I really wanted to like this one but it fell short. It wasn’t until the last hundred pages that I felt it peaked my interest but most of the writing was repetitive and drawn out to me. Some of the issue could have been solved by better editing. I would be curious on how the series continues.

What stood out most to me was the bond between the two brothers, it’s heartfelt, authentic, and something you don’t often see explored so deeply in fantasy. Their relationship really anchors the story and made me care about what happened next.

The pacing is on the slower side, but that works well for the kind of story, it’s easy to follow. The magic system is intriguing, and I enjoyed how naturally it was woven into the world.

At times, the worldbuilding felt beautifully immersive, especially in its more atmospheric moments. However, there were instances where descriptions felt slightly repetitive, particularly around things like food or locations that had already been described in depth before, sometimes leaving things to the imagination can be a good thing.

Overall, this is a warm, character-driven fantasy with a uniqueness, I enjoyed it!

The magic system reminded me of Avatar the Last Airbender and I. was. hooked! I really enjoyed the sibling bond and the character growth. Overall, it was a nice reading although in some parts the writing style felt a bit stiff and repetitive.
Thank you NetGalley for the advance copy!

4.25 stars
A cozy, slow-paced fantasy book. I love the brothers and their development. The story was easy to follow and understand. The descriptions weren't too much in my opinion and I loved the magic.

4.5 stars
I think this is the first novel by Urriah Wright, and I'm so glad I got to read this. The plot line is engaging and atmospheric, however, I will say that since it was a very descriptive-based story, the action or movement of the plot started almost towards the end of the novel. The relation between the brothers is sweet and quite homey, but I'm afraid to read the sequel because everything is pointing towards Tito going evil or something. The world-building and magic system were also very fun to read. I NEED a physical copy of this in my library now.

DNF@20% (+feedback shared on Goodreads without rating) - The story has elemental magic, that was beautifully described in parts. I liked the calm and reflectiveness of their life in the village, and connection with nature. The story moves quickly from here, following the two brothers in their journey to leave for the city and realize their potential magic. They are revealed to have powerful magic, that is set to change the course of their destiny. I was looking forward to reading the book, for the thoughtful discussion it might pose with respect to free will and destiny.

But on the whole, the pacing and character development was not fitting what I'm currently in the mood for. Based on what I have read thus far, I won't be invested in continuing the trilogy, so I've decided to stop here. If you like elemental magic, and some of these potential themes, defintiely give it a try.

A key detail that adversely impacted my personal reading experience with respect to the writing was the singular use of plural pronouns. It's the first time I have come across it, and it was unexpected as there was no indication in the blurb. In some scenes, it was confusing when multiple things or people were being referenced within the same sentence or paragraph. When it specifically swtiched to Ro's perspective, the use of they/their/them felt excessive. It was mentally jarring, and not an enjoyable reading experience trying to read through those parts. From a reading and language standpoint, it doesn't come across as an intuitive or sound solution. This is something that I believe comes up in American authored literature, and is more culturally relevant for English speaking countires.

English is not my first language - Hindi and Kashmiri are my native tongues, and I can understand 6 other languages to varying degrees. India is the most linguistically diverse nation, and all our languages have an intricate, deeply interwoven and nuanced use of personal pronouns in languages that is natural and inherent. It is not something we actively think about or even need to.

Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the complementary e-arc of this book. All opinion expressed here are my own.

Very well written and a joy to read, I was hooked. Some of the writing did get a little repetitive at times but it didn't detract from the experience.

The magic system reminded me of Avatar the Last Airbender and I. was. hooked! I really enjoyed the sibling bond and the character growth. Overall, it was a nice reading although in some parts the writing style felt a bit stiff and repetitive.
Thank you NetGalley for the advance copy!

I liked this big story about two brothers, the powers they must learn to wield and the prophecy that hangs over their heads.
This book has elemental and mesmer magic, amazing world building and a kind of grumpy mentor/teacher which I always adore the most.

There were parts in this book that were a bit slow but overall the story pulled me in. What I loved most was the dynamic between brothers Tito and Ro, there is always something heartwarming about sibling bonds that are strong and loving.

Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher and the author for this eARC!

I pictured Avatar the Airbender while reading this as the magic system was very similar. This is a story about two brothers and the debate of free will and fate. The bond between the brothers is precious and heartfelt. There’s a slight romance to it but not much, it’s a slow cozy fantasy book, lots of world building and history. The action doesn’t take place until about 75% of the book. The amount of time “hearty stew with crusty bread” came up was enough time for me to actually make stew! That goes to say, there were some parts that felt repetitive. The history of this world is told by the side characters the brothers meet along the way. I thought it was well done as it showcased how history can be told very differently through different POVs.

The dynamic between the two brothers was genuine and their growth is seen throughout the book. One of the brothers is non-binary, a first for me in a book and was much appreciated. The way the book ended sets up for some really big events coming on, excited to see how everything unfolds!

This was a really lovely fantasy read. The world is full of magic, and the bond between the siblings was definitely my favorite part. It felt very emotional but also quiet and slow-paced, like a cozy fantasy. The magic system was cool and different, and the way fate and free will are discussed in the story made it feel deeper than just an adventure. I also liked that the story focused more on friendship and sacrifice instead of romance. If you want a soft fantasy this is a great choice. Thank you so much to the author and NetGalley for the opportunity to read this book early. I’m sharing my thoughts voluntarily and with genuine appreciation

I liked the characters a lot in this one and the mystery behind everything!
This was a good read!

