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True Loaf

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What a delightful short story - and such an engaging narrator.

I have never really been into short stories, preferring longer novels, but this was wonderful and such an easy listen! I definitely recommend!

Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher, author and narrator for an ARC of True Loaf.

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I usually don't listen to audiobooks, but I gave it a go, and I absolutely loved it! This was a really nice short story to listen to and the narration was really great! I went for a walk when I listened to it and it was just perfect.
I also loved the bonus content about folklore analysis.

Thank you to Netgalley for access to this audiobook!

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True Loaf is a short story inspired by Balkan folklore and is reminiscent of traditional fairytales without feeling trite or tired. Rather than showing a woman in a precarious situation needing rescued, this story puts Riley, the main character, in the role of the active character who must go on a quest to move the story forward. Written by L. Austen Johnson and read by Penny Scott-Andrews, this story is set in a time not unlike our own, but still relies on suspending belief that the people we interact with may be more than they appear.
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We are introduced at the beginning to Riley, a young woman who works at a shop. One day, a man comes to the shop and asks for yarrow tea. Riley explains she has none, but the customer persists and tells her where to find it’ll the yarrow — only at twilight in the forest. That night, Riley goes on a quest to get the yarrow and encounters another man who offers to help her if she will share what she makes with it. She agrees and finds the plant before returning to her home. The next day the customer returns to the shop with the man from the woods and Riley learns why the yarrow is so important, who the men are, and that things are not always what they seem.
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This story is only about 30 minutes and included bonus content that explores the allusions to Baltic folklore and structure of traditional folklore. The story is enjoyable and includes enough detail to immerse you in the reading/listening experience. The bonus content adds to the experience by providing analysis and explanations one might expect in day a literature class, but remains accessible and interesting to the average reader.
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This is a great, quick read or listen. The story is wonderful by itself and the bonus content is interesting and engaging.

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I love short stories. They are succinct and to the point. And yet with this one, I wanted it to go on seemingly forever. The storytelling and narration was impeccable and this is definitely a story I will come back to over and over.

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True Loaf is an interesting retelling of Balkan folklore, it does what good stories do - it leaves you wanting more.

There isn't a lot for me to say about the plot without spoiling the whole story. But rest assured, it will have you captivated for 15 minutes.

The cover embodies the story perfectly.

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This is a very short story. It is well thought out and interesting. But I feel like I needed more information to fully grasp what was going on. Things are explained in the Author's section afterwards, but additional backstory shouldn't be necessary for a story this short if it is meant as a stand alone tale.

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A strange and mysterious man walks into a bakery and would like the baker to make him a product that she does
not have that is made with a very particular ingredient that she also does not have. This sends this little baker on a mini adventure! This was cute for only a few minutes worth of read time!

I am huge fan of folklore and even works that are folklore-ish...such as this. My only complaint with this is that I felt like I needed MORE. This really has nothing to do with the story and more with just me not being satisfied with a short/micro story. The author did a wonderful job at leaving a little bit of mystery exactly where it was needed, but I was just made of questions by the time it was all over. If this author publishes a full-length novel that has the same vibes as this story, I will be the first in line to read it.

4 stars

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A wonderful short story perfect for listening to on a fall walk! Johnson's True Loaf is charming and perfect for anyone who loves the nostalgia of fairytales.

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True Loaf is a YA fantasy short story that can be read in less than 30 minutes. A strange man puts in a strange request at the bakery where our heroine Riley works, causing her to go on a small adventure to find an unusual ingredient. The story seems to be set in modern-ish times (the main character has a cell phone) and I could make a case for this story being magical realism. I absolutely love the cover, the art style is lovely and evokes a warm, autumnal feeling.

I listened to the ~16-minute unabridged audiobook version narrated by Penny Scott-Andrews. Johnson's prose is very imaginative, playful, and engaging, which pairs well with Scott-Andrews' sing-song-y narration style. One of the cool things about this story is that the author has partnered with One Tree Planted where one tree in North America will be planted for ever audiobook sold within the first year from release (July 27, 2021). I would love to see a full-length novel sent in this world, mostly because we didn't lean much about the world in this short story.

The audiobook itself also has a ~9-minute bonus content read by Claire Glover about folklore analysis of the short story. I'm a big fan of folklore and especially analysis thereof, so I really enjoyed this extra content!

I received an advanced audiobook copy of this short story for review via NetGalley, but all opinions contained herein are my own.

