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Girl in Snow

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Through the eyes of three narrators Girl In Snow tells the story of the days after a girl is found murdered. It’s a complex story with many characters and lots of little plot lines, also connected to past events. I enjoyed the book, but I thought the first half was a little slow. In the second half everything comes together and starts making a bit more sense.
Girl In Snow is not a traditional whodunit, and though one of the narrators is a police officer, there isn’t any focus on the police side of things. The book is much more about personal relationships, deceit, love, connections.
I really like Kukafka’s writing; it’s intimate and engaging. It was easy to relate to the narrators, and other characters, flawed (and in some cases unlikeable) as they may be.

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More positives than negatives. See full review on goodreads.

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I'm not sure where to start with this one, so I'll go with this: Girl in Snow is a weird book. Was it good? Was it bad? I'm not sure. It kept my attention and I wanted to know what happened to Lucinda, so I kept reading...I guess that accounts for something.

I'd put this book somewhere in the vein of Gillian Flynn, to be honest. There is a lot of raw emotion and anger hidden within the three characters telling the story and I think that's what hooked me.

So, a young girl has died and the whole town is in an uproar. Adults and children are pointing fingers and the whole town is talking about it.

We hear the story from Cameron, Jade, and Russ. Each of them had their own relationship to Lucinda or the case and each of them have a very distinctive voice.

Cameron, the shy boy who draws (and stalks) Lucinda. Jade, the emo girl who hates Lucinda. Russ, an officer working Lucinda's case and Cameron's father's former best friend.

Each of these characters weave a story in their own way. Each of them is brutally honest, almost to where it's uncomfortable to read, but it works. This is definitely a great mystery that will keep you guessing until you get to the big reveal.

So, yes. This is a good book. Weird. Still good.

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I want to thank NetGalley for letting me read this book. It did keep my interest.

That said, when you read like I do, using text-to-speech almost exclusively, books like this leave me feeling lost. I feel I may have missed the important sentences as to who-done-it and why. There were a lot of characters and they all sound the same, the writing style of the narrative is the same in the dialogue. That may not mean too much when visually engaged with the story, but I often didn't know which characters thoughts/memories I was in.

This was an ARC or early read copy so by the time others will read it these other problems may be fixed: Between sections, there is a line ___. Often that stops the TTS. And often the name of the person who is starring in the next section is totally left out with TTS. I assume these are formatting issues that will be solved and others who get to read this with their eyes will be able to stay with the story and find it all pulls together.

Using the thoughts of one who seems autistic or in other ways a little different than the norm, was a nice tool. I found the character Cameron to be very interesting. Others I found harder to understand. Maybe that says more about me than the characters being portrayed?

At any rate, I think others may find this book to be very good. I loved to see your comments. I may have to come back to this book and read again to see if I can find where I turned left when the writer turned right. ???

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Wow! Wow! I could not believe the author was so young. This is an amazing novel that keeps you hooked. A page turner, I highly recommend this book to all. I could not stop reading this book to find out what happened next and who did what!

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I want to thank NetGalley, the publisher and the author for my ARC copy for a fair and honest review.

I admit I quite liked this book. It takes place in a small Colorado town and revolves around the murder of a teenage girl. The story follows the lives of Cameron, Jade and Russ, all misfits in their own rights and in how the death of this girl has effected each of them.

You wonder as you read, whether or not Cameron could of killed Lucinda Hayes, after all he had been watching her for years from afar, I would say stalking is the more appropriate word, but could the gawky 9th grader really have killed her? Could it have been Jade and her spell that she cast out of jealousy? Or could it be someone else entirely? I'm not about to give you the answer but I will say that it does get solved in the end.

It's not a page turner by any sense of the word, but I became invested in the characters in the story and found that I was thinking about them even when I wasn't reading. The characters were well developed but I did find that a few things left me wanting more, hence the 3 star rating.

That being said this was a good debut novel and I look forward to reading more from the author again.

