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When a sacred slave and a trained assassin meet, they discover their world is dependent on their choices. Roma was dedicated to a goddess as a baby and has grown up in a world where women are holy vessels, yet do not have a voice of their own. Leviathan is the illegitimate son of the cold and calculating Firawn. With their destinies intertwined, Roma and Leviathan must look into the darkest parts of themselves and conquer their own demons to survive.

I so, so wanted to like this novel. With such a rich setting, I had expected to be utterly enchanted. Unfortunately I feel like this book fell into several debut novel pitfalls, and I found myself just wanting to get this book over and done with.

As I mentioned before, there is a lot of possibility in this book. Inspired by pre-Islamic Indo-Persian mythology, it is a new world for me as a reader. At the same time, it's a very difficult world in some aspects. It felt like there was a lot of info-dumping throughout the novel. Expansive world-building is only helpful as long as the information is needed, and I finished this book feeling more overwhelmed than immersed.

I realized early on that this was not a book for me. I didn't click with the writing (too flowery for my tastes) and failed to connect with the characters. With the exception of Junho, Leviathan's friend who is the embodiment of chaotic energy, I couldn't shake the feeling that the characters were a little on the flat side. It felt like Roma and Leviathan weren't people with trauma, but rather shells built around trauma.

For me, this felt like the precursor to the actual story. I didn't really feel truly invested in the plot until I was close to the end. And while a small part of me wants to know what happens next, I unfortunately don't think I'll be reading the sequel.

Lastly, this is a heavy book. There is quite a lot of scenarios that would be disturbing to the young reader, and for that reason I consider this more new adult/adult than young adult. TW: sexual assault in various forms, self-mutilation, suicide, gore

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** Thank you to NetGalley for sending me and ARC in exchange for an honest review **
I gotta say, the plot and the extract showed an incredibly interesting story. More so after being told it was inspired by indo-persian mythology which I had nothing but curiosity over and holding great expectations.
Sadly, I felt like all those great images of what that story would be did nothing but hinder the actual story. I was quite excited for the fact it was an own-voices book that would shed light on practices that were nothing short but cruel on people and that still go on to this day, to read about a culture and a new system of belief I had no idea about and tie it to a girl forced into a life of servitude. I was so, so excited. But this was ultimately not it.
I'd say the first 20% if not the whole half of the book is simple name-dropping. I felt like there was not any sort of world building but instead a world where the reader was smacked in and told 'good luck'. I was lost during this whole reading, not knowing what these words meant, the expressions, the terms for brother or other people in authority, I still have no idea what a zaat really is nor do I find any good thing about the belief system they have going on. So really, this was a headache to even pick up, much more to keep reading.
To add to that, the characters all fell flat and very 2D images of a bulletpoint list specifying their trauma. I've never had problems reading about sensitive topics, if anything, they help me understand such acts better and humanize the pain people have gone through. But this? It felt more like a sketched out idea that was never developed into the characters and simply written to gain any sort of effect.
Because of this, the plot felt dull and at the same time too confusing to understand, I felt sympathy for no character whatsoever and could barely remember who was who. But, I do agree that the idea going behind this book is somewhat original and that there was a true effort made. Seeing as so many people loved it I only hope that this was simply a bad experience for me and that Lal Din grows in their writing even more than before. That is all.

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*Thank you to Ana Lal Din, NetGalley, and White Tigress Press for a free eARC in exchange for an honest review.*

I absolutely loved reading this book and the cover is stunning! It was amazing how the author intertwines Roma's story with Leviathan's to create a tale that forces the two enemies to work together. The way Roma's past continued to affect her even after many years shows how difficult it is to overcome her scars and move on from assault. The Indo-Persian setting was a fresh change from books I normally read, and although some terms were confusing at first, it was easy to follow along throughout the story.

This book does introduce sensitive topics such as abuse, human trafficking, and drug abuse in the story that can be triggering for some people. However, I think that it is difficult to portray the struggles that many people face after experiencing such traumatizing things, and the author does a wonderful job showing how easily people's minds can be controlled out of fear and the power of religion.

