Aina works for Kohl, doing his bidding for a portion of the money he collects while she saves to open her own operation. Aina is a ruthless character because she kills people for the bounty on their head. The main problem I had with this story is that you never hear from the main bad guy, the person Kohl is working for. Aina is great at what she does. She has several friends that have her back and help protect her along the way. One of her hits, what she thinks to be her last, goes horribly wrong and now she needs to fix the problem while she has a bounty on her head. Fast paced, unfortunately the world building was lacking for me to get pulled in. Not sure I'd continue with book two.

DNF and I really wanted to maybe its the timing and I'm not in the mood to process a whole new world building like the one in this story. So much is going on at once I couldn't grasp what was valuable information or not. I enjoyed the action pack and bloodiness of it all. I just couldn't get passed the lack of magic and why there is lack of magic and how they pertained to the mothers or government. Maybe at a later time I will give this book a third try because I'm slightly still intrigued I know sometime sequels are better than the first.

Action Packed from page one!
I enjoyed the world building. It was like The Professional meets West Side Story. There is definitely room for improvement. The timeline transitions could have been a bit better defined with breaks or something. The romantic shadows were a bit frustrating. There were a few elements that were a bit over done in my opinion. But it was a good story and I am looking forward to book two.

As the first book in a new series, Francesca Flores has taken the time to build a city, Diamond City, and paint it in black and white for us to "see". She has populated the city with several differing communities, including the main community of assassins. The main character is a young woman who was "saved" when she joined the assassins' group. As she grows and matures, we learn more of the back story and in turn, can see where this flawed community is destined to help save the world. It will be interesting to see where the next book takes our heroine.

I enjoy the female assassin story. The story takes her through many struggles which is sparked by a botched assassination. She also struggles with her feelings about her mentor when he abandons her. She continually holds onto her feelings for him even though she learns increasingly bad information about him. I had trouble with that. Otherwise the mystery and intrigue kept my attention. A good setup for the series.

3.5 stars

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This was an entertaining first book in a new YA fantasy series.

Aina Solís was an orphan living on the street when a brutal crime lord takes her in and trains her to be an assassin in a city built by magic and ruled by tyrants. As she climbs the ranks in the organization she dreams of striking out on her own and starting her own assassin club. Her boss gives her an impossible task - kill one of the most protected citizens in the city. If she completes the job, she will be given a huge payday and be free to open her own club with her bosses blessing.

Aina is laser focused on the job, but complications arise that will change her life forever. I can't say more, otherwise it will spoil the story. I liked Aina and the other characters in the book. She was tough and kicked ass, but was still capable of having feelings for people and a sense of morality. The story was interesting and fast paced. There is an element of magic in the story and clearly there are more mysteries to uncover. I will definitely read more books in this series.

I received a free copy of this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

Actual rating: 3.5/5 Stars

**I received an advanced copy of this book on Netgalley from the publisher in exchange of an honest review. All opinions are my own.**

I enjoyed this book, but not as much as I thought I would. I found, as I was reading, that the cons of the story largely outweighed the pros, which was disappointing because I felt that this book had plenty of potential.
For cons, I felt that the author was extremely repetitive and there were way too many flashbacks, most of which were way too long (some taking up almost entire chapters at a time). An occasional, relevant flashback is okay, but there was one of significant length almost every chapter and the chapters are pretty short. Both of these things also contributed to the large information dumps that would happen often as well. The book was just too wordy. The biggest issues I had though was the abusive relationship the main character, Aian, is in. It's not a romantic relationship, though sometimes I'm convinced she wants it to be (thank the gods that didn't happen!). But she is so dependent on this man...or so she thinks she is. She constantly has the same exact internal conversation with herself saying that "he made me who I am" and "I can't get any where without him" or "I wouldn't be anybody if it wasn't for him". None of them are true and it takes her the whole book to realize that. It was so frustrating to have to keep hearing those thoughts. Especially when she had a group of amazing people helping her and she planned on betraying one of them anyway. Girl needs to get her priorities in check and keep them that way.
Anyway, the pros: The characters were pretty well developed. They all grew as people (even Aina). She was a strong, but dependent woman when the book started and ended a strong independent woman, which I'm so happy about. The world building was also done very well. There's lots of history (repeated several times), but it's there.
Overall, would I read the book again? No, but I would read the next book because I am curious to see if Aina sticks with this new found independence.

I enjoyed this book immensely! Sadly, I couldn't really connect with the characters, which made it a bit of a struggle to get through.

