avon and the author for an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.

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