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Jazz is an irreverent, confident and intriguingly vulnerable criminal mastermind–in other words, the exact heroine the sci-fi genre needs and a worthy successor to The Martian’s Mark Watney.
If you took the diversity and heist-y goodness of Six of Crows and set it on the moon, you’d have a good approximation of Artemis.
Summary:
This is the new novel from the author of The Martian.
Jazz is a twenty-something native of the moon colony, Artemis, down on her luck but nevertheless full of pithy remarks and very real aspirations to join the EVA guild and walk on the moon. She sleeps in a “coffin”, the bed-sized low income excuse for an apartment and works as a porter…with a little smuggling on the side.
Her criminal activities quickly get her wrapped up in a heist gone wrong and a fast unraveling conspiracy that threatens the entire colony. Relying on her own wit and skill she attempts to right her mistakes and save her home.
The Short:
I loved:
-the main character, her wit and confidence, competence, vulnerability and development
-the other characters and how their relationships to Jazz were slowly unveiled and expanded upon meaningfully
-the humor
-the realistic yet not pedantic science
-the diversity, almost none of the characters, businesses or nations involved were American or even white, there was a gay character and a Muslim character who didn’t face any forms of persecution in this futuristic society.
I didn’t love:
-the predictable ending and resolution of the minor plot lines
-the ending, abrupt and somewhat unsatisfying
-the lack of greater meaning and depth
The Long:
This book is diverse, character driven, and feels realistically scientific without being dry. As expected by fans of The Martian, Weir’s humor is on point, always finding a way in when the plot gets too heavy. The story isn’t centered by a romantic subplot but rather by several smaller interpersonal subplots, which is also refreshing.
Jazz’s personality is the driving engine of this book, and honestly the thing that kept me interested. She was sexually confident, fond of expletives and though incredibly capable, not academic. Just a refreshing character overall. Sci-fi can too easily turn dry and factual, but Jazz’s wit never failed to entertain. The rest of the cast was just as interesting and their interplay was especially rewarding.
Though I’m not usually a fan of correspondence as a plot device, Jazz and Kelvin’s interactions were crucial and intriguing aspects of the story. I was equally engrossed with her relationship drama. Svodoba was particularly adorable and I’d love to see how her relationships with Kelvin and Dale progress. Her father was also a great character and I loved that Weir carefully and thoughtfully included Islam and Saudi culture in his exploration of the character and society.
I did feel Jazz was a little emotional immature for a twenty six year old and often forgot I wasn’t reading about a teenager. Despite this, I think her character was very well rounded. Her Saudi heritage was not just performative but relevant to plot, history and development through her interactions with her estranged father. I especially enjoyed seeing a parental figure utilized as they’re all too frequently cast as absent or passive.
I also thoroughly enjoyed Weir’s deft ability to introduce and expand an entire complex future society without resorting to long winded descriptions. He gives the reader tidbits of information about Jazz’s past in keeping with her private nature and just enough world-building to keep the reader grounded and interested, as well as consistently surprised, truly the master of show-don’t-tell.
In terms of plot, those familiar with The Martian will recognize the structure of Artemis. A seemingly insurmountable problem is attacked by an extremely capable protagonist who faces and overcomes smaller challenges with ingenuity. As a reader, you know the challenge will be overcome, but the reward comes from Weir’s ability to break down thought processes and interesting facts of problem solving.
Having said that, I did feel the stakes were not high enough to keep me from skimming sometimes. I always knew the challenge of the moment would work out and sometimes lost interest in the path to that end. I also felt the ending was quite abrupt, though perhaps a sequel is in the works that explains the many loose ends. Artemis lacked the emotional payoff I felt from The Martian, the sense of wonder and human bonding, but again I sensed that was a function of something else to come. I kept waiting for the story to gain depth or present a greater idea that would place it in a larger context, but if it existed, it went over my head.
I would highly recommend this book to those looking for a softer side of sci-fi, something that feels smart and detailed but not heavy and wordy. There’s a lot of room for this world to grow, and I hope to see more in the future.
Stories with similar vibes: The Martian-Weir(obviously), Violet Eyes series-Luiken, Xenon: Girl of the Future (tv movie series), Six of Crows-Bardugo, Iced-Moning
Disclaimer: I received Artemis as a free eBook through NetGalley.

I'm a sucker for a heist story, and this one can stand toe to toe with some of my favorites. Snarky heroine? Check. Insurmountable odds? Check. Eclectic group with little in common? Check. And because its Andy Weir, throw in an amazing amount of relatable and understandable science facts and terminology (something I wasn't sure was possible). High adventure, quick pace, full of heart -- enjoyed immensely.

