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The Hidden

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Full of mystery, intrigue, twists and turns it had my head spinning! I usually can anticipate where a book is going but this one definitely surprised me and had me guessing at every turn! I throughly enjoyed this book. The author skillfully weaves a psychological thriller with a story of the true meaning of what it means to be a mother and mystical elements. I gratefully received this book as an ARC from Crooked Lane Books!

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The Hidden - an impressive, beautifully written book. It's about selkies, and mothers who let go of their little ones to give them a better chance, and complex mother/daughter relationships, and a psychopath in the middle of it all.

I loved the idea that Constance looking for her coat could be portrayed to others as her losing her grasp on reality. I loved that Ruby was open to believing. The characters were so well written, the locations brought to life, the horror and the sadness, and the longing Constance has for the sea - all perfectly done.

Thank you for the opportunity to read this. Highly (HIGHLY) recommend it, and will likely be pushing it on people I know as soon as it comes out.

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I loved this.

It’s the type of book best read with a hot cup of tea, a cozy throw, and a bit of rain drizzling outside.

The author blends legend and a contemporary mystery beautifully. The writing itself is almost mystical in feel, though the author occasionally adds a touch of edge and pain that slices you to the heart despite her fable-like prose.

The book doesn’t end the way you want it to, but it ends the way it should.

An engaging and entirely satisfying read!

• ARC Provided via Net Galley

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Thanks to Crooked Lane Books for this galley.

The Hidden by Melanie Golding opens with an abandoned toddler alone on the sidewalk outside a shop window. It’s cold, a brisk wind off the ocean bats at her little body. Powerful imagery foreshadows what is to come, “Just out of sight, the sea sighs as the tide licks the shore, sucking the surface of the beach into new shapes; gentle, curving undulations, different from yesterday’s, that will be different tomorrow and with every tide that turns.” This imagery creates a wistful haunting feeling from the sea and the reader feels the siren’s cry in the distance.

The story has a dark and melancholy feel that extends to the tortured psychology of the main characters. Joanna, Ruby, and Constance are all dealing with wounds that haven’t been healed. At times the reader is not sure if they like the characters or not, but they certainly understand them.

There is a modified parallel structure as the reader moves from Now to Then. Melanie masterfully brings the backstory to a level of being there rather than just telling narration. The book is written primarily in past tense, however, Melanie Golding alternates to some scenes in the present tense that add texture and a haunted feeling to the story.


One scene at hospital threw me out of the story. The hospitalized character’s treatment seemed inadequate and not entirely believable. “It means his blood pressure is so low as to be incompatible with life.” This statement implies that the character is dead if his blood pressure is incompatible with life. Vasopressors are used to keep even brain-dead people alive, but the character does not have multiple infusion pumps at his bedside or a ventilator. The character is said to have unknown narcotic drugs in his system despite breathing on his own. Every modern hospital today has the capacity to test for a whole array of medications and the doctors should have known what was in his system.

This story could be classified more as a suspense novel with a touch of urban fantasy. The reader knows or can surmise who killed who, but the reader doesn’t know what will happen next. The pace quickened and the suspense escalated near the end. I found the climax was a satisfying one but wish I could return to Barra and explore the streets there, seeking out the people and those that know the secrets of the Roane.

I found Melanie Golding’s writing compelling and entertaining. For the most part you can fall right into the world she created. The Hidden deserves 4 out of 5 stars.

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What would it take for a loving mother to leave her young child in the middle of a street during one of the coldest days of the year?

A young family lives in a secluded penthouse in London: Gregor is a charming father and Constance a troubled but loving mother to their little toddler. In comes Ruby, a chance encounter, and she becomes almost like a second mother to the child, attracted by Gregor's charm and intrigued by the mysterious Constance. Then Gregor ends up almost dead in his bath and both woman and child are running for their lives. What happened? By coincidence, it is police officer Jo who is assigned to the case, who happens to be Ruby's sister.

Little by little we learn that nothing is as it seems, and all the characters have their troubled pasts and hidden truths. The one thing that stand out is that Constance believes she is a selkie, a creature that can live on land as a human and at sea as a seal. It is up to the reader to believe this or not, as the story can easily be read as a complex mental health issue of Constance, or even that she is part of a cult living on the Hebrides. Either way, the child is in danger and needs saving.

The book reads easily, and the characters and surroundings are well detailed. However, the lead character - Ruby - is very unlikable. She is stubborn, makes all the wrong decisions and she could have avoided both her very complicated family life and the whole situation with Constance if she just would have done the right thing. The selkie folklore contributes nicely into the story, something that I wouldn't have expected and I was intrigued by it.

