Louise Lovie Lloyd seems to have a knack for finding trouble. After being kidnapped in her teens and promptly escaping and releasing a few other girls who had been missing for longer than she had, she's grateful that her community seems to be forgetting about the time she was the 'Harlem Hero.' But suddenly, dead girls are showing up whose link is the speakeasy that's run at the same property as the diner where Louise works.

She assumes it's just a coincidence, but that doesn't really matter when everyone is worried about who may be next. Against her better plans, she ends up assisting the police in trying to find the killer. There are places a Black young woman can get into that old white cops can't.

The story of this independent woman and the friends she considers her family is interesting. One of the other residents at the boardinghouse where Louise lives is the woman she loves, Rosa Maria. Their relationship is largely a secret, but they still enjoy their nights out dancing at the speakeasy where Rosa Maria's brother tends the bar. New York City is lively and fun for them, despite prohibition.

I'm interested to see what mystery involves them next. I'd give this book 3 out of 5 stars. The characters and the setting were charming, but the plot felt a little forced sometimes. There were a few outright statements of foreshadowing, but I didn't notice actual behavioral clues about some of the story developments. I suppose that's not saying too much, since I admittedly do like to be surprised. This was a fun historical mystery that is the first in the Harlem Renaissance Mystery series.

I got about twenty pages in and I was disappointed by this. I don't think historical mysteries are my jam. I just felt like it was hard to connect with the characters. I think I will come back to this at some point but not right now.

With an incredibly vividly described setting and atmosphere, and with turns that I never saw coming, this story is really well crafted. There's a sense of danger always lurking, and Louise is a clever, intriguing character who is unwillingly forced into the center of the action. This is the start of a series, and after this strong series opener I'm very curious where it might go next.

There's so much I want to say about this book but since it's a mystery, I feel like I should say as little as possible for fear of spoilers. I was honestly expecting more of a cozy mystery with that cover but this is a much darker and more intense story than a cozy, with young Black girls being brutally murdered in Harlem in 1926.  The protagonist, Louise Lloyd, also a young Black woman, unintentionally finds herself on the case after punching a white police officer in the face. Something about Louise intrigues the officer and he makes a deal with her:  if she can help him interview folks in Harlem who may have information about these murders, he won't charge her with assault.  Louise reluctantly agrees and thus begins her unofficial career as an amateur detective. 

I don't want to give away anything about the murder investigation, so I'll just say that I loved Louise.  She's smart, sassy, and tenacious, and really does have a knack for detective work and for getting people to talk to her.  I also loved how the author perfectly brings 1920's New York City to life, both the good and the bad.  She really captures both the beautiful and creative spirit of the Harlem Renaissance as well as the ugliness of the racism that still pervades society.  I'm excited that this is going to be a series and look forward to seeing Louise tackle even more mysteries.

DEAD DEAD GIRLS BOOK REVIEW

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Drink rec: Champagne🍾

A mystery set in 1926 Harlem featuring a female protagonist who works at a café by day and then parties at speakeasies at night and solves mysteries? I am HERE👏🏼FOR👏🏼IT! Louise is such a badass female lead and I wish I was half as cool as her! Not to mention this book has some LGBTQ+ representation in it as well!

I found DEAD DEAD GIRLS to be unique because I don’t often read historical mysteries and I loved the setting of Harlem in 1926! The atmosphere of partying all night at speakeasies while there is a serial killer on the loose who targets Black girls in the neighborhood was really suspenseful. While this book was super fast-paced with short chapters, I felt like the story line was a bit choppy at times.

Overall, I would definitely recommend picking up this fast-paced mystery! Can’t wait to see where this series goes next!

I had DDG sitting in my virtual TBR list for a couple of months now, so I hope that this is the super early advance reader's copy that I received, because honey…

I had two major issues with the book: How it was written and how the story panned out. The story itself wasn't bad. It has all the dressings to make a good gumbo. I simply think it needs another revision. The pacing was good, but the flow of the story is very choppy. Afia tried to create an air of suspense, but it came off lazy.

