American Mermaid ~ Julia Langbein

When Penelope’s novel becomes a best-seller, she’s as shocked as anyone and now that it’s being turned into an action movie, she’s blown away. But when they start to change her main character from a heroine to a sex-object, strange things start to happen on set.

“American Mermaid follows a young woman braving the casual slights and cruel calculations of a ruthless industry town, where she discovers a beating heart in her own fiction, a mermaid who will fight to move between worlds without giving up her voice. A hilarious story about deep things, American Mermaid asks how far we’ll go to protect the parts of ourselves that are not for sale.”

Penelope is a broke high school teacher who has written a novel: American Mermaid. It’s the story of a wheelchair bound scientist who discovers her legs are really vestiges of a tail. When it becomes a bestseller Penelope soon finds herself lured to LA by promise of easy money to turn her book into a screenplay.

As the studio pressures Penelope to turn her amazing scientist lead into a teenage sex object strange and threatening things start to happen. When Penelope’s screenwriting partner try to kill of the main character completely, Penelope starts to wonder if her character doesn’t only exist on paper.

This book was rather entertaining! I really enjoyed the different formats the book presented. I am usually a fan of a book within a book setting and I found I really enjoyed it here as well. I found the writing rather clever, and while not laugh out loud funny the book was humorous. I found the characters unique and satisfying. I had originally picked this one up on my kindle, but then received the hard copy. This is one that I preferred reading in physical copy as it was harder to get the formatting on my screen. I see great things from this author going forward!

I want to say thank you so much to Doubleday Books and Netgalley for my copy of this book in exchange for an honest review!

This was quirky and fun. Quirky and fun aren't necessarily my preferred types of reads, but I know they are many others. Check this out if that style is for you!

I love the thought of mermaids. I really wanted to like this story. Sadly, it was not for me - I found it crass and weird and not in a good way. It felt insulting to the female species.

This was a really fun but wild ride.

I am really fascinated by the idea of mermaids and am always looking out for anything related to mermaids so I was really hoping that this would be right up my alley. Unfortunately the magical realism was overshadowed by the wild writing and inner dialogue.

I think the author has something really beautiful to dive into and I will definitely read more in the future. The heart of this book was absolutely lovely!

Thank you to Julia Langbein for writing this book and allowing me to read it in exchange for a fair and honest review!

**Many thanks to NetGalley, Doubleday, and Julia Langbein for an ARC of this book!**

An attempt at a deep dive...that lands solidly in the shallow end of the pool.

American Mermaid is the Magnum Opus of one Penelope "Penny' Schleeman, a novel that has now been optioned and is headed for an adaptation on the silver screen. Penny doesn't know much about Hollywood, other than that life is diametrically opposed to her existence as a high school teacher. She heads for L.A. and starts working with a rather obnoxious male duo to bring her book to life...but it works a LITTLE too well. Penny's protagonist Sylvia (who discovers that the legs that keep her wheelchair bound are actually part of a TAIL...and yep, she's a mermaid) starts to make a real-life cameo. As Penny fights to keep her character's integrity intact in the face of studio pressure, she begins to hear noises that others don't hear and feel things others couldn't possibly feel...others that aren't MERMAIDS, anyway. Could those really be siren calls...and has Sylvia truly come up out of the pages to be Part of Our World?

Genre-benders tend to either be a slam dunk or a complete miss for me as a reader, and this one is bizarre to say the least. There is a 'fantasy' element, some sci-fi, environmentalism talk, faux-feminist prose, AND eye-roll worthy Hollywood critique...quite a bit of content to try to jam into just over 300 pages. The book bounces back and forth between excerpts of American Mermaid the book and Penny's experience with the adaptation (and the subsequent chaos) and to be honest, it almost felt like she started writing one book, didn't know how to flesh it out, and built the second book around it. I can't say that I enjoyed EITHER story line. Even if they had been connected in a more cohesive way, the excerpts from the book started to drag and then get a bit out there by the end and I just didn't buy what the author was selling when it came to the "my fictional character is coming to life...and might also be me but I'm not sure" angle either.

And then there's the "humor". This author is a stand-up comic, and I have no idea what her comedy shows are like, but if they're anything like this book, I can honestly say I wouldn't even CONSIDER attending one of them. Like many comics, she relies heavily on crass humor, and the two male Hollywood-ites that Sylvia has to deal with are so over the top obnoxious, I could hardly stand even SKIMMING their sections of dialogue/texts. Langbein also has some sort of fascination with mentioning genitalia: I can't even TELL you how many times body parts (or weird nicknames for said body parts, such as 'cooch' and 'chode') littered the narrative. I just didn't understand it. If Langbein was attempting to make her heroine some type of feminist and environmentalist set to right the wrongs of Hollywood, I don't think this was quite the way to go about it.

