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This is so good. I highly recommend this short story. It is the first short story I have listened to as an audiobook and I loved it. It is the perfect length. I could see this becoming more popular because a deterrent of audiobooks is their length. This is book leaves a lot to your imagination but the fact that there is plot and story building in as short of story that it is is impressive. The author's voice is very fitting for the story. The narrator's voice fits very well. into the story. The story has fairytale vibes. I loved this and would definitely read it again.

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That was such a fun story to hear!

Honestly, despite the fact that I think this story need more work and I wish there was more, I really enjoyed it!

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A cute but way too short story. Riley, a baker, is sent on a quest by a customer to find a rare white yarrow and bake it into a bread.

I liked the story, but it was a bit too short and too scripted. The story is inspired by Balkan folklore and follows the Hero's Journey. My problem was that it seemed like the author was just checking off a list of what a Hero's Journey story must have and doing the minimum. Nothing is wrong with the story, but nothing stands out either, and it was too short for any real development.

It seemed like a 2nd draft, not a finished story. I would love to read a more polished version of this.

Thank you NetGalley and Lore and Lyre for the opportunity to listen to this ARC in exchange for my honest review.

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I enjoyed this story. It's a short story based on folklore. I only wish it was longer and a little more story added in.

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A short story inspired by Balkan folklore, which thankfully doesn't go into retelling but sounds so authentically Balkan, I kept thinking it must be a retelling of an existing story! Elements, such as the 9 turns (3 by 3, often important in Balkan, or at least Bulgarian stories), the importance of the time of day the herbs are collected, and the bread, often symbolic for magic in Balkan and Bulgarian folklore, made me feel nostalgic for the stories I was told as a child.

The yarrow is a herb associated with healing, because of its blood-clotting qualities, but in myths and folklore, it has often been used to purge the devil or symbolise love. As it is masterfully recounted in this short story. Having knowledge of details like these made it an absolute delight to listen to.

My only reasons for not giving it five stars were the slightly confusing time period, and the narrator's voice. The latter is entirely a personal judgement, as I have a low tolerance for certain auditory stimuli, and the way the narrator was pronouncing certain words jarred me. The former I found weird because the modern setting seemed a little at odds with the story itself.

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It's important to realize that this is an incredibly short audiobook. It is just one short story based on Baltic folklore. The short story was okay, but I actually preferred hearing the author talk about the inspiration and folklore it is based in afterwards.

Perhaps a whole book on that or more short stories would vastly improve this audiobook.

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I grabbed this because of the adorable cover. The story was short and sweet, though it did feel vaguely unfinished. Ironically, I found greater enjoyment listening to the "outro". It was interesting to learn about the mechanics of folklore and the ways Johnson applied them to True Loaf.

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A whimsical little story inspired by Balkan folklore, but that can be misleading as True Loaf is not a retelling of any specific Balkan folklore. It is, instead, inspired by the tone, plot and structure of folk tales.

As someone who has read Morphology of the Folktale and studied some folkloristics back in uni, I can see that there are definitely elements of folklore in this short story. However, I found True Loaf wanting in the sense that it felt incomplete. The tone was there, the plot and structure were also there, but it just didn't entirely feel the same as a folktale would (probably due to the modernity thrown in which clashed a bit with what would've otherwise felt like historical fiction).

Other than that, it would've been a better listening experience for me had a different narrator been chosen. While I do like their voice which strengthened the whimsical feel of the story, it was difficult to understand at some parts (English isn't my first language) and I felt like I missed out on details because of that. Replaying the parts I couldn't understand the first time round, didn't help as well and just made me wish there was a script I could read along instead.

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A simple short story with the potential for more. I enjoyed the discussion of folklore included at the end as it's an area of interest of mine, and much of the description was lovely. Everything proceeded a little to easily for me, our hero didn't face many real challenges. The language was also charming when descriptive, but the americanisms and modernity thrown in in a story that otherwise felt in a mythic folklore time took me out of the story and detracted from my enjoyment. It's a very short audiobook so there's not much I can say but I did think that it was well performed.

