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The marketing for this hooked me, but the actual book, not so much. I liked the concept and some of the suspense elements, but I didn't really like any characters and I hated how often they referred to each other by name. Picky and unfair? Maybe. 2.75⭐️
Above review (as 3 stars) posted to Goodreads.
Emotionally charged and timely, this is a fantastic and well written story about toxic female friendship, racism, and domestic drama
This debut thriller is well-paced and takes on timely issues such as race, gentrification, and police brutality. The two main characters have suffered traumas that elicit sympathy from the reader, but they are both deeply flawed as well; their recklessness and tendency to rush to judgment causes a domino effect of tragedies for those close to them. In general, I would consider the complexity of these often unlikable characters and their moral ambiguity to be a narrative strength, but as the novel approaches its close, some of their actions struck me as being uncharacteristic, and the absence of consequences for their actions didn't feel realistic to me.
Thank you to Putnam and NetGalley for this copy in exchange for an honest review.
This is a slowly unfolding thriller that examines the intersection of race, friendship, revenge and consequences to our actions. We follow two women, Brianna and Elizabeth, who face recent losses and are seeking the truth to what happened to the ones they love. Their paths cross eventually and an unlikely scenario plays out.
I found this really easy to read, with the dual perspectives it felt very fast paced. I was interested in the plot line unfolding, but eventually we know the truth and are just waiting for the unveiling to happen.
I was enjoying this and then it took a turn I did not love. The ending…was not for me lol. It was quite annoying. I did love the talk on race but it didn't seem to come to anything, so it just felt secondary to the plot. I think this book could have been even better with some rewriting.
I would still recommend this debut, for the important underlying messages on police brutality.
I received a digital advance copy of While We Were Burning by Sara Koffi via NetGalley. While We Were Burning is scheduled for release on April 16, 2024.
While We Were Burning centers on the relationship between two very different women. Elizabeth is the well-off white woman who finds herself spiraling after the strange death of a friend. Brianna is the composed and together black woman hired to be Elizabeth’s personal assistant. Under the surface, Brianna is searching for answers in the death of her young son and believes those answers lurk in Elizabeth’s neighborhood.
In this novel, Koffi gives us characters that are difficult to sympathize with. The two main characters both have secrets and issues that influence their choices in this novel. While I understood their motivations throughout, I ended up not particularly liking either of them. Around these two women were other characters who also made choices that made them hard to like. The result was a book full of characters that were hard to root for. This was likely intentional, as one of the main themes of the novel is the impact of actions on relationships.
The plot of the novel was not complex, but did have enough secrets and mysteries throughout to keep me asking questions. This helped me stick with the story despite the distance I felt from the characters. In the end, there were no huge surprises for me as the reader, but the answers were revealed to the characters in a way that gave a satisfying conclusion.
Overall, While We Were Burning is mystery/suspense centered on friendships and the consequences of the choices we make. Readers who enjoy complicated, morally gray characters will likely enjoy this novel.
While we were burning follows the story of Elizabeth, a socialite who is on the brink after her friends death. Despite being being ruled a suicide Elizabeth is convinced that her friends death was a murder and becomes obsessed trying to prove it. Elizabeths husband, David, hires an assistant for her to try to organize her life and distract from the death. The assistant, Briana, however, helps her to investigate the death also convinced it’s a murder, and sets Elizabeth on a collision course in the process.
While we were burning is a social novel exploring the intersection of race, class, and gender under the guise of a thriller. The story is well-.written and fast-paced and will keep the reader turning the pages, while exploring very real social situations and consequences.
Thanks to the publisher for providing an arc via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Many thanks to NetGalley, Penguin Random House Putnam Books for gifting me a digital ARC of the debut novel by Sara Koffi. All opinions expressed are my own - 4 stars!
Elizabeth's picture perfect life in an exclusive Memphis suburb starts to unravel when she finds her friend's dead body. As she starts spiraling, her husband convinces her to hire a personal assistant. Enter Brianna, who instead of keeping Elizabeth away from obsessing about the death, helps her investigate. Because Brianna has motives of her own.
This was a well-written, gripping story of a toxic friendship with themes of classism, racism, mental illness. Straight out of the headlines, this suburban thriller blurs the line between victim and hero. While neither of the characters are likable, theirs is an emotional story, and the author lets you see both sides. I can't wait to read more from this author!