All of this grandiose posturing about how women are sexualized in Hollywood etc. didn't feel like the author was treading any sort of new territory, and having a lead who acted like a cross between a wild child and a petulant teen probably wasn't the best way to sell this message. I appreciate her attempts to talk about environmentalism too, but this was yet another message that got 'lost at sea', as it were. I do think if she had just taken the book within the book and threw ALL of her energy into that piece, it could have been a better read, since those passages existed without some of the obnoxious behavior in Penny's story line...but sadly, we will never know.

I'll leave you with an example of the sort of 'deep thinking' and postulating that Penny does from time to time which should also give you a good sense of Langbein's particular brand of humor:

"If that's what love is, then won't it bind us all collectively instead of being a thing that makes two vain shitheads hump?"

...

I can't say that I cared enough to find out.

2.5 stars

American Mermaid follows Penelope, an English teacher from the East Coast whose debut novel ends up blowing up on social media. Soon after the book, American Mermaid, is optioned for a movie and Penelope moves to LA to write the script. As the film producers begin to change more and more of Penelope's story, soon weird things start happening to the script and behind the scenes. Penelope swears it isn't her - but who else could it be?

I loved all of the ambiguous elements to the story and the author did a great job of keeping you guessing. For most of the present day storyline you don't know what's real and what might be in the author's head. I thought the bits spent working on the film adaptation were interesting and very believable, but the scenes where we followed Penelope as she tried to fit into LA life were a bit redundant and slowed the story down for me.

I I did really enjoy the book within a book and the inclusion of excerpts from American Mermaid was really a highlight for me. While Penelope's storyline may have dragged in places I loved following Sylvia the mermaid's story.

Thank you to Doubleday and NetGalley for a review copy.

<b>This story within a story is playful and satirical while providing deep issues to contemplate. It's different and captivating and silly and sobering.</b>

<blockquote><b>How could we be readers, how could we be lovers of the impossible and the imagined, and not want to swell up with a new character, pull it onto land from a sea we made, and trick it by disappearing behind our hands?</blockquote></b>

I've been so very excited for this book for ages, and I'm glad to finally be diving in! (See what I did there?)

Penelope Schleeman is an English teacher struggling to make ends meet when her feminist novel <i>American Mermaid</i> becomes a bestseller. Penny is hooked on the promise of a big payday and leaves her teaching position in Connecticut to move to Los Angeles and turn her novel into a script.

<blockquote><b>There is nothing mythological about this: Have you ever seen a mother spring up from a table when her child, two floors above, has a fall? Mothers move in the dark at night, while men fumble for the lights.</blockquote></b>

But others' visions for the story involve her eco-warrior main character morphing into a teen beauty wearing a clamshell bra, wiping away her complex hero's dark motivations, and erasing much of what makes the story worth telling.

Then mysterious threats and unexplained feminist changes begin appearing within the script, aimed at the writers who know how to make a shallow, profitable movie--but who are picking apart what made her novel sing in the first place.

Penny begins to suspect that she has unleashed a power within her story that somehow allows her mermaid character Sylvia to manipulate the real world. Even the posed explanations don't fully hold water (I'm sorry, but I can't stop the puns), making the reader wonder about the nature of multiple mysterious occurrences.

<blockquote><b>"You have to be like your namesake."
"Penelope Gruber, my mom's best friend from growing up? I should be an eye doctor outside of Tampa?"
"No, the original Penelope. From the Odyssey. Who undoes her own tapestry every night. Never finishes it. The men never get to possess her."</blockquote></b>
This story within a story echoes back and forth with linking elements including explorations of power, femininity, and the weight of perception. The Penny-in-Los-Angeles storyline offers some hilarious (and often cringey) peeks at the world of movie-making as the script writers aim to ruthlessly distill the story to cinematic visuals rather than a tale buoyed (I know, I know) by substance and reflection.

The excerpts from the book within a book of <i>American Mermaid</i> show glimpses of the novel that is the basis for Penny's trajectory--while digging into themes of climate change, greed, and dangerous assumptions about ability and motivation. The story culminates in tragedy or triumph, depending on your point of view.

