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His Undercover Virgin

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I am Loving these Super Sexy, Sweet, Dirty Bits Sorority Secrets series. Eli and Ash are amazing characters to read. I Loved the story and I Never wanted it to End.

Grab this Story now and Read it.

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It was a short read and yet filled with LOTS of sexiness:) Eli and Ash set the pages on fire. Yes, it was insta, sweet and sexy all rolled into the perfect quick pick me up afternoon read!

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3.5 stars. I liked this but I feel like it was missing something. I had a hard time with the deception, Ash was pretty clueless and he seduced her for his own needs. It was hot and steamy though.

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3-3.5 Stars

I liked this one, but I had a hard time with the deception. I got where Eli was coming from, but Ash was completely clueless while he basically seduced her while hoping to get information on the illegal charity selling their virginity.

One thing about this series, the sex is incredibly, unbelievably steamy!! Even though each book is by a different author, they obviously have their own writing style with the sex scenes. And they are all smoking hot!

But in the end, it was a cute, sweet read with a HFN.

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His Undercover Virgin , left me underwhelmed . It was missing something; I didn't connect with the characters and they were like wet cardboard.

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Not exactly the route I would have chosen if I was participating in an auction to help an injured first responder, but that very auction is what brings Eil and Ash together. A quick but sexy read.

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Loved this story about Eli and Ash. Eli is supposed to be investigating a possible prostitution ring as Ash and other college sorority girls are auctioning off their virginity. He doesn't expect to fall for her and this is when the lines his job and his personal life are blurred. A great, quick read from M. Never Love the series as well!

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This read was so simple, and I thought it really lacked any... well... thought, will not be picking up this series again unfortunately.

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His Undercover Virgin is incredible and I just couldn’t stop smiling nor reading whenever these Dirty Bits books come out. I absolutely love them and this one is no different. The chemistry is so electric, it flies off the pages. It’s steamy, passionate, and full of deep love. The characters are going to knock your socks off. The series of books just get better and better with every book released.

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Reviews by the Wicked Reads Review Team

Mary – ☆☆☆☆
Eli is an undercover officer trying to find out who is controlling the auction selling the virtues of some of the young women from the local college. He has his eyes set on the dark-haired beauty and he hopes she will tell him what he wants to know.

Ash is trying to help her sorority sisters raise money to help rebuild the animal shelter that burnt down and to also help a sister's firefighter brother who was injured in the fire. She meets Eli and is drawn to him. She tries to hurry things along, but Eli wants to take things slow, it is her first time after all.

Will Eli learn the truth? What happens when Ash learns the truth about who Eli really is? Will they move on after the truth is reveled?

I have read a few of the other stories in this series and I think this one is my favorite so far. It is an insta-love story and is hot and heavy most of the time, but it is a good story.

If you are looking for a quickie to read, then this series is for you. I hope you like it too.


Shannan – ☆☆☆☆
3.5 Stars

Eli is working undercover to figure out who is behind the auction of college girls' virginity. The only way to figure out who is behind it is to go undercover and bid on one of the girls. Something about Ash's beauty draws Eli to her. When she meets him at the apartment, she's more gorgeous than he thought possible. He can't take something from Ash based on a lie, but he can't not have her. Will she still want him when she finds out there's more to him than she knows?

His Undercover Virgin is a quick, super sex-heavy read. If you are looking for a steamy quick in-between read, this is the series for you.

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And here marks the next series in Carina Press' Dirty Bits. This one is all about a sorority who are a bunch of good and caring girls, only wanting to help one of their sisters as her brother, a fire fighter, was burned in a fire at an animal shelter. To help pay his medical bills as well as help the shelter, these girls are going to auction off their virginity. Yeah, that's right. THEIR VIRGINITY.

Is that even legal? Who cares, right? It's for charity! After I stopped rolling my eyes at the story prompt for these few books, I dug in and read them all in a day. Some better than others. Some of these girls aren't actually virgins, and some of the stories had me cringing. What they didn't have me doing was putting them down.

Yes, they're silly and sort of ridiculous, but I needed the escape they granted me so, here's to Carina Press and their Dirty Bits books. I will always pick them up, no matter what.

Eli and Ash... an undercover cop who is on the case of the very bad girls who are auctioning off their virginity! And yet, he totally goes there! Of course he goes there. He can't help himself. Ash has no idea, so of course there is drama. I guess at least there was a story with someone trying to stop this from a legal standpoint? Their story was probably my favorite, if only because Eli was trying to do the right thing.

