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Amanda O, Reviewer
If there's one thing I like doing, it's discovering new authors. S. M. Hardy is certainly a new author for me but she is now a firm favourite author of mine. I read the synopsis for 'The Evil Within' and it certainly sounded intriguing. So without further ado, I grabbed my copy of the book, I grabbed a cup of tea, I moved my youngest Labrador from the comfy spot on the couch, sat down and I began to read. 'The Evil Within' is certainly a read and a half, which I did enjoy but more about that in a bit. 'The Evil Within' is the first of the 'Dark Devon Mysteries' series and it is a promising start to a new series. The author initially grabbed my attention with the dark and slightly sinister cover, which encouraged me to read the synopsis and the story just sealed the deal as it were. The author has one of those writing styles that is easy to get used to and easy to get along with. I felt as though I was part of the story myself, which is all thanks to S. M. Hardy's storytelling and the vivid and realistic descriptions she uses. It didn't take me long at all to get into this book. In fact by the end of the first chapter, I knew that this was going to be one of those books, which I would need to binge read. I must be psychic because that's exactly what happened. I wasn't able to read the book over the course of a day because life got in the way, but I did manage to read it over the course of a couple of days. Whilst I was reading the book I totally immersed myself in the story to the extent that I was able to shut out all other distractions and focus solely on the book. Usually I have the attention span of a gnat and I am easily distracted but not in this case. I was so convinced by the story that I began to interact with the book as if the different characters could hear what I was saying. I know that sounds weird but I find that if I enjoy a book to the extent that I enjoyed this one then I tend to 'live' the story as if it were real. In short, I really enjoyed reading 'The Evil Within' and I would recommend it to other readers. I will definitely be reading more of S. M. Hardy's work in the future. Here's hoping that we don't have too long to wait for her next book. The score on the Ginger Book Geek board is a very well deserved 4* out of 5*. |
Oh my goodness!! This was such a chilling, horrifying read that sent chills up my spine and I loved it. Go in blind to this one. All I'm going to say is it was well written and well developed. I can't wait to see what else the author comes up with. This was a fast-paced and riveting thriller that will keep you up at night because who captivated you will be with the story. Highly recommend. |
I enjoyed this book but I felt that it was a bit slow at times and did not immediately grab my interest. Jim is the main character of the story and he rents a cottage in a different town with hopes of relaxing and enjoying a quiet break. Things begin to get weird as soon as Jim gets to the cottage and he soon makes some new friends that help him understand the weird things he's experiencing. Overall I really enjoyed the story and I like the super natural aspect but I felt that some parts of the story were very slow where others seemed almost "glossed over". I must say that I LOVED the last chapter, I did not see it coming at all and I was taken completely by surprise. I actually went back and reread the last chapter! I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a supernatural thriller. Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review. |
Am I stressed, losing my mind or is a small blond girl wearing a school uniform running through my garden with her dog and disappearing into the mist? These are the questions facing Jim Hawkes, a London banker trying to recover from the tragic death of his fiancee two years earlier. After a semi-breakdown at work, he retires with a substantial bonus and rents a picturesque cottage in the country town of Slyford St James, looking for peace and quiet. But soon the locals are giving him sideways glances and asking if he is living in the “Morgan Cottage?” Before he is warned not to let his handyman Jed “play with his head,” Jim has been told that he has second sight and, more importantly, that six year old Krystal Morgan died in the cottage. She fell from the attic door. The same door that keeps coming open. The attic where he hears small steps running across the floor. You have the picture. This is a ghost story and a very good one. However, it is also a mystery as Jim tries to solve Krystal’s murder. He begins to have terrifying visions of the killer and sees people around him who may or not be dead. He also meets Lucy, a local girl, and their new relationship helps him move on from his longstanding grief. This is a difficult review to write. If you like ghost stories, you will love The Evil Within. If you don’t, or are not sure, read this for the mystery alone. It’s that good. Even if you skip through anything you think is over the top ghosty (and there isn’t much) the identity of the killer and the surprise ending will be a total shock. 5 stars. Thanks to NetGalley, Allison & Busby and S.M. Hardy for this ARC. |
This was my first book by S.M. Hardy book, and it was definitely worth reading! I got into the plot right away as it was both a creepy murder mystery/ghost story. Jim Hawkes quits his job after the death of his fiancee and rents a cottage in the Devonshire countryside. He is immediately plagued with weird things like locks that wont open, loud noises in the attic, and figures moving out of the corner of his eyes...then he starts hearing voices in his head. He meets up with a local Jed, who claims they are similar: they both hear spirits...but why and who? I did enjoy this book, I found the middle a bit slow, but it did pick up, and the ending....Wow! I cant wait to see where the author goes with book 2!!!! |
