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The Proposal

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I throughly enjoyed her first book but this one was lacking for me. The MC of the book didn’t have the same character development as Alexa did. And I didn’t enjoy Nik’s friends or Carlos’ family.

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Rating: 3.5 Stars

One of my favorite auxiliary characters in The Wedding Date was Carlos, and I was therefore over the moon when I found out he was getting his own book. It was wonderful getting to know him better in this book, and I was so happy to see him get his HEA.

I thought the set up for this book was brilliant. I was all in during the first chapter, and loved getting that little peek at Nik. I do wish the whole failed proposal thing had been explored more, but only because I liked it so much, and thought it had a lot of possibilities.

Guillory found a wonderful match for Carlos in Nik. These two were so easy to ship as they had great chemistry withe each other, and it was a lot of fun watching them go from friends to more. She was smart and sassy and enjoyed such an ease with Carlos. He brought out this soft side of Nik, and I sort of loved that it was reserved for the special people in her life.

We did not get any information on Carlos' past relationships, but Nik was a little damaged from some bad love. This left her relationship weary and slow to trust. The exploration of this side of her was interesting, and there was this one scene, where Nik was confronting this pain via an external experience. It was so meaningful and helped her tap into her inner strength.

Carlos. I loved Carlos so much, and seeing him in his own environment just reinforced my love for him. I do wish we spent more time with Carlos and his family. I felt like more page time was dedicated to Nik and her friends, and let me just put it out there - I read this book for Carlos.

It isn't that I didn't love Nik's friends, because I did. They were a very vibrant group of women, who were always there to support each other. I loved strong female friendships and women supporting women, but like I said, I just wanted more Carlos, and I wanted to spend more time with him and his family.

One very pleasant surprise were the cameos by Drew and Alexa. My love of companion novels relies heavily on the author catching us up with past couples, and Guillory gifted us with some really wonderful updates on Drew and Alexa.

I thought the ending was fun and cute. It addressed the BIG question, and left me with a smile on my face, but I wanted a little more past that. I DID get a resolution, but it was just too abrupt.

Overall: A fun and cute friends-to-lovers romance featuring a hero and a heroine you will want to root for.

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Even though the premise of The Proposal is catchy and engaging, Guillory's characters could use a bit more roughening around the edges to portray more complexity. The story is sometimes too rosy, too sirupy which is strange when the narrative indicates a plot in which the characters should be a lot more enticing.
Guillory is a good writer, but this one in particular was not successful in accomplishing what was initially promised.

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After a disastrous and unwanted public marriage proposal, readers will route for Nikole to recognize her match. Carlos is in the right place at the right time. The chemistry between them shifts easily from friendship to more, and then between sweet dates and steamy bedroom scenes. Everyone (except for Nik and Carlos) recognize that what's developing between them is more than casual. Nik's confidence is refreshing and her friends are ideal. Modern romance with a happy for now ending (happily ever after implied). Strong choice for libraries wanting to diversify their collection. Fun & Contemporary!

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This was a light and fun read. I enjoyed getting to know the characters, although they sometimes seemed to invent obstacles to their relationship along the way. Friend and family side characters added some fun elements, as well. Overall, cute story!

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ARC received via Netgalley for an honest review

I have not read anything else by Ms Guillory so I didn't know what to expect from her .

The Proposal is cute and sweet and fluffy, and just the thing that I needed for my weekend read.

I liked the diversity of the characters - though it did irk me that when 2 POC characters met up they were surprised that their partners had not told them about the other being a POC. I just didn't understand why this was brought up when it didn't really seem to matter? But this could just be me.

Not going to lie, I did crave cake as I read and cupcakes were being talked about. Not good for the diet!

I liked Carlos and Nikole and wanted them to be more than friends right from the start, and enjoyed their journey to get more.

I liked this book, it wasn't one that will tax your brain or your feelings too much, but it was just what I wanted at the time.