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[★ 3.25 stars] i don't usually do short stories, because it always leaves me wanting more... and this did. i almost don't know how to review it. it wasn't bad, and i enjoyed the more creepy parts, but the ending felt so abrupt and i'm not a fan of when that happens. i did really enjoy the narration!

thank you to netgalley for access to the audiobook!

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This is a short and entertaining audiobook with beautiful cover art! I found that the narration was done really well and fit the story perfectly. There was a great mix of mystery, fantasy, and sass in such a short story, and I wish there was more! I think I needed more context to fully understand what was happening, because I honestly don’t really know what I just listened to. That being said, it was certainly entertaining, and I think young readers would definitely have fun with this story!

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This was an original short story that was based on elements of a traditional Balkan folklore story. I thought that the story and audio were very enjoyable. I would definitely want to read/listen to more from this author. I also enjoyed the end notes that explained the elements of constructing this type of story and how the author developed her own. Also loved the cover. It conveys the fairytale perfectly.

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This was a very short audiobook of a folklore-inspired story about a baker who has to find a secret ingredient in the woods. I didn't enjoy the narrator's voice and the story was quite predictable and seemed to wrap up very abruptly.

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This was definitely a cute story and overall I think it was good for a short story. I wasn’t too in love with narrator though.

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Quirky and dark, original modern fairytale, inspired by aspects of Balkan folklore. Imaginative juxtaposition of old and new with interesting themes to consider, some of which are also discussed at the end of the audiobook. Very short but engaging and worth a listen.

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I just joined NetGalley and was browsing through the Listen Now section for audiobooks when True Loaf by L. Austen Johnson caught my eye. The title of the book seemed so quirky and cute while the art for the book cover matched that whimsical feeling so I decided to check it out.

The story is about a baker called Riley who gets a special request from a mysterious rich customer to bake him a special loaf of farro bread. Riley doesn't have farro on hand so she has to go find it and ends up on a mini-adventure. Based on the book cover's art style and the blurb, I somehow assumed the story was going to take place in the olden days, way before electricity or technology. Even listening through the beginning of the book I imagined Riley to be baking in a rustic bakeshop lit up by candles. However I was jolted back to the present when Ellie got in her car, and I was suddenly confused by all the imagery I had envisioned while listening to the story. I feel like the magical qualities were ripped away and I wish it didn't happen. I would have liked some timestamp or any indication of when this story took place so it would not have interrupted my vintage-style cartoon imagery of the story.

Besides that abrupt change in imagery for me, I found the story was short, interesting, and enjoyable to listen to. At the end of the story, there was a short explanation of how the story was created and it made me realize how much thought was put into this short story. I wasn't aware of all the literary structures and types of characters that were carefully placed into the story and it made me appreciate it a little more. I have not put that much thought into understanding why the book was called True Loaf so I hope there is a discussion somewhere that will point me to the answer since it is not explicitly stated in the story.

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This was a cute short story inspired by Balkan folklore. While I have nothing negative to say about the story itself, I felt a little weird reading it. Perhaps it's not to my taste but somehow the characters didn't seem to well-developed.
I know that the point wasn't supposed to be for it to be too long but I would have appreciated a bit more background and even some more details about the negative characters, too.
Also, the ending was super short and sudden and really surprised me.
*I got a free copy from NetGalley but my opinion is completely unbiased*

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I listened to the story as an audiobook via NetGalley.

The idea for the story is a good one, but I was a little lost at the end of the story and had unanswered questions. I also feel the story needed to be longer (only a handful more pages) to get to know the characters a little and build up a stronger connection with the reader. The writing was lovely, and the storytelling was great, just needed more.

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wasn't quite expected it to be so dark but I really enjoyed it 😊 and loved the bonus content and apprecated the author explaining where she got the idea for the story. I would of actually liked it to be a little longer as I felt more detail would of made it even more engaging for the listener

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Be honest I found this book really strange. I enjoyed the writing itself but it was almost like I was reading two books. One at the beginning and then a different one at the end. I feel like the fluidity of the story was lacking. Like it needed a middle ground. It's a cute idea, very hanzel and Gretel. I think it's worth a read, and it has the potential to terrify your child just like any folklore. But if your kid likes creepy things then I think they'll enjoy this book. :)

Thank you #netgalley and #trueloaf for allowing me the chance to read this book in exchange for an honest review.

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