Overall, this was a wonderful book! I didn't see the ending coming and I was utterly speechless! I'm so excited for book 2!

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Never thought I'd be gutted by a YA novel, need more raw emotions in your life?
The Descent of the Drowned by Ana Lal Dina is a hard hitting fantasy novel set in a violent ancient-arabic-persian-indian inspired world. Its genre branded as YA hadn’t prepared me for the violence found in those pages which was more akin to Game of Thrones than any YA book I ever read. Do not glance over the trigger warning with a shrug, this is not a book to put in every hands and it will hollow a chunk out of you as you survive with Roma the horrors of her word.
The world building is this book is impressive, the culture, nature, beliefs everything is vibrantly leaping out of the page and locking you into its vicious world. You suffer in those pages, you need a breather when you flick them, you drown with Roma… but her strength keeps you rooted.
This reads like the prequel to a big epic, the birth of the legend, and I must say I want to know how it will spread. But the punitive nature of the read holds me back. You have to be in a good place to read this, confident… because this will hurt. I can’t believe some of the practices in there are taken from documented past practices. It is appalling to remember how vulnerable women have been through time and in so many civilisations and in so many places even now…

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DNF at 20%

I really tried to like this book. I devoted myself to getting through it. But, every time I picked this up, I felt a reading slump coming on. It became a waste of time to continue, because I knew I wouldn't enjoy this.

To me, this book felt like it had no idea what it wanted to be. The first 20% is just constant name dropping, it was unbearable. I'm all for exploring new cultures, I love it, but this book explained nothing. I was thrown into a world full of gods, characters, and customs I knew nothing about, and I spent hours confused. At the end of it all, I can't justify continuing something that I won't enjoy, so this is getting out down

Thanks to Netgalley and Ana Lal Din for providing a free copy in exchange for an honest review!

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What a fantastic debut novel!

Like I don’t think I have enough positive words to describe this book. The immersive and rich world building immediately drew me in. The storytelling was captivating and I was in love with the plot. The dark themes were raw and unrestrained and the characters were beautifully developed. I also enjoyed reading the dual POV in third person as I felt like the Ghaib - just watching everything unfold for Roma and Leviathan at such a close distance. Such a unique way to write!

Although marketed as a young adult book (I assume due to Roma and Leviathan - 18ish and 21ish respectively - are of that age bracket...but then again they are adults I guess), I think there needs to be a separate genre for books similar to this due to the dark themes that were explored. Trigger warnings are given on the Amazon website and I assume for other book purchasing stores but I wouldn’t recommend this to someone that is under the age of 18 anyway so I would be more inclined to label it as an adult fantasy fiction novel.

I am an absolute fan of Ana Lal Din’s work and I’m so upset that I have to wait for the following books until next year or so! I need to get myself a hardback physical copy of this book because the cover is so stunning. I’m glad it’s a trilogy though because I am nowhere near ready to leave this beautiful world.

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A powerful, searing fantasy debut!!

The world of Khansadun is a world of wealth, power, magic, gods, castes, clans, poverty and desperation. The land was once fertile, rich and full of magic. Now there is drought, the magic is limited, hard to find and available to only the higher castes. Roma is a devadasi, a sacred slave of god, specifically of Lamia, residing with her fellow sister slaves, waiting to be auctioned to patrons who pay for the privilege of lying with a goddess. Her prior experience with a patron has left scars, both physical and psychological on Roma. As the son of the ruling Firawn, Leviathan is both feared and despised, as his mother was of the casteless clans and died giving birth to him. He was sent away to a military academy where he was indoctrinated and forged into a brutal soldier, leader and his father's weapon. Both Roma and Levi have secrets buried not only in their pasts, but within themselves, with abilities that set them apart and which connect them in ways they cannot understand.

I was immediately hooked by this story, the world feels so fully realized with vivid descriptions of the the cities, rituals and landscapes. The cast of characters around Roma and Levi are rich and varied, I especially liked Malev and Almaguir. Roma and Levi each struggle in their own way for an identity that is their own and not one that was forced upon them by others. The depths of the pain and anguish that both Roma and Levi live with ground the story with incredible realism. Choosing survival and the freedom that picking a path of their own, no matter how difficult, makes this story a remarkable one of redemption. This was a totally gripping story right through to the "oh, now I really need the next book right now" ending and I was thoroughly immersed in this amazing world and by these outstanding characters. This truly is a wonderful debut and I so look forward to what comes next.

