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Soniah Kamal writes great young female heroes. I liked the characters and the urgency of the story, and I felt Kamal built up her writing style a lot in this book. I think I'd recommend to teens who like love, romance, self-sufficiency, and great writing.

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A modern day tale of Pride and Prejudice. What's not to love? I went into this book honestly not knowing what to expect at all. Pride and Prejudice is one of my favorite classics, so I was afraid this would disappoint. This book is full of parallels, and the author does such an excellent job weaving the intricacies of Pakistani life and customs. It's definitely a must-read if you are a fan of Jane Austin.

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Wow, this one blew me away! If you are a Pride and Prejudice fan, don’t miss this one. If you aren’t, don’t miss this one. If you are a fan of diverse, multi-cultural reads, don’t miss this one. Moreover, if you are a fan of impeccable storytelling, Unmarriageable is a book not to be missed!

Unmarriageable is set in modern day Pakistan. The Binat family consists of five sisters and their parents. A scandal erupts that causes the family to lose their fortune and any chance at desirable marriages for their daughters.

Alys is the second sister in line, and she’s a pragmatist. She teaches English literature to school-aged girls who are unlikely to further their educations and will likely marry young. Of import to her teaching is Jane Austen because she believes this will inspire her students to dream.

One day an invitation arrives for a fancy wedding, one the likes of which the village has never seen before. Mrs. Binat is hard at work getting her daughters in shape for possible bachelors attending the wedding

The oldest sister, Jena, has attracted an eligible bachelor, but his friend, none other than Valentine Darsee, is not a fan of the family, and Alys overhears him saying so. As the wedding continues, Jena awaits a proposal while Alys becomes more interested in Darsee...

Unmarriageable is steeped in the culture of a Pakistani family. I especially loved the dialog between the sisters and with their mother. The sayings really added to the authenticity of the story. The characters are so well-developed and I loved the comparisons to Pride and Prejudice; so many connections and Easter eggs of commonalities to discover.

Unmarriageable is a smart, evocative retelling of a classic that reads just like a modern classic. Everything about the story is perfection, intriguing, and completely enthralling. It was enjoyable and engaging from start to finish and receives my highest recommendation.

Thank you to Random House Ballantine for the ARC. All opinions are my own.

*Since it’s early, I will add my review links to my blog and Goodreads closer to publication date, once the links are live.

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The library is chock full of Pride and Prejudice inspired stories. This is one of the best and should appeal to readers/viewers who enjoyed recent ethnic rom-coms such as Crazy Rich Asians. Soniah Kamal hews remarkably closely to the outlines of Jane Austen's original story while translating the tale to contemporary Pakistan where demands of traditional family marriage customs clash with the aspirations of modern young adults living in a milieu full of cell phones, social media and new ideas about relationships.

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There are FAR TOO MANY retold versions of this story. This is one of the rare ones that is worthy and fun.

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I think this was a fairly good remake of Pride and Prejudice. The culture and environment of Pakistan is a great setting to recreate the story. It would be very hard to set the book in modern day England or the U.S. or most other first world countries.

I loved Alys and Jena. Mrs. Binat and Lady and Mari were suitably appalling, as was Wickaam. Hammy and Sammy were pretty awful, too, but they do run their own company, which is an interesting update. Nona and Nisar are lovely, which is true to the original. And Annie is surprisingly much more charming in this update. Sherry is annoying in this version, but her husband Kaleen is less obsequious.

However, I was not as enamored of Darsee as I was of the original character. He seemed more crass and less understated. And the book takes more of a direct approach by explaining outright the character's motivations and actions, instead of just implying them subtly and sarcastically as Jane Austen does in the original. I also hated that his house is called Buckingham Palace. That is really tacky.

I did like that the update involved educated women and that men who were truly enlightened and kind were men who would allow them to work or do good works. So overall I liked the themes and I enjoyed learning about the culture. I just didn't like some of the ways that the characters were drawn.

Also, as far as I could tell, no one ever tells Alys that Darsee is engaged to Annie. She just suddenly starts talking about it. I know this is a plotline in the original book, but there needs to be a mention of it in this version.

