While I can't say I'm fond of the title, anything that James W. Hall writes is sure to be a great read. Leaving Thorn and his ragtag group of misfits behind in the Florida Keys, Hall introduced us to Harper McDaniel in "When They Come for You".

The second McDaniel book picks up where the first began, she is out for revenge when the man who killed her husband and infant son is released from custody on a legal technicality. This time, Harper is determined to see that he is put behind bars or 6 feet under. What she does not realize is the depth, breadth and scope of the corruption in this case. She will put her life, that of her grandfather's and her brother's in danger. And there may be no way out.

James Hall is my literary hero and while I miss Thorn terribly, his new character is a fully rounded individual with guts and a lot of brains. I can't wait to see what's next on her agenda.

Thankyou to NetGalley. Thomas and Mercer and the author, James W Hall, for the opportunity to read a digital copy of When You Can't stop in exchange for a honest, unbiased opinion.
I thought this book was well written with engaging characters. As I had not read the first book in the series, When They Come For You, I was a little lost at the beginning. Would definately recommend that you read it first before you tackle When You Can't Stop.

Synopsis/blurb....

One woman’s quest for revenge, a dangerous international conspiracy, and ruthless corporations intertwine in this page-turner from bestselling author James W. Hall.

Despite Harper McDaniel’s best efforts, the man responsible for the murder of her husband and son was exonerated thanks to some slick legal wrangling. This blatant injustice has only made Harper more determined than ever to bring down the culprit. Her ammunition? Incriminating information about his olive oil operations in Italy. But the clues that she follows are leading her into the depths of a corrupt plot that is more poisonous and far-reaching than she realizes. And more dangerous, too, because her enemy is prepared for her pursuit.

Accompanied by her brother and mobster grandfather, Harper treks across Spain from Seville to a medieval castle, home to a successful olive farmer who is one of Harper’s closest allies. Shadowed every step of the way by a ruthless assassin, Harper is moving ever deeper into enemy territory—and questioning whom she can really trust on this personal path of justice and revenge.
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My take.....

My first James W. Hall book for a few years and my first time reading him where pretty much all the action takes place outside of Florida, in this case Spain and Italy. It's the second book with Harper McDaniel as the lead and though it worked well enough on its own, my enjoyment probably suffered a bit from not having read the first book - When They Come For You. My own fault, as I downloaded it on Net Galley then never actually got around to reading it.

McDaniel is hurting. She's grieving for her husband and son, probably murdered in the first book I guess. Revenge on Lester Albion, head of a huge global corporation and the man responsible for their death is her sole raison d'etre for living. It's a lone wolf task, as her brother, Nick and grandfather, Sal are side-lined initially as she decides to go it alone. However, as events unfold they become more and more involved.

We open with Harper undergoing some martial arts training in Spain, preparing herself physically and mentally for the inevitable confrontation further down the line. While she's involved in this, we have her tracked by Gerda, a former Olympic medal-winning decathlete now-turned assassin. Gerda is under instruction from someone at Albion, where her mother is the number two to kingpin, Lester to keep tabs on Harper.

Gerda has her own complex issues to deal with - sexually abused by her father, until she rebelled and killed him - her mother all the while aware of the abuse, but unwilling to act on Gerda's behalf. She's emotionally stunted and as begets a former Olympian, she's ultra-competitive and driven. She's ruthless, efficient and cold. Effectively an automaton - point her in a direction, whisper in her ear and watch her go and do her master's bidding. Unknown to her, she's also the object of head honcho Lester Albion affections.

Lester Albion himself is a weird one. Fixated on Gerda and determined to morph from a puny physical specimen into a man worthy of her attention. The regular blood swaps-cum-tranfusions with his young daughter are aimed towards that goal, despite the possible detriment to his daughter's health. He's infatuated and distracted.

Harper is investigating Albion Industries recent diversion into the olive oil industry in the hope of luring her nemesis out of his lair and executing her own brand of justice on him, having lost faith in the authorities ability or interest in achieving a legal solution.

Gerda eventually gets orders to eliminate Harper and there are several efforts to close her deal. All thwarted and usually at a cost to some innocent bystanders. She's a whirlwind/wrecking ball is Gerda and responsible for a swift sharp increase in mortality rates in our Mediterranean settings. Our heroine, Harper dodging assassination while investigating wrong-doing and scheming herself makes for quite an exciting and interesting read.