I've hovered between 3 and 4 stars, but I'll settle with 4, as I must say I that even if there are just too many coincidences to make it fully believable, the plot is original and I genuinely liked it.

A sincere thanks to Netgalley and Crooked Lane Books for providing a copy in exchange for an honest review.

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First of all, I’d like to thank Netgalley and Crooked Lane Books for the digital arc of “The Hidden” by Melanie Golding.

This book intrigued me because not only was it a mystery/thriller, but it also had elements of folklore weaved into the story. This is a multiple POV story following Ruby, DS Joanna Harper, Constance and “The Injured Man.” There is a lot going on in this book. We have Ruby, who entangles herself into the lives of a man, his ex and their child. We have an attempted murder that DS Joanna Harper is investigating. We have Constance, who disappears abandoning her child. We have a terrifying psychopath evading the police. Plus all of it is shrouded in Selkie legend. I had some trouble getting into it because it felt a bit fractured from all the jumping POVs. Also, there were only a couple of chapters with Constance’s perspective which bothered me be because she was the most interesting of the lot. Overall, it gets bonus points for being a unique spin on a typical thriller with the folklore aspect adding an almost magical realism/gothic vibe to it. I did find the male protagonist truly terrifying as well, which made my thriller loving heart happy. 3.5 stars.

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I couldn't put this one down! I don't know where to begin with this thriller thrill ride. Twists and turns, surprises to keep you on the edge of your seat. Melanie Golding knows how to keep readers engaged.

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Thank you Netgalley and Crooked Lane Books for the eARC.
A small girl is found abandoned in a little seaside town. The police were called, but the mother arrives within 20 minutes and after interviewing her, the police decide to let the pair go.
Lucy has cut contact with her mother and sister, DS Joanna Harper, furious after a fight at Christmas. But on the plus side, she has met an attractive young man, Gregor, who happens to live right opposite her apartment and the two tentatively start a friendship. He lives with Constance and their daughter, Leonie, but says the relationship is over. Constance has severe mental issues and Gregor wants to look after both her and little Leonie (I loved her!).
I don't want to give anything away, so will just say it was hard to put this book down, with a psychopath and quite a few twisty and very tense moments.
Definitely recommended!

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I loved the last book I read by this author and this one was no different. A great thriller with twists that will keep you reading late into the night!

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Thank you @netgalley for the arc of "The hidden" by @melaniegoldingauthor

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I was drawn into this book since I saw the cover. Beautiful yet simple.
this was such a well written novel in my opinion. So much suspense and shocking reveals. You think its one thing but its another. The chapters were short, which I am also a fan of. I loved it and highly recommend to others who like suspense and a little fantasy.

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The Hidden by M. Golding, published by Crooked Lane Books, is a stand-alone, captivating story about loss, gain.
The story is losely based on old folktales and to be honest, it took me a minute to get into the story. It was like reading three books at the same time.
Lenie, the abandoned toddler,
Constance, the vanished mother,
Ruby, the caretaker and mystery,
Joanna, the detective,
Gregor the mystery man who was found in his bathtub.
It's just too much going on.
But the writing is good and Iliked the characters just fine. An ok 3,75 stars read.

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Not the biggest fan of detective POVs, but you add some cult like behaviors and I'll read anything. This is writhing with myths, a murder mystery and oddities. I don't know if I'll read any other DS Harper books, but I genuinely enjoyed this one.

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Could not get into this one. It mixed thriller/fantasy/folklore and was a bit strange. This may be of interest to others who like this genre, though.

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I loved Melanie Golding's last book and so I jumped at the chance to read this one. It did not disappoint. This enchanting and darkly mysterious tale is told in third person from multiple viewpoints. It also begins with a crime and a disappearance, and we see things unfold from the past to the present. In the hands of some writers this could easily be confusing but it flowed very well here. The book starts out with intensity and you immediately find yourself rooting for Ruby, even though you know nothing about her or how she came to be in the situation she is in. Her sister, an officer, is the one who has to investigate the case that has entangled Ruby and left her on the run. And then there is the mysterious Constance, who seemingly doesn't officially exist and claims to have come from the sea. Melanie Golding's books combine suspense and folklore and leave you wondering what is going to happen next. The characters are extremely well written and unique. I look forward to whatever she writes next and can easily say she is one of my new favorite authors.

