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Virgin Fix

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Thus is a short read. It started off cute and funny . A quirky female lead and an alpha male make up the story. The story would have been better if it was longer so we could enjoy the things Bobbi got into with Dean coming to rescue. However, the story was too short for any development. A little drama and a happy ending. Cute epilogues give us a nice look into the future.

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Freewheeling chopper guy returns to Florida to find his old boss ready to hand over the business to him, and that might include his sexy virgin ward. But of course nothing is ever that easy. . .
While this is nicely written, it’s nothing that hasn’t been done hundreds of times before. She can’t stand him, then falls hard for him. He wants his freedom, but she gets under his skin and he has no idea how or why. Stuff happens that could be solved if they were simply honest with each other. As much as I hate to put it this way, it was by the numbers.
Except for one thing, and this was quite a negative: letting the attempted rapist get off so easily. . .

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Well, I really should have lowered my expectations. Virgin Fix was a quick read with some mediocre smut, balanced out with zero plot and character development.

Our Heroine is young and immature and annoying and our Hero is so bland. I honestly don't even remember their names at this point and it's only been days since I finished.

An "okay" book if you need something easy for a rainy day.

Thank you to NetGalley for the review copy.

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Quick hot read. Gets right to the HEA. A short story full of puppies and a hot dude. What more can you ask for?

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A short, good read. Wish it were longer so the characters could have a bit of growth but for what it was, it wasn’t bad. I did enjoy how quickly it went. I can honestly say I read it in one sitting. Characters were good for each other. Enjoyable.

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This is fun and fast read. I enjoyed reading it..... It's a great escape and I read it in one setting after a very stressful day. Perfect for when you need to relax and just curl up with a book.

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Since the day we first met, sweet little tomboy Bobbi Tipton has been untouchable, the boss’s adopted kid and completely off-limits. But now that she’s grown into a troublemaking spitfire who watches me with big eyes and flushed cheeks whenever she thinks I’m not looking, it’s getting harder and harder to steer clear.When I started reading I couldn't put it down.Monica Rush is magnifysent and amazing writer.I cannot wait to read more of there books.Keep up the great work.You should definitely read this book.Can't wait for the next book.

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I don't know where to start with this book. Perhaps I'll start with the only two positive qualities: it is a short story and it has dogs. The characters are a cliche and the plot not fully developed to be engaging.

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This is the first book I've read by this author. It reminded me of Alexa Riley's books in terms of the shorter length, the need-a-fan sexy times, an alpha hero who falls hard for the innocent virgin and needs to make her his, and just the overall sweetness. I loved the addition of the shelter dogs. If you're looking for a quick escape with something H-O-T, give this author a try.

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This book is short so can't help but put spoilers

⚠ SPOILER'S AHEAD ⚠

This book starts with a nineteen year old dog lover Bobby who accidentally bumped into Dean while he was showering in his friend Paddy's house who happens to be Bobby's babysitter or something ⁉
Since then both of them fantasies about each other. One day Paddy left all his money,job,house actually everything to Dean. Who does that!?!! And Dean made out with Bobby, fell in love, and married her within five months. Seriously!?

The writing wasn't good,the narrations weren't good either. Marring within a short period of time,having a baby i didn't like any of these.

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Unfortunately, this was not a win for me. I already had an issue with the title (which begs the question of: why did I request it in the first place but alas!). I'm a sucker for experienced vs inexperienced but just with the opening of the story...cringe. The way the author introduced Bobbi's POV just made me cringe (her name also bugged me). The book was short which cost the characters a chance for a deeper development to make them likable enough. The premise wasn't promising and the rest of the story unfolding didn't get any better. Pretty poorly written and non-existent plot. Just because a book is short, doesn't mean the plot/characters should be sacrificed. Oh well.

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I loved this quickie read. It was the perfect balance of sexy and erotic, without being too raunchy. It had just enough romance and warm gooey moments between the MCs to make it fleshed out. It reminded me of AR books but with more character build up.

Bobbi and Dean have been trying (unsuccessfully) to hide their intense chemistry. When they're left alone during a storm, they both give in to temptation and realize they are pretty damn perfect together.

Of course things don't go smoothly for them right away. There's Bobbi's abandonment issues rearing their head when she starts to question Dean's sudden change of heart. From biker nomad to settled and ready to commit, she's not sure she can trust him to want to stay forever. Meanwhile, Dean has to deal with a handsy creep who tries to start trouble and convince Bobbi that his feelings for her are real and strong enough make their relationship work.

This was definitely a short quickie but with substance :)

Memorable Moments: The smexy times are Kindle-melting HAWT!

Would I recommend? For a sexy quickie this one would be perfect!

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4 Stars

ARC received from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

Monica Rush certainly knows how to grab her readers attention with this quick read yet very engaging story !!

Loved Dean & Bobbie together - from all the adorable nick names - laugh out loud humor - sizzling chemistry & rescue / shelter dogs !! 🐶 🐶

If you are looking for a great quick read - grab this book !!! Loved it !!

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Overall this was a quick, fun read if you just need a little bit of brain candy. While I would have liked more character and story development - and maybe a tiny bit less of the creepy factor when the characters are practically mauling each other in front of his boss/her adopted father - there were still plenty of enjoyable elements. And more dogs, please!

I received this book as an ARC in return for my honest and unbiased review.

