Member Reviews
Neil C, Reviewer
I really struggled with the grammar and poor editing of this story.
I found I spent far too much time figuring what a sentence was actually supposed to mean rather than concentrating on the story line or characters.
This was just not for me.
Moony M, Reviewer
DNF 28%
It was starting out interesting but it went downhill after 15% and i tried to get back into it, but it seems like i could'nt, i could'nt for the life of me get interested or invested in the rest of the story and the telepathy was a little confusing.