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I liked this book a little less than The Wedding Date, but it is still pleasant and an enjoyable read. I liked Carlos in The Wedding Date, but in this book I realized what I really liked about him was his interactions with Alexa, his best friend's girl (and the heroine of Wedding Date). Mildly controlling guys just aren't my cup of tea, but he stayed solidly on the right side of the line of emotional abuse (unlike other men in the narrative). As others have said on Goodreads, most of the sex scenes happen "off camera" and those that don't are fairly mild. I loved Nikole's friends the most in this book-- I would love to see a book about her friend that owns the cupcake shop! Love for self-professed fat cupcake bakers too!

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I really enjoyed Guillory's first book, The Wedding Date, and I also really liked The Proposal! Great premise, (surprise, unwelcome public proposal from a tool, and then a romantic rescue of the damsel being distressed), very likable characters (I liked Carlos much better than Drew, and both Alexa and Nikole were amazing). and food, food, FOOD!
Very fun, very sweet contemporary romance, with few negatives. Loved it!

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This book was amazing, Just as good as the first one and I am so happy I got meet some of the characters again

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I read The Wedding Proposal, and I really enjoyed it, so I had high hopes for Guillory's second foray into romance (thanks for the ARC, NetGalley!). Sadly, I was disappointed.

The big positive here was the tremendous diversity of the cast. I'd love to see more of that in the romance genre.

The big negative was that I couldn't understand what they saw in each other beyond the physical. I couldn't feel the emotional chemistry, and found them to be annoying when they were together.

Minor negatives:
Why was Nikole even with her ex-boyfriend for months if she found him so boring?
The only well-written dialogue in the book was between Carlos and Drew (his best friend, and MC from TWP). The rest of it was clunky and immature, not painting the characters in a good light.
I had issues with how Nikole handled a confrontation with her ex, and with how she engineered the meeting to get back together with Carlos. Those bits were just icky.

I probably won't bother with another Guillory novel, but I do hope she gets back to the level of her first book.

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I had loved Carlos in The Wedding Date and was thrilled to see that he was getting his own story, so when I got The invite to read this one, I couldn’t wait to get to it.

I love love loved Nik. She’s sarcastic and witty and smart af. Her friends Dana and Courtney were fun and I adored the scenes with the three of them together. Of course I was familiar with Carlos and he didn’t disappoint. He’s supportive and a complete marshmallow. I was so happy to see Alexa and Drew and I’m 1000% here for more scenes of all four of them.

Plot wise, it was, in a word, comfortable, and I mean that in a good way. Nik and Carlos build a relationship out of friendship first and it works. It’s absolutely adorable and when the inevitable conflict happens, I was crushed. Thankfully, it didn’t last long and I loved the grand gesture.

Overall, I loved this story more than the first one. It’s filled with women supporting women, has a cast of diverse characters, and loads of body positivity. My only complaint is that I wanted more at the end.

**Huge thanks to Berkley Books for providing the arc free of charge**

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I hate to give up when I’m so close to 50 percent, but this is putting me in a slump.

First, there was no warning or disclaimer that this was a companion to The Wedding Date. I feel so lost like I’m missing out on something.
Second, I don’t feel a drop of chemistry between Nic and Carlos.
Third, to be honest, it’s quite boring to me. I felt like nothing has really happened since they met.

If nothing has happened this far and I don’t feel the chemistry between them. Then I don’t think I can make myself finish this one. I have a copy of The Wedding Date on my shelf that I haven’t read. Maybe I can read that one and come back to this later.

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A fun, lighthearted, summer romance read with a wonderfully diverse cast.

I adored the author's previous work so I went into this with pretty high hopes, and while I did not love this quite as much The Wedding Date is was still a fun, sexy and cute read.

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I loved Guillory's first book and this one was not a disappointment! It was just as much fun to read as The Wedding Date! Guillory writes such sweet contemporary romances that also have current issues in them. I love her writing!

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This book is an absolute delight. I would dock it half a star for the sex scenes all fading to black just as they’re getting really good, but that half star is more than earned back near the end.

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The Proposal is the sensational, charming, warm, sexy follow up to Jasmine Guillory’s The Wedding Date. While this novel contains characters from that story, you do not need to read that book to absolutely, thoroughly enjoy this one. I speak from experience.

