
Member Reviews

This is a very very late feedback. Life happened and I wasn't able to send it. But as I remember this book was a very colorful one, like the first book. I got hooked up and was waiting for the final book. The world building never fails, I can always imagine everything as I read from page to page. Hope to re read this soon.

Dragons of Nova is the second installment of The Loom Saga Trilogy by Elise Kova. This book picks up exactly where Alchemists of Loom left off and explores the world of Nova.
What I loved here was all the dang character building we got! It was so great. This was a shift from the action packed, plot driven first book. Kova paid more attention to character arcs and building them than on the action. Not to say that she forgot about the plot, because the plot of this story was just as intriguing as the first one and there were many twists that I did not anticipate. So, it was a treat to readers with both plot and character building. Of course, there was also action and magic and just all round awesomeness happening throughout the book.
What I loved here was that Ari & Cva's relationship was hashed out and explored so minutely. They had their ups and downs and all arounds, but god! These two gave me so many FEELS! Their relationship was all over the place and though it was so obvious that they cared for each other deeply (not to mention some shocking declarations by Cva about his intentions), they left things on a bad note in the end of this story and I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS AFTER! I mean, I just want them to be okay and together and happy and just... happy. I hope that they find happiness (hopefully with each other) by the end of the third book.
The characters were all their badass selves in this book too. I loved that though they grew, they still were the same people that I met at the start of the first book. It was so neatly written!
This book had a whole lot of stuff for everyone - there's drama, action, romance, politics, magic, mayhem. See, something for everyone! Just go and read this! Pronto! :D

I loved the first book in the series and DEFINITELY LOVED Book 2! Elise Kova has outdone herself once again ❤️

Elise Kova does it again. She is able to write a powerful female lead who grows and can connect with the readers. And elise paints a beautiful world, this is a book that you look back on and remembers in vivid details the beautiful imagery.
Not to mention the cover and quality of everything is amazing.
The sleeve is gorgeous, and is made of a velvety thick paper, it feels amazing. I love how she never skimps on cover art.

Where the first book focused on Loom and the lives of the fenthri as they are controlled by the dragons this sequel gives readers a chance to travel to Nova to see how the other half live. We still get to watch what's happening with the guilds on Loom through Florence's eyes but Ari has travelled with Cvareh to meet with his sister Petra and see if they can come to some kind of alliance against the current dragon king. Ari holds the key to Petra and House Xin, currently the weakest of the dragon houses, to change their fortunes and come out on top for once, but Ari made the mistake of trusting a dragon once before and it nearly cost her everything so she's not going to be swayed to Petra's cause easily.
In The Dragons of Nova Elise Nova has taken everything I loved about the first book and ramped it up a gear, we still have the wonderful world building (which has just become even more fascinating now that we're seeing how the dragons live), the rich, multilayered characters and a plot full of political machinations, back stabbing and betrayals. Ari is completely out of her element on Nova and surrounded by her enemies but she's not going to let that stop her plans, she will do anything to stop the dragon king but she's only going to work with House Xin if they can prove to her that they'll make life better for the fenthri in the long term. Cvareh finds himself strangely torn between following his sister's orders and wanting to bend the rules for Ari's sake. His life is made more difficult by the fact that they must keep Ari's identity a secret because if any of the dragons from House Rok find out Petra is working with a chimera then all hell will break lose.
There are so many things I want to talk about in this series, I love the diversity, the positive female role models and also the way it raises questions about personal identity and racism. Ari is an openly bisexual character and that's treated as perfectly normal in this world which is wonderful. There are so many positive messages throughout this novel but they're all just woven in so naturally that it never bogs down the story and makes this feel like an issues book. I love it when an author can create a rich and detailed fantasy world that is so much better than our own in so many ways. The story is fast paced and full of action, things on Loom are reaching crisis point and Florence is right in the middle of planning a rebellion, Ari and Cvareh are busy on Nova trying to bring out the same goal but in a totally different way. There are plots within plots and a lot of people are playing one side against the other so it's hard to tell where most of their loyalties lie. Just when you think one thing is about to happen the author twists things around and turns the world upside down so she always keeps you guessing.
This series is absolutely fantastic and I can't wait to get my hands on the final book, The Rebels of Gold, in December!

