Member Review
Review by
Adina N, Reviewer
This story is beautiful. Loved the pacing and how it was structured and it read like a very good fan fiction. And I mean that in the best way possible! Loved the length of it because we got to spend more time in Alex and Daniel's heads and I appreciate how it all came together in the end.
My only gripe is with the stylistic choices. I'm not a big fan of choppy sentences and sometimes I had a hard time following grammatically, if that makes sense. However, all of that doesn't take away from the story and boy am I looking forward to the next one! I would love more angst because that's what I like reading but the yearning was great in this first book and I can't wait to see how Daniel and Alex navigate the next stage in their relationship.
All in all, it was a great read!
Thank you Netgalley and Victory Editing for the ARC!
My only gripe is with the stylistic choices. I'm not a big fan of choppy sentences and sometimes I had a hard time following grammatically, if that makes sense. However, all of that doesn't take away from the story and boy am I looking forward to the next one! I would love more angst because that's what I like reading but the yearning was great in this first book and I can't wait to see how Daniel and Alex navigate the next stage in their relationship.
All in all, it was a great read!
Thank you Netgalley and Victory Editing for the ARC!
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