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Steamy read... Eli, a police officer, investigating the sorority sisters auctioning off their virginity. Eli falls for Ash and has to lie to her in the beginning.

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Liar Liar, pants on fire. That's all I could think about while I read this...LOL

Ash is one of the sorority sisters who agreed to auction off their virginity to help raise money, helping an animal shelter and brother injured in a fire. What she didn't agree to was falling for the person who won with the highest bid. But that doesn't stop her heart, or her body from wanting what it wants.

Eli is an undercover cop. His task is to find out what's really going on with this auction. Are these girls in trouble? Is someone making them do it? But no matter how many times he reminds himself that he has a job to do, he just can't seem to keep his hands off Ash. And the further he falls for her, the more he remembers that this is just a job. Or can it be more?

Although the idea of the story is a good one. It was really hard for me to continue trusting Eli, even though he kept asking Ash to trust him. WE all know that he's working undercover, but he has this virgin literally eating out of his hands, deceiving her...and he knows it's wrong. I guess feeling are feelings. I liked that this was written in his POV. Usually we only read about the female POV when she's the one losing her V card. All in all, this was a good quick read.

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Eli was willing to jeopardize everything for his shot with Ash. He was lying to her but it was for the greater good and I enjoyed how the author illustrated his internal conflict. The poor guy! He and Ash were insanely attracted to each other and it was evident from their first meeting. I loved that there was barely any drama aside from the whole undercover thing. This story was short and sweet and freaking hot!

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I saw the series of Sorority Secrets about the girls auctioning of their virginity to help a sister in need. This one is about Eli and Ash. Eli has been sent on an undercover operation to find out who is trying to trafficking young girls via a website. There are sorority girls being offered at an online auction and Eli is determined to find out who is behind this. He meets Ash, who is one of the girls being on the website. But when he falls head over heals for Ash and she confides in him, why she is auctioning of her virginity voluntarily, he realizes he has to come clean about his assignment.
But as time passes, it becomes harder for Eli to tell the truth. If Ash finds out, will she ever be able to trust him again? A sweet and short story. Three out of five stars from me and a special thank you to Netgalley for providing the arc.

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3.25 stars. This was a pretty good book. This is Eli and Ash's book. Eli is a cop working undercover to investigate a college virginity auction. When sees Ash's picture up for auction on the website, he knows right away she is special. He "buys" her and spends time getting to know her, trying to gain her trust so she will expose who is running the ring. The fall for each other along the way.

His Undercover Virgin is a super short, super sexy book. There is not a ton of depth and the characters were only okay. But it was a good, quick easy read. A fantasy-come-to-life romantic erotica.

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His Undercover Virgin by M. Never is book Two in the Sorority Secrets series. This is the story of Eli and Ash. This can be a standalone book.
Eli is undercover officer who new assignment is to check out a possible prostitution ring that involves some college girls. Thinking a regular assignment is what coming up instead he gets a look at Ash and we see its gonna get personal. Ash steps up to the plate to do her part for the charity by being the next girl in her sorority but a surprise is in store for her.
Just enjoy this books that give you a chance to read a total fantasy romance that allows you to take a break from the stress of your life. Quick hot read!

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This review is based on an ARC.

Naturally, I hate novellas. I’m not sorry to admit I just find them lazy - unless they are a linked to a series. The books in The Dirty Bits Series currently do not lead to anything bigger.

Having said that, I knew that going into this and so I am 100% basing my review on the story... and there wasn’t really much of one if I’m being honest. Because it’s so short, you jump right in with both feet and from there nothing much really happens. For such a short story, I’m actually kind of angry at the amount of errors I found.

This isn’t my first Sorority Secrets book, but it’s the worst.

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Eli was put on the case to find out about the Virgin Auctions - he is posing as a buyer and falls head over heels for Ash. When he finds out about them and the reason they have been held, he will do everything he can to protect her and the girls. Then hope Ash will forgive him for deceiving her! Another great short story in this little Series. Easy to read, steamy and enjoyable.

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Another short story..Quickly read. Eli is an undercover cop who hears about the sorority virgin auction and he wants to find out who is involved. he bids for Ash and he is instantly in lust with her, and she seems so innocent that he wants to protect her. But what will happen when she finds out?

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