3.5/5 stars

I had really high expectations for this book, and in some ways they were met. It was a fast-paced adventure story about a brutal assassin who does what she has to do to survive, taking on a job that's a little too big, a little too impossible, and sends the cards in her carefully constructed house tumbling.

On the other hand, there were some things I didn't love — it was almost too action-packed; my favorite moments were the strategizing moments, the ones where things slowed down and the characters became a little more introspective. Those were few and far between though, and this book was a mega adrenaline rush at all time otherwise.

In places it seemed like the characters' allegiances shifted quickly and with little reasoning or set-up.

All told, it was an enjoyable story about a super morally gray female character (which I appreciated), but it didn't quite live up to the expectations I'd built for it.

Amazing character development. When you thought you had figured out a character, there was a twist to prove you wrong. Definitely recommend to people who enjoy fantasy and adventure.

I found this book very interesting I enjoyed reading about a female assassin. I always enjoy a badass MC. The other characters also fairly well developed and complex it has a bit of romance weaved into the story but it feels a littel forced (to me) but I do rather like the slower burns they feel more natural for story progression.

This fantasy is pretty violent Aina becomes an assassin to survive and she does so with vivdly intense fight scenes but she does have dimension to her character and although she is a very good assassin she isn't unfeeling or cold blooded. She lives in a kill or be killed world navigating it with a dogged determination to survive. I enjoyed this book and I look forward to the next book in the series. I receved this book from NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for an honest review.

This seems to be the author's first book with it catching my eye. It intrigued me to read about a female assassin and why the job. You are given the why with the present unraveling before you. The other characters also catch your eye. Now Diamond city is another thing that will swallow you up. Follow Aina as she faces the biggest challenge with it pulling at us as she does. Romance is woven into it also with it making this even more of a nose to the page turner. If you love one with magic this is the stop then. Hope to catch this author again.

This fantasy is one bloody one. Aina becomes an assassin to survive, and she's really good at it. Her fights are movie-ready (I could totally picture myself watching this book as a movie), full of action and bloody.

I love magic stories and this one is really good. It also shows another perspective on blood magic: none of the main characters can do magic, but their lives are still tainted by it.

Book 2 will be AWESOME, I'm so sure of it, since book 1 ends with a lot of promises (not a spoiler).

Many thanks to St. Martin's Press for the complimentary e-copy of this book through NetGalley. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.

Diamond City was a suspenseful, action-packed read that explored themes of love, loyalty, and freedom. Aina may be an assassin, but she's not really a cold-blooded killer, just an ambitious and desperate survivor in a world where it's kill or be killed, sooner or later. Her character growth in recognizing the toxic ideas that kept her tethered her boss Kohl was satisfying to watch, as was the change in her goals to orient toward the bigger picture and the possibility of justice in a corrupt and oppressive society. I enjoyed the shifting and complex relationships between Aina and the supporting characters, especially Ryuu, who made an excellent foil to Aina, with his combination of privilege and idealism. The big reveal of the evil at the heart of the city was impactful because of how believable/realistic it is, with the real world parallels to consider. Though the beginning felt a bit slow and aimless in terms of the overarching stakes beyond singular missions, the latter half brought the crucial pieces of the story together nicely enough to compensate. I'm eagerly anticipating the sequel and seeing how Aina's quest for revenge and justice plays out.

I really tried with Diamond City. Magic, assassins, crime syndicate? Sounds great. Except, for me, it wasn't.

I'll start with Aina, the main character. I found her unlikeable. Not to mention lacking in the stealth and precision usually associated with a top notch assassin. I knew that I wouldn't be getting further in the book when she got injured and I didn't care.

My other problem with the book was the random and unexpected flashbacks. While I understand the purpose, to provide background and information, I felt they were often poorly timed. And the transition from the present day of the story to a flashback was jarring at times.

I finally had to call it quits. I just couldn't bring myself to go another further. I know some people loved this book. I just wasn't one of them.

Disclaimer: I received an ARC ebook from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

Thank you to NetGalley and St. Martin’s Press for sending me a free advanced reader copy of this book for an honest review. Diamond City debuted January 28th.

I requested an ARC for Diamond City because I’m a Sarah J. Maas fan, and (flawed though it may be) I think the conflicted lady assassin trope is pretty fun. The first chapter or two of Diamond City started in an okay spot, but it unfortunately went swiftly downhill from there. Where Maas was able to make her main character assassin mostly work, Flores unfortunately flounders; the MC in this book often wonders things like, Would my parents be proud of me even though I kill people for a living? or Do you think this cute boy and I might have a romantic future even though I tried to kill his older brother?