Wow, what a debut, some really powerful writing here, a compelling storyline and a great cast of characters, I would gladly read another book by this author. The mystery here is intriguing and as it unfolds it shows that a village community with half remembered facts and suspicions can direct and misdirect. The final 50 pages of this book are breathless in their pace and the toing and froing of the story leave you with smoke coming off the pages as your eyes can't read fast enough to keep up. This will make a successful series and I wouldn't be surprised to see a TV spin-off. #TheEvilWithin #NetGalley |
The evil within is S.M Hardy's introductory paranormal publication, and oh, how I hope that it is not the last. We begin with being presented to Jim Hawkes, who, for two years after the death of his fiancee Kat, has been clinging on to his city slicker job whilst on the verge of a mental breakdown, where reoccurring violent dreams keep him awake at night. His life is basically going down the drain and on Dr's orders to de-stress, he decides to take a vacation to an idyllic country cottage retreat in the Devonshire village of Slyford St.James. However, all is not as tranquil as it seems, and the rage inside him doesn't subside. There are voices in his head tormenting him, and there are things he sees that can't be real. Is Jim really losing the plot? or are supernatural forces at play? To survive, Jim must invoke the help of his new found friends to solve the mystery. There are a lot of strong characters in this read, and they all play a significant role. My first impressions of Jim was that I didn't like this big city guy, drowning in his sorrows, feeling sorry for himself. But then we get to see the real Jim, and I could really feel myself warming to his personality. From the very start this book was cleverly penned and the author really keeps you intrigued in solving the mystery. The internal dialogue is spot on, creepy, cringey but necessary, and a good, solid plot ending. This isn't your typically ghost story, albeit plenty of reasons to make you check every room before going to bed for a while, but connections of friendship, trust and love. However, don't be fooled, I found this to have a psychological element that is dark and harrowing. There's an evil within that's dying to get out. Thankyou to Allison and Busby and Netgalley for my copy of The Evil Within, in exchange for an honest review. https://wordery.com/the-evil-within-s-m-hardy-9780749025557 https://books.google.com/books/about/The_Evil_Within.html?id=RX8dyAEACAAJ https://twitter.com/842Bookworm/status/1224851400980647936?s=20 |
Oh my god! This is crazy book I ever read but was okay... These characters was different things in life but very spooky from the past..I could tell they had seen everything enough and they knew what’s happened to them was their faults... Thanks to Netgalley for the advanced copy.... |
I will leave a review of this on Amazon or B&N on Mar 19, 2020 Thank you to NetGallery for the free digital ARC in exchange for an honest and voluntary review. All opinions are my own The Evil Within was a well written book, overall it was a good book but for me I just didn't connect with the book. At times it was very repetitive and I thought with some editing of all the repetitive statements it would have shortened up the storyline and made it flow better. I suggest that anyone that enjoys paranormal ghost stories give it a try for themselves, not everyone enjoys the same books. |
Kath B, Reviewer
If you like your mysteries peppered with all things spooky then this could be the book for you! Jim is still grieving his fiance two years after her death. He's been going swiftly downhill and, in the middle of a meeting, walks out of his high powered city job in finance, and moves from London to a small village in Devon. Not even unpacked, he starts to witness some spooky stuff happening. Strange noises, things he sees out of the corner of his eyes but who disappear when he moves his head. Determined to make the best of his clean break, he makes friends with Jed and Emma who are also sensitive to spooky goings on and they recognise the same in him and think that there is a bigger reason for him moving to the village. Jim just wants to get on with his life without fuss and bother but it soon becomes apparent that there are things afoot that even he can't fight... I really enjoyed this book - I do love a good spooky story - especially when it is all wrapped around a mystery, a crime, especially that of a murder... I also love books set in villages as you tend to have a really eclectic mix of people, most of whom have secrets that could be connected to the main story. Keeps me on my toes throughout! Small villages also lend themselves well to the cloying and claustrophobic atmosphere necessary for this type of book to really work and Slyford St James really delivers here. Pacing was the sticking point for me a bit as I think it lost its footing a little along the way. Beginning was excellent and I thought the set up was well done, then it went a bit astray, happily not enough for me to give up, just a bit of a wobble, and then my perseverance was well rewarded by a mostly satisfying ending. I say mostly, the majority was wrapped up but I think the door has been left open for maybe a sequel with some things that were not quite resolved. Personally I'd be happy to return to SSJ to continue the journey. My thanks go to the Publisher and Netgalley for the chance to read this book. |
The Evil Within by S.M Hardy ⭐️⭐️⭐️/5 This book is a murder mystery with paranormal elements brought into it. It certainly was a bit different to any kind of mystery I have ever read before. The story follows Jim who moves to the quiet village of Slyford St James from the hustle and bustle of London. His fiancee died a couple of years ago and he recently lost his high powered job in finance after having some kind of epiphany at work and walking out. He moves into what appears to be a peaceful cottage to try and recuperate but things do not quite go to plan for him. Strange occurrences begin to happen such as things moving, noises in the attic and glimpses of a child who seems to vanish into thin air. Jim is not sure if he is having some sort of mental breakdown or whether these things are actually happening. He befriends some locals in the village called Emma and Jed who appear to be able to contact the afterlife. He finds out that a young girl died in the cottage he is renting out and starts to believe that it was more