I enjoyed the back-drop of olive growing and the micro-potted biography of the industry's evolution and its importance both culturally and economically to olive growing regions of both Spain and Italy, with the potential for corruption both with EU agricultural funds and the organised criminal involvement in fake extra virgin oil. I never knew it could be so lucrative.

Hall packs quite a lot into these 330-odd pages .... revenge, corruption, scheming, unsavoury family secrets, poverty - fuelling ambition, love rivals, a rotten to the core corporation, some uneasy insiders, olive-growing, pursuit, murder, a chicken, a rekindled romance, arson, neck scarf strangulation - more than once, fisticuffs, Mob bodyguards, hospitals, hotels, olive groves and secret burials, trust issues, a sick daughter, suspected betrayal, confrontation and eventual resolution.

I did like it. Not sure that I would have been heart-broken had events turned out differently, but I was keen to go where Hall took us. I wanted a resolution however that transpired and I got one. I enjoyed the back-story and the various family history and dirt of all our players, not just that of Harper and her clan.

There's plenty of action throughout and elements of humour in some of our confrontations and exchanges and I liked the setting. Not too bad overall, though undoubtedly I would have appreciated it more had I read the earlier book with Harper. My fault for coming at it ass-backwards.

3.5 from 5

James W. Hall has written 20 plus books over the years. I'm more familiar with his long-running series character - Thorn and a Florida setting, though I haven't read anything from him since 2010 when I started compiling a reading record. Hall has also excelled as a poet and short-story writer.

Read in October, 2018
Published - 2018
Page count - 333
Source - Net Galley review copy
Format - ePub file read on laptop

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After being thwarted in her previous attempts to bring the person responsible for the death of her husband and son to justice, Harper McDaniel must resort to new tactics. When she discovers that their killer is a major player in the olive oil industry and plans to commit a fraudulent sale of his olive tree orchards, she thinks she’s found the method of her revenge. She decides to expose the details of his planned fraud but unknown to her, the man she’s targeting is more than prepared for her.

When You Can’t Stop by James W. Hall is the 2nd in what appears to be just a two-book series. Having not read the preceding book, I was a little lost as to the backstory and would recommend reading When They Come For You first. That said, I did enjoy the book and would recommend it to fans of the thriller genre. The plot is well conceived and the characters I found to be quite believable. I would give this book 3/5 stars.

*A copy of this ebook is the only consideration received in exchange for this review.*

Faced paced somewhat implausible revenge fantasy with a good female protagonist in Harper. This one mixes a global conspiracy, a quest for justice (of lethal sorts), and international settings. Thanks to Netgalley for the ARC. Just because it wasn't my cup of tea doesn't mean you won't like it. It's not deep (nor is it meant to be) but it's plot driven and might be just the thing if you're facing a plane ride.

I was somewhat disappointed in this book as compared to the first one in the series. The motive for revenge on Harper's part is understandable, but the means her opponent goes to for her daughter's welfare is a little far-fetched. However the fight scenes are this story's saving grace plus Harper will let nothing get in her way to extract justice for the deaths of her son and husband.

This is a good book, with a good plot, good flow and good characters from an experienced writer. Unfortunately there are a few factual mistakes, but all in all it's a very good read.

I highly recommend this book. This was the first book I read of Mr. Hall's but . Thanks to NetGalley and Thomas and Mercer for the advance copy . I did have trouble getting into the first few chapters but stick with it and it grabs you.

When You Can't Stop is the second exciting fast-paced book in the Harper McDaniel series written by author James W. Hall. I highly recommend it, but read When They Come for You first. Thanks to NetGalley and Thomas and Mercer for the advance copy.

As a big fan of Mr. Hall’s Thorn series, I feel like I missed a little by not reading the first book in this new series featuring Harper McDaniel. The writing style, as usual is top notch with excellent character developments and solid plot development. Excellent research is once again evident as I was transported to the Iberian peninsula for one woman’s quest to avenge family murders facing many complex obstacles along the way.

Harper McDaniel is distraught that her husband and son’s killer has literally gotten away with murder. She decides to take matters into her own hands, and follows the killer to Europe, but she’s not alone, she has her brother and her grandfather, who just happens to be a mobster with her. Hall is a polished author, who knows how to spin a tale and hold readers in suspense