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the advanced copy of While We Were Burning by Sara Koffi.
This was a fun domestic/psychological thriller that grabbed my attention right away and I had it finished in just two days. I really don’t think that there are any redemptive qualities to these morally grey characters, but I think that is what made me enjoy it so much. If you are looking for a fun and quick read, grab yourself a copy and settle in for this toxic tale of friendship.
An overwhelmed woman in an upscale community attempts to recover from her friend’s death by hiring an assistant to help her out, but the assistant isn’t exactly who she claims to be….wanted to like this one but the characters were very hard to connect with and the story was a tad too slow for me. Thanks to NetGalley for the chance to read and review this book.
Elizabeth, a white woman living in an upscale neighborhood in Memphis, finds her best friend dead after an apparent suicide. Elizabeth has plenty of issues, enough that she ends up hiring a Black woman to be her assistant. This is a psychological thriller that falls flat partly because none of the characters are likable. But the most problematic part of the book is that Koffi tries to bring race into the story line but does a terrible job of it. I am extremely surprised that this book got past editors and sensitivity readers.
3.5⭐️
A fun domestic/phycological thriller.
In this books we follow two women who are both determined to look into the death of a loved one.
Elizabeth’s best friend is found dead and she doesn’t believe the running theory that it was suicide. Elizabeth starts to fall down a dark hole when her husband suggests she hire an assistant to help her out.
Brianna is on a mission to find out why the police killed her teenage son.
This was a fun thriller and I was truly hooked from page one but it was a bit predictable and at times the pacing felt off.
With that being said I would still recommend if you want a quick read.
I was gifted this arc in exchange for my honest review.
While We Were Burning by Sarah Koffi (4/16/24) Review Pub 4/11/24 4 Stars
Published by Penguin Group/Putman
After the death of a friend, Elizabeth is consumed with solving what she believes to be her murder, now her life is spinning out of control. Her husband, David, recommends hiring a personal assistant and in walks the perfect woman for the job. Brianna Thompson, a smart, savvy, and beautiful black women who seems to know the answer to everything and is able to help hold Elizabeth together. But Brianna has her secret too, and a reason for befriending Elizabeth and wanting to immerse herself in her white, privileged world. As both women seek to uncover the answers to their individual mysteries, the truths lie somewhere around them.
This was a page turned for sure. Sensitive content when Elizabeth’s best friend is found dead of apparent suicide. This thriller examines race, class, mental illness, abuse, and police brutality. This really had me with so many different feelings. I was sad, angry, empathetic, but mostly on the edge of my seat. I would say that it started out a little slow for me but picked up very quickly. This was a hard one to review, as I did not want to give too much away or reveal spoilers.
Thank you to NetGalley, the author, Sara Koffi and the publisher, Penguin Group Putnam for the opportunity to read and review an advanced reader's copy of this book.
✨What a page turner (so to speak since I listened on audio.). I was invested from the beginning and finished in just a day.
✨This was a character-driven novel about two extremely unlikeable characters that I could not help but want to root for. That’s when you know the writing is so good.
✨Social themes of race, class, elitism, justice, police corruption were deftly woven into the narrative in such a thought-provoking way.
✨This is the author’s debut novel, and I will definitely be ready to read whatever she writes next.
🌿Read if you like:
✨Suburban thrillers
✨Revenge stories
✨Morally grey characters
✨Toxic friendships
✨Memphis settings
🎧I loved the narration here by @karissavacker and @blameitonthheni. They really brought the story to life with their excellent performances.
The cover sold me on reading this and the setting. Not living too far from Memphis, we love to visit, but the news has cast the culture in a different light. The book touches on the dangers filtrating the city whether it is racial conflict, separation of classes, and violence.
When Elizabeth finds herself at a lost after her friend died of an apparent suicide, she hires a personal assistant, Brianna. She becomes her greatest asset and helps her investigate her friend's death. What she doesn't know is Brianna's agenda. She lost her son after he was killed and she thinks the two are related.
It is heartbreaking as they deal with a loss of life and mental health issues. Their friendship and work lines become blurred and some are crossed in this toxic and sometimes twisted relationship.
Well-done for a debut! I would definitely read more from the author. She touches on issues they are separating society not only in Memphis but across America.