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Thank you to NetGalley, Soniah Kamal, and Random House Publishing Group Ballantine Books for the ARC of this novel.

Pride and Prejudice is one of my favorite books, so I knew I'd love "Unmarriageable". It's a fantastic story that keeps your interest throughout the whole book. I'd definitely read this again on publication day!

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This was an interesting read with a fascinating setting that ultimately fell too short for me to recommend. While Soniah Kamal is definitely a talented writer there was a glaring issue I had with her retelling of "Pride and Prejudice." Her book exists in a world where "Pride and Prejudice" not only already exists but is frequently brought up by its Elizabeth Bennett English literature teacher Alys Binat. I could never get away from the bizarre fact that none of the characters, all of whom are dopplegangers for P & P characters down to their nearly identical names, ever once notice that their lives perfectly mirror the events in P&P.

Had Kamal simply pretended this was the first time this story was being told I might have been better able to suspend disbelief. Unfortunately there's also the problem of the plot and characters adhering so closely to the original story that there's simply nothing new here. The setting is certainly beautiful, different and well described but its just not enough to say anything new with an already very frequently rebooted story.

I can't help but recall Curtis Settenfield's infinitely more fun "Eligible" which updated the story to modern times but also embraced the idea that these characters would behave differently, appear differently and make very different choices were they to find themselves in our world but still managed to stay wonderfully true to the spirit of Ms. Austen.

Sadly I just didn't like this one.

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I’m a sucker for a good Pride & Prejuduce retelling. This one did not disappoint. I really enjoyed reading this book. The characters, setting and updated story were fun and interesting. I also enjoyed the many references to the original and Jane Austen. Very well done!

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Why do we need another retelling of Pride and Prejudice? Yes, a third P is added, Pakistan, but it still lacks originality and the reader just makes the parallels and comparisons as it is read. I am uncertain that it even reflects all of Pakistani culture, rather strains to fit into the mold of P and P.

Better to reread the original and watch the A&E version and read original books about real life in East Asia. There are so many that are beautifully written and authentic, I wouldn’t waste my time on a copy.

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It's Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice but with a Pakistani twist and it is delightful!

Alys Binat and her four sisters (Jena, Qitty, Mari, and Lady) live in Dilipabad with their parents, Mr. and Mrs. Binat. Alys and Jena are teachers at the local school where Alys frequently gets reprimanded for encouraging her female students to pursue their studies and delay marriage.

After a family scandal that cause them to lose their fortune and stature in society, the Binats are surprised and excited to receive an invitation to the social event of the season-the NadirFiede wedding. It is at this wedding that they meet Fahad "Bungles" BIngla, an eligible (and wealthy bachelor) and his friend Valentine Darsee. Mrs. Binat immediately makes it her mission to see Bungles and Jena married.

Anyone who's read Pride and Prejudice knows the rest of this story. I absolutely loved the modern takes on the classic. Pride and Prejudice is part of Alys' reading curriculum for her students, so the book is referred to quite frequently (getting close to breaking that fourth wall), sometimes in a comical way.

I think my only almost-but-not-really-criticism of the book would be the constant descriptions of the outfits and the meals. There were full paragraphs devoted to each, but I had no idea what any of the words meant and could not picture what the characters were wearing or what they were eating. Not really a complaint, because I could have just looked up what the words meant.

This was such a fun retelling and I would highly recommend for anyone who loves Pride and Prejudice!

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Thanks to NetGalley for providing a review copy.

Pride and Prejudice in Pakistan! What a hoot! Author Kamal provided so much information about current customs and dating and marriage conventions in Pakistan. I was absolutely fascinated and entertained. There are versions of Cinderella from almost every country and every genre in the world (believe me, being a school librarian, I know!). Why not a Pride and Prejudice?

Making a good marriage in class-conscious Pakistan is obviously a very important thing, not just for the bride !and groom and their immediate families, but even their extended families are blessed or cursed by the wealth and standing of the bride's choice. The wedding costumes are fodder for gossip by all who know and know of the bride and family.

To be an independent woman is not thought a virtue, but our Alys had no qualms about her choices in life. Her more quiescent older sister Jena tried to follow the rules, and they backfired on her. The other three sisters each had unique personalities of their own..