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I really liked the way this book is written it is very unique and unlike anything, I have ever read before I would definitely recommend it to those who are looking for a new YA book to read.

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The Descent of The Drowned is the first book I finished in 2021 and I wouldn't have it any other way.

Everything about this book is phenomenal.

Ana Lal Din captivated me with her writing of richly reimagined of pre-Islamic Indo-Persian era. It's almost like she told me a tale that happened one time in Jahiliyyah era. Some entities name mentioned were familiar to me like Hubal, Manat, etc (my teachers taught them in Islamic History classes in school). But nothing will prepared me of the lore of Mother Lamia, and how powerful she is. You really don't want to provoke the wrath of a goddess.

Roma and Levi characterizations also very special to me. Especially Roma, the pain she had endured, how she survived, and all painful journey of her. She was the best story teller of I could ask for. Her pain was so raw and real.

Ana Lal Din also touched so many important topics. Deep-rooted misogyny, abuse, and manipulation to a lot of women by men, even by their closest family members. The broken, tyrannical system that failed poor people the most. People lied behind God's name to enrich themselves. Human trafficking, especially of kids and women. Transphobia. Ethnic cleansing. And so many more.

The end of this book is hit-and-miss for me, because if I interpreted this as open ending, the epilogue is a perfect conclusion. But I cannot ignore the build up about the resistance and the rebel—the Wolves, and I am dying to know about what happened to them.

Lastly. Albeit this book is marketed as young adult fantasy (maybe because the main characters, Roma is around 18 and Levi is around 20), this book is not by all means an easy read. At all. I had to stop mid paragraph (some) and I have to pause for a minute for them to pass. So be mindful and check the trigger warning before you read this book, always take care of yourself.

Here is also the list of triggers I collected:
- death of loved one's
- slavery
- self-harm
- rape
- sexual violence
- gun violence
- femicide
- emotional abuse
- manipulation
- intrusive thoughts
- transphobia
- suicide
- human trafficking
- genocide
- child abuse
- physical torture
- gore
- drug abuse & addiction

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While the concept for this book is fascinating the execution falls far short of expectations. The writing is painfully dry and often feels like reading a textbook instead of a rich work of fantastical fiction. Ideas and actions are shoved in your face and the characters lacked any development outside of what felt like bullet point steps to conveniently further the plot.
I think this author has vast potential as the underlying story was there, I could almost taste it, but it just didn't come out as a fleshed out fantasy novel.

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I would definitely recommend this book! The emotional storytelling and the rich characters allows for a gripping tale full of despair, danger and joy Ana Lal Din successfully creates a vivid world full of intricate details, leading to you wanting more. I can’t wait to see what else comes from Lal Din!

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I was incredibly excited to read "The Descent of the Drowned". I haven't really read many fantasy books based on Arabian mythology which I find fascinating. I wanted to love this book so much. I ended up only liking it.
This is a debut novel and it reads like one, but there is so much potential here. The writing is lush and beautiful, the world creative and deep. It was fun diving into this new, different world.
In the end, I did feel a little overwhelmed - there was just so much information, so much world building that I couldn't keep up and was left confused. Maybe this would have been different for readers with some preknowledge of Arabian myths and the Indo-Persian culture. Still, it was fascinating and enjoyable to read because of Ana Lal Din's beautiful writing style.

The two protagonists, Leviathan and Roma, fell a little flat for me. There is a lot of potential in both of them but I feel like their character development was hindered by the fact that nothing really actually happens in this book. Sure, there is a lot of suffering, there are some minor plots, but "The Descent of the Drowned" reads more like an introduction to this new world. The overarching plot of this series seems to start basically on the last pages, so everything that came before is more or less a very long prologue. The pacing is rather slow, too.

