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Before the Broken Star

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A beautiful and enchanting fantasy world, complimented by a strong cast of females characters. We have high seas adventures, plenty of action to keep you guessing, a mysterious island, and a healthy does of mythology. Everly's clockwork heart makes her truly unique and her character development is flawless.
The plot, the characters, the world, it all blew me away. An absolute must read for fantasy readers.

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I really enjoyed this! I love the clockwork heart concept and female characters. Everly was everything I could want in a character. I will definitely be picking up the sequel.

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I thought the best part of the book was the last third or so, when it became more of a treasure hunt. The first part didn't hold my attention as well, and I never did really connect with Everley. Her behavior didn't make a lot of sense to me. A lot of the time she was rude to pretty much everyone, even to one person that treated her with a lot of consideration. She also seemed determined to view a few people as her friends, though they never did anything that wasn't serving their own interests.

The bad guy was interesting enough and easy to dislike. I would have been happier with the story without the threat of sexual violence against a child which came up a few times. The world building was good. The creation story lost me a little bit, but the story was easy to follow. For much of the story I felt more or less irritated and stressed, so, though I am a little curious about how the story ends, I'll probably wait til a boxed set of the series is available at a good price.

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There is just something about steampunk novels and watches that makes reading such an enjoyable experience. Combine that with the fantastical, and you have a winner. Such is the case with Before the Broken Star that follows one Everly Donovan, a girl with a clockworks heart on a quest for revenge.

Everly is a hard character, which is to say that the world she lives in has hardened her, left her for dead, her family taken from her in a single night. If not for the luck of her uncle stumbling upon her, she would be dead. Moreover, her clockwork heart restricts her, limits her ability to live a normal life. So, she is a bit bitter and angry. King makes sure, however, to ensure that the character is likable. Her Everly's attitude is not off-putting, but somewhat understandable, and as hard as her character may seem, she can show compassion, to be kind and thoughtful. She is also intelligent and grows throughout the novel. Her new experiences influence her greatly, changing her perception and allowing her to grow as a character. She never loses that sharp edge, of course, but that is okay because she would not be herself without it.

As for the story, what is interesting is the mythology of the novels and how they intermingle with the fairy tales the author has worked to create for the novel. It is a world of its own in this novel and makes for a fantastic read to see the fairy tales develop and come to life for the characters. It adds the fantasy into the story, creates tension and mystery, and makes for a fantastic read.

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Before the Broken Star was a fun adventure with a fierce protagonist, but I felt a disconnect from the story and it dragged on a bit for me.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for my ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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Fantasy is not usually my forte but I really enjoys this book. It was quick paced and kept me engaged the entire time.

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I enjoyed the authors previous series so I was excited to dive into this. It was pretty good. So many besties, so many strong females. I absolutely loved this book! Definitely a different fantasy read!

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Before the Broken Star is about Everley the only survivor of a tragic event where her family is murdered. On borrowed time she wastes no time in trying to expose Killian. Killian Markham is the one who killed her family and the one who wants her dead.

Overall the story is extremely entertaining and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I was provided this book free of charge in exchange for my honest opinion.

I recommend this book and give it a 4 Star ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Such an interesting read and start of a series. Even though the main character is young, she's an old soul. An interesting premise will have me reading the next one in this series.

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An intriguing read that combines steampunk and fairy tale elements together. The clockwork heart reminded me of jack and the cuckoo clock heart. Everly was an interesting character but I would have liked to have seen a little more depth from her. I don't mind a stubborn main character but I felt that she was so much so that her character growth was quite limited.
However I'm really hoping there will be a second book that does allow her that chance. The other characters were wonderful, such as the cat and fox characters. They were probably my favorite and the most fun to read.

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Firstly I'd like to thank netgalley for providing me with an E-ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.

I hadn't read anything by Emily R.King before but had heard quite a few good things about her prior books so jumped on this one when I saw it was available. Plus...look at that cover!!! It is one that just draws you in and makes you want to read it, no matter what the synopsis might read. And the naked hardback is just divine!

Anyway, to the actual book; it was good! Nothing incredibly amazing, but it was fun, had character growth, a good build up to the climax of the problem, and some great characters. I liked the really slow-burn of the romance and how it didn't take away from the main character's mission for revenge. I love that she grew with the story and with the other characters, and allowed her mission to change with all of that. The setting and pace was especially interesting and I really liked the feel of being on the island. The ending was great and left me smiling, ready for the next book.

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The blurb for this book had me hooked but I found myself quite disappointed from reading the book. Certain elements just didn't strike right with me like teaming up with the villiann but being shocked by the bad deeds at the end. Surely that was obvious. Obviously a popular read but not for me. Thank you for the opportunity to read this net gallery.

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-- Disclaimer: I received a review copy of this book via NetGalley in exchange for a honest review. Many thanks for the opportunity! --

This was a solid read. I really enjoyed the concept of Father Time as one of the 'real' deities and his involvement in the story. What starts out as a sort of steampunk story, with Everley and her clockwork heart becomes so much more. There are many influences from fairy tales, and the story sort of becomes a medium for the meta-discussion of such tales and their origins, which I loved.
The characters are fun, and don't fall too flat. My favourites were probably the Cat and the Fox, for their sassy friendship and loyalty, especially to each other. Everley annoyed me quite a bit, as she comes over as a bit of a brat and is convinced that she is in the right at all times. In her mind, there is no room for doubt or self-reflection, which for me is rather important in a character.

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3.5 Stars

An intriguing story featuring a revenge seeking young woman with a clock heart, badass women, a kind captain, a fantasy world coming to life, and time itself.
The story started out as a revenge story, after haunting events in childhood Evelyn now have a clockwork heart. When the man responsible for it reappears in her life she sees her chance to get revenge on him. Then it takes a 180 and the story gets weird, but in a good way.
Everley is a really pessimistic main character, which is understandable with her background but at times it does get a bit annoying that she can't think that anything someone else does is for pure kindness. The change of scenery from the town to the colony on the island was interesting, if somewhat surprising at first.