Moon colony! About durn time that the writers started writing about colonizing the moon!! Artemis lived up to my expectations! Very original, well researched, and a fast, snappy read! Andy Weir scienced the hell outta 'Artemis'!! The main character.. eighteen year old girl.. Jazz.. has lived on the moon since she was six years old. All she's trying to do.. is make a dishonest buck.. that won't hurt to many folks.. so she can have a place to sleep that's larger than a coffin. Who can blame her?
Highly recommend Artemis to anyone who loves a good story.. and has a vision of mankind living beyond this blue marble!

I finished this over a week ago, so I've had plenty of time to reflect. I was concerned that my initial impressions were too colored by my expectations but upon reflection, 1) my opinions are valid, and 2) it is reasonable to compare an author's work to previous work by the same author.
This is not as good as The Martian, but it is still a good book. The main thing I didn't super love was the main character / 's voice. The attitude and snarkiness are too similar to Watney's. My guess is that this character was made female to try to add differences between the two characters, but that didn't change the character in any meaningful way. A more unique character would have made a better read.
Although samey, the character did come off as mostly authentic, except in one part: what some kind beta reader should have told Weir is that women don't call each other "bitch." It's too fraught with mansplaining and sexism. I checked in with a coworker, and neither of us knows of any other women who throw this around in conversation. It made her less realistic. But maybe we're a weird subset of professional women.
Still a fun and exciting read; looking forward to more from this author. 4 stars.

If you loved The Martian, as I did, you have been waiting for Andy Weir's next book. No one else does exactly his sassy, Capra-esque, hard science thing. I wanted more of The Martian, but I'll also admit that I didn't have a lot of hope that I would get much more than a rehash of the same thing that worked so well the first time. I was eager, but I can't say that I was optimistic.
But I was wrong! Artemis was so much fun, and I won't say it didn't have a lot in common with his breakout book, but it's definitely not treading the same ground. If I say to you, "imagine Andy Weir wrote a heist novel on the moon," you will be able to picture Artemis. If what you picture sounds like fun, well, you're into a treat, my friend.
Jazz Bashara lives in a closet on the moon. Most people do--square footage is expensive. But her life is going all right--she's got her little private bunk, her courier job, her local watering hole. She's even got a solid side gig (well, main gig, really) as a smuggler--Artemis, the moon's only city, doesn't have a lot of rules, but the ones it does have are somewhat strict about things like cigars.
Jazz is a rough-around-the-edges underachiever, a supergenius (natch) who never finished school because of a series of skeevy boyfriends and a streak of sheer stubbornness. She's mostly estranged from her father and she's pissed at a lot of people--most of the characters we meet in the first quarter of the book are people she's annoyed with for one reason or another.
When an opportunity to make a fortune for one day of (illegal) work falls into her lap, she jumps on it and the caper is on. She needs to sabotage some equipment that's outside Artemis's protective bubble. Here begins the science, as Andy Weir does what he does best, figuring out just what the failsafes and equipment in a place like Artemis might look like, and how a supergenius might sabotage them. Of course, things don't go smoothly (what heist does?) and Jazz finds friends and allies along the way as she heads in the direction of saving the day.
I loved that there was a big cast of characters and that the relationships in Jazz's life were a big part of the book. I wasn't really sure Weir could pull it off, but it's heartwarming. Admittedly, it's not high-level emotional arc or characterization going on here, and the prose is the complete opposite of purple (green prose? is that a thing?). But I liked Jazz the way I liked Mark Watney, and I loved that I got to see her argue and grouch at people, ask for favors and figure things out and trick people and be tricked.
Lately I've been pretty careful with male authors writing female characters, but I haven't got much fault to find here--mostly because there isn't a lot of sex or gender here at all. I mean, Jazz is a woman, and she talks about how good-looking some men are (which is kind of stilted but not distracting), but mostly, Jazz is just a person, and she's convincing as such. She's foul-mouthed and irritable and stubborn as hell, which serves her well--Weir is not trying to write "woman," but rather lets her be who she is.
I loved this book. It was so much fun. There were big laughs and low-gravity fight scenes and complicated science explanations and life-or-death ticking clocks. It's not for everyone, but if you liked The Martian, you want to read this.
(I got a copy of this book for free from Netgalley for an honest review.)