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As a mystery, The Hidden is cleverly done and well paced. As an addition to the cultural conciousness, Golding weaves folkloric pieces into her plot seamlessly and, interestingly, respectfully.

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An interesting thriller with a supernatural element. Theme of motherhood. ARC provided by NetGalley in exchange for a fair review.

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I loooooved Little Darlings and this book was no different. A beautiful blend of fiction and folklore intertwined in a story with plenty suspense to keep you guessing.

Melanie Golding is quickly becoming one of my favorite authors in this genre.

Amazing read!

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I was so excited to settle into this because I loved the author's first novel and I was not disappointed. This story blends a folkloric tale into modern character's lives, all the while building really interesting characters that I was perfectly happy to follow through the story. Then, right at the halfway mark, everything I thought I was reading flipped upside down and just propelled me through the last half of the book and I felt like I just couldn't read fast enough. I hope there are many more to come from this author - I believe I may have just found a new favorite.

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3.5 stars

An evil charmer, a selkie, an off-the-grid child, & a naive neighbor get caught up in a massive web of deception & danger while a police detective with personal conflicts of interest in the case breaks protocol to solve it. This is a dark book, the story getting progressively darker as the story unfolds. The writing is gorgeous, the atmosphere lovely & ominous, & the characters simultaneously sympathetic & a bit repulsive for varying reasons. If you like subtle thrillers with folkloric elements, I recommend this. Best to avoid if domestic violence & abusive relationships are a trigger for you, though.

[What I liked:]

•Several chapters start out with quotes from 19th C novels about selkies that give atmospheric hints to the main story. It’s a cool extra touch that I think adds a lot to the narrative, it didn’t feel gimmicky to me.

•I’m not the hugest fan of parallel timelines/flashbacks, but it works okay for this book. It helps the pacing to reveal twists & secrets at key points, & keep the intrigue ramping up as the police investigation progresses. The story is slower-paced than some thrillers/mysteries, but it really worked for me for this particular story.

•It’s hard to sympathize with several of Ruby’s choices, though her character development solidly contextualizes her decisions. Her character portrayal is skillfully written. I don’t approve, yet I get why she did the things she did. Constance’s motivations for her actions are harder to rationalize, to wrap my head around, though; even though in a detached why I get that she felt there was no other option.

•The tone & atmosphere of the book fit the story really well. I appreciate the nuance, the gradually escalating sense of dread, & the careful construction of Constance & Ruby’s living situations. This is probably the best, most well-written aspect of the novel.


[What I didn’t like as much:]

•There’s a lot of suspension of belief needed for this story to work, & for the most part it worked for me. But there were moments that pulled me out of the story a bit: a mother abandoning her child just because of homesickness, the complexity of the main villain’s dastardly deeds so perfectly concealed for so long without being found out, a police detective rather recklessly breaking the rules & compromising investigations while their colleagues just go along with it, etc. It’s a lot to ask the reader to suspend belief for, & probably the weakest point of this book.

CW: murder, abusive relationships, domestic violence, alcoholism, mental illness, child pregnancy/statutory r*pe, child abuse

[I received an ARC ebook copy from NetGalley in exchange for my honest review. Thank you for the book!]

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I haven’t read Melanie Golding’s first book, Little Darlings, so I wasn’t prepared for this book to be a mix of fantastical and police procedural. This type of book may work for others, but it didn’t work for me. To add to the destabilizing effect of this mashup of genres, is constant flashbacks. DS Joanna Harper is investigating the assault of a man found in his bathtub. He’s in a coma, and Joanna discovers that this case is connected to her estranged daughter, Ruby, who is estranged from the family.

Joanna and Ruby’s family situation is very strange--Ruby was raised as Joanna's sister, as Joanna was only 13 when she gave birth to Ruby. Joanna’s mother is an alcoholic and the unique situation in their past lives creates a fraught family backstory for Ruby’s troubled present.
In the past, Ruby is becoming fascinated with the man in the apartment across from her, who turns out to be the man who has been found bludgeoned in his bathtub in the present. When Ruby finally meets him, Gregor, we also meet Constance and Leonie, Gregor's ex-girlfriend and child. According to Gregor, Constance is suffers from severe mental illness. According to Constance, she is part of clan Roane, descended from the Selkies. Selkies are mythical creatures that are seals in the water and human on land. This is where the book totally lost me. I really didn’t connect with this book at all, and the convoluted mystery at the core of this story was not appealing or interesting.

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