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The Terminal List

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A story about a Navy SEAL who goes rogue when betrayed by the establishment, this is written by a former Navy SEAL who definitely knows his technical stuff and the world about which he’s writing. However, it would be a much better story if he’d managed to keep his political opinions out of it. Considering the systematic rorting of the system by the Republicans currently in power, portraying Democrats as the villains in this particular story is laughable. Especially considering the journalist helping out the hero and the way the politicians attempted to decry her as ‘fake news’, a move right out of the Republican handbook.

There are some interesting concepts here which didn’t get explored in depth; when James Reece discovers he and his unit received an experimental drug designed to prevent development of PTSD, he doesn’t for one moment stop to think that maybe it’s affected his mental state. Maybe he should be reacting more with grief for his murdered family and friends and less with all-out, unemotional focus on revenge. And not one of the trusted friends who help him out, who he tells about the drug, ask him about it either.

The author’s attempts to make his hero an Everyman fall down too, for example when his one Mexican friend turns out to be less respectable businessman and more kingpin with his fingers in a lot of pies. Every named character in the story who’s not a white American turns out to be either a criminal, a terrorist or both. Torture is glorified, when Reece is described as having learned how to waterboard an opponent “just after 9/11, when Americans still had the will to win”. (I added YIKES as a note in the Kindle file about that).

Money, especially in the quantities at stake here, is a great motivator. I can absolutely buy the motivations of the villains here. The plot actually makes a reasonable amount of sense, and all this really needed to actually be good was an editor willing to clean up the political nonsense, get the author to tone down the technical weaponry talk (yes, I’m sure serving and former members of the military would notice the accuracy, but neither they nor your average layperson would really care what type of knife Reece used to gut someone or which brand of ammunition he’s loading his gun with) and actually get the author to explore the emotional fallout of such a crusade.

Military thrillers need to be apolitical, as the military itself is supposed to be. If the author is able to figure that out and find an editor who can pick out and help him remove his unconscious bias from his writing, he might be able to come up with a readable book. This, sadly, isn’t it. One star.

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Brilliant, I loved it. This book is as good as any Action Thriller I’ve ever read. I really enjoyed Jack Carr’s writing style, and his ability to take the reader on such a thrilling journey. It was so easy to connect with the characters, and I found myself sad one minute and angry the next. Once I started reading this, I really didn’t want to do anything else.
Lieutenant Commander James Reece was a troop Commander with the Navy Seals and he had spent many years overseas in war zones like Afghanistan and Iraq. He was a decorated veteran with many years’ experience but more than anything he loved spending time at home with his beautiful wife and young daughter. Things didn’t go so well overseas on one of his missions and now James Reece is getting the blame for men dying on his watch. No one wanted to listen to reason back home in the States, and now they have made James angry. The last thing you want is having a Navy Seal come after you. From start to finish I really enjoyed this book, and I’m looking forward to starting his next novel. Easily worth the 5/5 Star Rating.

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