Thank you NetGalley for this arc!

This book was very enjoyable, the magic system, the brotherhood, the everything was very well written and I would recommend it with no doubt!.

A beautifully written magical novel about brotherhood and the debate of free will and fate. Wonderfully executed and was very happy to receive an ARC.

Very interesting and mysterious
I liked reading this book so much.I love the plot,the characters and the chemistry between them

A unique tale of friendship, love and sacrifice. I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It had everything that I want in a fantasy book. The author built a mesmerising world that had me captivated and left me wanting for more.

Netgalley Advance Reader Copy (ARC)

As I know this is an ARC I am trying not too be too critical of some of the editing overlooks or mistakes, and hope it will go through another round of editing before publishing.

This is a beautiful world steeped in magic, and a story of two siblings' bond. I would almost say this is like an Avatar the Last Airbender magic vibe, mixed with a cozy fantasy. I probably would classify this as a cozy fantasy, the pacing was slow and relaxed and focused on the world and the people, and about 75% of the book was not facing dangers or a deadline. I think what added to this was the Author's very descriptive writing, and the passive characters, it felt like they just let things happen to them and went a long with it, and the adventure plotline or danger was only ever stated by other characters and not really shown. So all of that kind of adds up to a cozy fantasy for me. The action/save the world plot didn't really pick up until about 65% of the way into the book. The ending was also great, I loved the whole journey of watching the siblings go through this adventure together.

I liked the fact that the training (or traveling) sessions weren't super drawn out or detailed, unless it mattered, but it did kind of feel like the trainers were NPCs in a video game with only a few repeating lines. I found the two main characters very passive in their story, which is just not to my taste but to each their own. They very much went along with whatever they were told, and I hope it was because this first book is setting up for the rest of the series and to see them grow and make their own conclusions and decisions.

There were times where the writing style felt repetitive as well, though it may have been to stress a point it felt over done. (Examples being: your power is dangerous you need to learn control, ---'s words had meaning that really meant [insert warning or other interpretation], and repetitive conversations between the siblings.) There were also inconsistencies with the non binary character(?) says them/they for the most part but when came to Tito looking at or considering them, Ro is referred to as his brother. So I am not sure if Ro was nonbinary or gender fluid, or if this is just something that will be fixed in the final version of the book.

Overall I really enjoyed this book, i love the siblings' bond, how they got to go through this journey together. The magic system and world was very beautifully described, but not a whole lot of technical details (which I enjoyed.) I would recommend this to people who are looking for male or nonbinary main characters, and little to no romance in their fantasy.

I thoroughly enjoyed this book! The world building was immersive and vivid, drawing me in from the very first page and it felt like I was living in the world alongside the characters. The magic system was interesting and thoughtfully crafted, seamlessly woven into the narrative in a way that enhanced both the plot and the atmosphere. I especially loved the dynamic between the siblings, Ro and Tito. Their bond was compelling, adding emotional depth to the story. The direction the plot took was both engaging and satisfying, with plenty of surprises along the way. Overall, it was a rich and captivating read that left a lasting impression.

Great quick read. Characters are strong and world building was solid. Interesting plot and concept. The first part was a little slow, but had a good build up for the storyline. I found the main characters pretty likable. The way the author would describe everything was so vivid and I felt like I was in the story at times.

Synopsis:

In Whispers of Fate, brothers Tito and Ro embark on a journey that begins with the promise of empowerment through attuning to the Runestone. Instead, they find themselves imprisoned within Atheron's citadel, subjected to rigorous training under the vigilant Magi. As they grapple with their burgeoning magical abilities—Tito's struggle to harness elemental fury and Ro's manipulation of elusive illusions—they uncover unsettling truths about their purpose. A prophecy shrouded in betrayal and blood looms over them, challenging their understanding of fate and free will. The brothers must confront their destinies: will they become Atheron's saviors or its destroyers?

A Captivating Tale of Magic and Destiny:

Whispers of Fate is a masterfully crafted fantasy novel that delves into themes of brotherhood, betrayal, and the intricate dance between fate and free will. Uriah Wright weaves a narrative that is both immersive and thought-provoking, drawing readers into a world where every whisper carries the weight of destiny.

Rich World-Building and Intriguing Magic System:

One of the standout features of this novel is its rich world-building. Wright constructs a universe that feels both expansive and detailed, with a magic system that is both unique and captivating. The complexities of the elemental forces and illusions are explored in depth, adding layers of intrigue to the plot.

Complex Characters and Emotional Depth:

The characters are multifaceted and undergo significant development throughout the story. Tito and Ro's relationship is at the heart of the narrative, showcasing a bond that is tested by external forces and internal doubts. Their individual struggles with their powers add emotional depth, making their journey both relatable and compelling.

A Gripping Plot with Unpredictable Twists:

The plot is a tapestry of suspense and revelation, with each chapter unveiling new mysteries and challenges. The prophecy that underpins the story adds a layer of tension, keeping readers guessing about its true meaning and implications. Wright's ability to blend action with moments of introspection ensures that the pacing remains engaging throughout.

Conclusion:

Whispers of Fate is a standout addition to the fantasy genre, offering readers a tale that is both enchanting and thought-provoking. Uriah Wright's skillful storytelling, combined with complex characters and a richly imagined world, makes this novel a must-read for fans of fantasy literature.