The opening of the story started strong and clear. It introduces a young girl who experienced first-hand kidnapping and fast-forwarded that same girl's life ten years later. After her run-in with the police from a night of partying, the story started to fall flat for me. Where I considered DNFing, reached from the stupidity of the main character's thinking. To put it, that girl sucks at being a detective. All her moves were predictable and careless, and she had way too many feelings she couldn't explain but acted on impulse.

I strongly recommend a revision. The book has potential, and I hope to see it, but for now, this ain't it.

3.5 stars

There were several things to like in this series debut featuring the fascinating setting of the Harlem Renaissance, definitely underexplored territory. Protagonist Louise Lovie Lloyd is a bit of an enigma. She is a mid 20s waitress who escapes each night into the speakeasy jazz world of Harlem. She is notorious because she engineered an escape from a kidnapper when she was just in her teens. She is somewhat estranged from her father, a hypocritical minister who exploited her kidnapping ordeal to build his congregation. Her closest relationship is with her lover Rosa Maria and Rosa's brother Rafael.

Lovie is a strong character with lots of nuances. But you never feel the spark with her and Rosa, despite lots of declarations. And the narrative often felt disjointed to me. The mystery part was interesting, but a surprising plot twist well before the end discloses the murderer and after that, I thought it fizzled.

Thanks to the publisher and to Net Galley for providing me with an ARC in exchange for my honest review.

Set during the Harlem Renaissance this story follows Louise who is a waitress enjoying life as much as she can. She was kidnapped as a young girl but managed to escape and free not only herself but others girls earning herself the nickname of Harlem's Hero. A little over a decade later she still is battling some unresolved trauma which she drowns under alcohol and dancing.

Her life gets shaken up again when she stumbles across a dead body outside of her place of employment. After a drunken altercation with the police she ends up getting recruited as expendable bait to help track down the serial killer terrorizing the Harlem streets.

This book took a little bit longer to find it's stride then anticipated. Early on the chapters are very choppy and tend to end in what I assume is an ode to radio mystery shows from that time period. They're these foreshadow heavy cliffhangers meant to build suspense. Which ended up foreshadowing the killer earlier in the story than necessary. Once those were dropped and the author let the suspense build naturally the story flowed much better.

I could tell the author had fun with this 1920s setting and wanted to play up the glitz and glamour as much as she could while also keeping it clear that it wasn't all sunshine and roses for Black women.

The writing gets stronger towards the end as the story finds it's stride. This series has potential to expand beyond the illegal booze and worst kept secret speakeasies into something magical.

3.5/5 stars

I received an arc from Berkley in exchange for an honest review.

Dead Dead Girls is an intense, engaging debut. I found it impossible to put down as the reader follows Louise into her investigation of who is killing Black girls working at a club in Harlem in 1926. Louise is not a detective, she's a waitress by day and spend the nights dancing when she can. But she finds a dead body in front of her workplace, and becomes further entangled when she tries to stop another Black woman from being arrested. Instead, the detective offers to drop her charges of assault of a police officer if she helps them investigate, because he is not getting information he needs from the victim's families and friends. The body count keeps rising as Louise finds more and more potential killers - there is no shortage of awful people in the world.
Louise is such a fascinating character. What has made her a survivor also drives her to do her best to keep others safe. It's not about solving the mystery, but for saving as many people as she can by doing so. She's in love with another woman and not starry-eyed about what that could mean long term for them. The contrasts of hope and despair throughout the book speak to so many elements of the time period, the lack of rights, racism, and the affects of those who remember the first world war.
In the author's historical note, she states that she could have set this story as a contemporary, and reading the book, there are striking reminders of how little has changed, especially with how the police treat Black people.
I look forward to the next book in the series.

I liked the premise of this but I found that the execution left a bit to be desired. I thought that the author did a good job putting you firmly in the 1920's but the story itself felt both rushed and too slow at different times. I also thought that some plot points and character information needed more of an explanation / details then were given. Not a bad read but overall a bit disappointing.

