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It took me considerable time to read this book. One of the reasons is the editing. There were some unfinished sentences and soem other errors as well. The other reason is the complexity of the story. There are lots of characters with their own storylines. Sometimes I found it hard to follow that many skipping between characters.

What I liked was the world-building. There is magic in this world and technology and vehicles which are part sentient beings. I found this pretty cool.
It would be nice and useful if there was some background info on how thelemas work.

Thank you to NetGalley, the publisher and Marushia Dark for my copy.

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I can't say if liked this book or not. It's quite slow and philosophic, with long internal debate.
The world building is interesting and the characters are well developed.
I think some good editing could help and the book'd more interesting and enjoyable.
Many thanks to the publisher and Netgalley for this ARC

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I am trying to figure out why this book is classified as YA/Teen. It is not a YA/Teen book at all. The main characters are adults, it discusses adult themes and there is a sex/torture scene that is definitely not YA appropriate.

The synopsis of the book leads the reader to believe that this book will be more of a sci-fi/fantasy novel but it reads likes a Business Entities textbook that got mixed up at the publisher with World religions book and some really bad fan fiction. It is like they took the ruling in 558 U.S. 310 (2010) that established that corporations are people to an extreme in the novel.

Do not bother with this book unless you are into disjointed plots that introduce random characters throughout the book and read like a college textbook.

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