i read the first of the three chapters in this fully, but realised i'm definitely not the target audience at all. i skimmed the other two to make sure i wasn't giving up prematurely though.

the art style fits the world and story wonderfully, huge props to that. and i would recommend it to a younger audience.

additionally it was hard to read in this format as there was a repeated watermark across the whole page and every page. it really hurt my eyes / was struggling to focus on the text which was one of the key factors why i chose to skim read.

i just don't have much to say other than it wasn't for me. sorry!