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The way I consumed True Loaf by Austen Johnson was via audiobook. It's a short story based on Balkan folklore and mythology,which is something I grew up on. I really enjoyed that, even though short, this story gave me the same whimsical feeling of hearing my mother or grandmother, and later on my teacher, telling me different folk tales and myths.
Listening to this as an audiobook was a fantastic experience, as the narrator did an amazing job giving all of the characters their own voice.
This is a story of a girl, Riley, who works in a bakery. One day, a stranger comes in, asking her for a special ingredient, after which she embarks on a journey of searching for it.
I would highly recommend listening to this audiobook if you're in need of short, but truly magical story.

Thank you Netgalley and the publisher for providing this audiobook for me.

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Thank you to NetGalley for a free copy of the audio version in exchange for an honest review!

This was a fun quick story! I really enjoyed a modern story that still has all the trappings of a traditional folktale, and it makes me want read more Balkan stories. I also appreciated the discussion of folkloric elements at the end and how each was represented in the story. I wish these representations were clearer, though, along with the story being a bit longer. I know the author is keeping with the short and brief timing of a folktale, but I feel like a longer story would have allowed for more depth, especially where the brothers who are actually princes are concerned. I would love to see this story lengthened and turned into a novella if not a full length novel. It would be fun to see more magic and more depth of character. But I did really enjoy an original story with traditional tropes.

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Lore and Lyre made the audiobook ‘True Loaf’ by L. Austen Johnson available for review via NetGalley. It is narrated by Penny Scott-Andrews and is 24 minutes long.

It is a short story inspired by a Balkan folktale. Riley works in a bakery and one day a strange man comes in and asks for an unusual ingredient to be baked into a loaf of bread. Riley has to go on a moonlit adventure into the woods to find it.

Following the story is bonus content in the form of an article by the author about how she came to write the tale and an analysis of the folklore of the story in terms of structure and symbolism.

Overall, a charming tale bound to appeal to listeners both young and old.

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This is a short story inspired by Balkan folklore. I’ve listened to the audiobook version which is only 20-30 minutes long.

Overall, it’s a cute and entertaining tale. However, it felt a bit poor of depth and ends very abruptly leaving the reader unsatisfied. You don’t get to know the ending and you don’t get the moral of the story (at least I haven’t).

I would prefer it to be a bit longer and more condensed of details around the characters.

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The nice thing about shorts? We get right to the good parts!

“True Loaf,” immediately plunges us into a world familiar and not. A baker named Riley gets a STRANGE customer request which sends her into the woods. At twilight. Of course a quest ensues.

The story plays with fairy tale elements without directly copying. Instead of a “retelling” “True Loaf” is its own. Familiar and not. Even with as short a time we get with the characters, they draw on archetypes that leave us wanting more.

This recording includes an analysis of fairy tales at the end. I enjoyed this! It’s always nice to review themes and deepen understanding of a genre.

“True Loaf” is a bite-sized delight

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What a lovely short story. My only complaint would be that it’s too short, I wanted to know more! (But of course, that’s a good thing)

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This short story left me waning more. I felt that it ended just as things were beginning and that there was no resolution. I was hoping to know more about the main character’s relationship with the 2 men and what being bound truly meant. I listened to the audiobook and the bonus content on there was very cool! I liked how the author explained the elements of the folklore.

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This is a great short story that not only tells the folk tale but also includes the author providing background information on it. It would be a great thing for a classroom to discuss folk lore, how stories are created and change over time, are adapted/ updated as time moves forward but carry the same message.

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A cute short story based on folklore. Very whimsical and nostalgic, I loved the comforting feeling it gave me. This would be perfect to read to children. Even though it was a bit predictable I still enjoyed it. I wish it was longer though as I have some unanswered questions.

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Thank you to Netgalley and Lore and Lyre for a copy of this short story in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.

When I saw the cover and realised this was a short folk lore story I couldn't resist. And boy, when it says short it really is, in fact I feel like this story was too short to be reviewed almost. Riley works in a bakery and is approached by a strange customer asking for a specific type of bread, she has to venture into the forest on an adventure to find the ingredient at twilight, where upon she meets another man asking to try the bread once she has made it.

It was an interesting story with a lovely narrator. I would just have liked to have listen a bit longer and learn more about the origins of the folk lore.

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A very compelling short story that was a perfect breather between work! As a fairytale lover and especially someone who loved little red riding hood as a child (the set up of the story reminded me of it!!) I absolutely enjoyed this and wish it had kept going.

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