This is an ARC provided by friends of NetGalley for an honest review.
Andy Weir does it again in this fast pace, Sci-fi thriller. The book is hilarious, has cool Sci-fi elements without being over the top, and an unforgettable female protagonist!
Yep I read the book...
Yep, I LOVED THE BOOK!
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What's not to love about an incredible 'heist' story in the near future that takes place in our own exquisite moon? Andy Weir popped up in my radar ever since the brilliant The Martian became a reality in our local bookstores. I was fortunate to have read the book prior to watching the movie. In my humble estimation, the book was vastly superior to the big screen adaptation, with amazing sci-fi elements, a memorable sarcastic and funny character and of course Mars itself!
Weir accomplishes a quite similar experience with Artemis! This time around, we find ourselves immersed in the first city in the Moon, known as 'Artemis'. This happens about 100 years in the 'near' future, and full colonization and self-sustenance in the Moon have become reality. There's a booming industry of 'Aluminum' mining of Moon's rocks, which gives off O2 as byproduct. The Sci-fi has many chemical and physical elements which are very believable. This just adds to the realism of the background.
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Weir's strenghts are in building kick-ass 'sci-fi' elements without being too over the top, and creating funny and memorable protagonist characters. The author, Mr. Weir himself worked much of his life as a computer programmer. His extensive scientific research, made the events in the The Martian so plausible. In Artemis, Weir displays the same level of commitmment to the sci-fi elements, and let me tell you, IT ROCKS! The 'moonwalks' are totally realistic, down to the last detail of 'decompression' hatches, and ensuring you space suit is working, so that the vacuum of space doesn't turn your brain into fried eggs...
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In 'Artemis', we have 'Jazz Bashara' , a beautiful, Saudi descent woman in her 20's, who steals the show and takes us for a hell of a ride!
Jazz is an absolute riot, she curses, likes to drink in the 'local watering hole', and has no quips about her sexuality. Oh, and she's kinda of a criminal! She keeps herself busy smuggling the occasional harmless bit of contraband to supplement her limited funds. The story unfolds at a breaknecking pace, as 'Jazz' becomes' involved in a Moon-related heist, that goes from bad to nuclear in 2 seconds...then all shit hits the fan!
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Jazz Bashara(or at least what I think she looks like!)
Artermis is a wildly entertaining sci-fi, 'heist'-like story, with the coolest background in the Moon and all the perils that a dark, non-atmospheric, vaccuum can provide! Any fans of The Martian, sci-fi thrillers, and heist-books in general, are in for a hell of a ride with this one!
5 Stars!

I really appreciated that this was a sci-fi novel that organically integrated diversity into its narrative in ways that never felt forced. I thought the decision to make the protagonist Muslim and the city ownership Kenyan was particularly innovative - it gave the book a genuinely fresh and unique feel that never slipped into cliche.
Overall, weaker than "The Martian" - I wouldn't have minded a bit more problem-solving and exploration and fewer "thriller" elements - but I'd definitely recommend it.

As we were introduced to Weir's particular brand of snark in Mark Watney from the Martian, we find it again in Jazz, a career criminal of Artemis, the first city on the moon.
Freewheeling and exciting, Weir weaves a space thriller that only he can: where everything goes wrong and one is left trying to pick up the pieces that they themselves created.

Couldn't put this book down. Love the humor combined with the science fiction. A winner for general readers.

I have to be honest, my expectations were really high dor this book because I absolutely adored The Martian. However, I couldn't even finish this one. I made it about halfway and I just couldn't finish it. I'll start with what I enjoyed. I liked the setting amd the use of scientific explanations. I like that our protagonist is female and that she's Muslim, but they don't make a big deal of it. She's just a normal person and it doesn't feel done to make a statement. What didn't I like. So Jazz wasn't the most likable and it was more that I felt either she or the author was trying to hard to make her funny and cool. It came off more forced. The plot dragged u til we finally got to the heist part but by then I just wasn't really interested. For me this just didn't have the magic of The Martian. I might try it again later but I doubt I'll feel differently about it.