I am definitely rooting for Louise, the heroine & amateur sleuth in this highly compelling own voices Harlem renaissance-centered mystery! Thanks to Berkley Books and Netgalley, I'm reading the e-Galley.

This book really confused me. I loved parts of it so much and I didn't like some parts at all. So, I had mixed feelings about the whole thing. More on that later. The book is set in Harlem Renaissance era. It's historical mystery fiction. I loved all the vintage vibes in the book. The setting was just fabulous. It was a bit slow paced at times. But it still hooked me till the end.

The writing style was articulate. The tone of the book was magical. I loved the feminist undertones of the book. The MC was a badass female lead. The plot was a bit predictable though. The story was about Louise, who was pretty popular in her teen years. She escaped from her kidnapper and saved a bunch of girls. But her overbearing father kept trying to contain her, so she left home.

She lived alone now with a bunch of girls in a flat. She was in a relationship with one of the girls- Rosa, a journalist. Suddenly, girls from a particular club keep dying brutally. The police were under pressure to catch the killer. They dubbed him the "Girl killer" which was very off putting for me( where's the imagination lol). Louise punches a racist cop and gets arrested. The officer made a deal with her.

If she helps in the investigation, then he won't charge her. So she reluctantly agreed to this. She started investigation and found so many secrets. In the process, she put everyone she loved in the path of harm. Will the prize of catching killer be enough?

The big reveal to me was not surprising at all. It was really very obvious. But other than that, the book was really entertaining, I still have the book 4 stars. If you love murder mysteries, you should definitely give this one a try.

I went into this book with high expectations. The premise and protagonist -- a Black lesbian flapper tries to catch a serial killer in Prohibition-era Harlem -- sounded AMAZING, and very much in my wheelhouse.

Unfortunately, my expectations weren't satisfied. There were definitely scenes and details I enjoyed, and Afia clearly did a TON of research that came through with the historical setting and dialogue. But as a whole, the book felt lackluster given its superb set-up. The prose is far more tell than show, which meant there were scenes where the characters' reactions/emotions felt jarring and confusing (suddenly they're shouting! suddenly they're angry or sad, and the text itself doesn't set that up in an organic way). This lack of showing meant that few of the characters felt all that compelling or three-dimensional; though we're privy to much of what goes on inside heroine Louise's head, even she feels rather shallow. There's also sudden suspicion and distrust regarding a central character that's a little too convenient for the plot, when that character has yet to do anything in text/on-screen to spark such a reaction.

And the heroine, though she constantly asserts that she's determined to catch the killer and protect the victims, really doesn't do all that much proactively to solve the case; a lot of vital details just happen to come to her, or she's passively led to clues. Despite her rousing introduction in the opening prologue, Louise ultimately doesn't feel all that heroic in the "present"-set mystery. And, despite the looming and persistent threat of a serial killer, there isn't that much urgency in the narrative itself -- at times, the story falls into sections or asides that drag without much payoff.

Afia *does* make a point of weaving in important commentary on how the Black residents of Harlem have always been seen as disposable and less than. How the victims of the killer are blamed for their own murders (they must not have been Good Girls, given their job/skin color/behavior, etc.) and that the white, overtly racist police force has NO incentive to give them justice or protection. There's also plenty in the text about how heroine Louise struggles with layers of inequality, as she's not only Black and poor and a woman but also a lesbian, forced to hide her romance for fear of legal prosecution and societal persecution.

Still, overall, this historical mystery didn't leave the memorable mark I'd hoped for. This is being billed as the first in a series, and I doubt I'll pick up Book 2.

Advanced Reader’s Copy provided by NetGalley and Berkley Publishing Group in exchange for an honest review.

Ok so let's start with the good:

1. Nekesa Afia fully immerses readers into 1920s Harlem. I wanted to be in the Zodiac dancing along with Louise and Rosa Maria.
2. YESSSSSSSS to Black queer representation in historical fiction. I'm here for it.
3. Louise in general. She's someone I'd want to be friends with.
4. The overall theme and plot is solid.

