There were a few unresolved plot points that sidetracked me at times. Overall it was a nice follow up to the first book.

I wanted to enjoy this book more, but I'm afraid I didn't. This first volume was pretty engaging, but this one didn't hold my attention at all. I felt there were too many convoluted and unresolved plot lines. I was disappointed by the end, but your mileage may vary.

After the EMPATHY study found its abrupt end, the effected person are trying to survive the aftermath. For Chandra, this means living with a smart virus inside her head, Ty wants to use his knowledge for the good but both want to move on and forget that EMPATHY ever happened. Chandra's wife - Kyra - won't have any of it and wants to make the truth public.

Meanwhile, Alistair - who took over the EMPATHY study from his father - would want anything but that to happen and still works on a plan to come out of the affair without a dent to his reputation. The NAU can't let this whole thing pass without finding the guilty person to blame for the lives lost during the study.

Due to this new plot line, "Mourning Dove" does not quite read like the prior part. Instead, it has similarities to a court-room thriller: the NAU panel tries to dig for the truth but the Hallmanns work them like they are nothing but puppets on strings. At the same time, Ren is trying to figure out if her former colleague who reported on EMPATHY is still alive. In doing so, he slips into the center of another conspiracy. This time even more deadlier.

"Mourning Dove" mirrors the sentiment of a plot that slowly climbs towards the climax and everything falls apart in the end, just that this time, not all plots are incorporated towards the end. Instead there are three plots-lines that happen at the same time and barely connect. This marks "Mourning Dove" as a transition book: It ties the loose knots that had been left in "Imminent Dawn" but also creates new mysteries for the books to come.

Due to this characteristic, Campbell focuses more on human fault and misunderstanding in relationships. While the characters' workings are discussed, action takes a backseat. This also plays a role, when you pick up the series with this book instead of "Imminent Dawn".

Campbell takes the time to add vital information from prior events so you can follow the story, but empathizing with the characters and wanting to take a harder look, is not easy to do when, for example, you haven't "lived" through Chandra's motivations and selflessness on the EMPATHY compound.

Through this change in plot and slight genre shift, the whole pace of the book is slowed down. While I wouldn't go as far as to say that I had been bored, I also hadn't had a strong urge to pick it up when I had put it down. It was an easy read but not one that made you turn the page because you need to know what happened next. Only halfway through the story, the pace picks up as the plot starts to come together and the "I need to know what happens next" moments appear towards the last few pages. After all, I need to know what is going to happen to Ren, Chandra, and Ariel. At the same time, this makes "Mourning Dove" a slower than expected read, I felt that the change of pace had come a little too late.

Overall, "Mourning Dove" provides a fitting continuation of the EMPATHY series. Campbell becomes more at ease with the characters and explores their workings, while at the same time, he laid out new plots and mysteries. Clearly a transition book, it gives you hints at what our "heroes" are going to face next. I can't wait to get my hands on the next book of the series

(pretty please - cc: NineStar Press and R.R. Campbell)

A little bit slower paced than the first book, but not painfully so. It was a good continuation to the story, but I feel like it's a bit outside the subjects I generally enjoy so I'm not sure I can give a fair review. A little too much politics for my taste, but the characters and story are good so I think it's just personal preference that has me giving it three stars.

Fortunately I didn’t have to wait five years for the second instalment in the “Empathy” series. As the dust settles on the disaster that ended the events of “Imminent Dawn”, the Halmans are lawyered-up and figuring out how to get through the panel of enquiry that has been set up. Chandra and Kyra are struggling to find the balance they had in their marriage before Kyra was in a coma which is not helped at all by their inability to communicate. Meredith Maxwell is still missing and her friend and former colleague, Ren Dupont, is following whatever leads he can to find her. Ty still sees Chandra and Kyra but feels alone. Alistair and Ariel think they can avoid testifying by being married.

I enjoyed this but not as much as I enjoyed “Imminent Dawn”. I found the pace a little slower and much of that had to do with the political landscape and the politicians. I find my eyes glazing over a little bit in most novels when politics comes into play. A big part of my engagement with the first novel was the research study into the implanted chip and the connectivity it promised. Along with this was the very human element of Chandra wanting to communicate with her comatose wife.

There is still the human element in the struggles that Chandra and Kyra face but I felt there wasn’t enough page time for them. I’d have liked to have seen more of Ty, Ariel and Greg, even though Greg is a fairly minor character. There are a number of new threads that have opened up and I am still invested in seeing where this story goes.

Book received from Netgalley and NineStar Press for an honest review.