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this book was hot. she is wanting to rescue dogs and she really can't keep more than 2 at her rented house. her neighbor helps her out. the old man has a friend who is there visiting and house sitting. his man is the sexist sounding man ever

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I received this as an ARC for an honest review. So many thanks to NetGalley and Monica Rush.

It was first book for Monica Rush which I have read. I liked this book but the same time I hoped that this will be much longer. It was too short and Bobbi and Dean were nice characters but I needed some more. The book was ok and a plot was great, but also needed some more. And after reading this book, I was more questions than I was answers, and it is only thing what I hate when I read good book. Because if it's longer, those questions will get some answers more and make this book even better, I think.

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Bobbi couldn’t believe he’d come back after what happened last summer.She remembered how she had walked in on Dean in the shower , how he had stroked himself . Bobbi felt an ache between her legs as she watched Dean , she thought she was hidden by the fog of the hot water and proceed to get herself off. Than she noticed Dean had been watching her and she ran out of the bathroom and she hadn’t seen him since. Paddy was Bobbi’s guardian . He took her in after her father had died while working for Paddy on a construction job and her father didn’t have his safety harness on. Bobbi had been thirteen. Dean was Paddy’s favorite foreman. It was Dean. Bobbi hurried to finish Mr. Doolittle’s bath - one of the shelter dogs where Bobbi volunteered. Bobbi had been trying to avoid the same lecture Paddy had been giving her since she turned eighteen. To find a good man and settle down. Dean thought back to the day last year when Bobbi watched him in the shower. It had taken every ounce of Deans control to not pull her in the shower with him. He had even held the shower door closed to stop from reaching for Bobbi. Dean had thought about sleeping with Bobbi every since. Which is why Dean had stayed away. She was his boss's ward/kid. Dean knew they would never happen as bobbi was to be protected . also Bobbi hates him judging by the way she is glaring at him. Bobbi had always wore her feelings on her sleeve. You knew where you stood with Bobbi and that was refreshing. Bobbi makies dean crazy in more ways than one but he actually had a soft spot for her. Paddy had just told Dead he wants to leave him everything- the house, the millions in the bank, the multiple properties , even his own division of O'Malley construction. Dean had worked for Paddy for fifteen years and never thought Paddy would do anything like this. But Bobbi is part of the deal. If he takes what Paddy's offering dean has to agree to take care of Bobbi the rest of his life of until bobbi marries a man Dean approves of. Also Bobbi had to move into the house with Dean. Dean knows Bobbi feels the heat burning between them. Dean has an overwhelming need to make Bobbi his. Dean ends up kissing Bobbi right in front of Paddy. After she leaves to go back to her cottage Paddy said he had a car coming to take him to the airport. Paddy wants Dean and Bobbi to marry. Dean thinks no way, this man puts nothing before the next job , a life on the open road. This man is a free spirit, in the moment and never having regrets. Than Dean realizes Paddy had left. There was another foreman- Bruce who would take the deal if Dean didn't. Bruce was hoping Dean would turn Paddy down. Dean can see bruce looking at Bobbi and planning to drag her away and have sex with her. Dean decided there was no way he was letting Bruce near Bobbi. Bobbi was his responsibility , and it doesn’t bother him as much as he thought it would. Bobbi is his. His happiness, love of the open road didn't hold a candle to that. Than it starts to storm and the lights go out, Bobbi and her strays are soaking wet in the back porch . She told Dean her lights are off and she has no heat. Dean starts a fire and than ends up giving Bobbi oral sex to prepare her for later as she admitted she was a virgin and wanted Dean as her first lover. Bobbi is afraid of thunderstorms has been since she was little but dean makes her feel safe and doesn’t laugh at her fear and understands it. Bobbi and Dean sleep together. Dean knows he has to tell bobbi about Paddy’s decision and than his but than she rubbed up against him and Dean thought he would tell her tomorrow. The next day as Bobbi lets out the dogs at paddy’s she sees her landlord. He threatens to evict her as there is only a two pet policy and Bobbi hadn’t had a chance to clean the back yard after the strays had went to the bathroom there just before the storm. Than Bobbi asks dean if the dogs could stay there and he agrees. Dean thinks about when Paddy gave him a job when he was at his lowest. Gas money had run out and he had no money for food. Dean was sleeping on his bike behind a diner, he hadn't showered in a couple of days. Paddy brought him inside , fed him, offered dean a change of clothes and put him to work.
I loved this book. More of a novella but lacking nothing. I loved Dean and Bobbi together and how they interacted. I loved how protective Dean was of Boobi. I loved the ending it just tied everything together. I the pace and the plot. Just a sweet easy great romance. I have a new favorite. I loved the characters and the ins and outs of this book and I highly recommend it.

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My first for reading from this author. I'm starting to like these dual writers stores. They are short and interesting. Can read in a short amount of time.

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This was a short little novella and it was an ok read. Not too bad but it could have also been much better. It had an interesting premise that could have been fleshed out more in several areas. The characters were nice but a little flat. I did love the dogs though, dogs make everything better. :) Overall an easy, short read but nothing to get really excited about.

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Well there isn't much to the story..It was short so to me there was really a chance to develop the characters. We have a quick fall in love, then a quick oops we have a problem and then a bandaid and quick yup you guessed it a resolve..I would prefer my time spent on a longer more interesting story..

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