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** I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review.**. This book is a hot mess. It switches between 1st person & 3rd person POV within each paragraph. It switches characters within each paragraph. The POV’s thoughts are in italics as a scene is going on and the writing is atrocious. I am really not sure how I made it through this book because I think my 3rd grader could have written a more cohesive story. |
Lisa P, Reviewer
I'm afraid that I couldn't finish this book. This rarely every happens to me. I usually push through and try to find something redeeming about each book I read. This story was flat, and the characters were relatively flat too. It was the first book in the erotica genre that I have tried, and I guess romances are more my style. |
If the premise of your book is erotic fiction, it should not take almost half of the book to get to the first love scene. I skimmed this book to finally get to the sex scene, and it was a let down. I really don't read erotic fiction, but the premise of this book sounded interesting aside from that subject matter. I was let down, unfortunately. |