Artemis by Andy Weir
I'm going to start this review by saying that I really enjoyed The Martian! I thought it was funny, smart, interesting and just a great example of science fiction. I couldn't put that book down and really appreciated the way Weir could set up his story and execute it. I sang its praises. So I was really excited to see that he had written another book, filled with more science and set on the moon. Definite win. I am supremely disappointed. This was a not a book I enjoyed. This was a book I couldn't even bring myself to finish.
The one redeeming quality of this book is that the science shines! Weir does a great job explaining what Artemis is and how it functions. The details regarding its creation and existence were well thought out and detailed. What overwhelmingly suffered in this novel were the characters. The characters, as diverse as they were, were not well thought out, were clearly lacking in depth and overall not entertaining. I love the idea of having a diverse group of characters, but not when those characters end up being stereotyped. Jazz was set up to be a rebel female character, or at least that’s what I think. If I were to ask any guy to speak the way they think women speak, or act the way they think women act, then that's what Jazz would be! Long story short, I could tell that a guy wrote Jazz's character and not someone attuned to how women act and behave But that was only part of the problem. The description of each type of ethnic group was so stereotypical, down to the fact that they all worked at the same place. Saudi Arabians were welders, Vietnamese worked in Life Support and Hungarians worked in metal working. I couldn't deal. Some of the descriptions and jokes were just cringe worthy and honestly distracting. This was a perfect example of someone trying to be a diverse writer without caring whether or not they got it right.
And now the plot. It was one bad decision after another after another, with no clear motivation for these decisions besides money. It is really hard for me to imagine that someone as smart as Jazz could be so blinded by money that she would make all of the asinine decisions that she made. I struggled through this novel, and with less than 80 pages left I realized that I was not invested enough in what happened to keep reading. I simply could not get through it anymore because I didn't trust or like any of the characters enough to believe the ending would be at all satisfying.
I'm stopping here. I'm glad I got a chance to read this now and I'm glad I'm being able to talk honestly and openly about this book. I wanted to love this book and honestly thought I would. But there were some huge missteps regarding the plot and the characterizations that I could not look past and for those reasons I can't continue. At this point a stellar ending wouldn't rescue this book for me. I can't recommend this because I genuinely didn't enjoy it.

I think the author, coming off of the huge success of THE MARTIAN, set out to create a character directly opposite of his main character in that book, Mark Watney, as possible. The protagonist in ARTEMIS, is female, non-American, a criminal/smuggler, abrasive. In fact, a reader may find that they don't like her very much in the beginning. The thing Watney and Jazz Bashara have in common are being very clever and knowing a lot of science. Think of a female Han Solo before he started his hero trajectory. But then Jazz gets her own "save the city" moments, too, after getting involved in a get rich quick scheme that goes wrong. Very wrong. And goes "wronger" until the very end and then it turns into a caper story with a team of misfits. Overall, I enjoyed reading it. It would be unfair to compare it to THE MARTIAN because that was an extraordinary story. For his sophomore effort on the national scene, I can see this being a movie, too.

5 of 5 bright shiny stars. I dove into this book without any expectations. I have not read The Martian. I do not know anything about Andy Weir. And I usually avoid science fiction novels. But I was hooked at the first chapter and I would have read this book in one setting if I could.
Jazz Bashara is a longtime resident of Artemis, a city on the moon. Sounds glamourous, right? We quickly learn that even on a lunar colony there are the Haves and the Have Nots, and just like Earth, this society has greed, manipulation, politics, crime, and corrupt individuals driven by money. But it also has just enough order, human kindness and decency woven in to make it tolerable for its inhabitants.
Jazz is a Have Not, and a part of the working class that runs Artemis. She works as daytime porter supplementing her meager income with a side job as a smuggler. You want illegal contraband like booze or cigarettes? Jazz can get it to you…. for a price. A rich businessman offers her one million “slugs” (moon currency) for a quick and easy but very illegal job. She is halfway through the job and daydreaming of how she’ll spend that money when things go horribly and unexpectedly wrong. And then she is on the run.
But not to worry, because Jazz is street and book smart (a rare combination), sassy, self-deprecating, determined, resourceful, connected, a problem solver, and fast on her feet thanks to 1/6 gravity. She is a firm believer in commitments. She is loyal and mostly moral even though she bends the law from time to time. She is a fun and likeable character with many flaws.
Andy Weir does a fantastic job of explaining Artemis’s backstory so that the reader has a clear picture of it. He writes an action packed thriller and makes science easy to understand. The physics and chemistry references don’t weight the book down at all and I hardly noticed that I was learning something. A nice benefit.
I love Artemis for so many reasons:
1. Awesome snarky, smart female Macgyver-esque badass main character
2. Diverse, entertaining, and well developed supporting characters
3. Action packed twists and turns
4. Stellar writing style
5. Laugh out loud humor
6. Weir’s vision of the lunar colony lifestyle
This book is an unexpected gem. It is one of my top five books of 2017. The writing is phenomenal, the plot is fast paced, the characters are well developed and interesting, and the setting is unusual and very memorable. If everyone wrote like Andy Weir, I would read more science fiction books. He is truly talented and I look forward to his next book already.