As usual when it comes to any book by Elise Kova, I keep getting impressed. I have no idea why I keep getting surprised, because, by now, I know how amazing her writing is, but despite all this, despite my expectations being sky-high, her books keep exceeding my expectations.
I love the characters!
I won’t talk about each of the characters individually, but I will talk about a few things that applies to all of them. They’re all interesting to read about, and add something to the plot. Sometimes, multiple perspectives can be confusing and hard to follow, but that never happens here. Instead, the different perspectives make the story so much better and they all give you some new insight into the world and the plot. And many of the characters go through major character development, both throughout this book, but also since the first book. I can’t wait to see what Kova has in store for them in the next book!
I absolutely adore the world!
Kova keeps impressing with her world-building skills. I already knew, after reading Air Awakens, that she knows exactly how to make a world interesting and unique, and it’s even better in The Dragons of Nova. She gives just enough information at the right time, never too much, so that the reader feels overwhelmed. Just enough to make the reader want (no, need) more.
The plot is amazing.
The plot keeps a great pace throughout the book. At the end of The Alchemists of Loom, when Arianna and Cvareh left for Nova, I was a bit worried how she’d be able to make it work with the characters apart, doing different things for the rebellion, but I should’ve known she wouldn’t disappoint. A lot of things are going on at the same time, but it never feels like too much or too overwhelming. It’s easy to follow and impossible to put down!
The writing is just right.
As you’ve probably noticed before, I love Kova’s writing. She just has this way with words, this way to capture the feeling and the vibe of a world, that makes it feel very real and tangible. The writing makes the world feel so realistic, despite being a Fantasy world, that it’s very easy to get lost and stuck in the world.
I have no complaints over this book. With eclectic characters that all add something to the story, a unique, interesting world, and writing that will make the world feel more real than the real world, Kova will take you on an unforgettable adventure and leave you reeling, trying to figure out how to go back to life after that.

The Dragons of Nova is the second installment in author Elise Kova's Loom Saga. This is a story that features five different characters; Arianna, Cvareh, Florence, Petra, and King Yveun. When we last we left Arianna, known as the White Wraith aka the Perfect Chimera, she had left her apprentice Florence behind to her own devices and flew off with Cvareh for Nova.
Ari, who was such a strong, fearless, and a badass who both walked the walk and talked the talk in the first installment, is pretty much a non factor for most of this story. She is brought to Petra and the House of Xin because she is the creator of the Philosopher's Box that Petra needs to overthrow the current King. She spends unnecessarily too much time sitting in her room, arguing with Petra, Cain, Cvareh, and starring at the stars and the moon etc. In the end, Ari's journey is not really as exciting as the first installment until the final chapters. Then things get really interesting as well as earth shattering.
Meanwhile, Florence is attempting to fit into the Alchemists guild where she isn't exactly sure who she really is now. After becoming a different sort of Chimera than Ari, is she a Rivet? A Raven? or, a Revolver? A trip across Loom to a land she's never seen before, see's a very different Florence rise from the ashes to becoming a person who is more than capable of handling almost every situation that is thrown at her. In the end, Florence more than holds her own against everyone else in this story, including Ari. She sets her mind out to do something, and gets it done.
Cvareh, who we met in the first installment, returns home to Nova with Ari along for the ride. Like Ari, Cvareh is more or less along for the ride and trying to lay low from the King who wants his head on a platter. Readers get a better look into the House of Xin, and the internal struggles of a House that is at the bottom of the power index, but wanting to rise to the top where it once was. Nova is divided into several houses (Rok, Tam, & Xin). The politics of the Dragon Kingdom play eager roles in what happens in this story. Especially with Petra trying to overthrow the King, and Ari being stuck right in the middle of everything.
The Dragon Kingdom is ruled by Yveun, of the House of Rok. He rules with an iron fist, and a belief that his rule is the only thing that has kept Loom from dooming itself. His rules, His ideas. If you step out of line. He sends his Dragon flyers to put down any attempt at rebellion. Yveun and his Consort Colette are equally dangerous, and I would warn that anyone who turns their backs on these two, will find themselves not long for this world. I am hopeful that Ari and Yveun will be allowed to have a one on one fight in the next story. A story called The Rebels of Gold.

