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Deal with the Devil

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Elizabeth T, Reviewer

Thank you to the publisher, and Netgalley for providing me with a copy of this in exchange for my open and honest review.

Deal With the Devil, the new urban fantasy/romance novel from the writing team of Donna Herren and Bree Bridges under the pseudonym of Kit Rocha is an exciting romp through dystopian Atlanta. We have super soldiers, beautiful, dangerous women who have issues, government overreach, mercenary librarians, and a bit of a quest—all the makings of an exciting urban fantasy novel. And while it did not deliver hardly anything about librarians, this is a fast and fun novel.

From the start, this book had me at Mercenary Librarians. What reader wouldn't want that? I envisioned kick-ass lovers of the written word battling for the safety of knowledge as a whole. This was my first mistake. I had misconceptions about what this novel was about. Deal With the Devil is a romance. There is nothing wrong with romance, but as someone looking forward to the battle for knowledge, I was a bit taken aback that it was more about the love interests of the main characters. However, once I got past that, this is, generally, a well-crafted story.

The story takes place in a dystopian Atlanta Georgia in 2086 following the great energy war, flares, and other cataclysms. The government, shady and powerful, have secret unethical organizations where it churns out super soldiers. In the remains of what is left of the US, knowledge is power. Enter three friends who are close as sisters, Dani, Nina, and Maya. The three friends have created a library of a sort in Atlanta, cataloging and scanning books to preserve the information, and they give it out for free. These three are highly educated, skilled, and genetically modified. They are dangerous and will do just about anything to protect each other.

The other point of view is a group of super-soldiers led by a man named Knox. He is the captain of a team called The Silver Devils. They have gone rogue from the protectorate/government and are looking for a cure for themselves. Their bio-implants are degrading the longer they are away from the corp if they don't get help soon they all will die.

Under false pretenses, Knox convinces Nina's team to help them in exchange for access to the legendary Library of Congress archives. This is something that Nina's team can not pass up. The plot of the story is a colossal road trip between the two groups interspersed with character development and action sequences. It is fun, and I am always a fan of the found family trope because it rings true. The people you find in life that become family are just as important as the family that you are blood to.

As I mentioned earlier, the narrative structure is the dueling points of view between Nina and Knox. Knox is knowingly deceiving Nina and Nina, who is developing feelings for Knox. There is quite a lot of back and forth between the two individuals, which helps lead to the needed tension and passion that develops between them. Rocha did a great job with it. It does not come off as trite or rushed, but how things should work out. The other characters that play a supporting role in the story are fun and but not as fleshed out. There is not enough space in this kind of narrative structure to include some of the other characters' points of view. However, I can see more books in the future that investigate Dani and Maya's relationships and take place in this fictional dystopian Atlanta.

The "Mercenary Librarians" thing was a big disappointment. Aside from me being excited about a story about librarians, the trio of Dani, Nina, and Maya's entire reasoning behind helping Knox and The Silver Devils is based on getting access to the Library of Congress. Yet, the importance of knowledge and their libraries are only given cursory explanations. Given the amount of time it is mentioned, it never seems like it is that important except in a background information type way. It is said a couple of times in the beginning and once at the end.

The pacing of the story was fine. It was a good blend of action and character dialog. There was enough space between the action scenes to rest and not become overly numb to the action. I ran into some issues when the big baddie was revealed. It seemed like the story came to a crashing stop. I can't tell if it was because of who the big baddie was or the abruptness in which they were revealed, but the story fell off quite a bit for me. However, it did pick up near the end and gave me some closure for this story.

Deal With the Devil is a seriously fun book. I liked the characters, the pacing was generally quick and lively, and the tension between them was perfect. I ready to read the next book in the series, and I hope to learn more about the library. Please tell me more about the library!

If you enjoy some romance with your urban fantasy, this is a great fit.
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