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Whiteland

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The novel includes magic, folklore, a forest and Scandinavian gods. This was what initially attracted me to the book as well as a dark mystery and a young girl that disappears and comes back changed.

We follow a family with two daughters that are currently on holidays in the snow. One of the girls disappears one night and it is found the next morning outside covered in snow. She should not have survived yet she did. Not only did she survive but she also appears to have changed.

The other sister, Kira, is investigating the woods together with the boy that helped find her sister. Unfortunately most of the family dynamics feel so unrealistic and the way the characters behave it is just hard to believe.

The mystery of the returned sister and the woods and what they hide started being interesting but it also quickly became repetitive, boring and I completely lost interest in the story.

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Even if it's well written the story didn't keep my attention and it fell flat.
Not my cup of tea.
Many thanks to the publisher and Netgalley for this ARC, all opinions are mine

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'Whiteland' by Rosie Cranie-Higgs is a blend of horror and fantasy with folklore and dark fairy tale elements. The book starts on a horrifying and chilling note and I was instantly drawn into the world weaved by the author. But the enchantment cast by the author seems to fade in the middle and I felt the novel lacked the chill invoked at the beginning. The story seemed to drag a bit; while I liked how the bond between Kira and Callum grows, the number of near-misses the duo encounter could have been minimized to maintain the tempo. I also felt that the later chapters was a whirlwind, with too much of elements blending in a bit of a haphazard manner. Personally, I found some aspects of the end guessable, but that didn't really make it any less creepy to read. I loved the imagery employed by the author, I really could visualize the scenes in my mind and I feel that's the selling point of this book. It got me involved with the adventuring experienced by the duo and I can say, I do feel like I travelled to Whiteland alongside Kira and Callum. If some chunk of the book in the middle had been trimmed, this would have easily gotten a 4.5 or higher from me.
Overall, a very scintillating read albeit a bit dragging in some places.
Thank you NetGalley and BHC Press for the copy in exchange for my honest review.

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The premise of this book is really creepy but I didn't finish reading this book because the author's writing style wasn't up to my alley.

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WHITELAND is a story of a girl trying to bring her family together and it is full of folklore and mystery. Kira accidentally learns of Whiteland while she is trying to find out what happened to her sister. Once she realized that Whiteland is not part of her imagination but is actually a different realm than her world, the story took on a different light. I was expecting different creatures but was surprised and thrilled to learn of something new to me. The worldbuilding was fabulous. I knew I was reading about a different realm when Kira was in Whiteland. Her travels through this new world helped paint the picture in my head. The climax of the story was believable. I was a little disappointed in the ending of the story. It seemed a bit rushed. I’m hoping it will be remedied in the sequel, which I’m looking forward to reading.

Spoiler – I was hoping to see Romy come back to herself somehow and separate herself from the Kyo.

I received an advance review copy for free from NetGalley and am leaving my honest review voluntarily. I will be adding this review to my website EveHallows.com.

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I really wanted to like this book more than I did. I mean just read that book blurb! Sadly the creepy concept and the promising opening to this book fell flat fast. I didn't care for the characters and the book quickly felt too young? Immature? I can't quite say. Although the writing was fairly solid, it just wasn't for me.

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I loved the first 60% of this book. It started off in a creepy fantasy and moves into horror. Romy disappears into the Swiss forest in the middle of the night. She is brought back after a night in the snow in only her nightgown. She shouldn't be alive. And she isn't herself. What follows is a folktale that involves a haunted forest and succubi. Sounds great, right? Her sister is drawn into the search for the truth of what happened. It gets a little repetitive as she and Callum, the local who found Romy, go into the forest to investigate. Unfortunately, once you really seem to know what is happening, it starts to go a little slowly. The ending left me wanting something I didn't get. Something I felt I was promised in the beginning.

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this was a really scary read, the topic really hit home for me and it was so well done. I loved the use of Scandinavian folk lore. I look forward to more from this author.

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2.5/5

Well I’m glad that’s over. This was a bit of a rough one. What I loved most about this book was the writing but it’s also what I hated most. Make sense? No? Well neither does this story. There is something about the style that I dug so much while reading; I only wish I understood it more. I found myself skimming a lot of passages toward the end just because none of it seemed to matter and I felt bad about it. I will not attempt to provide a comprehensive synopsis of what happens here. You’ll just have to experience it yourself. Maybe it just wasn’t for me presently because I really do enjoy obscure stories and writing. I will recommend this for those that enjoy their fantasy with a sprinkle of mystery and horror. I will not recommend it to those that are looking for a straight-forward narrative.