But (and unfortunately for me it's a big one), the pacing and transitions are super choppy and confusing. Sometimes I'd have to go back and read the previous paragraph to figure out what happened in the page break between what I had just read and what I was reading now.

And while I didn't know exactly how the Girl Killer mystery would be resolved, it was really easy to know who it was from early on and spot the red herrings throughout the story. This didn't take away from my reading experience, but nothing was exactly a surprise like I was hoping it would be.

Overall I really enjoyed DEAD DEAD GIRLS and this is a solid debut novel. Afia has something here and with a little more editing it would be great. I look forward to seeing what happens in the next Harlem Renaissance Mystery book. I could also see this being turned into a movie or TV show - and I'd watch the hell out of it.

Since in 1920's Harlem, Louise is forced back into the limelight, which she left behind with her escaped abduction 10 years previousily, to help the police find out who is murdering young black girls.

This story is set in a fashion & music era that I adore! I couldn't wait for a mystery series surround by an LGBTQ Black Heroine who is ready to get justice for the murdered girls. I really admired Louise and her whole character because she tries to live her life after a horrific incident, and she wants to love the girl she loves, see her family and be happy, and that's all I want for her - LET HER BE HAPPY! I identified with her strained relationship with her father, even before the kidnapping when she was 16, because I have that with my own, and as we are both the eldest sister, we were both protectors and ended up being cast out.
The racism, sexism and power imbalance between Louise and the cops she might be working with were strange and yet realistic.

The biggest letdown was the choppy and cliffhanger written within the chapters -mostly at the end. It kept me from fully enjoy the story because, at times, I honestly had to reread a sentence or two. After all, I was a little confused. The flow at the end of the end was very up and down too, which threw me off.

I LOVED this book. I was hooked from the jump; the worldbuilding, the writing, the pacing. I'd follow Louise (aka Lovie) anywhere. I can't wait for Nekesa Afia's next book.

Thank you Netgalley and the publisher for this advanced reading copy. This story is very interesting and great for anyone who enjoys historical fiction. I love a good mystery.

Great debut - can't wait for the next one!

Afia states in the Acknowledgements this story could have taken place in present day as not much has changed for minorities. She chose the 1920s to connect with her history - Afia does an amazing job bringing Prohibition and the Roaring 20s to life.
At the age of 16, Louise is abducted from a sidewalk, simply walking home. When she wakes, Louise finds herself chained, along with several other young Black girls. With severe determination, Louise not only frees herself, but also fellow captives. She becomes known as the Harlem Hero.
Ten years later, someone is abducting vulnerable young Black girls, killing them and leaving them displayed. In exchange for forgiveness of an altercation, Louise agrees to help lead Detective Gilbert solve the case.
Louise interviews family members, friends of the killed girls, desperate to save those left.
Gritty noir crime novel featuring a strong Black woman. The story pulled me in; I loved Louise and her family.
Highly recommend.

I had very high expectations for this book, based on the summary and the reviews, which is maybe why I was so disappointed. I found the writing to be very choppy, there were a few continuity errors, and it felt very much like the author was just "telling" me things instead of "showing" me. I love the idea of a smart queer Black woman solving murder mysteries in 1920's Harlem, but this just didn't carry through for me. I feel like it needs another hard edit or two before it is released to help smooth over the chapter transitions and add a little more depth to the character interactions.

Dead Dead Girls by Nekesa Afia is a well-paced, historical mystery novel set in Harlem during the 1920s prohibition era. This story is more than just about catching the mysterious Girl Killer that is murdering young black women, and about taking another look at the roaring 1920’s, a decade that is often glamourized and romanticized. The story follows, Louisa, a mid-twenties black lesbian, who stands up for what is right, does not cower in the face of prejudice or racism, and strives to create a place where black girls and woman can live freely and love freely. The historical setting of this book creates a nice atmosphere to the story. However, I do wish the book had more of a surprising ending and was not as rushed, but I then again, this story is not so much about the Girl Killer as it about illuminating what it meant to be a young black woman in the 1920s.