I Liked: Bella is a challenge for Lorenzo and I appreciate that in this story. It’s so important to not do what is expected and that is exactly what Bella does. She doesn’t call when he tells her to and she doesn’t chase him like the other girls do and I love that.
Not So Much: I felt like I jumped right into the story way too fast and the rest of the book kept that pace. The couple only had one date and they both claim to know each other so well. After the first date which consisted of dinner, some short lustful moments, a breathing view, a dramatic departure and a car nap, Lorenzo claims, “He admired Bella a great deal.” How does he know that? They barely exchanged dialogue with each other.
The writing. Show me! Don’t tell me! Use your descriptive writing to make me come to conclusions on my own. Everything was written for me so plain and simple that the book was boring. Plus, some of the lines were a bit cheesy and over-the-top for me.
Overall: I really struggled to get through this book. While I respect anyone who decides to write a book, the writing just could not hold my attention. Just my opinion.