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The Drum That Beats Within Us

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The Drum That Beats Within Us is a collection of poetry that explores the elements of nature, what nature can provide, what nature can take away, and how humans are connected to it all. The best way to describe the feeling of the collection is if you wander through a shaded forest that opened up to a clearing, and you sat in the soft grass while watching the clouds roll in.

Not every poem is based in nature, and all have unique qualities. There are rhyming poems, free verse, as well as varying lengths. I tended to enjoy the shorter ones, though the long ones take their time to explore the topic at hand.

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I saw this cover on Net Galley and I immediately grabbed it because I am always looking for poetry (not novels in verse). The power of poetry and books of poetry is that it immediately immerses the reader in a time, a place, and a message to chew on based on the poet's lens. Just looking at this cover, tied to the title, I thought Indigenous, land based, lessons learned through historical trauma and survivance.

This is not it which is both good and bad. Bond is not an Indigenous poet. That is a good thing. He does not have the right to speak for the land in that way and he wisely does not try to do so. I read the reviews. Yes, there is land in these poems, but the land is generic. these "Forests Dark of Elm" could be anywhere and nowhere. In the last poem that gives this collection its name, I realize that this drum could be any drum, "primitive as stone". . ."hunts the sorrowed unicorn beneath the laurel's shade."
This type of jarring mix of ancient and mythical takes me as a reader both in a place, and quickly within a few lines out of a specific place. Are we in Europe now? We are definitely not in America. Then in three stanzas, suddenly we see the metaphor of the drum again "steady as the Bear," capitalized when buck is not. Are we talking about Ursa major now in his "northern lair?"

This jarring back and forth between naming a specific place ("Smith River") in Montana, the Golden Gate Bridge in San Fran, and a specific people Micmac (Mi'kmaq) of Nova Scotia and Prince Edward Islands to creating generic places, anywhere places kills the power in poetry of speaking for your community, for your people, for your trauma. It waters down the message, and makes me angry when in the poem "Children Scalped" he lists tribes (including using the colonized spelling for Micmac) and uses the very Indigenous term "we" . . ."we ran frantically/we remember/name us all." The very positive outcome to this is that he has no real message to tell. His poems are just technique. That is much better than recolonizing through false empathy.

Poetry is such a difficult road to maneuver. If this is what is published and lauded as "good," then I also say blow it up from within (and I am not speaking as a "literary mafia"). Bond says something interesting in his introduction. He says:
. . .let's make poetry ugly in the name of something new, as Le Corbusier did to architecture. And we can appoint ourselves the prophets of this revolution. Because even crap has value if it's marketed as new.

This is crap indeed. I think about these students I have mentored over the years in my classroom who have something to say, who have poetry in their blood, who continue to be edited and watered down and pushed aside in this system that we call school. Who will hear them if this is what we are listening to?

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They say do not judge a book by it's cover. A good example would be the fact that I thought the poems within would be more of nature and the old west. It was different but I am not disappointed after reading it. One of my favorite parts was the introduction and explanation about poetry and its differences. It has helped me to enjoy it more. I received a copy of this book from Big City Press through NetGalley. The opinions expressed in this review are my own.

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“Thanks to Netgalley, I received a free ebook in exchange of an honest review”
A poem doesn’t necessarily need to rhyme.
A poem doesn’t necessarily need rhythm.
But
A poem does necessarily need to be memorable.
And oh, this one was.
Long will pass till I forget this one, if I ever do.

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I wasn't sure what to expect, but I enjoyed reading this. An interesting story with fun characters. Well written.

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This is a excellent book! The poems make you stop and think and each one is beautifully written. This would make a wonderful gift book. Thank you Big City Press via NetGalley for the free copy. This is my honest opinion.

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Beautiful and reflective poetry that makes you pause and think about the bigger world one of which we are just a small portion of. Very heavy on symbology and nature and animal kingdom as a whole which make this such an enjoyable read. IN particular the book title is after one of the poems within the novel, it was by far my favorite. Makes you analyze your own beliefs and spirituality as a whole more so then religion. Very fresh approach and great read.

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Deeply contemplative and refreshing. His poems are clever and I feel like I can relate to his observations in his travels. This is a great book to take on a trip.

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