Though I did enjoy the book, I can't deny that the second half of the book (from about when they arrive at the colony) couldn't quite keep up my attention the same way the first half had. It felt a bit overwhelming. It went from chugging along in a nice pace to all the sudden make a 180 turn with a big revelation. There was so much information och new things coming all at once that I couldn't really keep up with it all. I feel the book could have been a 50 pages longer so it could fit all that information with a nicer tempo for the reader, well if it was important to keep all of it. Some things could just as well been put off until the sequel.

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What a lush, wonderful fantasy. Everley has a clock for a heart after hers was stabbed by the man who murdered the rest of her family. Her uncle saved her life by using his clockmaking skills to replace her dying heart with a clock. She lives in constant fear, knowing if her clock is heard and discovered, she could be severely punished for heresy.

This book gives us badass women who fight for money and use their bodies to their advantages, but in their own control. We get discussion of homelessness, and the circumstances that can cause it. There are pirates and giant whales set on destruction, magical storms and far away fairytales within this world.

A ship full of female convicts being sent to reinhabit a lost island including our main character who got herself sentenced there so she can avenge her family by killing the man who killed her family and ruined her life.

Although parts were predictable, I still got so excited when my predictions were correct. Fantastic for fans of "Daughter of the Pirate King" and "Truthwitch".

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This book was such a big positive surprise!
I expected something like a children's fantasy book and got a complex, compelling, exciting and heartbreaking story with badass females and great, innovative Fantasy parts. You can tell: I am absolutely in love with this story and was positively surprised when I recognized it was written by the same author as "the hundredth queen".

Evie is a girl with a clockwork heart, on revenge on behalf of her family. She spins farther and farther into problems and secrets to finally uncover what has really happened and how gods and queens have deceived the folk. The characters were so great and badass and I LOVED Evie and her kickass ladies! Female pirates are rare though they are just the best! And then there is kind Jamison! The first genuine and kind male character I absolutely and directly fell in love with - because he is just sexy and polite and awesome. The fantasy part was super innovative and not similar to anything I ever read, though Evie had some Major "Mia Corvere" or "Lilah Bard" vibes , means she is cold as ice and badass until the end. Today it rarely happens that someone really invents new tales and fantasy lines, but Mrs King here did an amazing job in luring me into a new story and keeping me there for some short hours, that I spend skimming like a maniac through the pages.

I finished the first book and immediately started the second one - because I was in a reading slump lately, this was super amazing and made me more than happy. A surprisingly good story is always something to celebrate.

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Wow really enjoyed this book! Excellent start to a new series; the characters were super engaging, the world building was awesome and the pace was just right. A great mixture of elements and themes from historical, fantasy, steampunk, and adventure. Had a hard time putting this book down every night, it was easy to get into, fun to read, and felt new and different from the usual. Definitely worth the read!

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This book was a wonderful and amazing surprise! Exciting and unpredictable adventure fantasy, featuring an unusual fusion of swashbuckling adventure and fairytale quests (with a dash of steampunk).

I wasn’t sure what to expect with this one, not having reviewed the synopsis before starting (other than knowing it was a YA Fantasy and the main character had a clockwork heart)...so I expected maybe a steampunky adventure...but what I got was so much more:

A great adventure that starts off with our heroine arrested for illegal dueling and morphing into a swashbuckler as she connives to be found guilty and boards a ship headed for a penal colony (all to put herself in the path of the man that killed her family)...and then the fairytale overtones and promise of magic set in and the real epic quest of the story begins with the hunt for a long hidden gate that grants access to other magical realms (and a princess and world frozen in time). Could be standard fare, but the plot, while familiar, is also wrapped up in unusual and interesting details and characters. The world building (especially on the island and in the “other” worlds) is great.

I loved the unpredictable and unusual main and secondary characters (you’re never quite sure of what characters are up to here, lots of mixed/complex motivations). The villian is done especially well, and I liked the tension between our heroine and her love interest. You also get the feeling there’s a lot more to come from some of the secondary characters. Great climatic ending while still setting us up for the next adventure and dangling enough of a carrot that I want to start it NOW;-)

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I’m late to this party for sure. I’ve seen Emily R. King’s books on book twitter so many times in the last couple of years. How did I never pick one up? Well I’ve remedied that failing of mine, and I’m glad I did.

Ms. King’s new series, The Evermore Chronicles, focuses on a heroine with a heart … well not of gold. She has a clock where a heart should be. As you can imagine that is not easy to deal with, especially when you are a young, energetic, forthright, adventurous type, as Everley Donovan is.

Everley is determined to find the man who killed her family and wounded her so heinously. Stabbed through the heart, she was saved with this contraption housed in her chest. She wants answers and vengeance. This quest leads her to some incredible places and adventures.

Ms. King’s writing is a dream. Easy to read, and a quick but smooth ride. She reminds me a lot of Jeff Wheeler and Charlie N. Holmberg. All three write with an enviable ease. An excellent weekend read, and the start to what is shaping up to be a great new series. This is one to check out!

Song for this book: Heart Like a Wheel – Kate and Anna McGarrigle

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Not a bad read. Quite interesting, expanding the motif of time. To me, it went to a similar road as Everless by Sara Holland.
Everley lives on borrowed time, she is the only survivor of her family and she has a mechanic heart to keep her on track.
Even though there are some similarities between the two books, this one turns to a whole new experience when Everley ends up in a colony on a cursed island where she has to marry and build a new world.
A quite fascinating book, definitely worth seeing how it further develops.

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