than just an accident that killed her but that maybe something sinister is lurking in the village. The story starts off quickly and gripped me straight away. It was quite unsettling and when I went to bed the first night after reading the opening few chapters I was a bit creeped out and kept thinking about incidents in the book. Luckily I fell asleep eventually! However, when I sat down to read more the next day I found a lot of the story quite repetitive and it fell a bit flat on me to be honest. It picked up a bit more eventually and the ending was ok, but it didn’t blow me away by any means. I think I expected more from it as it had so much potential. It was still an enjoyable enough story and if you like ghost stories mixed up in a murder mystery then this book would definitely be up your street. It is definitely not your traditional, haunted house type ghost story and I think a lot of readers will find it eventful enough to keep their attention. A solid 3 stars from me. Thank you @netgalley and @allisonandbusby for letting me read the ARC in exchange for an honest review. |
Nothing but chills throughout in this super-scary supernatural spooky! If the ongoing chills and thrills don't scare you (they sure scared me), then hold your breath because the ending will blow--you--away. Oh my! I can't stop thinking about it! What a fab debut horror this is. Write faster, please! |
Not for me sadly. But hopefully it will be for the right audience Thank you Netgalley for.providing an eARC in exchange for an honest review. |
The Evil Within is a mystery thriller with a touch of paranormal elements. But as the book goes on, there are hints that there could be more. As I've mentioned before, Haunted houses isn't really my favorite across the whole horror genre (but one I can respect). I mean, nothing's creepier lying in bed alone & a hearing mysterious sobbing in your house right? Yup I watched The Curse of La Llorona then decided to read because I couldn't sleep. (Looks like my mind doesn't work by logic at night.) 😅 Anyway the storyline was great, it definitely had its moments. Majority of the characters have a distinct purpose & the part they played slowly unfolding the story allowed a greater connection to be made in the plot. I think if it's made into a movie it'll give me a scare. But in book form? Nah this one I could handle fairly, who wants to read thriller after watching a horror film anyway?🙋😅 Took me an entire evening to finish because as the story progressed, I was eventually hooked. Though the ending didn’t appeal to me much at first. It’s both satisfying & unsatisfying at the same time if that makes any sense. Many thanks to netgalley and Allison & Busby for the advanced copy in exchange for an honest review. Digital copy will be released on March 19, 2020. |
Thank you to Netgallery for the free digital ARC in exchange for an honest and voluntary review. All opinions are my own. The Evil Within was an average Paranormal Mystery. I was really looking forward to reading this book. While it started out well, I found myself sitting it down way to frequently at about 30% through. It started to drag and Jim's internal dialogue was repeated over and over again. It did pick up towards the end and took a direction I was not expecting and seems to have been left open for follow up books. Overall about 100 pages too long and an ok read. |
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Tense, Suspenseful Read.... Book one in the Dark Devon Mysteries. When Jim, still grieving a personal loss, moves to the countryside in search of peace he cannot possibly foresee the nightmarish catalogue of events which will follow. A tense, suspenseful read with a supernatural bent. Keep those lights on! |
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I loved this creepy ghost story/murder mystery. I found it well written, and the characters are skilfully drawn. It was a real page turner, and I couldn't put it down. I will be eagerly looking out for a sequel. Thank you to NetGalley and to the publisher for the opportunity to read this in exchange for an honest review. |
The Evil Within started off pretty strong. I was drawn in immediately and wanted to keep reading. Then, about halfway through the book, I did struggle to keep reading. The narration for Jim gets repetitive and almost absurd at some points. I really wanted to like this since I haven't read many ghost stories/thrillers like this. The ending was all over the place and felt very rushed in the last couple chapters. Jim needs a break. He leaves his high paying job and decides to rent a cottage in Slyford St James. After everything he's endured the past couple years, rest and relaxation are his top priorities. Soon after getting settled into the cottage, strange things begin happening. He begins seeing the a ghost of the little girl (Krystal) who once lived in the cottage he is renting. The sightings begin taking a sinister turn when other spirits begin to invade his mind. With the help from his two good friends: Emma and Jed, Jim begins to piece things together. Krystal's death doesn't seem so accidental anymore and the three of them work together to solve her case. Jim begins having vivid visions and with gossip around town, he figures out who is behind everything. The three of them must hurry to stop it all before it's too late. The Evil Within does have the makings to be a good book (especially in the first half). I just wish the second half was smoothed out more and the ending wasn't as confusing or rushed. With what happened in the first half, I was expecting a much more climactic ending. Thank you to NetGalley and Allison & Busby for this ARC. |
If you enjoy ghost stories, you'll probably like this book. The story was okay overall, and some scenes were definitely scary. Some parts are a bit unbelievable, but the mystery is good. The story moved at a slower pace than I would've preferred, but it did pick up a bit near the end. It just felt a bit uneven. The characters were realistic.I could have done without the romance angle, but I did enjoy the ending. |
This book is not the classic ghost story which is good, but it just didn't work for me. The pacing slowed and it became a slog to get through. |