4/5 Stars
It's pretty obvious by now that I am a huge fan of Elise Kova's work and the Loom Saga is no different. I was lucky enough to read The Dragons of Nova early and have to say while it wasn't as good as the first, it definitely left it's mark. With Arianna and Cvareh up in Nova and Florence forging her own path on Loom there was plenty of intrigue, fighting, and character growth to keep me enthralled.
Bringing the reader up to the floating islands of Nova allowed the mythos of this world to grow tremedously. Exploring politics, religion, and exotic locales built up Cvareh's background as well as added depth to the plot. Especially as it came from multiple perspectives. Plus even more of the guild structure was revealed down on Loom and Kova's worldbuilding chops definitely shine through.
Another strength has always been her characters and Arianna, Cvareh, and Florence take massive steps in this one. While Arianna continues to be strong, she finally begins to open up and reveal more of her past. Cvareh though is being pulled in two directions and must find his way between family and friends. And Flor comes into her own now that Ari and Cvareh have left. She constantly questions and takes the initiative even when everyone looks down on her.
Now onto my main issues with this one. First of all, it definitely suffers from sequel syndrome as it serves as a bridge in the series. There was a lot of slow going in the middle setting up the pieces for the bigger story and introducing Nova in all its glory. My other problem was that the characters were separated from each other, specifically Florence. I loved them all together and cannot wait for them to reunite.
Overall The Dragons of Nova by Elise Kova was another riveting installment in this current saga. With impressive character growth and continuing worldbuilding I could look past the slow going in the plot, and still found the reading an enjoyable experience. Arianna, Cvareh, and Florence have found a special place in my heart and I would definitely recommend this series to all the fantasy lovers out there.

I really loved this book more than even the first one. I really love Cvareh, and Flor the most. I do like Ari, especially more in this book then the first. The ending was full of surprises, one was a death of someone I wasn't expecting, and by someone very surprising. The other death I wasn't surprised about the death, but who the killer was, I was super surprised by.
I would definitely read this book and recommend it to my family and friends. I can't wait for the last book in the series to see how it all ends Very awesome and exciting book filled with plenty of Action and Adventure.

3.5 STARS
I am huge fan of Elise Kova and had been looking forward to the second installment of the Loom Saga for months. Sadly, most of The Dragons of Nova felt like a typical middle book of a trilogy. Even though the story resumes where Alchemist of Loom ends, I found the beginning slow paced and uneventful. It wasn’t until the 40% mark, that the storyline became engaging. I enjoyed the multiple points of views, especially Cvareh and Florence. They continue to be my favorite characters. I am looking forward to the final installment. The ending was spectacular and left me longing to see how everything will unfold.

Arianna, better known as the White Wraith, makes it to Nova with Cvareh, right where we left off in The Alchemists of Loom. In the first book, we learned that Nova is a floating world in the sky above Loom where the Dragon race live. These aren't your typical winged dragons, though they do fly with the help of their magic and some awesome machines that the Fenthri of Loom created. Nova's powerful Dragon King, Yvuen, has been holding Loom and it's inhabitants hostage for decades, having split them into guilds and destroying any rebellions.
But Arianna is holding a heavy grudge against these dragons and will stop at nothing to find the one that killed someone special to her. She's also determined to destroy the grip that the Dragon King has on her people. So, with Cvareh's help, she entertains an alliance with his older sister, Petra, the Oji of House Xin, whom vies for the throne.
This was pretty much just as awesome as the first book. There's the steampunk elements, the kickass worldbuilding (which was even more amazing now that we're hanging out on floating islands high above the clouds), and some really brutal moments between Arianna, Cvareh, and basically every dragon she comes across.
Kova's writing and worldbuilding is simply fantastic with great pacing and never a dull moment.
I love the very capable women in these books. Arianna, Florence, and Petra are 'take no shit' kind of characters and I love them.
We are introduced to more characters that shape the story and what is to come and I'm excited to continue on with this series and see what happens to them all.
Some of the POVs kind of made the story drag, but this is definitely a personal opinion that others might not share. I wasn't really interested in Petra or Yveun's POVs despite how important they were to the overall story. I also kind of disliked Florence's chapters, though they were important to an event that happens at the very end, and to keep us connected to those on Loom (but come on, can we please just live in Nova forever?!)
This sequel was a bit more political and I honestly just wanted more of Cvereh and Ari and their crazy tension.
I'm hesitant to recommend this to young adults because of the sexual interaction in this book but I think mature young adults could handle it just fine. It's all tastefully done.
Otherwise, I'd recommend it to anyone who loves fantasy, steampunk, or is just looking for something a little different since this series is pretty unique and equally awesome.