<blockquote><b>"Why does she have to be unconscious when she goes underwater? Why don't we get access to that? Can't a woman retain her clearheadedness even when she's doing battle?"</blockquote></b>

<i>American Mermaid</i> is playful, yet there's a lot of meat on the bones of the often satiric story to dig into. It made me laugh and also made me think. (The imaginary blurbs in the Epilogue purely made me laugh--they're so disturbingly plausible and silly.) This is weird and wonderful, and I hope Langbein has more books in the works.

I received an electronic version of this title, published March 21, courtesy of NetGalley and Doubleday.

I am a big fan of magical realism, so I was thrilled to receive an Advanced Readers Copy of American Mermaid. I was initially thrown off by the bizarre inner dialogue of the narrator and main character, Penelope. It felt like such a chaotic stream of consciousness that I almost stopped reading at about 30%. However, the story within the story (Penelope’s novel, American Mermaid), grabbed my attention enough to finish this book. Needless to say, I enjoyed the chapters that included snippets of American Mermaid more than the actual story. I’m glad I stuck with this one, because I LOVED the ending and I am still thinking about it!

3.5/5 (rounded up to 4 on Goodreads)

Thank you NetGalley and Doubleday Books for the ARC!

American Mermaid is such a unique read that follows an English teacher turned writer after her first novel explodes into becoming a bestseller. When Penelope gets the chance to move to LA to turn her novel into a film, she jumps at the opportunity with seemingly mixed results.

This story is a book within a book, and while the storyline is a bit unusual and different, the author has written it so well that you can't help but be captivated in the quirkiness of it all.

You should read this if you like:
•Debut novels
•Women MCs
•Multiple genres
•Feminist themes

Thank you to Doubleday and Netgalley for the digital copy for my review.

🧜‍♀️BOOK REVIEW🧜‍♀️

American Mermaid - Julia Langbein
Rating: 4/5 ⭐️

“A brilliantly funny debut novel that follows a writer lured to Los Angeles to adapt her feminist mermaid novel into a big-budget action film, who believes her heroine has come to life to take revenge for Hollywood’s violations.”

What a weird, wonderful, cerebral book! So much of the reading I do is, honestly, kind of mindless as an escape. Well this was definitely not that! It definitely gave off Honors Contemporary Lit course vibes - in the best way!

This is an incredibly funny, thought provoking book about the absurdity of the media, feminism, art, belonging and selling out. A lot of the themes shouldn’t work well together but absolutely do.

The book-within-a-book concept is generally not a favorite for me but worked so well in this. I definitely found myself rooting for Penny and Sylvia and have honestly never read anything quite like it.

Can’t wait for more from Julia Langbein! This is ✨out now!✨

Unfortunately, American Mermaid just didn't work for me. It was one of those book within a book stories and I usually like those, but fictionalized "mermaid tale" I didn't care for right from the start. Then, by the middle of the book the main story was annoying me, too. This might have been a good one to DNF, but I soldiered on. I won't be reviewing it anywhere but here.

I could not get into this book. Others seem to love it. I would suggest reading a sample before deciding if it's for you or not. I didn't have the option to read a sample and it was not at all what I thought it would be from the description.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an ARC of this book.

American Mermaid by Julia Langbein was a great debut novel.

This book is about Penny, a high school English teacher who wrote a novel called American Mermaid. When she sells the rights to make American Mermaid into a movie, she also gets hired to write the screenplay, so Penny moves out to LA. But as she’s working on the script, strange things keep happening and it’s almost like Sylvia, the mermaid raised to be human and main character in Penny’s book is trying to sabotage things because Penny’s co-writers want to change a lot about the book in the movie.

Overall, I enjoyed this book and the book within the book. At times I would say I was even more invested in Sylvia’s story than Penny’s. All in all this was a solid read and definitely memorable as I have never read quite anything like it before.

Penelope is gearing up for Hollywood to work on the screenplay of her successful book but she is totally unprepared for Hollywood's expectations when truth comes crashing. There is a book about the mermaid within this book and both the plots are interspersed. As the writers keep changing how the main character needs to look according to them, Penelope can't understand how things are going a lot different than anticipated. At one point, it seems like the mermaid has come in real life to handle this situation and keep the adaptation truer to the original book. This is a very different plotline and I can say for sure that it would be an amazing option for book clubs as there is so much to unpack and discuss forever.

A book within a book!

