While the story was brief, overall it was very well written. The author's use of detail was extraordinary and made visualizing the story easy. My only complaint is that I wish there were more build up. Maybe she's fantasizing about Case and instead of waving away those thoughts ,due to her insecurities, she begins to give in and pleasure herself. I think it would have given the story some nice background.

I guess I just didn't recognize that this was a short story by the description? It goes right into the sex, stays at the sex, and then ends directly after the sex....so just a heads up that this is a short erotica "story".

I'm giving it 4 stars because the sex scene was well written. It also has the main character as being more "curvy" which I applaud. I can't say much else because that's basically it.

Oh my! Short and sweet but hot and steamy.
This is the first I’ve read from this author and certainly not the last. I look forward to more. Much much more.