This book felt very young adult, only with the constant reference to a one night stand and the related steam. However, some of the steamy scenes were so cringy that I had to skip parts.

The YA feel does make sense as this author is an established YA author under her real name.

While reading, I kept thinking of how this book feels familiar as if I’ve read similar ones in the past. Nothing felt new or unique about the story to me.

If you are working on anything that can be proprietary don’t tell anyone until you’ve completed it! Because of that, I did not have empathy for The core story line that the app idea was “stolen.” (Can it be considered stolen if you TELL the person all about your idea?)

There were many times when she would refer to him as “my sworn enemy” yet we were never told or shown WHY she hated him so much.

It was hard to connect with the main characters as they did feel very one dimensional. I did like Annika’s friend the best as she did show some sense during the story.

The ending did give a little redemption as they both said they were working on the app so they could talk to each other.

Overall, I wanted to enjoy this book as I was looking forward to it but it just missed the mark for me.

Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher and the author, for an ARC of this book, in exchange for an honest review.
The synopsis of this book sounded intriguing to me so I requested a copy to read.
Unfortunately, I have tried reading this book on 2 separate occasions and during that 2nd attempt, I have only managed to make it halfway through so I'd rather stop here and state that this book just wasn't for me.
I wish the author, publisher and all those promoting the book much success and connections with the right readers.

Annika Dev is developing an app called Make Up, which will study conversations between partners and show them how to fix their relationships. Hudson Craft moves into the office down the hall from her. His app is called Break Up, which is a service that will send someone to your partner to break up with them for you. Hudson and Annika had a spontaneous fling in Vegas in the previous summer. She told him about her idea for an app and then he stole her idea to make an app to break people up. Now, they’re not only neighbors but they’re also competing for an investment that Annika needs to save her company from bankruptcy. They have to figure out how to put their differences behind them to create successful businesses.

‘Hate to love’ is one of my favourite romance tropes. There was a lot of tension between Annika and Hudson right from the beginning. Annika had strong feelings against Hudson immediately. I wasn’t sure why she hated him so much, and the complete details of what happened between them wasn’t revealed until the final pages. Her feelings would have made more sense if their first encounter was described earlier in the story.

The final quarter of the story was very intense and emotional. There were very high, exciting parts and some low, devastating parts as well. The plot became much more solid as it progressed. There were some things that were revealed in the final parts, such as the details of Annika and Hudson’s first encounter, which would have been better if they were revealed at the beginning.

This was a good ‘hate to love’ romance. I’m looking forward to reading Lily Menon’s next romances!

Thank you St. Martin’s Griffin for providing a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

Annika Dev is what one would call a romantic, but she knows love isn’t always sunshine and roses. She knows love takes hard work and understanding, which is why she and her friend are developing Make Up, an app that will help couples communicate better.

Hudson Craft on the other hand believes relationships typically end and he believes the break up should be quick and efficient like many things in our fast paced lives. That is why he developed Break Up, an app that allows you to use a service to break up with your partner.

Annika is pretty set in the idea that Hudson stole her app and is majorly benefitting from it after their week long fling at a conference in Las Vegas. Now Hudson’s company has moved into Annika’s office building and she’s not sure how much more she can take.

This one was a tough read for me. I found Annika’s character very unlikeable from the very beginning. The whole storyline for me was just off and I couldn’t connect with it. Without giving away some major points of the book, this to me was just not well put together and I didn’t really like the flow. I also felt like the last bit of the book was just sloppily thrown together in a rush to finish the story. This one was a big let down for me and gets 2.5 stars.

Annika has a great idea for a relationship app: it helps those already in one talk each other through disagreements and difficulties in a healthy way, keeping fights from becoming break-ups. She just has to convince angel investors that her concept is worth it, or she won't be able to pay the rent on her office space and her dream will end in total failure. Adding to her stress is a rival app created by her former one-week stand, Hudson. Despite it being the total opposite of her relationship-saver (it basically hires stand-ins to go break up with your partner FOR you so you don't have to have those uncomfortable conversations yourself), it's wildly successful and Hudson's face is on the cover of tech magazines. They had a good time during their brief fling, but with their different approaches to love, it's obvious that they could never have been anything more. And now they're enemies, sabotaging each other's networking parties and presentations, each trying to outdo the other so they can get the investors to choose their app. Only their rivalry, while driving them both nuts, is also a heck of a lot of fun. And maybe, despite their differences, their original connection wasn't doomed to fail after all...it might have been the beginning of something big for them both.