As people funnier than me have said, the short answer to both these questions is no. The longer answer is noooooooooo.

I just can’t buy the main character. She’s a badass assassin, but she’s deathly afraid of spiders, opts for knives over guns, and spares key characters’ lives at multiple points in the book. It’s an issue I often see with these types of killer characters: they’re supposed to be oh-so-hardcore, but the author can’t let the characters be their brutal selves on the page because it will turn off readers.

But even beyond the characters, I couldn’t find much to recommend this book. The world-building is a confusing mishmash of heritages and cultures that were difficult to keep straight, all with a vague backdrop of an outlawed religion and magic system that places heavy importance on diamonds–diamonds which are traded at high price on the black market, but actually there are oodles of them around. (???) The language of the book, too, did not help matters; the fight scenes especially were wooden and very “this happened, then this, then this”–not good for a book about assassins where there’s bound to be a lot of fighting. There’s also not much of an artistic or lyrical quality to the prose, and I found myself predicting plot points at every turn, so… without compelling characters, beautiful language, a riveting plot, or engaging world-building, I really came up empty on this book. I do feel bad about the poor review for this debut author, but Diamond City is in need of significant revision and critique.

Aina is a great character that you cant wait to know more about. Her story felt so real and possibly relatable for teen readers. The fact that she wants to give up several times but keeps going after her goals. The world revolving on diamonds brings in so many different parts of culture and society, which is fantastic. Plus the cover is so eye catching!

This was a fast-paced fantasy with a morally-grey, badass MC that I quite enjoyed. It was refreshing to see a self=declared female assassin in a YA book that actually killed people and did bad things (ha). Aina, the MC, is driven to prove herself and become even more powerful than her boss, the Blood King. Only then will she be able to leave behind the homeless, addiction-battling child she used to be. When she takes on a job that promises just that, she is thrilled. All she has to do is kill one man: Kouta Hirai.

She enlists the help of her best friend, Teo, and together they form a plan. But when Aina is seen by Kouta's brother, Ryuu, she becomes the most wanted person in the city. Worse, it seems she wasn't successful in killing his brother after all, and now he's disappeared. When Ryuu attempts to buy Aina's loyalty to help him find his brother, she accepts, but ultimately intends to betray him. She *needs* to kill Kouta in order to get back in the Blood King's good books.

Like I said, I enjoy a driven female character, especially when the stakes are personal. She doesn't want to save the world in a grand gesture - she wants success purely for herself. Overall it was a pretty decent book, but I did have a few issues, the first being Ryuu's intention to hire Aina. I'm sorry, but I just don't buy it. He literally watched her cut his beloved brother's throat, then catches her a second time when she comes back to try again, and decides he should offer her money to help him find the same man she's clearly desperate to kill? WHAT. Even if he believed money was a big enough factor that he could trust Aina not to double-cross him, why would he want to work with her? It happened so quickly, too: there's no getting to know her and *then* deciding to ask her to help him. No, he does it immediately. And if I were her, I wouldn't trust him for asking, tbh. Considering that's a central plot point in the book, I feel like like I ought to have been able to believe their motivations a little more.

I was also a little confused about who the love interest was in this book, if in fact there was one at all. Was there supposed to be? I don't know. It seemed like it was Ryuu, and then it seemed like it was Teo, and it kept kind of bouncing back and forth. Perhaps that was intentional, but I was a little lost as to what I, the reader, was supposed to be feeling. If that WAS intentional, say, to reflect the MC's own confusion, then well done. If it wasn't... uh. Well.

Next, the ending. There was a lot going on here, and I feel like the real Big Bad should have had a larger role to play in the rest of the story. I feel like it was supposed to be a real twist when it's finally revealed who was behind the murder plot, but like.... do we even care about this character? As such, the tension just wasn't really there for me, and everything happened so quickly after that, I didn't really have time to breathe and *care* enough. That may be ideal for people who like fast-paced action and really tight plotting, but I personally like things a little more spread out.

Anyway, despite the fact that I like to ramble on about the issues I had with books (lol), I still liked this overall. Just not enough that I'll be clamouring for the second.