There ist also the matter of agency: Roma barely has any during the whole book. She is an observer most of the time, there are entire chapters from her point of view that consist solely of her watching other characters, including Leviathan, do things while she stands in the background. A lot of time is spent on her suffering, getting hurt, getting abused or dealing with the aftermath of said abuse. Where she goes and what she does is almost always determined by other characters - she is sent to do chores, dances when she is told to, is bought by a new patron, sold to a brothel and so on. There are blink-and-you-miss-it scenes of her taking action of her own volition, but mostly she reacts, observes. This made me enjoy her chapters less than Leviathan's, who is the by far more active protagonist.

It should be noted that this book deals with a lot of very heavy topics: rape and abuse (of minors too), suicide, self-harm, torture. This world is a dark one and there isn't much happiness to be had. Death and trauma are constant companions, there aren't many moments that allow for a little relief. I personally like dark fantasy stories so this didn't bother me, but I do hope that the next book in this series adds some more light-hearted moments and chapters too (and more Ashar please! I love him and he adds some much-needed humour). Without happiness and peace on the horizon, why should we fight through all this darkness after all?

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***ARC received from White Tigress Press and NetGalley in exchange for honest review, opinions are all my own. Thank you!***

This is a book that is not going to be for everyone, it deals with a lot of heavy subjects from forced prostitution, murder, physical and emotional abuse, rape, torture and so on. Most of it, particularly the rape is not described in any level of explicit detail but it can be triggering to people. It never felt like it was there to be gratuitous, it is there to help tell the story of Roma and Levi and their people. Its also a slow burn of a book, more set on world building and fleshing out its characters than rushing headfirst into the confrontation. This is a series you are in for the long haul because there are no satisfactory answers or conclusions to really anything this book sets up and I am here for it.

The book jumps between Roma and Levi and I loved them both equally. Roma is a slave girl, a sacred prostitute to serve the upper class. She is traumatized by her first patron and much of what happens shapes her into the character that she is. She is still a compassionate and caring individual not yet fully broken down by the world around her. I liked that she is complex, wanting both to be good and serve but also longing desperately for her own freedom and the freedom for her brother. There is more to Roma though that only gets hinted at right at the end but is set up well for the next book.

Levi, Levi, Leviathan… How much I adore him. Levi is all sorts of shades of grey, he is not a good man nor does he ever admit to being a good man but he has a broken heart that can’t fully get on board with all the horrible things he has done. Levi is a weapon and uses his skill as best he can, his means to an end are at times violent and bloody but there is no enjoyment in what he does. Levi is trying to do right by his people, trying to help as best that he can. We get glimpse of his past, the soft boy he was that completely conflicts with the hard edges of his current self. I liked the interaction between Levi and Roma, they do not trust each other at all but there is a connection there that I look forward to see who it is explored in the next book. They also play well off each other, two good people broken down and rebuilt by their society and the treatment of others into who they are.

The mythology and world building in this book is lovely. The author is clearly crafting a story using stories and themes that mean a great deal to her. The depiction of the caste system and the abuse easily inflicted upon those without voices by those in power is stark and at times difficult to read. Even though this is set in a fantasy world you can still draw parallels to what is happening then to what still occurs in modern times. There are at times that the writing gets a little clunky and scenes go on a little longer than they should but the writer has a passion for what she is writing about and the characters and themes dragged me in and kept going.

My only complaint is I wish the glossary had been at the front of the book and not the back especially on a digital copy, since bookmarking it from the start would make going back to it easy to reference even if after a little while I was able to pick up what the words meant.

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3.5 stars rounded up

This is a fantasy based on some very real horrible practices that occurred in the Indo-Persian world. Female children were given to temples by their parents to appease the gods and give favor to the families. The children were sex slaves, forced into prostitution and never able to leave or have their own lives. Because of this, there is quite a lot of rape in this book so please be aware if that's an issue for you.

I know nothing about Islamic Arabian mythology or Indo-Persian practices so I did like learning about the magical stories and how society functioned. I felt bad for Roma and the other girls who endured some pretty terrible things. It's hard for me to believe that it was considered regular and people didn't see that they were abusing children.

