I would like to start off by saying what I liked about the book. The bare bones story of the book, a young woman with magic who crosses into a magical world to discover her true potential, is a good story. The mythology of the world and the use of magic is intriguing, but it isn't enough to save this book.

I think the author could have really benefited from having an experienced editor review this book and assist with the many grammatical errors, awkward dialogue, and poor descriptions. It was difficult to get past the first chapter where the author repeats the same phrase several times and lacks vivid description. Not to mention the weird description of a character cumming all over the main character's home. Like wouldn't you smell that? Wouldn't your carpet be crusty? There was no point in this book that I wanted to keep reading. The idea was a good one, it was just poorly executed. I do hope that the author takes this as constructive criticism, because I do think the idea was an interesting one, it just needed a little work.