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The creaking of a playground carousel in the night wind is the only sound that settles in the darkness. It cradles the lifeless body of fifteen year old Lucinda Hayes. Tiny snowflakes drift and cling to the strands of her long blonde hair. Making no sounds.........much like Lucinda herself.

Murder never sits well. Especially in small towns. Small towns like Broomsville in northern Colorado. The shock has less space to travel in.

Danya Kukafka propels Girl in Snow forward with characters beset with deep, dark, raging turmoil. Young Cameron Whitley, strange and elusive, is so taken with Lucinda that he sneaks out at night just to watch her every move through her bedroom window. His reputation at school is the class freak who will never fit in. Jade has always held such animosity for the popular Lucinda since they were children. Jade barely exists in the abusive home of her alcoholic mother and her sister. Russ, a police officer, goes through the motions of his deadend job. His marriage to Ines suffers from anger issues never fully dealt with on both sides of this equation.

Girl in Snow is lined with more of a YA flavor. Kukafka reveals the heavy angst and disappointments that seem to swallow up the younger characters in this storyline. There is the far too noticeable depiction of the weight of daily teen life in a one-horse town. We hear over and over again that life totally sucks. Each character seems to suffer from over-exposure due to the sunami of bruised and raw emotions that follow from page to page. These added elements to the storyline seem to overshadow the essential thread of the murder itself. "Because you're a freak, too."

Perhaps this was Kukafka's intention all along........to present a multi-pronged storyline dealing with weakened friendships, questionable relationships, and unrequieted love. The murder itself serves as a backdrop for these broken characters who use it as a springboard to express their heavy-ladened backstories. Although a good read, it was just too many spins across the dance floor for me.

I received a copy of Girl in Snow through NetGalley for an honest review. My thanks to Simon & Schuster and to Danya Kukafka for the opportunity.

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I thought Girl in Snow was going to be an adult thriller but it was pretty much a young adult book. The story is about a fifteen year old girl named Lucinda who is found dead on a playground. There are three narrators: Cameron, Jade and Russ. Cameron and Jade are children who went to school with Lucinda, and Russ was the cop assigned to her case. Even though one of the narrators was a cop, I didn’t really feel like the story focused enough on Lucinda or her murder. It mostly focused on the lives of Russ, Cameron and Jade. I was hoping for more information on who the killer was and why they did it, but that was barely covered in the book. I thought there was too much sex in this story especially considering the ages of the characters. One of the characters was thirteen during a flashback sex scene and I think that is very inappropriate and it’s definitely not what I want to be reading. I had really high hopes for this book and I went into it thinking I’d love it, but it wasn’t what I was expecting.

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A teen girl's body is discovered in snow on a playground. There are a few of the usual suspects: the stalker boy, the ex-con night janitor, the jealous ex-friend, the popular ex-boyfriend. I really enjoyed the book for the most part, until it began to reveal itself to be fairly ordinary (an almost romance between two men, an illicit affair between married man and teen girl, an abusive mother). When the killer was unmasked, it was unfortunately not a surprise.

Still it was fast-paced and the characters were interesting. I appreciated that no one was perfect.

Thanks to Netgalley for the arc to review.

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Girl in Snow is a semi mystery story by Danya Kukafka. I say semi mystery because it seemed more of a coming of age for two of the three main characters with the mystery thrown in. I was given a copy to review.

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Hi, I was sent a widget for this book and before I did anything it appeared on my shelf, if I clicked it, it was in error. Thanks for the opportunity but I don't think I'm the correct audience for this book and wouldn't do it justice. thanks again

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I did not know what to expect when I requested this book. I basically requested it because I thought the cover was interesting. This book was excellent! I cant believe that this is the authors first book. I feel that this will be the best YA book for 2017!
The story followed several characters after the death of a girl. The chapters switched back and forth from different characters and their perspective. I really liked the story being told like this. It was very interesting to see how the character's lives intertwined and the ending was a good twist.
This is categorized as a YA book, but I am 46 and loved it! I'm sure this author has many more good books in store for us! Loved everything about this book.