A former high school teacher heads to Hollywood to help draft a screenplay of her famous novel about a mermaid. In Penny's new life, she has money and fame, a far cry from her teaching days in Connecticut. Penny soon learns that Hollywood has a different perspective on how the heroine of her novel should be portrayed, different than how she's written her.

As the story progresses, Penny's world begins to blur with her fictional tale. American Mermaid is unique story that touches on feminism, the environment and acceptance. Penny's storyline was entertaining, especially her interactions with the screenwriters. I also throughly enjoyed how Penny's novel was sprinkled throughout the read, as we learn about a Sylvia, the mermaid.

Thank you Doubleday for the complimentary copy.

This novel is about a former English teacher named Penny, who unexpectedly wrote a huge bestselling debut novel called American Mermaid, and has quit her job to go to Hollywood to work in the screenplay adaptation, only to find that her two dude bro type screenwriters and the studio want to change and dumb down her book. Interspersed with Penny’s narrative are chapters of the book she wrote, a sort of feminist climate fiction novel about Sylvia, who unbeknownst to her was found on the beach as a mermaid baby, but then given surgery by her adoptive parents to split her tail into legs, which left her disabled - and only as an adult does she find that when submerged she becomes a mermaid again.

So as you can see, a lot going on in this one! The premise was so intriguing, but for me the execution didn’t quite get all the way there. For one thing, the book within the book about Sylvia was actually much more interesting than Penny’s story. Sylvia’s story was weird but definitely a different take on mermaids, while Penny mostly just texted with her screenwriters and went to industry parties where she got wasted, and the Hollywood satire was probably pretty accurate but just wasn’t saying anything so new. And I found the ending kind of confusing and anticlimactic. Still, definitely an interesting premise and I think some people will love this one.

American Mermaid was an entertaining read, but it just didn't capture me the way I was hoping, based off the plot blurb!

So let's start there: Penelope is an English teacher who wrote a book that has been optioned for a movie. It's about a girl who grows up in a wheelchair, not knowing she's a mermaid, until she throws herself into a body of water in an effort to die, wherein her legs form back into a tail, and she is able to move freely. I'm discussing the book within the book so much because for me, this was the most interesting part. Throughout the story, we get vignettes from the book Penelope wrote, and those kept me hanging on. The rest of the story is how Hollywood is trying to change Penelope's book from feminist, smart, and asexual to sexy, young, and less thoughtful.

Thankfully, this book is on the shorter side. Sometimes I enjoy a bit of ambiguity in a book's ending, but in this instance, it annoyed me. I wanted either more humor or more creepiness from the book, and it landed smack in the middle of those two, floating in between two paths that, had one been solidly chosen, could have really made this book stand out.

3.5 stars. Entertaining, but, for me, not memorable.

Thanks to Netgalley and Doubleday Books for the e-ARC!

4.5 stars
American Mermaid is definitely a unique, fun, and delightful ride, getting inside the mind of Penny. this book has a sense of humor that won’t be everyone’s cup of tea, bur i really enjoyed it and appreciate the directions Langbein takes with the story.
We also get ‘book within a book’ chapters from Penny’s novel interspersed throughout, and the only thing hindering this from being a 5 star book for me was that i felt those portions started losing steam about halfway through and i just wanted to go back to Penny’s story.
would it be too meta to wish this was made into a miniseries?

Well, this book is an absolute joy to read! It's weird. But good weird. As in, weird enough to be different and stand out in its genre, but not weird enough that I was left confused or not understanding what the author was doing. It's the kind of weird I aspire to be in my daily life.

Penelope is a high school teacher who has just happened to write a novel that became very popular, and has now quit her job to move to LA and assist in the writing of the screenplay for movie adaptation. She is paired with two men who, while absolutely cliches of the Hollywood male screenwriter trope, are somehow not entirely unlikable. They're all there to do a job, and Penelope is a fish out of water (hee hee) who puts her trust in these more experienced writers.

Switching back and forth between the plot itself and excerpts from Penelope's novel about a mermaid turned human named Sylvia, I was equally invested in both stories. Penelope is at sea (yup I did it again) at the fancy pool parties and glamorous soirees of Hollywood, and continually gets too drunk and makes some dubious choices. Meanwhile, something is happening to her screenplay that she swears she is not engineering, convincing her that Sylvia has somehow come to life to protect her story, as the men involved attempt to turn her into a classic, sex glorified mermaid dummy.

SO entertaining, so fun, and also somewhat moving, this is a great book for individual reading, but also for larger discussions in book clubs, etc. Loved this one, and now I hope mermaids are real.