This second book in the series jumps in right where the first left off, with Ari on Nova. There is a lot for Ari to deal with in this book—she can’t just jump into Nova and start bossing people around, the way she’s used to (though she does try!). She has no standing in this new society and she’s way outnumbered. At first, I was frustrated that Cvareh didn’t seem to be working very hard to help Ari (and Ari was frustrated about that too!). She sort of has to figure out things on her own for quite awhile. Of course, she’s used to that, but I was hoping for more Ari-Cvareh interaction a little bit sooner. Still, don’t worry—there’s plenty of development between these two!
Since this book takes place in Nova, we get to learn a lot more about how the dragon society works and what goes on there. The stakes are very high, and there’s plenty of action and danger to keep us interested. We also learn a bit more about what went on in that first revolution that made Ari so bitter toward the dragons in the first place.
The book adds a few POV’s: Florence, Petra and Yveun. I’ll admit that I wasn’t as interested in Florence’s POV as the others, but it keeps us apprised of what’s happening back on Loom while Ari is on Nova, so it was definitely necessary.
There was certainly no middle book syndrome here: Kova keeps the plot moving forward and builds the tension in a way that makes the book practically impossible to put down. I give this one 4.5/Stars.

This was one of my most anticipated reads of 2017, and it did not disappoint! I read the first book in this series, The Alchemists of Loom in late December 2016, into January of this year, and posted my review that month. I requested a copy of the sequel right after reading the last page, and despite it having been the first book I finished reading this year, the story and characters remained fresh in my mind until more than halfway through this year.
The Dragons of Nova picks up right where the story left off at the end of the first book, which was great, and Kova lets us dive right back into the action. There was no “1 year later” or anything like that, which I do appreciate in some books, but usually makes me pose a lot of questions, and also makes me sad for missing any part of the characters’ lives (particularly if they’re characters that I really like). It was great to spend more time with some of my favourites from book one, and to watch them develop and change over the course of the plot unfolding in book two. The characters remained unique, complex, and interesting!
This time around, I also had the opportunity to read a finished copy, than an ARC, and Kova’s writing was definitely more polished. I had come across a few awkward phrases in the ARC of the first book, but I now have faith that those were edited into perfection before the finished copy hit the shelves. Kova’s writing was even quite wise and eloquent at times, and made this book quite enjoyable to read. I wish that I had taken the time to sticky note or write down some quotes, because there were some good ones in here.
I found that a portion of the book was a little slower than it could have been, but also understand the importance of this part unfolding the way it did. Therefore, if you find that you’re struggling a little during the first half of this book, just keep at it and push through, because the other half is completely worth it! I really enjoyed learning more about the world above the clouds, Nova, as we follow some of the characters there, while also learning more and more about Loom as well. This book truly painted a clearer picture of the world on the group (Loom), and the world above, and I am still in awe at the extent and colour of Kova’s imagination! I wish that I could dream up world as interesting and complex as this!
We did also have romance in the plot, and I was mostly satisfied with how everything turned out (since something happened that I wanted to happen, but others did not). But I will say no more about this aspect of the story, as to avoid spoilers. I also like that diverse sexualities are mentioned, but found that they could be more at the forefront (maybe in the next books though! We’ll have to see.) The races in this book are not those of our world, as the creatures living on the ground are all varying shades of gray, while the ones above the clouds are varying shades of blue, green, and red. I think this to be quite unique, since I have never read a book or series with such skin tones before, and also find that this series feels more approachable for people of all backgrounds because there is no debate over who is represented more than others.
The last thing I would like to discuss is the detailed vocabulary created for this world, which makes it feel more like an actual place. Kova has even made up words for measurements on Loom, and I think that to be quite incredible. It makes me think of Tolkien, and how he created vocabulary and even languages to go with his stories. I really enjoyed the information section at the back of this book, and was in awe at the amount of words I had come to already know simply from having read the first book. I was also amused to find that I’d been pronouncing Cvareh’s name wrong in my head for the entirety of the first two books! I’d been reading it as “Kvah-reh”, whereas it’s apparently “Suh-var-ay”! Well, now I know. And so do you!
I highly recommend this book to those who enjoy high fantasy, magic, unique species, steampunk, and a dash of romance! This third book is coming out this December, and you can be sure that I will be requesting a copy and posting a review!