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Girl in the Snow was an interesting read for me - it sounds in premise like a lot of psychological thrillers I read but in reality was nothing like those. It is a character study of 3 people attached peripherally or otherwise to a young girl found dead in a small town. A slow burner of a story, this is more about those 3 people and their inner realities than it is about who may have killed the girl or why. Indeed the low key mystery element is exactly that - low key.

Never the less it was fascinating in a literary, underneath way, following the inner and outer turmoil of these 3 characters, seeing how their lives have interacted with the victim, all in very different ways and with very different consequences. There are clearly defined edges to all of them and the 3 of them are linked by their hometown and by various other strands - you come to know them over the course of the story and ultimately how they move on.

I wouldn't want to call it a murder mystery. The police investigation is not really focused on that much, the resolution to that low key mystery when it comes is almost an afterthought and you never really get to know the dead girl at all - simply how our main protagonists saw her.

I really liked it - something a bit different, lovely writing and a sharp emotional edge.

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You won't see the ending coming in this one. An awesome thriller and mystery.

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What's it's about:
WHO ARE YOU WHEN NO ONE IS WATCHING?

When a beloved high schooler named Lucinda Hayes is found murdered, no one in her sleepy Colorado suburb is untouched—not the boy who loved her too much; not the girl who wanted her perfect life; not the officer assigned to investigate her murder. In the aftermath of the tragedy, these three indelible characters—Cameron, Jade, and Russ—must each confront their darkest secrets in an effort to find solace, the truth, or both. In crystalline prose, Danya Kukafka offers a brilliant exploration of identity and of the razor-sharp line between love and obsession, between watching and seeing, between truth and memory.

My thoughts:
DNF 100%
Just can't get in to it, have re started it four times since yesterday ,and still can't get past the chapter I'm on.
There's nothing I like about, and it's not keeping my attention at all. With that said I would like to say thinks to NetGalley for at least giving me a chance at reading it in a change for my honest opinion.

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Bottom line: Not my kind of book. I just don't care for the style of writing when the story is told from multiple viewpoints. I find it comes across as stilted and disjointed. I know I can piece together what is happening, but I prefer a book that I can fall into and get immersed in the story.

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A mystery, but more a story told from there perspectives about life and love. A girl is found dead and we follow what happens after as well as flashback to before through the eyes of a fellow student, a boy who watched her and a local cop. The story is well woven, the characters brutal in their honest depiction. Although a mystery exists, who killed Lucinda, the book reads more novel than mystery. I didn't figure it out until the great reveal, when the pieces all fell in place.

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** I Rate this book a 3.5 Stars**

This book had great bones, and potential to be an amazing thriller. The premise of it sounded great, and while it was great, I suppose I just had an issue with the weirdness of this book. The two teen characters, are weird, and creepy. Their thoughts and behaviors are weird and creepy, and I felt very awkward while reading their chapters. Is that a sign of a brilliant author, Someone who can make a reader feel that strongly about the characters in the book? I believe so. 

There was great writing in "Girl In Snow" it flowed well, regardless of the random things thrown in, like Andrea Yates, and random talk about spines and vertebrae. I actually read it pretty fast, and didn't really have a clue of who murdered Lucinda, which was nice, not to have predicted the killer. There is also a couple of curve-balls thrown at you through-out the book. The author really does keep you on your toes. If you do, or have read this book, please share your thoughts with me. Oh yea, the cover is absolutely stunning!

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Received an ARC through NetGalley/Publisher in exchange for an honest review, so here goes.

I feel like Girl In Snow was supposed to come across as a fresh, new take on the ever popular murder mystery but frankly, I was bored after a few chapters.

The book starts off with the murder of Lucinda who's found dead in an elementary school playground. We "see" the book through the POV of a boring cop investigating the crime, a creepy teenage boy who stalked the victim before she was murdered, and a chubby goth girl who was briefly friends with the victim.

This book could've been really strong but it quickly fell flat. The dialogue didn't have punctuation or quotidian marks at all which really threw me off and 2 of the 3 main characters bored me to tears. I did like the "who-dunnit" mystery and the mystery of what Cameron's father did. Overall I give this one a 2.5.

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