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Inside Moves

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This was a compelling read. I was concerned that I had not read the first book in the series, however this one stands alone. Just back from his honeymoon Wainwright is involved in a crash that should have killed him. As it is he wakes with amnesia and eventually discovers his bride has been kidnapped. The search is on with unlikely allies. Discovering who is behind this despicable, cowardly act is a suspense filled, page turning read. I have already downloaded the first book.

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thanks you.
enjoyed it.
will get copies for family and friends.

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I'm very sorry... but this book just isn't it for me. First, there are just too many people in it. I've made it to page 50 or so and already I've read a dozen names or more. Every person that has a minor role in the book is named, so you just don't know whether you will have to remember this person or not. It starts with someone in an ambulance and all medical personal is named, and the doctors and so on and so on.
Second, the main characters are apparently two people called Lacy and Garth. They are introduced first with their first names, and then almost on the same page with their full names. The brand of their car is named. They are having a conversation about their honeymoon, and the things that happened during the honeymoon. There is not enough information for the reader to grasp why this is so important, and too much information to feel you get to know these people.
I think the author has a great story in mind, with interesting characters. It's a pity that the story is overflown with too many details. It is al 'tell' and not enough 'show'.

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