Thank you NetGalley, Penguin Group Putnam Books, G.P. Putnam's sons for this ARC in exchange for my honest review.
Elizabeth and Briana both have challenges and issues but now they're almost like scorpions in a bottle. Elizabeth hires Briana as an assistant when but it turns out Briana wants more than a job- the death of her son is linked to the death of Elizabeth's friend and she wants not just answers but revenge. She's the better character, more well rounded, albeit over the top. This becomes a domestic drama with some twists that don't quite work but which kept me reading. Thanks to the publisher for the ARC. No spoilers from me.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
This one fell flat for me. I had to push through to get to the end. Not a likeable character in the book (which could be intentional), It was really slow, and then in the last hour of the book the plot twist revealed and rushed.
While We Were Burning has a great premise, but unfortunately missed the mark for me in quite a few ways.
1. Melodrama: We dip into Lifetime movie territory, and that’s just not for me…especially when dealing with serious topics like race and privilege. The silliness of some of the relationships just detracted from the overall point, in my opinion. This is maybe a me problem and might not bother all readers.
2. Stilted dialogue: The way characters speak to each other felt really unnatural and uncomfortable most of the time. People were also calling each other by name like every other sentence, which just…felt weird.
3. Unlikable characters without clear purpose: Nobody in this was an enjoyable character, and while that sometimes works, in this case it just felt draining. The two main characters were so over the top that I found it grating to be in their respective POVs.
I think this could be a good fit for people who enjoy popcorn domestic thrillers; as long as you take it at face value and don’t expect more than a quick & engaging read, you’ll probably like it! Due to the comparison to Such a Fun Age - a book I found really thoughtfully well done - I think my expectations were just not quite right. As this is a debut, I will likely pick up whatever this author writes next and see how things to from there.
Thanks to the publisher for a free eARC I’m exchange for an honest review!
Thank you Netgalley and the publisher for the ARC! I was really drawn in to this story but I was disappointed in the ending. The two main female characters, Elizabeth and Brianna, are both extremely unlikeable. I don’t have a problem with an unlikeable character, in fact I usually like them. Possible spoilers****
I just really really don’t like how Brianna ended up getting away with everything and not realizing how she’s in the wrong too. Everything she claims of Elizabeth being the victim can also be said of her?? I really wanted her to get caught and all the gaslighting of Elizabeth drove me insane.
Basically a more dramatized Lifetime film of Such a Fun Age. Though the writing reads like low budget Hulu teleplay, it’s a lot more exciting than Reid’s work by miles.
I can already see this being the next fun series to binge in a night. Give it a go 🔥🔥🔥
Thank you to NetGalley/G.P. Putnam’s Sons for a copy of While We Were Burning in exchange for an honest review.
The Horror of an Unlikeable Protagonist
Unfortunately, I cannot give a very detailed review of Sara Koffi’s While We Were Burning, or else I’d give the whole thing away. Instead, I’d like to say that Koffi has done a remarkable job here centering complex, problematic, and, frankly, unlikeable women. There seems to be a lot of pressure to make your protagonists likable, even in the age of the antihero. I’m of the camp that compelling is way more critical than likable.
While We Were Burning isn’t for the faint of heart; it’s a disturbing novel. The work explores the worst parts of the human psyche and how we can harm each other. But, dang, is it a good thriller, filled with twists and turns. Even better, once you get to the ending, you’re like, “of course,” in that satisfied way.
While We Were Burning deftly explores class and racial issues without being heavy-handed. “Genre” pieces (here, a thriller) are such a great way to expose the underbelly of society because they can get to the soft jelly without knocking you over the head with a sledgehammer to do so.
Should You Read It?
Sara Koffi’s debut novel is expertly crafted. I highly recommend it to fans of thrillers and mysteries. (I absolutely disagree with this being classified as “women’s fiction.”) (Why is that even a category?) But as I said earlier, you need to be prepared to loathe the main characters and find them more and more problematic the deeper you get into the book. Please also take close care to read the content warnings, as this novel tackles some possibly triggering subjects.
In the end, though, While We Were Burning is a brave piece of literature that deserves readership.
While We Were Burning hits shelves on April 16, 2024. Pick up a copy at your local indie bookstore or library. 📚👠🪢