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The Flaw

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First, I have to say that this book seems to have been hastily (and heavily) edited, and to be a way shorter version of a longer one, which is a pity, because all through reading it, the only thing you can think about is about these many scenes / plot exposition moments that have been cut out, rendering the reading a head-scratching one.

And that is a pity because D.M. Rasey writes well enough to create a nice sense of paranoia in his novel. From the very beginning, it is easy to jump into the story, and, even if it feels it was written by a conspiracy theories fanatic, it is realistic enough to be 'scary' (even if the use of real events and the cameos by famous people can be something to have a dialogue about). But also, from soon enough (like the first page), all the weird time/space jumps, the feeling of whole chapters and scenes being left in the editing room, and even sentences that start and never end, take the reader from the story; so much, that it is impossible to consider this a 'real' book. Also, Rasey makes the characters take some really head-scratching decisions to take the story to its ending, giving the feeling that he has a movie in his head (so, he is writing a script) more than a book.

Unfortunately, a mess.

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****Review****

Virus end of the world.

This story is amazing. Me and my partner spend a lot of time thinking of how the world will end and most time we come up with two, someone releases a virus that wipes out the human world or someone presses the red button and the world blows up.
In so many ways this book is true the government does all the things in this book, the world is oblivious to the true destruction these people in charge do.
Thank you to Netgalley/ D.M.Rasey/ BookGoSocial for the ARC in exchange for an honest review

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DNF 15%
Maybe I'm overly sensitive, but I took serious issue with this book.
Basing a fictional novel on real life events, is fine.
Deriving inspiration from real life events, is fine.
For example; had the author written about a nameless high school shooting in their fictional world, which was inspired by the real world, and then said in their fictional world that it was due to a virus, that is also fine.

But using a real world tragedy like Columbine by name as a plot device (among countless other tragedies) is not okay. I found it seriously distasteful and highly offensive.

Despite this happening within the first couple of pages, I did continue reading for a few chapters but I just couldn't continue any further. I understand that I was reading an ARC and usually they are edited properly before being published, but I still believe that advanced copies should at least be readable. There were so many problems with sentence structure, grammar, continuity etc, that it didn't make it a very enjoyable reading experience.

The story just didn't flow well. Chapter 4 was too unbelievable, the entire area surrounding the hospitals would have been closed off and put immediately under quarantine. Then there was a jump to chapter 5 where it's obvious events have occurred but there's no explanation given.

I just couldn't.

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No plan is perfect. When a brilliant teenager with a keen lack of social skills is approached by the military and given the opportunity to save his family and their farm, he creates the “perfect” weapon, a virus that should ultimately wipe out any enemies of the U.S. Or so young Lucas thought. What he created was Armegeddon and there was no stopping it. There was never a failsafe, a cure, but a fourteen-year-old boy did his job, just a little too well, then again, it was never supposed to be unleashed, or so he was told.

Years later, it is discovered that the virus had been unleashed, sat dormant and finally exploded on the world and not a single living creature on earth was safe. The clock was running down on the planet and two CDC scientists could be the last hope.

D.M. Rasey’s THE FLAW is an edge-of-your-seat thriller written in such a way that the characters and events feel quite plausible. The writing is simple, straightforward and each event is easy to follow as the world becomes to succumb to a madness and eventual death. Actual events are woven into this tale and political machinations of world governments add another layer of chilling scenarios. Who could be trusted? What was the real purpose behind its creation? A tale sure to grip the imaginations of readers as we wonder, could this really happen? Is it happening right now?

I was invited to read this book by BooksGoSocial. This is my honest and voluntary review.

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This wasn’t my typical read, I’ve been trying to step out of my comfort zone with books lately and I was not disappointed.

Thank you Netgalley and the publisher for my copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.

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It's a work of fiction but could easily be real. I'd suggest true crime fans would like this as well as fiction fans. This reminds me of Robin Cook's early works.

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