This was a cute romance, but it didn't entirely work for me. I had a hard time connecting with Annika because she was just too uppity and happy on her high horse to be sympathetic. Hudson's app was ANATHEMA to everything she believes in (that was said no less than 10 times) and she "could never be with someone" who capitalizes on people's heartbreak like that. It was really hard to like her! And Hudson, despite actually seeming swoony, just randomly chose to change his whole approach to life for no apparent reason at the end so they could have their HEA. It was all too sudden and convenient, and it didn't make sense with everything he'd been saying up until then.

However, I liked the supporting characters more (June and Ziggy were favorites), and the writing was fun and easy to read. I felt like this was a tentative step between YA and adult romance (this is Meron's first book for adults). So I'm interested to see whether she can write a more believable plot and a more likeable heroine with a little more practice.

**Thank you to NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for the ARC in exchange for my honest review!**

This was a disappointment for me, as a lover of Menon's YA work. Unfortunately, the traits she makes pop in teenagers carry through to her adult characters where they just don't work. The two leads met off-page before the book began and due to a betrayal that is unexplained, Annika hates Hudson but Hudson remains a fan of Annika despite the hostility that radiates off of her.

From the start Annika is hard to get on board with -- why is she hemorrhaging money on downtown LA real estate for an app that doesn't need to be consumer-facing yet because it's still in development. Why is this book not set in Silicon Valley where there is actually a cut-throat app development culture.

Hudson isn't great either! His app lets people break up with someone without speaking to them face to face which seems incredibly gross and it's massively unclear why he launched it, why he is so passionate about it, and why it's so successful with no criticism of how gross its actual application is (it's men who don't want to deal with the reality of women possibly having feelings at being dumped).

So begins a series of petulant sabotaging pranks that are supposed to be a fun hate-to-love war... and all of this feels more appropriate for Menon's YA work. Annika is on the verge of losing her business and is behaving like a literal child. The romance makes no sense. The business subplot makes no sense.

Basically, give me more YA, please. Menon is excellent at it.

I really loved the sound of the premise to Make Up Break Up, especially the enemies to lovers trope (my personal favorite), second chance romance, and really, most of all, a smart, strong female main character in Annika Dev, who I loved to see was Indian American. Yet this rom-com didn't quite work for me in the end. I loved the idea of Annika's Make Up app and would have really enjoyed reading more of how it worked since Menon did such a great job bringing tech into the book without making it too technical, you know what I mean? I know it's an app that I'd use!

But as much as I loved Annika's passion for the Make Up app, her friendship with her best friend June (my favorite character in the book because she's adorable), and her drive to succeed on her own merits, I really, really disliked the person she became when faced with Hudson Craft, rival app developer of the app Break Up and her steamy one night stand in Vegas. She became childish, mean when around him, and not someone that I would like to be friends with at all--the total opposite of the person that I originally thought she was, and it soured the story for me. Sure, the two were rivals, and assumptions were made on both sides, but I felt like Annika just needed to stop acting so immature because the "rivalry" was so obviously one-sided (hers).

In a lot of ways, the book was predictable. I honestly cared more about June than anyone else--I'd read a sequel about June! Overall, it's a cute, quick read.

Thank you, NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for the DRC. All opinions are my own.

I started this before Royally Wild and had no problem putting it aside. I almost didn’t finish it. I just wasn’t impressed in this. I loved the concept, but it just fell flat. And honestly, I didn’t like Annika. I felt like she was super judgmental of Hudson - and June and her dad. I would pass on this if I were you.

A geeky love story. Two tech developers do battle for dominance. With witty repartee and sneaky tricks they try to get one over each other. All the time what they are really fighting is the attraction they feel for each other. There are also secondary characters who add layers of flavor to to story.

I just....did not care. I didn't like either character, I hated the decisions they made, and I just could not find myself caring for more than about 30 seconds at a time. SO much potential, but this just wasn't a book for me.

DNF at 6%. Sometimes you can just tell early on that a book isn’t the right fit for you. Yes - I’m reading this for the romance. But when it’s a romance where their jobs are a key part - I need to be able to at least somewhat believe in their jobs. And the amount of terrible business decisions Annika had made and shared in the opening chapter already made that hard for me. Ultimately, this isn’t a good fit. Thank you to the publisher and Netgalley for the advance reading copy.

