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Heart of a Runaway Girl

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I so very much enjoyed this debut mystery! Mabel was such a firecracker powerful mama on a mission and this book had just enough mystery to keep you hanging on and wanting more. Mabel is a single mom raising two boys and her niece on her on her own, all while running a diner/motel. Mabel meets a young couple in her diner and ends up in a murder mystery and her instinct in FIRE! I love the family aspect of the book, the small town aspect, how we subtly covered racial injustice but didn't flood the book with it. This book was a solid debut and I absolutely enjoyed every bit of it. The author's website shows that this book is the first of a series and I cannot wait to continue.

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A fantastic and easy-to-get-lost-in start of a new mystery series featuring diner/motel owner Mabel Davison.

It’s 1986. The small town of Blue River, Washington is known for the new mines, farmers, the sawmill, racist drug dealers, and Mabel’s Diner. One evening while Mabel is waitressing, she witnesses a young couple having some sort of argument at the back booth.

When the teen girl ends up being brutally murdered later that night, her boyfriend lands himself in jail. Word gets around to Mabel, and the news does not sit right with her. You see, kind-hearted and loving Mabel has a gift. She feels she can read people through their eyes. She is convinced the boyfriend had nothing to do with the murder. What’s worse is that she thinks he’s being pinned for the murder because he’s Black.

In a mountain town full of drug dealers and extremists/racist trash, Mabel knows there is more going on...and she is not going to let it slide. She decides to take matters into her own hands and question the sheriff, look for evidence, and make sure the right thing happens. Unfortunately for Mabel, this puts her and her family in danger. But what people don’t understand about Mabel is that she is not one to give up when it comes to righting wrongs.

I devoured this tale, and Mabel is one of my favorite characters I’ve read in a long time. She’s a tough cookie and an extremely hard worker who provides for her children and niece, and she’s a light to most everyone in the town. Sure, it may be a little far-fetched that this waitress/diner-motel owner turns into an amateur sleuth, but it is highly entertaining nevertheless.

This is not a cozy mystery, but it’s also not too heavy. Debut author Trevor Wiltzen does a phenomenal job of balancing Mabel and her investigative shenanigans (some of them are funny, all of them are pretty clever) and the very real issue of racism, which is obviously still prevalent today.

Mabel tells her young son, “I guess I don’t have the answers, son. I don’t know what it’s like to feel racism. But you’re right about the silence. Silence allows racism to flourish.” Mabel won’t let fear silence her.

She also calls everyone “luv” and likes to tell dirty jokes to the diner patrons. I think the world would benefit greatly if we all had a Mabel in our lives, and her charm is why I’m rating this 4.5 stars, rounded up. Not to mention, it’s just a great story that was hard for me to put down.

Thank you to IBPA and NetGalley for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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It’s the 1980’s, and Mabel Davison, owner of a small town diner and motel, is without question, a sweet, uncomplaining, and kind hearted lady, who wants to help everyone, regularly dishing out coffee and slices of her freshly baked pies for free, which makes her even more popular in her hometown of Blue River, but there’s a naivety about her that makes her appear very childlike at times, and makes her act first, without thinking things through.

Blue River may be a small mountain town, but it has a big drug problem, and a fair amount of extremists, with their own ideas of justice, the kind who sort out ‘problems’ in their own way, on their own terms, a place where the rule of law means little!

When a young couple get into an argument in Mabel’s diner, she doesn’t think too much about it, a lovers quarrel perhaps, but then the boy, Winston, is arrested for the rape and murder of the white girl Karen Thompson. Now, there are a lot of racists in this small mountain town, and Winston happens to be a black boy, so automatically they have their killer right there!

Innocent until proven guilty you’d think? Well no, not according to white supremacist Larson, the biggest drug manufacturer and supplier in these parts, who also owns most of the property in town. Winston is actually one of Larson’s drug dealers, but that doesn’t stop him and his mob, from going on the warpath, the aim being to lynch Winston.

Mabel doesn’t believe Winston killed Karen, she believes she can ‘read’ people, so she takes it upon herself to start asking some awkward questions, but of course she makes herself a target for Larson, and no one gets away with treading on his toes. He threatens Mabel, and Larson doesn’t make idle threats, so Mabel is in for a very tough time.

This is author Trevor Wiltzen’s debut novel - his characterisations were spot on, (Mabel is delightful), the storyline itself highlights issues of white privilege, and racism, and underscore this story right the way through – all highly topical, both then and now, and sometimes these themes make for uncomfortable reading, but the book succeeds in raising awareness of these important
themes, and are crucial to the story.

However, Mabel is a woman of principle, and with her on the case, you can be sure that she’ll fight for justice, regardless of the colour of one’s skin.

All in all an enjoyable and engaging read.

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Mabel Davison was the owner/operator of a diner and motel in small town Blue River, "practically a castoff from the highway". Mabel's clientele included construction workers, truck drivers, miners and locals. She served coffee "on the house...My coffee here is always fresh, free and fast...". "Her charm, swagger, and a little bawdry humor were the only gifts she'd give her male customers...[who] often treated her more like a therapist or a bartender...". In the 1980's, this small Washington State town was a hotbed of drugs and extremists. The residents, including farmers and sawmill operators were "a sorry lot of folks...with nothing in their pockets...any kid with ambition wanted to leave".

A young couple, seated in a booth in the diner, were engaged in an intense conversation. Winston Washington looked like he cared for Karen Thompson, however, he looked scared for her. When Karen was brutally murdered, Winston was promptly charged and arrested. Since an angry mob of men in trucks gathered at Sheriff Dan's storefront office, the State Police were called in taking Winston to jail in Seattle.

