I read this book between July 8th and July 11th, 2019 and gave it one star. This is a Christian book, and even though I am not a Christian nor I'll ever be one, I have come across my fair share of Christian books, and sadly I haven't had the best experience with them lately. I hoped that this novel would change that for me since the "challenge" element is always fun, and since I enjoy reading about plots that develop over a short time.
This is a quick read and not one that requires too much thinking, in my opinion, which was really fortunate given that I found issues from the very first page. One of these issues was the insertion of full sentences in parenthesis into nearly every paragraph. To me, that sort of stopped the reading flow, which meant that I had a hard time getting into the story.
Besides being Christian fiction, this is a young adult novel, but the style felt really forced. It was narrated in the first person and the main character is a female teenager, but it read like a middle-aged woman trying to sound like a young person and failing at it. Like I said, I kind of liked the idea of this being a challenge, albeit one related to a religion I don't observe. The very first chapter, which marks the beginning of day one, is preceded by a bible quote, and I thought that it was a nice idea to have the book divided into each of the five days and have a quote as a header at the start of a new day. That wasn't the case, though. Sometimes we got quotes and others we didn't, and it was just messy.
I only give one star to books that have a structural problem, which means that it is basically trying to reproduce ideas that are somehow violent or harmful to a group of people. I seriously hoped that this book would be more about Jesus' teachings related to "love thy neighbor" and stuff of the sort, but what I got was a whole lot of slut-shaming and a main character who as angsty and very unlikeable and who used her Christianity as an afterthought.
Honestly, though, I really appreciate when characters in a book have strong beliefs and stand by them, and I thought this book would be all about this girl trying to find herself through the scripture while fulfilling a challenge. I thought she would stand up to her friend who was sort of forcing her to date a guy, and that we would see another version of what chastity means or something. That would've been way more interesting, but that wasn't the case. In fact, the love interest happens to be a Christian, and that clearly makes him super fit for her, so basically we got a typical high-school based young adult novel with a little Jesus here and there.
I don't mind an unlikeable main character, but Andrea was just petty and insufferable. She referred to one of her friends as a "man-hater" because she was a feminist. Of course, you can imagine the portrayal of a feminist the author came up with...just ridiculous. Again with the slut-shaming issue, Andrea seems to be obsessed with hating on a girl who is confident and also possibly physically attractive. At some points, it was as if a man were writing the book because it was so retrograde and chauvinistic. I know Christians who would be offended to be represented by Andrea.
If we talk specifically about the mechanics of the book, it was very poorly edited. There were commas and other punctuation signs missing, which made reading not as easy or pleasurable. Additionally, there were some bits in Spanish that had been clearly translated by Google because they made no sense. What is it with white authors inserting Spanish into their bland stories to make them "spicier"? Another problem was the lack of proper referencing when adding quotes from other sources. Not even quotation marks were used. I mean, if you're going to casually add "curiouser and curiouser" in your book, maybe think about adding a footnote to clarify that it was Lewis Carroll who came up with that.