Nikole (Nik) Paterson is not enjoying spending the day at the ballpark while her boyfriend and his friends bond over warm beer, pretzels and sports - but it’s her man’s birthday and this is what he wanted. She’s vaguely wondering if their five-month relationship has run its course when he tells her to look at the score board. Tearing her eyes away from her phone, she glances up to see the words, “NICOLE: I LOVE YOU. WILL YOU MARRY ME?” When he drops down on one knee and proposes, her slack jawed mouth closes just enough to form the word no. As her boyfriend and his buddies stomp off, calling her various names as they depart, she finds herself the object of horrified, angry looks from the 45,000 other people attending the game.

Carlos Ibarra can’t help but admire the courage of the young woman two rows in front of him who has the gumption to turn down the proposal of the overly tan dude with the man bun. When he sees said young lady about to be mobbed by news station crews, he and his sister Angela rush to her rescue. Feigning a friendship they don’t have, they ooh and ahh over finding her on such an unlikely day and help her skedaddle out of the park. They give her a ride to a nearby bar, where Nik meets up with friends and invites the Ibarras to join her in a drink. They do, and Carlos is impressed all over again, this time with Nik’s wit and humor. But just after a girl has had a very public break up is not the time to hit on her.

Nik is impressed with Carlos as well. Not only is he handsome, he shows himself to be a kind, caring gentleman. When its clear she needs some alone time with her friends, he and Angela leave, but not before he covers the tab.

He figures the only other chance he’ll have to see her again is if he hangs out at the bar, hoping to catch sight of her. She figures this is the totally wrong time to get involved with another man. But one thank you email later and they’re sharing food and fun at a local Thai eatery.  Funny texts and cupcake dates quickly follow. Before they know it, they’re seeing each other two or three times a week.  It’s been said that a simple rule of dating is that rebound relationships never last but aren’t the rules meant to be broken?

Like Nik after the spontaneous proposal from a man who couldn’t even spell her name, I found myself speechless after finishing this book. Unlike Nik, my shock was from my overwhelmingly positive emotions. There was so much I loved about this novel I could easily write a top 100 list of reasons to buy it, but I will try to limit this review to the top five.

One thing the author gets all kinds of kudos for is the best depiction of an alpha female/beta male pairing I have ever seen in romance. EVER. Nik is strong, independent, and tough as nails. A lot of writers end up making alpha females as much of a jerk as her alpha male jerk counterpart but that doesn’t happen here. Nikole is a kind person who has good friends and a caring, compassionate heart. What makes her alpha is her take charge nature and that she knows the difference between someone asking for a favor and someone taking advantage. She’s always up for the former, she’s never down with the latter.

Just the right combination of open-hearted and savvy, Carlos is beta male perfection.  He is willing to let others set the pace on most things but asserts himself when he needs to. He’s okay with being vulnerable to hurt in order to further a relationship along and isn’t afraid to do the heavy lifting in the romance department, but he doesn’t tolerate abuse. I loved everything about him; even his flaws and mistakes are endearing.

The characters, therefore, are perfect not in the sense that they don’t have flaws but that the author skillfully uses even those flaws to move her plot along and endear her creations to the reader. Another absolutely fabulous factor in this alpha-beta pairing is that Nik has a lot of back history with bad relationships. She’s had plenty of losers in her past but unlike many a romance alpha who uses that as an excuse to be cold, distant, untrusting, and unkind to everyone of the opposite sex whom they meet she is friendly, open and fun-loving with her dates. She gives relationships a chance and treats everyone with an open-minded fairness which is just so, so refreshing to see. I now want to go back through my reading history, grab by the hair every ‘wounded’ alpha who punished his new love for his exes’ mistakes, drag them to Nikole’s feet and say, “Learn from her!”.

And yet in spite of all this character perfection, the author is still able to find room for them to grow, become better and bring out the best in each other. Insert fan girl squeal here- that is so awesome! I love it when two great people become even better together.