After loving Booked for Christmas I was so excited to see another Lily Menon story being released. Make Up Break Up was such an entertaining enemies to lovers/second chance romance read. Annika and Hudson are rivals with apps that are in direct contrast to each other and they are both aiming to win the same investment. I really loved their chemistry! It had the sparks that I love with enemies to lovers romances which had me flipping the pages. Once I started I really did not want to put this book down. I wish their emotional relationship was more developed so it flowed more throughout the story. I also wish Annika had more character growth throughout the story. I loved that she was a strong character but some of her actions were a bit over the top for me in trying to one-up Hudson. I appreciated the side characters and thought they really added to the story, especially Annika's dad. Overall, I really enjoyed this story and it was such a fun escape. If you want a romance to fly though I recommend picking up Make Up Break Up!

Annika and Hudson are two up and coming business owners. After a recent fling in Vegas, their paths cross again...with one issue. Their new businesses are exact opposite of each other. Their new start ups also could prevent any sort of future relationship. Can they overcome these hurdles to and start a relationship? Will their jobs stand in the way?

Cute. A bit predictable. However a definite recommendation. Perfect read for Valentine’s Day.

The setup of the book was incredibly strong but I felt like it lacked a lot of the material that it so dearly needed.
While I cannot say I have been a huge of the author's books in the past, it was sad to add on to the list of underwhelming books. I did think that this had so much potential.

I was very excited to read this book. However it never grabbed my attention and I had to struggle to finish it. Annika and Hudson's story is a combination platter of second chance, enemies-to-lovers and opposites attract tropes. This should have been an explosion of goodness but just somehow fell flat. I got no sparks of any kind from these two and I found their childishness annoying. Of the two, Hudson was the most likable but if I am 100% honest, I did not care for either.

I've always loved Sandhya's YA books so I was so excited for her to be coming out with an adult romance. All of the heart and love that is present in her previous books is here in Make Up Break Up! Loved all of it and can't wait to read more of Lily Menon!!!

Annika and Hudson are both app developers. They first met at a tech conference several months ago and apparently really hit it off (aka fling in Las Vegas). Fast forward several months, and Hudson has a wildly successful app and Annika is still in development with hers. Annika's app is all about helping people Make Up and Hudson's app is all about helping people Break Up. This is not the app that Hudson was planning when they were in Vegas, and Annika believes that he stole parts of her idea.

Hudson has just moved his company in next door to Annika's and they are both competing for a huge investment pitch contest. Annika desperately needs funds to keep her business afloat. She couldn't be more annoyed to discover one, that Hudson's moved in, and two, that she still feels sparks for him.

I loved Annika's best friend, who is also her programmer. Annika also has a close relationship with her father, though there is some tension there. I would have liked to have known more about the two apps and what they were supposed to do. I found parts of the book and especially the ending to be a bit rushed/unrealistic which impacted my overall impression of the book. It was a quick read for a Sunday afternoon.

Thanks to NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

2.5 stars

If you want angst to almost lovers type of thing this book is for you. But just know that 95% of the book will be that.

Annika's idea for an app sounds amazing, while also being extremely invasive of privacy at the same time, and Hudson's idea is literally every player's dream app. Both very different ideas and one is already up and running and the other isn't so Annika being upset just didn't really make sense because, in the end, they would be very different in what they did.
Overall this book was okay. I kept finding myself getting annoyed with Annika and Hudson both. Just so much miscommunication and unnecessary hurt feelings because they couldn't just sit down and let the other explain things. Both were just constantly running from it all.

The ending of this annoyed me because of how rushed it felt for me personally. I know other people will like it because of how it ended but it just wasn't something I enjoyed after all the drama we had had before.

The premise of Make Up Break Up sounded like a fun romantic comedy, and while it was a quick read, it missed the mark for me. I loved how passionate Annika Dev is about her app, Make Up, and her friendship with June, who is also Make Up's developer. They were such a supportive and hardworking team! The relationship between Annika and her father was very sweet, too. However, when it came to Hudson Craft, Annika became harsh and hotheaded. Rivals-to-lovers is a trope I love, but I was disappointed to see Annika repeatedly cling to her beliefs that Hudson was a terrible person and treat him poorly. I also felt there was a missed opportunity to explain more about the Break Up app. Why was it so successful and why did its team believe in it so much? It just seemed too obvious for it to be such an awful app compared to how hopeful and helpful the Make Up was. Overall, Make Up Break Up was a promising romantic comedy debut from Lily Menon and I'd read more from her.

This book was fine. There was nothing spectacular and I felt that the characters lacked personality and chemistry. I didn't find myself rooting for them at all, in their relationship or business. Really I just wanted to see more of June and Ziggy.  ⭐⭐💫 I would pass on this.