I would have liked some romance between Roma and Leviathan, but they started out as sort of enemies so they have to work through that first. They did push each other's buttons and Roma challenged Levi's actions, forcing him to reevaluate his stance. There was some character development for him and I look forward to seeing what he does in the next book.

The pacing of this is very slow, with all the action happening in the last quarter. It was a bit difficult to get through all the despair and abuse, but the ending was intriguing and I am interested in seeing what happens next.

I received this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

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This book was A LOT to process. I was hooked by the synopsis that presents a classic enemies unite under a common cause, but any similarities stopped there.

I absolutely adored the main character, Roma, and admired her for her perseverance through the challenging life she has had thus far. Leviathan was nothing like I expected. Anticipating a morally grey character, he fought more for the under privileged and refuses to follow his tyrant of a father blindly. Although romance between the main characters was not a large influence in the plot, I found myself still enjoying the plot. Normally, I can’t deal with a book without romance, but with this book, I found myself more invested in the characters lives than the romance itself.

In a generalized sense, this book felt more like a prequel plot wise. The characters have not shown the growth and interactions we typically see, but I saw this as a book to introduce readers to this world. We learned the traumatic backgrounds of our love interests, and I can see in future books how the growth may play a factor.

In addition, the world-building was slightly hard to follow. While I enjoyed reading an Indo-Persian inspired fantasy world and found many similarities to We Hunt the Flames (another one of my favorites), I got confused often with the magic and people introduced to this world. But, as it’s a debut novel, I could see the effort and research the author has put into her world building. Once I read the second, I’m sure to reread the world building parts to familiarize me in that setting. The plot has major potential, and I can’t wait to see the path the author takes in the upcoming book.

This book deals with a lot of dark issues that unfortunately occur today. The author did an amazing job integrating these issues into the story to shine light on the realistic and terrible nature of them. Some of the issues include abuse, rape culture (although no graphic description is included), and the human trafficking of young children.

I would highly recommend this book to anyone who’s a fan of We Hunt the Flames and Dark Shores.

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4 stars *may change
Trigger Warnings (And thanks to the author for providing these at the beginning of the book): physical and emotional abuse, mentions of rape (not described in detail), mention of sodomy (not described), human trafficking, child trafficking, drug abuse, suicide (off-page), sexual assault, transphobia (mentioned)
While I usually love books that are carried by the character interactions in them (I really don't pay attention to the plots), I also prefer them to be very fast-paced. I'm someone who likes books to throw boom-boom-boom at me constantly. That being said, this was more of a booooooooooooooooooooom-boom.
A better way to put it: this is slow-paced for real. It took to the 50% mark until things actually really caught on. It's not that it was uninteresting before that (I liked the characters fine enough and wanted to know what happened next), but it didn't catch on until halfway through, and it didn't take a full hold on me until around 80%. now THAT"S when things were crazy. It's like the first 2/3 was a normal car ride and the last bit was a crash.
Although I really don't like when fantasy books are slow, I understand all of the character and world-building that went into this. The author even provided a glossary, which I'm forever grateful for because I've got a horrible memory. This is set in a colonized Indo-Persian inspired world (Allegedly, according to Goodreads, whom I don't trust) and has influences from Pre-Islamic Arabian mythology. I enjoyed how every part of this world seemed researched and like one of its own. I also liked all of the details, like how the Devadasis wore cholis and lehengas, and all of the titles used. It made the world seem a lot more real to me.
What stood out the most, in my opinion, was the characters. Roma is strong-willed and a survivor. She's been a Lamiadasi all her life and goes through some of the most horrific things in this book. Seriously. Ana Lal Din does not shy away from recounting the terrible experiences these women had to go through. I was aware of the triggers beforehand, but I still felt incredibly sick reading it. I had to keep taking breaks.
On the other hand, Leviathan is the son of the Firawn and far above in zaat (caste) to Roma. He's a ruthless killer dealing with his own internal struggles and rage. Their dynamic was interesting throughout the book. I'm a big fan of protagonists hating each other. Don't know why, but there's just something about powerful hatred that is just so compelling. I loved it.
The Firawn is a character I hope to see a lot more of in the next book. He didn't really cross my mind for most of it until near the end, where he was in one of my favorite scenes.
I think the second book in the series will be far more compelling in terms of pacing since this one was really just setting up the world and characters. I'm excited to see how the story will carry on from there.
Thanks to the publishers and Netgalley for providing an arc.