The relationship building is out of this world fantastic and I just about swooned every time these two were together. I loved how fun their encounters are, how well they get along, how they are able to talk through simple problems and not make issues of them. Seriously, this is the best depiction I have seen of modern romance in a contemporary in a long, long time. Everyone wants the relationship these two have.

The secondary characters are handled beautifully. They lend the exact right amount of balance to the growing romance between Carlos and Nik and help add depth to them as individuals. Nik’s two gal pals know her, love her, support her and guide her. They help her laugh and when she gets lost, they help her find her way. Carlos’ family does the same for him. This is a bit odd to say, but I knew that if the two of them didn’t make it as a couple, they would be all right as individuals because their support networks are so awesome. Too many times the hero and heroine become so totally enmeshed that there is no room for them to stay individuals, but that isn’t the case here. They’re stronger together, better together but they’re fine as individuals, too.

Funny, warm and romantic The Proposal is a fantastic, not to be missed romance. I recommend it to anyone who loves – or even just likes – contemporary romance novels.

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The Proposal is such a sweet and cute read!

When I first saw this book, I was in insta-love with the cover. I honestly didn't even care <i> what</i> the book was about, I just knew I had to read it because I was so in love with the cover. And thank goodness I was fortunate enough to receive an ARC of this book because it was SO GOOD.

Nikole is a character that gives zero shits if you like her or not. She's kind of cold, especially when it comes to men and she's very upfront in general about not wasting her time on people she doesn't care about. I feel like Nikole is a character that people will either love or hate because she can be very stubborn and when she reacts to things sometimes, she can be harsh. Luckily for me, I loved her but even though I loved her she definitely frustrated me a time or two. But I really do love how much she strives to be confident in herself and how she struggles with letting people in because of stuff that's happened to her in the past. Her being cold and stand-offish with people really makes sense and I could understand where she was coming from. I also like that we got to see some character development not only with her but Carlos as well. They learn from their mistakes and they grow as characters which I really enjoy in books.

Carlos is honestly the cutest hero ever. I loved him <i>so much</i>! He's definitely a carer, the one who wants to take care of everyone and protect everyone from harm. He's also someone who shies away from love and relationships but it's not because he's incapable or unwilling to love someone but rather the love he has for his family is his first priority and he won't let anything else get in the way of that. Honestly, the scenes with his family and reading and seeing how much he cares for his family made me so soft. I loved each relationship he had with them and seeing that dynamic on page was so great. I also loved his friendship with Drew and Alexa, two characters from the author's debut novel, that I haven't read yet, but definitely need to move up my TBR because they were awesome.

I loved how Carlos and Nikole's relationship started off as friends and then slowly they begin feeling more for each other. This is a great case of friends-to-lovers, or more accurately friends into friends with benefits into holy crap I'm in love with you lovers. I loved seeing them spend time together and be vulnerable with each other in ways they'd never been with anyone else. It was also super amusing to me that they kept insisting that they just spent so much time with each other because they were "friends". However, this is also where I have my one complaint about the book. I feel like the transition from "friends who are hooking up and having a great time together" to "I want to spend the rest of my life with you" felt a little rushed. I loved seeing them during that time where they clearly had feelings for each other but hadn't realized it and were just enjoying each other's time but I thought that the "I love you" parts came out of left-field (look at me using baseball terminology LOL) and I didn't necessarily feel like they were there yet. Do I think they have feelings for each other? Definitely. But for some reason that didn't translate to love for me. At least not yet. Maybe because they haven't been together long enough? I'm honestly not sure however, I can say that despite feeling like that, I do feel like they will be together forever and I can see them having that HEA and being together long term.

If all the things above haven't made you want to pick this book up yet, here's a list of some great things to love about this book:

🔹A hero who likes to cook

🔹Diversity (both with POC characters and LGBT+ rep who come in all shapes and sizes)

🔹Talks about important topics like death, abusive relationships (verbal, emotional abuse mostly), feminism, and so much more

🔹Girl friendship scenes that are DA BOMB!

