Member Reviews
There’s a lot of potential to be a great story here! Elizabeth Lark shows up at the Barkley Inn and Myra just knows she’s her missing daughter of 20 years, presumed dead. She invites Elizabeth and her son into their family. Someone is after them. Sounds amazing right?
Unfortunately I didn’t like the dialogue, it’s so repetitive, let’s talk, I need a nap, I need a walk, you’re different now, I won’t pry, talk to me, I’m tired... very basic and repetitive. I had to backtrack several times because chapters don’t flow, the dialogue doesn’t flow... there’s no sense or reason to some of it. I started skimming just to get through it. I’d rate it a 2.5 but I’ll bump it to a 3 and say I think with some changes it could be a really decent book!
I cannot praise enough this incredible thriller! Is the missing daughter found is is someone playing a cruel prank on the grieving family is the question in the center of this quirky novel.