Good, quick read with interesting characters and plot. The writing would have benefited from editing to take it to a more sophisticated level. It was written with too many simple sentences.

This was a quick, entertaining read for me. I like that everything was from Jen’s POV. Sometimes, the writing was really good with excellent imagery. Other times, it felt a little clunky. There was a lot going on at all times and not a ton of time for things to develop naturally. It felt very “telling” instead of “showing” the reader. I definitely think it has great bones to be a solid story, but for me, it’s not totally there yet.