Honestly I feel like I could go on and on about how cute and great this book was. I definitely recommend it to fans of Contemporary Romances and I can't wait to check out more from this author!

<b><i>*Received a copy in exchange for an honest review. Thank you!!</b></i>

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Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher (Berkley) for the free e-copy of The Proposal. All opinions expressed below are my own.

Synopsis:
Every girl dreams of a grand public proposal...right? Well not Nikole. Especially not with her casual boyfriend. Especially while at a baseball game she doesn't want to attend. And especially when he doesn't even spell her name correctly on the screen! So starts The Proposal. Needless to say, Nikole does NOT accept (I promise that is not a spoiler), but she is luckily rescued by a couple of other fans. The Proposal tell's Nik's story after the proposal goes totally wrong.

Review:
I read Jasmine Guillory's The Wedding Date this past winter and found it totally charming, so I was excited to see The Proposal as an option on Netgalley. Thankfully, Berkley approved me for an e-copy of The Proposal, which is the same format that I read The Wedding Date.

I think you'll love all of the cute (and steamy) shenanigans in The Proposal. Plus, the main characters love food (in this one we have tons of gourmet cupcakes and Mexican food!). I especially loved that Nik was independent and didn't need a man in her life to feel complete. I also adored that Carlos was so close with his family and was an awesome cook (swoon!). Plus, our favorite couple from The Wedding Date makes an appearance!

I am quickly falling in love with contemporary romance. I love the sweet couples going through every day problems, but ultimately finding love. I love the new trend of independent women and even role reversals (think Kiss Quotient). Plus, I'll admit it, I love the occasional steamy romance scene. So publishers, pick more of these titles! Oh, and go ahead and send me a copy when you do!

I would have to rate The Proposal a strong 3.5/5 (rounded up to 4) stars. I enjoyed the story and really liked the characters, but it was simply missing that something extra for me. That being said, I think fans of The Wedding Date and Kiss Quotient will adore The Proposal. I sincerely hope this is a new trend and we'll see more and more books like this being published.

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The Proposal by Jasmine Guillory
Nikole Paterson a smart, hip, freelance journalist, has been dating gorgeous actor Fisher for five months. When he asks her to attend a Dodgers game for his birthday, she sucks it up and goes along thinking maybe it is time to end this relationship because they don’t have much in common. But Fisher surprises her with a marriage proposal. On the Jumbotron! Nik is shocked and unsure what to say, so Fisher and his bros storm off leaving her to deal with the waiting press. Carlos Ibarra and his sister Angie witness the entire scene and swoop in to rescue Nik and get her home. The opening scene was hysterical
What follows is a rebound hook-up turned relationship but we don’t want to have a relationship novel that has its sweet moments but lacked depth and made it difficult to invest in the characters.
Ultimately, the novel was a little hollow and the characters a little shallow. Carlos --Hispanic pediatrician, and Nik-- Stamford educated journalist with a great pedigree, have great chemistry but each is blind to what makes a relationship and how they could benefit from one. They spend an annoying amount of time having great dates and then thinking about how they are sending the wrong message to the other about the status of their non-relationship. It was all rather wearying. And a chapter towards the end where Nik interviews a woman who was in an abusive relationship felt wildly out of place in the narrative.
Perhaps this is the way some folks structure their relationships and I am sure many will identify with this couple but I didn’t find their journey romantic at all. However, there is a great deal of positive girl power here as well as a few sweet moments and I am sure fans of Guillory’s first novel will find this one appealing as well. 3 stars.
I received an ARC of this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

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An MLB scoreboard proposal with her name spelled wrong! And she doesn’t like baseball, his man bun, or his bros… and it’s only been 5 months. Luckily Carlos Ibarra (a fun supporting character from Guillory’s fabulous and popular The Wedding Date) manages to swoop in and get her out before the media can descend on her when her now-ex storms away. And Carlos keeps being there for her until their no-strings affair starts to feel like a big and scary relationship. The story has humor, heart, and a lot of fun food. I might have liked it a smidge more than The Wedding Date, which I loved!

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