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Father Jacob Hayle quickly jumps into action when he sees that a woman has collapsed in the courtyard of his parish. The stranger bears a striking resemblance to a woman he once loved and her safety becomes his priority until he finds out that his brother has brainwashed this woman into being the perfect submissive specimen. What Jacob doesn't realize is that his brother plans to resurrect the old games they once played together, and this time, it's Jacob who has to figure out how to stay five steps ahead.

Loved
I loved the idea of the Catholic priest going rogue and embracing his sinful nature once again!

Not so much
This story was really erotica fiction (not romance) with a quick pace, but the damsel-in-distress theme was too heavily played up for me, as was the "you're a whore" banter that was constantly vocalized by the leader of manwhores himself, Elijah. I'd hoped to add Elijah to my love-to-hate-villains list, but by the end of this book, I found that I didn't care much for him or any of the other characters. Jacob was okay, but I wasn't wowed by him or some of his scaredy cat ways. It also seemed like most of the side characters were planted without real purpose and were easily disposable.

► Ultimately, this story didn't grab me as passionately as some of this author's other stories and I craved more characterization. There were some parts that didn't quite add up and nagged at me, but hopefully those questions will be addressed in the next book to be released.

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WOW! This book had me hooked from the first chapter. I couldn't put it down.
Being a Catholic who was raised in those values (including the guilt) I could feel what these characters were feeling when it came to this faith and the trappings of following words of a religious leader.
Lily White wove a wonderful, and intense, story. Page after page I was drawn into the lives of these people and tensed with their drama, cried when they were devastated, and felt relief when there was pause. I caught my breath and read some more.
I highly recommend this book to anyone who loves sexual stories, believable characters, and well written words.

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Another eccentric read by Lily White.

It was beautifully imperfect, in it's own deranged way.

I don't know where to start with my review, im not giving any spoilers away so forgive the vagueness.

Some might find this book slightly unhinged, i on the other hand couldn't put it down.

This book is has alot of twists and turns. The sex scenes are smoking hot 🔥🔥

“Your needs are his. You are the gift that will open the gates…”

The characters and story flowed perfectly. I found the characters to be a little unbalanced, some may find them mentally unstable, but this works perfectly in this book.

"I've had disgusting thoughts,"
"Thoughts that no person should have."

This book gets 5 Unhinged stars from me.
I can't wait to read more from Lily White
#Taboo #Fuckswithyourhead #WTFmoments #Dark #Twisted #Deranged

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