Thanks to NetGalley for an ARC. An entertaining tale of a brash young lady with a lot of spunk. Weir's in your face heroine is a delight. Recommended.

Anyone who enjoyed The Martian’s wisecracking hero will be drawn in by Jazz Bashara, the heroine of Andy Weir’s new novel, Artemis. Like her predecessor, Jazz is flippant, wildly intelligent, and tends to constantly skate on the edge of disaster. Her loony tale unfolds at breakneck speed, and if you’re anything like me, you’ll be dragging your Kindle into the bathtub because you can’t stop reading.

A rollicking and fun ride from Andy Weir! In his sophomore effort, Andy Weir once again takes a trip into outer space, but this time it's to the rocky and desolate Moon where we meet his spunky female protagonist Jazz Bashara. Jazz Bashara displays the same characteristic rebel, sarcastic, can-do attitude that Mark Watney does in The Martian, but she adds a layer of sass to it. Artemis moves fast - almost too fast! - and can easily be devoured in one sitting if you aren't paying attention. The story flies by, and you get sucked right into the lives of several Artemesians, a population of people who have moved to the Moon. The story could do with a little more pacing, and a little more world building, but the trade-off is a story that never feels like it's dragging and moves at breakneck speed.
Jazz Bashara, a stealthy smuggler, makes her living by getting people things they need, that they shouldn't be getting on the Moon. But she gets caught up in a high-stakes scheme that threatens to put her life - and those around her - in danger, when her get-rich quick plan blows up in her face.
Andy Weir paints another cast of colorful characters in this book, making the Moon population come alive with vibrancy and humor. You can count on every character in the book to deliver some witty zingers as they weave in and out of Jazz's life. The dialogue is perhaps a bit *too* zingy, with a few groaners and jokes that feel a bit too casual (especially in the heat of what is meant to be an intense or near-death experience!), but overall there is a tone of light-heartedness and optimism that shines through and is becoming a hallmark of Weir's writing.
Again, Weir is not afraid to throw in a bunch - nay, a LOT, of technical jargon - as we navigate the complexities of lunar living: airlocks, rovers, EVA suits. Weir challenges readers to get familiar, and get familiar quick, with these terms and doesn't spend time dumbing them down for you. But rest assured, once you get the hang of it, hang on for a fun adventure with a protagonist you can root for, some faithful sidekicks that turn up when you least expect, and some baddies you'll love to hate. Who knew the moon could be so fun?

I read 'The Martian' and I enjoyed it, but I found that it was hard to get through due to its dense nature. 'Artemis' is much more readable, and I enjoyed the process of reading it more. Overall, I enjoyed the story a lot. My only complaint was that it felt like Weir couldn't fully write a woman as the main character - there were a lot of cringy moments and personalizations.

I'm probably the only person who has read Artemis without first having read or watched the Martian. I was a little concerned about that, but as it turns out, Artemis is not a sequel or in any way a continuation of the Martian. It is a fully self-contained story.
Forty years ago you couldn't catch most people reading a science fiction story. It's a genre that has really gone mainstream and has a wide appeal.
Having read lots of classic science fiction, this story really brings me back to Asimov and his Caves of Steel with an otherworldly crime story, to Herbert's Dune with his giant spice harvesters and the Fremen sabotaging them in the battle against the Harkonnens, and to Edgar Rice Burroughs' Princess of Mars and Carter's desperate efforts to save a dying world by breaking into the atmosphere factory. This is not to say that Weir consciously copied ideas, just that I can hear the echoes and feel the shadows of earlier giants.
What I've always liked about this particular genre is that the author can create an entirety new society with entirely new rules and traditions and here Weir gives us a new city on the Moon with new ways of doing things brought on both by conditions on the moon and by the human need for reinventing society. Weir really excels in painting details about how things work. He's quite technical.
But the hero -or rather heroine - of this novel is no James T Kirk. Jazz is a small statured woman who has cornered the smuggling market and kind of feels like some hip skateboarding chick on the moon. Although she has her own code of conduct, she gets involved in quite an unusual caper with devastating consequences.
Crown Publishing provided me this advanced readers copy and it is quite an enjoyable read. It should have wide appeal.