To start with, can I just note that Kova's book always seem to have the most beautiful covers? Seriously, I love them all, this one included.
I have to admit, I didn't like this one quite as much as <em>The Alchemists Loom</em>. It was set at a faster pace, which was a relief and I understood the world coming in, which was also beneficial. I even loved Cvareh. I appreciate a male who knows what (who) he wants and is willing to do what is needed to win them. In this case, take a back seat to her needs and play support. And a whole culture that makes no distinction on the gender of romantic partners was a bonus.
Unfortunately, as much as I liked Cvareh, I didn't so much connect with Arianna. I felt like half of the attention that would otherwise have been focused on her was given to Florence. And of the time given to Arianna's POV, I didn't much care for her gruff persona and dishonesty with her own emotions. I did like Florence, however. There is a character that grew into herself.
Like book one, this one comes to a natural stopping point. But it's a stopping point, not an ending and certainly not a conclusion. I don't know how many books are planned for the series, but this isn't the last one.

This is book two in the Loom Saga which starts out with The Dragons of Loom which is an amazing read in of it self but this is book two we are discussing today and I loved loved it. Elise really ramps up the romance in this book i really felt the room getting hot and steamy which was a great aspect of getting to know the white wraith. This book does an amazing job of explaining exactly who she is and how she has become what she is.
Elise also does an amazing job of drawing you into this world with her descriptions of the dragon world versus the World of Loom and how the guild function as an intricate part of this world.
An example of this is when Cvareh takes Arianna to see the Flower of Agendi-
"It starting - What is? Arianna looked as well, but her answer didn't come from Cvareh. As the moon reached its apex, the whispering reeds, they'd walked through to the temple slowly straightened. Their egg-shaped ends peeled away, unfurling long petals of red, lined in gold, from within. Their wavy edges tapered to points that curved opposite their center.
A fine mist, like the afterglow of neon, clouded the air above them as the plants' superfine pollen was released into the wind. The rock before her was awash in light and magic. It sooth her wariness from the day; it gave her strength. She felt as though she could live forever if she laid among them.
Elise waves a magic spell with her descriptions and world building if you love steampunk, dragons and a high fantasy world building this series is for you.

I was so excited to read this sequel to Achemists of Loom. The character development of Arianna and Cvareh was amazing. Perfect foils for each other. I've said it before and I'll say it again. Elise Kota does a great Job of using POVs

Elise Kova breathes new life into the steampunk genre.
've always adored steampunk. It's the perfect mix of technology ingenuity and magic, setting fire to our imaginations and testing reality's boundaries.
But after reading books from the genre for such a long time, one starts to develop a 'sixth sense' - an irksome feeling that you know all there is to know about a genre. You're no longer wowed by dirigibles or by goggles with cogs. You find patterns in use, authors borrowing from other authors. Nothing seems original anymore.
Elise Kova's steampunk world - Loom, Dragons, Guilds and all their magic - is such a refreshing change of pace. It's vivid, new, and filled with inventions and concepts that will have your mind whirring with possibilities. And it's latest addition, The Dragons of Nova, is just as utterly spellbinding as its predecessor.
Welcome to the land of Dragons.
The Alchemists of Loom introduced a battle of wills, a burning ember of a revolution. Now, in The Dragons of Nova, that ember steadily becomes a flame as the players take their places on the board.
Ari may have experience dealing with the politics of Loom, but Nova is a whole new game with much higher stakes. Not usually one for diplomacy - or subtly - Ari is forced to put her trust in Cvareh. But whose side is Cvareh on - Ari's, or the Dragons'? Navigating a tangled net of lies, Ari must uncover the Dragons' true motives and decide who her allies are...before it's too late.
Prepare for Flor 2.0!
Flor has graduated from 'Right Hand Lady of the Badass Boss' to 'Badass Rebel Boss'. Stepping out on her own, no Ari by her side, Flor is ready to use her skills to defeat the Dragons at whatever cost. I adore how Flor finally gets to spread her (metaphorical!) wings and how she shines as her own person in The Dragons of Nova.
What happens when passion and pain collide?
The romance element between Cvareh and Ari is so bittersweet. Both are burdened with so much - the fate of Loom is practically sitting on Ari's shoulders, whilst the future of Cvareh's Court is under constant threat.
Despite literally being from different worlds, these two are so, so alike. Elise Kova highlights their shared fire, their tenacity and drive. Two warriors, drawn together in spite of the odds stacked against them.
The Dragons of Nova met my expectations...and then exceeded them.
There were so many perfectly executed twists and turns - a build up of tensions worthy of a Game of Thrones episode!
The last few chapters had me glued to each page, holding my breath, and praying that my much-adored cast of characters was going to survive. I could never have guessed the book's epic ending or how devastated it would leave me! A million Kudos to Elise Kova for raising the stakes and setting the stage for an amazing Book #3.