It was delightful to read how Ms. Kamal wove the P & P story in the Pakistani culture. Bravo!

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First a disclaimer, I am a major Austen fan AND I have been to Pakistan numerous times AND was myself married in Lahore in 1987. I think that qualifies me as an expert and I felt like an insider as I read this book. This story is so amazing. A charming retelling of Pride and Prejudice. Themes such as we find in classic books, translate across cultures and times. Classics are timeless whether it's a classic book or a classic dress! I cannot love the character names enough. Absolutely creative play on words. I had not read P and P in many years, so I refreshed my memory of the characters on Wikipedia. Ms. Kamal is spot on. The dialog just made the story even more complete. At least for me, I could hear the voices in my head, while reading. The idioms used are things that my husband and his family use, so I can assure you, this dialog is genuine. The dialog helped the story leap off the page. There is no doubt, Pakistan is a marriage market. I have seen the process in its various forms and Unmarriageable has captured it to a T. I hope that this story will also open reader's eyes to a Pakistan not often presented on our skewed news sources. Bravo Ms. Kamal on a gorgeous retelling that will provide an authentic glimpse of Pakistani culture and society.

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Pride and Prejudice is one of my favorite classics and Jane Austen novel, so when I received this ARC, I couldn’t have been more excited! Soniah Kamal did a fantastic job retelling this beloved story.
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I love that this is a retelling in a modern day Pakistan setting. I think it takes a nice twist on a classic tale. I will say I feel like it was too similar to the original plot. Even the names were changed to be very close to Austen’s characters. I think I would have enjoyed it a bit more if there was a little more creativity.
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That being said, I do still think that this is a fantastic read. Again, Pride and Prejudice is one of my favorites, so even though it was a close retelling, I think the setting and modern twist made it a great story! If you are a fan of Jane Austen, I would pick this book up!

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I'm game for any & all retellings of Pride & Prejudice and this one set in Pakistan did not disappoint. I can easily see it being very popular with book clubs & I've been describing it to my coworkers as this year's Crazy Rich Asians. The food descriptions were scrumptious and I had a genuinely good time reading it. I'd definitely recommend it to my patrons.

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The Binats are a Pakistani family with five daughters the second eldest Alys teaches English Literature. In certain cultures it is still common for your great grandmother to remember that your cousin's future husband's grandfather stole mangoes from her tree when he was growing up. Family connections, gossip, and class can make or break a family in Diplabad. This is an interesting take on Pride and Prejudice where the traditional roles of women and the progress of the current era meet. In places like Pakistan there is are cultural mores, tradition and modern progress butting heads and women are trying to navigate these currents. Alys and Darsee meet and are spun away and together by their pride, prejudice, class and miscommunication. Can true love prevail in the face of such powerful forces. Pride and Prejudice is a love story there is always a happy ending.

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A fun addition to all the Pride and Prejudice retellings. The Pakistani aspect is interesting. It closely parallels Austen's time in that women are often proposed to without ever really having time to get to know the man. I enjoyed the book and recommend it if you, like I, can't resist a chance to revisit Pride and Prejudice.

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What an enjoyable version of Pride and Prejudice. The Binat family were a mixture of personalities. Mrs. Binat has one mission and it is to see her five daughters married to rich eligible men and she is not subtle about it. Jena is kind and generous, Alys is fearless and outspoken, Qitty is an artist, and holds her head up no matter that her sister Lady always puts her down due to Qitty’s weight. Mari is religious and wants to make sure everyone goes to heaven and Lady who just wants to have a good time. Of all the sisters, I liked Alys the most. She cared about her family and was very protective yet she had her blinders on about certain things and people. Sisters Sammy and Hammy were so irritating. I think fans of the Jane Austen Pride and Prejudice will enjoy this version set in Pakistan. I found it an interesting take on the original story with lots of laughter and touching moments.

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I am not much for modern retellings of Pride and Prejudice but I enjoyed this one. It was witty and opened a new perspective, makes you realize that there are Mr. Darcy's all over the world.

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I have heard it said often that life is to short for a book that you don’t like. Therefore, life is too short for this book. I really did try, but it was just so slow. Combine that with crude language and I’m just not interested.

Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC.

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