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I will admit that I am not a big sci-fi fan, so my opinion is deeply biased. I think the writing is good, but the characterization needed work for me to love the people involved. Sorry!!

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This was a fun read. Each short story read like individual Twilight Zone episodes, taking the reader in completely different directions. I was disappointed that some of the stories ended so quickly; I felted invested in the characters and wanted to know more. I hope the author branches out into full-size novels. I would enjoy more character development and seeing how far his stories will take me.

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Some of the ideas in these stories are really original and very compelling. There is a sense of menace in many and others are more light-hearted. My issue comes with the execution. The author is clearly at the start of his writing career. Some of the stories seem very rushed and the dialogue is universally bad. What I would say, however, is that he really shows promise in terms of creativity and concept. He just needs to continue writing to hone his craft and improve his prose style. I will look out for him in future.

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