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This books starts off SO strong. There is great atmosphere, mystery, and the beginning of what seems to be an epic adventure as Kira tries to figure out what has happened to her sister. Unfortunately, it slows down rapidly after the first chapters. The pacing was not consistent--some events took a few pages to unfold completely and others took several chapters and felt forced (and, ultimately, irrelevant.) I loved the concept, and I think that Cranie-Higgs wrote the world of Whiteland beautifully, but the plot left something to be desired. I didn't love the ending because it lacked a true resolution and stopped rather abruptly, which sometimes works well, but in this case it left more questions than answers. I did really like the author's writing style; I found all of the characters believable, including their dialogue. I would love to read more books by Rosie Cranie-Higgs in the future!

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I'm not sure what to think about Whiteland. The world-building of this book is amazing, I kept waiting for White Walkers to come. The world of Whteland is creepy and sick and threatening and so are the people who live there. I loved the concept of this book.
But I didn't like the main character, Kira at all. I couldn't relate to her. She does stupid things in dangerous situations.

Kira and her family are vacationing in Switzerland. When one morning Kira wakes up finding her twin, Rome missing, she and their parens start looking for her. She is found by a boy named Callum and Kira and her parents think they can get back to their normal lives. But Romy is not herself. She attacks Kira. Not Kira, not her parents seem to understand what's happened with Romy. When Kira starts to pry, when she wants to find out what really happened to Rome, she stumbles into Whiteland. Whiteland is a world that shouldn't exist, a world where monsters are real.

At first I gave 2 stars but then I decided on 3 because of the world-building.

Thank you to NetGalley and BHC Press for my copy.

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“All we see and all we seem is but a dream within a dream.”

Whiteland is beckoning, and she can only obey. Kira, her sister Romy, and parents, Anna and Matthew, are on holiday in a lonely Swiss mountain village. One their last night, Romy disappears, and when she returns, everything has changed. On the following day, Kira’s parents disappear. Determined to find out what haunts her family, Kira sets out into the forbidden land – Whiteland.
Rosie Cranie-Higgs has managed to pump in every element expected in a horror novel. Dark world-building, creepy whispers, misty figures, unknown creatures, snowy mountains, mystical rivers, and the feeling of terror that gnaws at you and makes you sit up straight.
The story is unique. Nothing I’ve read before. The twists in the story were also unexpected. I loved the book. It haunted my dreams when I read it late into the night. Isn’t that the whole point of reading a horror story? The thrill the book makes you experience you when you aren’t reading it.
The incident between Callum and Kira sinking into snow as if it was quicksand was my favorite chilling scene. The characters were very realistic with Kira’s persistent struggle to help her family out of the catastrophe, although she was terrified to venture out alone. Romy’s descriptive reactions and behavior were also quite well-imagined and written. The description of her haunted eyes specifically was incredibly creepy.
It was surprising to read about Kira’s acceptance and fascination about the paranormal towards the end. Envy is a strong emotion, and to read about its manifestation in a tale so spooky and sordid was entertaining.
And yet at times, I thought the dialogue between Callum and Kira was repetitive. There was one whole chapter that I could make nor head nor tail of it. I was confused. Also, I felt like Callum and Kira's narrative was unnecessarily stretched and wasn’t needed for the story. It made it feel like a very lengthy book, although it is only around 300 pages long. What started with a bang fizzled out weak in the end.
I rate the book 3.5 out of 5 stars. In my opinion, making the story a tad bit more concise would make it perfect enough for a perfect score.
I recommend this book only to an adult audience because of the adult themes of abuse, murder and supernatural discussed in the book.

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Top marks to whoever wrote this blurb - low marks to whoever edited the novel. From the description it seemed like an atmospheric (LOVE a snowy horror, LOVE folklore), tightly plotted piece of horror. Unfortunately the pace dragged, the prose was very overwritten, and the characters were inconsistent. In general it all felt a bit amateurish and overlong, suggesting a lack of confidence and not enough editing. A judicious use of red pen would have really helped - the whole book should be half the length. I do think a lot of these are beginner mistakes though, and I think as the author writes more this will all improve, so I’d read more from her in the future.

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Great read. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Looking forward to more from this author in the future. Looking forward to suggesting this for Halloween reads.