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I had an enjoyable time reading this and it held my attention the entire way through that I finished it within the day! I enjoyed every page and thought that the plot/story was very unique. Would recommend to anyone!

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In Ana Lal Din's debut novel, a young woman and a young man's destinies interlock as a Tyrant hunts an ancient treasure that will doom humankind-- a living treasure to which Roma and Levathian are the ultimate key.

Roma is a Dēvadasi, slave of God,  a lower caste that serves patrons to sustain the balance between the Gods and men, and all she wants is her freedom. Roma has faced many hardships already as we first meet her and  when Roma and Levathian's paths meet... she again is faced with even more problems. Levathian is not a good man, however he isn't heartless. He is a killer. A monster. ‘The worst kind of monsters are those who pretend they’re human.’ However he is entirely selfless although he never admits that to himself. Neither one of these characters is the "perfect hero", they are reckless and flawed and it helped me connect and see these characters as more then fiction.

Ana Lal Din's story telling is captivating, artistic, and sophisticated.

This book deals with a lot of heavy topics, I would definitely check out the trigger warnings before reading. Some of the themes include rape, suicide, assault and human trafficking.

I definitely do recommend this book, just not for the faint of heart. I give this book 5 stars! Once I started this novel, I could not put it down! The Descent of the Drowned is available for pre-order now! Its release date is March 15th 2021.

Thank you to Netgalley, Books Forward and Ana Lal Din for the opportunity to read this masterpiece for my honest review!

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"Men. [...] They'll tell a woman she's less, so they can believe they're more."

This book hurt in the best way possible and I cannot wait for a sequel! I need to know more!

Okay but let me explain: this book deals with a lot of heavy topics so please look up trigger warnings before reading it. Some themes of the novel are prostitution, the caste system and human trafficking of adults and children, which made it hard to read at times. There were certain scenes where I had to put the book down because I physically couldn't look at the page anymore. But what this really means to me is that Ana Lal Din is an exceptionally powerful writer for making a reader feel so hard and deep for a fictional character in a (mostly) fictional world. It felt horrible and disturbing and terrifying but most importantly of all, it felt real.

The world building was tricky for me to get into but as soon as you understand the basics of it, it becomes fascinating. I especially loved the magical element of the story that was introduced later on. I also had difficulties understanding all the foreign terms sometimes but that didn't hinder my enjoyment of the story at all, and also, there is a glossary explaining all the words at the end of the book, which is super practical!

Now, let me talk about my favorite part of this novel: the characters! Roma is one of many badass heroines in YA fantasy books, but the way that she differs from them is that she is not supposed to be fearless or invincible. It's quite the opposite, actually. She is a young and sometimes naive girl that has faced way too many hardships in life and still remains strong. That doesn't mean she's not scared. One thing I especially appreciated about her character is her anger. Roma had every right to be angry at the world, at the gods, at men, and she never hid that anger. She was mad. And I love that. Our other main character, Levi, on the other hand, was fearless but not heartless. He was tough on the outside, a warrior and killer, but soft on the inside. He cared about other people and even though he'd never admit it to himself, he's entirely selfless. One more thing I enjoyed about the two characters was that they were never made out to be 'perfect heroes'. They were messy and flawed and acted recklessly at times, which made the story way more captivating.

Now, Ana Lal Din is a fabulous storyteller, I think I already mentioned that. But damn, this woman can write like nobody's business! The amount of quotes and passages I have highlighted in this book is a lot. The writing was so sophisticated and artistic, I would never have believed her to be a debut author.

Okay, I think this is all I have to say, except for: READ THIS BOOK! PREORDER THIS BOOK! PLEASE! (Also, thanks to Netgalley for the ARC of this masterpiece).

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this was fun, and look at that book cover! i enjoyed it, but i think i expected a bit more from it, but this is my first book from this author and i would love to read more to see her progress and growth! a solid read and would recommend!

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