I'm between 3 and 3.5 stars here.
Although it has been a few years since Andy Weir published The Martian, he hasn't been missing from the literary world, thanks to his sharing a number of free super-short stories with the reading public. (Annie's Day remains my favorite of the bunch.) Even so, I was anxious for him to come out with a new novel.
Artemis is the first city on the moon. While wealthy tourists get to experience the city's luxuries, for the ordinary citizens living there, it's almost like any other city—the struggles between the haves and have-nots, corruption, violence, crime, the usual. (Almost like any other city except for the gravity, and the fact that everything is encased in bubble-type structures to keep the extreme radiation and space dust out.)
Jazz Bashara is a low-level porter on Artemis. She longs for a better life but doesn't have the motivation to do anything more than what she does, even though she has the brains and the talent for much more. Instead, she ekes out a living as a criminal, smuggling in contraband from Earth for anyone willing to pay her. She doesn't care that it's wrong; in fact, she's more than a little proud to be gaming the system.
One day, one of Jazz's wealthy regular customers offers her a part in a scheme that seems almost too good to be true, but her part of the spoils would be enough to give her the type of life she has always dreamed of. Of course, what seems too good to be true usually is, and it isn't long before Jazz realizes she's in the middle of something much bigger than a get-rich-quick scheme—there's corruption, and people are willing to go to any lengths to protect what they believe is theirs. Jazz is going to need more than just her street smarts if she's going to survive this.
Jazz is a pretty fascinating character. She's pretty tough, smart, wily, and not embarrassed about her sexuality or her general laziness. She knows she could achieve more, but for the most part, she isn't motivated to do so through legal channels. I love the fact that Weir created a multi-cultural cast of characters without batting an eye—Jazz is a Saudi Arabian Muslim (albeit non-practicing), and there are characters from different races, religions, cultures, and sexual orientations that don't adhere to stereotypes.
Until I read Artemis, I somehow forgot how science-heavy The Martian was. But while all that science seemed to work in The Martian it seemed to weigh this book down a bit. (And no, it wasn't the gravity.) Weir has created quite a world, and certainly the descriptions helped paint the scene, but I felt at times the lengthy scientific diatribes pulled the plot off course.
The other thing that frustrated me about the book is the fact that Jazz speaks and thinks like a teenage boy. Even though you're rooting for her, after a while her lack of maturity started to grate on me.
Those criticisms notwithstanding, Weir knows how to tell a story. Even though I thought the caper (and that's the best word to describe the scheme Jazz finds herself in) was a little silly, I couldn't stop reading Artemis. It's a fun and interesting book, and you have to wonder how close to reality Weir's vision of life on the moon will come, if it ever becomes a reality.
NetGalley and Crown Publishing provided me an advance copy of the book in exchange for an unbiased review. Thanks for making this available!

This novel follows Jazz, a 26 year old Porter living on the Moon base Artemis. Although her dad is a welder and he taught her how to weld she decides to forge her own way. Jazz realizes that being a Porter is small beans but it does get her to met various citizens on the moon. One such citizen offers her a proposition that she instantly says yes too due to the enormous financial payout. Things don’t go as well as she had hoped as Jazz is forced to fight for her life.
Jazz as a character was well-developed. She is smart, overall a good person, swears a lot and just wants to make things right no matter the cost. This leads Jazz to make some fool hearted decisions that almost kill hundreds of people. Jazz does make it right in the end though. Jazz as a character was okay. I found she was odd at times. She is portrayed as super smart yet she acts so dumb and childish sometimes, especially whenever she thinks about sex or how sexy she was. Jazz in this aspect was written like a teenage boy not a young woman. I also didn’t understand why Jazz wouldn’t ask her father for help when she so desperately needed it, instead of being a smuggler why didn’t she become a welder or a scientist?
The plot was full of action and suspense. There were a few slow parts in the novel though. Once I got 90% of the way through the novel I was sure that all the details had been wrapped up nice and tightly until two elements were sprang on the reader. I liked the first one but I felt the second one shouldn’t have occurred. I was upset Jazz survived as I felt it was too much of a Duex-Ex moment. Although it would have been sad to see Jazz die I felt it would have ended the novel perfectly. After mulling the novel over though I am not sure if I still believe that as the reader would have missed Jazz making things up with her father by rebuilding his workshop.
The relationship between Jazz and her father was well written. There was amazing depth, love and worry between them. I felt this was a truly accurate way to portray a relationship between father and daughter.
Overall this novel was enjoyable but I still enjoyed The Martian better. Thanks to NetGalley for an advanced copy.