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I received an ARC of this from the publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

This novel had a great concept but the execution of it took way too long. I didn’t find this scary and I consider it to be more of a fantasy novel, with Whiteland being compared to a more adult, murderous version of Narnia.
While on an innovent vacation in Switzerland, Romy, the more troubled sister, wanders into the woods during the night and stumbles on Whiteland. She’s later found sleeping in the snow and is brought back to her family but, she’s not regally Romy anymore. What follows is a series of events with her sister trying to discover what actually happened, figure out what Whiteland is, and determine who and what she is as well as her family since they seem to have a legacy with Whiteland.
The middle bit has to much back and forth in the real world but once Kira starts exploring Whiteland, things get more interesting. I’m still left with a ton of questions, like who’s this Peter person Kira keeps talking about? Did I miss something? It’s totally possible.
I wasn’t attached to any of the characters though Kira started growing on me. The basis of the world building is strong but I feel like it needs more work. I was hoping to be awed by Whiteland and all its intricacies but I really just feel like at this point, Kira’s just walking through an icy stark forest with deadly creatures in it.
Anyways, I think I’d pick up the second book in this trilogy just to answer a few questions. This novel wasn’t bad, it just could have been better

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Romy went out overnight and was returned changed. She was found in the snow by Callum and she should be dead. Instead she was violent and not herself. Romy’s sister, Kira goes to see where Callum found her older sister and the two of them find themselves in another world. They endlessly walk though the woods and on a road only to end up back at the resort where they started. Eventually all of Kira’s family goes missing and Kira and Callum risk their lives to find them.
The writing was interesting, almost a cross between poetic and English as a second language. Some very unique phrases and word choices.
DNF. I got 65% of the way through before I decided to quit. There are just to many good books out there to force myself to read something that I am not enjoying. Not compelling at all. The characters were okay but nothing had been explained and I did not care enough to find out.

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After reading this twice, I'm still not entirely sure what was going on in this book. It started out normal enough, but after the first few chapters, the plot got very confusing. There was a lot going on with background characters, such as the inn/hotel keeper and the lady that was the family friend of the guy (who was killed later). They were built up as being key players in whatever was going on but then those plot threads were seemingly abandoned with no explanation. Once the two main characters got into Whiteland the second time, the story flow completely fell apart and was very disjointed. While there was eventually some explanation about the main girl's mom, the reveal fell flat. Did I also mention there was a talking fish? No, well...there was a talking fish that literally came out of nowhere that would have been more at home in a trippy anime. I honestly cannot recommend this book.

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A family of four is on a vacation at a secluded, and snowy Swiss mountain village. One of the daughters goes out at night, to get some air, and enjoy some freedom. But something dark and dreary creeps into her, and what comes back the next morning, is not her, is not even human!

This is a folk-lore cum dark-fantasy and horror all merged into one. The first thing I noticed was how well written it is, even at times, when the story stopped working for me, I continued because of the writing, and I think it was the writing style and the tone of the writing that made it a 100 times more creepy than the story was supposed to be.
The starting hooked me in completely, but then it all went downhill from there. The atmosphere is eerie and creepy from the get-go and only increased in intensity as the story progressed. There were typical jump scares and characters all mindlessly doing what they weren’t supposed to, just like in a horror movie, lol. But it all worked till the middle of the story, and then it became a chore for me to continue. It did pick up a bit towards the ending, and I think the ending made up for everywhere it lacked previously, I love dark endings and this one delivered just that.

I think this story is more suited for a younger audience, I found the witty back and forth between the characters ill-timed and sometimes jarring to read, especially given the circumstances. Having said that, I think it’ll do great if it’s adapted for the screen, it has all the components to make it there and do well.

Thanks to Netgalley, author and publishers for a chance to read this eARC in exchange for an honest review.

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This book has so much potential. Whiteland is chaotic at times, haunting, imaginative. The writing style is something like stream of consciousness, but it gets repetitive (hiccup is used a lot). Some character development seems rushed or simply forgotten about, particularly near the end when the reactions dont necessarily make the most sense. I am looking forward to the sequel. With good editing it could be a defining series, dark fantasy series.

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Thank you NetGalley for the chance to read this. Unfortunately, I could not finish it.
The start was really good. Loved the first few chapters, with Romy’s mind being all dark and foggy and interesting, and then the beginning of the plot was just WOW. It hooked me up real quick. But then it just… became boring, and pointless, and the prose was no longer interesting and rich but repetitive and purple. I struggle so much to finish this book that when I tried to pick it up again, the app would direct me to a comic, and well, I could no longer download the ARC. I know I won’t buy the book to see how it went. I hope people enjoy it! I just couldn’t.

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