Larson was "the local kingpin who lorded over Blue River...The law didn't rule this town. It was Larson. Winston was a low-end drug dealer getting his drugs from Larson". Mabel didn't think that Winston had killed Karen. She trusted her intuition. She claimed, "I have a gift...it's in the eyes...when I look into them...it's like I can read a person's soul...". Larson warned Mabel. If you interfere in my business, I'll interfere in yours. A big burly trucker piped up in the diner, "You threaten Mabel, you deal with me...". Mabel "felt strangely safe among these rough out-of-town men". Mabel, mother of two sons, a niece in residence, a motel to run and waitressing in her diner, will now don another hat, private investigator. Despite lack of proof, she is convinced of Winston's innocence. She needs to watch herself and her loved ones. "Sometimes it is not safe here...you know this town".

"Heart of a Runaway Girl (Mabel Davison, #1)" by debut author Trevor Wiltzen is the first book in a new series. Mabel's star shines bright as penned by Wiltzen. The character development of the Blue River residents is superb. Mabel's "coffee, pie and hospitality" will handily nurture those in need and aid in future mysteries.

Thank you Trevor Wiltzen, Independent Book Publishers Association (IBPA) and Net Galley for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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First and foremost, a large thank you to NetGalley, Trevor Wiltzen, and the Independent Book Publishers’ Association for providing me with a copy of this novel, which allows me to provide you with an unbiased review.

Approached by the author to review his debut novel, I was intrigued with what appeared to be a captivating dust jacket blurb in Heart of a Runaway Girl. Trevor Wiltzen takes readers back to a small Washington town in the 1980s, where drugs and white supremacy are running rampant. When a murder takes place, the easiest person to name becomes the sole suspect, though this does not sit well with Mabel Davison. She’s determined to get to the bottom of what happened and sacrifice it all for an innocent man.

Blue River is nestled in the heart of Washington State, but is by no means tranquil. A hotbed of drugs and racism in 1986, it’s surely nowhere one would want to raise their children. However, Mabel Davison is doing her best as a single parent. Her local diner and motel serve the locals well, allowing Mabel to get a sense of the town’s pulse.

While waitressing one evening, Mabel notices a young couple at a back table; a white girl and her black boyfriend. They appear to be arguing, though Mabel presumes it’s just one of those teenage squabbles and lets them be. When news breaks hours later that young Karen Thompson was found raped and murdered at the local mill, all eyes turn toward her boyfriend, Winston Washington. It seems to make sense that a black man who commit such a heinous act, so he is rounded up by the local sheriff. When a group of local white supremacists learns of the arrest, they try to bring about their own form of justice, stopped only when Mabel gets involved and calls the state police.

Something in her gut tells Mabel that Winston is innocent, though she has no concrete proof. She pushes ahead to learn as much as she can about both Karen and Winston, while dodging the pressure of others to let the wheels of justice turn. Mabel begins asking the tough questions and starts investigating on her own, only to discover a potential list of suspects that no one wants to name.

While she is able to convince Winston’s attorney not to accept the guilt that his client is professing to put things to sleep, Mabel knows that she is entering dangerous territory. She unearths much of the local drug trade and offends many men in positions of power, all to help Winston. This could surely have dire results, but Mabel Davison is nothing if not compassionate.

Juggling her work, her home life, and the constant threats that come with asking too many questions, Mabel finds that she may be the only one who really seeks to advocate for Winston’s innocence, while also shining a light on the real killer who treated Karen Thompson so poorly. Mabel’s prepared to sacrifice it all and she may have that chance, if she makes a single wrong move!

While this may be Trevor Wiltzen’s debut novel, it sure doesn’t read like it. There is depth and an addictive plot that will keep the reader hooked as they try to push through to see who the real killer is in what is being called the first in a new series.

Mabel Davison comes across as a woman who has such a big heart and is willing to help anyone in need. Known to many around town, she seeks to ensure that everyone is heard and that truth sees the light of day, even if it is not always what people want to hear. A single mother, she has her own demons from the past, but is doing all that she can to raise two boys and a niece. Sheer determination to do what is right makes her the best amateur investigator, not taking herself too seriously while not dismissing the importance of the mission at hand.

Wiltzen provides a handful of strong characters who help make the novel as alluring as it is. Coming from many walks of life, these men and women add flavour to an already intriguing story and help depict Washington State in the mid-80s effectively. I found myself wanting to know more about many who grace the pages of this book, making the fact that there may be a series in the works all the more exciting.

The premise of the book may sound a little odd—local waitress seeks to become private investigator to help a patron—but it works! Wiltzen develops his story and characters in such a way that the story flows well and keeps the rewarded guessing. With short chapters, the reader is propelled to keep reading (as I did) well into the evening to discover the truth that Blue River residents do not want known. The writing is strong, the ideas clear, and the narrative crisp, making this the perfect debut to captivate the attention of the curious reader. I’ve already signed up to receive more information about future publications and I suspect others will follow suit once they get their hands on this one!

Kudos, Mr. Wiltzen, for this wonderful introduction to your work. Glad to see a fellow Albertan out there making a name for himself. I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for Mabel and your fans!

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Honestly the first 75+ pages I was like what in the world is this book, Mabel was kind of irritating and calling everyone "Luv" it felt over the top. I pushed thru and bumped it up from a 2 star to a 3 star personally for me I would categorize this book as a YA (a kid 16+ could read, there is reference to drugs) I feel like towards the end you can really get into the story Mabel reminds me of a nosey grandma that wants to help everyone and do right in the world. It's an "okay" book but it's NOT a mystery/thriller AT ALL if so it's incredibly mild/meek and personally I've read so much better. It was an engaging book just honestly not what I was expecting at all and I wouldn't read the other series.

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