Intent on achieving her goals, Ari convinces Cvareh to take her to Nova, the dragon world. Cvareh and his sister continue working on their plan to overtake the dragon king's throne, and they need Ari's skills as a master alchemist to do so. Politics, deceptions, and betrayals begin to pile up.
The Dragons of Nova was very interesting. The world, characters, and goals were already established in The Alchemists of Loom, allowing for The Dragons of Nova to pick up immediately where the former left off.
Now, there is a new setting, Nova, and the complicated politics of the dragon Houses to contend with. As before, the Nova and the rest of the world are beautifully beautifully crafted and described. Nova is very different from Loom, but similarly fantastic.
The romance definitely took a dive into the serious side. Ari and Cvareh struggle with the attraction and mistrust before growing satisfyingly close. As a content warning ... the romance is pretty explicit by the end of the book.
The plot was complicated. Multiple POVs, layered schemes, and differing loyalties abounded. Ari and Cvareh had different goals which were difficult to align sometimes. And let's not forget Flor, who was left with the alchemists on Loom. While Ari, Cvareh, and the other characters were on Nova pursuing their goals, Flor was on Loom working toward a rebellion against the dragons. The book frequently featured her side of the story, perhaps preparing for book three when all the schemes will presumably come to a head with war. Definitely complicated as well as fascinating.
I enjoyed this book and would gladly recommend it to fans of epic, adult fantasy.
I received a complementary copy of this book from NetGalley. All opinions are my own.

Kova does it again with another fabulous action-packed (and UNIQUE) story. I read The Alchemists of Loom at the beginning of this year after binge-reading her other series, Air Awakens, and can’t get enough of this author’s work!
The Dragons of Nova picks up where the previous book leaves off, with Arianna and Cvareh in the clouds and Florence doing what she can to help the Alchemists. There are new perspectives in this book as well as familiar ones and I loved how the story bounced around between them while never losing focus. This did lead to some pacing issues. There were several storylines that needed to come together by the end so the book moved slower than the previous ones.
I think what sold this book for me was Florence. She was more of a secondary character in the first book but she played a larger role in her own right on Loom this time around. I wish she'd had more page time, to be honest, because it felt like her story was once more sidelined in favor of Ari and Cvareh but hers held the most interest for me.
In fact, less Cvareh and more Florence. And I can't believe I'm even saying that, but I felt that a lot of his scenes ended up being very Ari-centered and though I liked getting his side of things as well but just wanted Flor more!
Yet, as always, I can't say anything less than praise for Kova's characters. I first fell in love with her cast in the Air Awakens books and I should have known that we'd have our hearts crushed and turned upside down in The Dragons of Nova but I foolishly believed we were safe.
Hah. Not.
Emotions and tension ran high. The fate of two worlds resting in the hands of a few individuals. It's enough to stir up trouble.
This sequel really expands on the world that Kova started with in The Alchemists of Loom. The bulk of the scenes take place on Nova, the domain of the Dragons. Including Petra, Cvareh's sister, as a point-of-view character brought the court dynamics to life and provided insight into a completely different race from the Fenthri on Loom.
Now, as a sequel, it's really hard to not compare this to the first book and I have to say that I think it was better and "worse." The Dragons of Nova provided room for Florence to really come into her own as a main character. It provided the space to expand an already intricate world. And it felt like an entirely new dynamic. But it did move slower with the flood of new information and while the action was great and I felt the tension throughout the story, it wasn't quite as strong as the first book. This might have been related to the pacing or just the story in general.
Despite that, I can honestly say that Kova delivered a strong sequel to continue the Loom Saga and I have no doubt that the third book, The Rebels of Gold, will blow the first two out of the water!