Thank you to St. Martin’s Press and NetGalley for providing this book in exchange for my honest review.
I love me a female assassin and was super excited about the premise of Diamond City by Francesca Flores. Sadly, it didn’t live up to the expectations for me. Although I enjoyed the world building, the intense depictions of class inequality and religious persecution, I had a tough time with some of the character development and pacing.
Diamond City is a YA urban fantasy about a young kid-turned assassin after her parents are murdered when she was 8 years old. She is taken in by a wealthy young man who is building his own empire. He trains her to not only be the best assassin but to be smart. We meet Aina, the assassin, at age 18. Her boss has tasked her with the hardest assassination every attempted and when things go wrong, she is forced to team up with her enemy to fight her boss…
I found Aina difficult to get behind. I love a morally grey character who is struggling to do what’s best for her but as a highly trained assassin I found some of her decision to not only be stupid but flat out ridiculous. She’s supposed to be intelligent enough to have survived in this war-torn world, but she makes some reckless decisions that I just found frustrating. Which led me to think, how has this girl survived.
My other problem was not so much with the MC but with the love square that is introduced. Aina is in love with her boss but she doesn’t realize is. He is abusive and toxic which is as old as time and I’d love to meet a female character who falls for the bad boy who doesn’t abuse her. Find me those characters please. On top of her boss, she also has feelings for a couple other characters. She’s young and still figuring herself out but in a book I want a better idea of who the love interest is. That can change but give me more than a tease of three different people.
In the end the premise interested me and although I enjoyed the idea of an assassination going wrong and the MC having to find new allies to survive, the story overall fell flat for me. I’m sure many will love the world that Francesca Flores build and Aina but sadly I may not be one of them.

Honestly, I think the cover does a bit of a disservice to the book. It suggest that it’s more urban fantasy/Ocean’s 11-ish than the more straight-up fantasy it is.

“Congratulations, Aina. You’re the best Blade in Kosín, and when I watch you cut holes in people, I think I hear angels singing.”


After the murder of her parents, Aina’s survived by becoming one of the best assassins in Kosín. Driven to prove herself to the boss of their tradehouse, Kohl, who’s trained her personally, she’s eager to take on the latest assignment – killing a Steel, one of the business magnates who runs the city. An assassination gone wrong gutters all her dreams, however, and her only hope at reclaiming her place is by finishing the job, even if it means tricking her target’s younger brother into helping her. Nothing goes as planned, however, and she’s forced to confront her assumptions about herself, her friends, and her life.

“All these years, I’ve been saying I’m not afraid anymore, but I still am. I say that I know how to defend myself and that I’ll be safe, but that’s not actually doing anything about the terrible things going on here. That’s hiding, and letting it all happen because it’s too frightening to try to stop it. But now I want to end the things that scare me.”


It’s hard not to compare this book to other YA fantasy heists, like Six of Crows, though I think the comparison is a little faulty. The book is told solely from Aina’s point of view, and while she does assemble a team, the focus is more on her journey, on finding a purpose for herself, whether she’s an invincible Blade or a vulnerable street girl. I absolutely loved Aina, flaws and all, and it hurt so much to see how she was forced to grow and change over the course of the book. I liked that, at her core, she had good intentions, even if the way she went about them was often completely wrong. I thought her motivations – getting back in Kohl’s good graces, avoiding ending up back on the streets – were strong and I really understood why she made the choices she did. Aina’s bi, though her love “interests,” though they never really get beyond brushing limbs at the most, are all male in the book. While I’m a big romance fan, I’m not so much a fan of love triangles, and though I recognize it was perfectly reasonable for Aina to be confused and have feelings for multiple people, it’s a pet peeve for me.

“It’s easy to get anyone to do something if you put enough money in front of them.”
She tilted her head to the side. “Must be nice to buy solutions to your problems.”
“Must be nice to threaten your problems,” Ryuu countered with a raised eyebrow.”


The snappy dialog really stood out for me, as did the side characters. I especially loved Teo, Aina’s gunslinger friend. Ryuu, the young Steel who ends up bankrolling Aina’s mission to “save” his brother, was also fun, though at times he felt a bit preachy. My main issue was with the flashbacks. The setting would change between one paragraph to the next without warning, sometimes going back to the previous day or even years ago, and each time it happened it was confusing and completely jarred me out of the narrative.

While this is obviously the first in the series, there’s a satisfying closure to the main plot. Overall, I’d give this 3.5 stars, rounded down to 3 due to the flashbacks. I’m interested enough in Aina’s story – I want to see what she’ll do now that she has a real mission! – that I’ll probably pick up the next book. Recommended for anyone looking for a kickass heroine who learns to break the system and finds a family in the process!

I received this book for free from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.